2020届新高考高三英语作文讲义设计(五)概要写作,如何写出多枝共干式的长句

1、2020 届新高考高三英语作文讲义（五）概要写作，如何写出多枝共干式的长句？高考概要写作要求使用自己的语言将 350 字左右的短文概括为 60 词的短文，也就是说, 要用简洁准确的语言表述原文大意。所以，概写既要词数少，又要尽可能多地包含要点与次 要点。根据英语多长句，汉语多短句中英文表达差异以及高考对概写的要求，考生必须学 会写出多枝共干式的长句。那么，如何能写出多枝共干式的长句？这样的长句有什么特点呢？英语有一种少用（谓语）动词，或者使用其它手段表达动作意义的倾向。主要通过句法与词汇（构词法），减少谓语动语的使用来合并重构。具体可以通过以下方法：1 ）转换词性；2 ）使用非谓语动词作主语，

2、状语，定语，少用从句；3） 使用介词代替换从句；4）使用并列成分；5）使用省略句以下是近年各地模拟卷的概写范文，请同学们分析每个长句，说说到底使用了什么方法？老师们也可以利用以下素材，帮助学生分析长难句。强烈建议考前一定要看看，要是考到了 呢？1. A new research shows that student strain often coexists with teacher exhaustion.Students, who find their requirements unsatisfied as a result of teachers low-level man ageme n

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8、chers found that laughi ng could make people live a healthier and Ion ger life. Basedon sufficie nt in formati on, a doctor in In dia ope ned a laughter club to make participants laughthrough various activities. Actually, the idea of laughter clubs is prevailing in India nowadays andpeople attach gr

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11、omenon and for America n adolesce nts moretime is spent with peers than with younger children or adults. Firstly, changes in workplacereduce the amount of time adolescents spend with their parents. School reforms also result inless time spe nt with youn ger childre n. Additi on ally, the in crease i

12、n adolesce nt populati on isano ther con tributi ng factor. A research shows adolesce nts gradual separati on from adultsstarts in their early tee ns whe n they man age to escape adult supervisi on.8. Nowadays, family members are often found lost in their own electronic products. Someexperts fear th

13、at tech no logy can affect family relati on ship for lack of face-to- face com municati on. However, a report has found tech no logy ben efits family bonds in that it makesmembers closer and provides private mental space as well. Actually, not tech no logy itself butpeoples attitude towards it in fl

14、ue nces family relati ons.9. Autobiographies, stories written by famous people about themselves, are popular in the UK.But unl ike traditi onal on es, many of todays autobiographies are about young stars who rise tofame quickly. As they often contain information unknown before, readers are kee n on

15、readi ngthem. Not fond of writ ing, however, some celebrities hire writers to write their autobiographies.Besides, due to autobiographies, more British people are involved in reading now.10 . Based on a recent report, having a rest to refresh yourself is not so essential as somepeople think. Will-po

16、wer, assumed to be a limited resource by some scientists, were thought tobe only regained by rest, food, as well as entertainment. However, this theory has bee n challenged. Researchers, in cludi ng Veronica Jobs, con ducted experiments and made some newdiscoveries. If you believe that willpower is

17、limitless, you will be more powerful, which is apotential help to resist temptation.11 . Caused by their fear and way of lear ning, many Chin ese stude nts cannot speak Englishfluently even after ten-years learning. Actually, we should learn to speak English as a childlearns his native language by l

18、istening and repeating a lot. And teachers should praise andencourage rather than criticize students, just as parents do. Fin ally, hav ing good self-esteem isof vital importa nee in speak ing En glish.12 . After years of research, psychologist Robert discovered that familiarity accounted forpeoples pre