2020高中英语新高考-英语作文：读后续写细节描写第一讲：描写forest,woods

1、2020 高中英语新高考读后续写细节描写第一讲：描写forest, woods英语文学的描写在于细节，如此可以细分为物和人两大类别。就物而言,又分山川和建筑。山川又可以纟田分为：forest, mountains, caves, isla nds and volca no es, paths,rivers, sea。第一个章节我说forest，这也是鉴于浙江这几年的读后续写都是关于森林有关的多。但高中的词汇量也就是3500，而文学中的景色描写很容易超过这个数字。我为了减轻高中生的记忆压力，力图从200 多本经典英文原著中挑选最常见的表达（我发现很多表达反复出现在很多人作品中，因此以下呈现都可

2、以供高中学生大胆选用），个别超纲词汇也无碍。如何练习：当写到树林的时候，查看本节，根据文章需要挑选句子。我的学生跟我说，记不住。其实，没有谁能一下子记住，多练习几篇就会记住的。考生需要记住，景色描写，一定要脑子里存在几幅图，例如下面的，这样 你才能更好去应用。 实际上，读后续写的图像定格是非常重要和实用的技 能，我后面会说到。Chapter 1 Forest这一节说树林，无非围绕：草、花、树（包括树干、树茎、树叶、 藤蔓）、颜色。其中读者最好多记忆一些文学作品中常见的花名, 好比汉语小说中常用牵牛花、红豆等。 （虽然有点累，但是你会 发现很值得）以高考真题作文为例：妻子和丈夫分手后迷路了，两段

3、的开头：1. But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.2. It was daybreak whe n Jane woke up.这两段描写都会涉及到森林景色的描写，第一段的森林景色应该是和黑夜有关，表达出妻子的恐惧；第二段景色描写应该是和晨曦有关，暗示希望这样的描写不用多，每段一两句即可。读者都可以在本节中找到答案。高频词NounsForest, jun gle, woodla nd, trees, treetops, trun ks, bran ches, roots, loc森林、丛林、林地、树木、树梢、树干、

4、树枝、根、原木Sky, ceili ng, umbrella, bla nket天空，顶部，伞，毯子Floor, carpet, paths地板、地毯、小径Leaves, buds, berries, blossoms, flowers, petals, stems, vin es,creepers, ivy, thor ns叶，芽，浆果，花，花，花瓣，茎，藤蔓，藤蔓植物，荆棘Bluebells, daffodils, poppies风信子，水仙花，罂粟太阳、风、露、雾、雾、影AdjectivesTall, huge, vast, toweri ng高大，巨大，巨大，高耸Beautiful,

5、stunning, magn ifice nt美丽，惊艳，壮丽Brow n, yellow,gree n, emerald, pin k, red, scarlet, crims on, fiery,oran ge, bron ze, purple, blue, white, silver棕色、黄色、绿色、祖母绿、粉色、红色、猩红、深红色、火红、 橙色、青铜色、紫色、蓝色、白色、银色Bright, vivid明亮，生动Dark, black, gloomy, shadowy, misty黑暗，黑，阴暗，阴暗，迷雾Thick, den se, spidery浓密的，蜘蛛样的Rough, shar

6、p, thor ny, spiky, twisted, bent粗糙的、尖锐的、多刺的、尖刺的、扭曲的、弯曲的Dead, rott ing死了的，腐烂了的VerbsStood, rose, spread, stretched, arched站着，站起来，伸展，伸展，弓起来Kno tted, twisted打结、扭曲Blocked, trapped, grasped, scratched堵塞、困住、抓住、刮伤Burst, erupted, crept爆发，爆发，匍匐Hung, swayed, tossed, dan ced, floated, fluttered悬挂，摇晃，摇晃，跳动，飘浮，飘动

7、Lit, pain ted,covered, cloaked, shrouded照明、涂漆、遮盖、遮盖、遮盖高频短语-名词和形容词Mag nificent forest of tall trees高大的森林Like a crowd of vivid green umbrellas像一群鲜艳的绿色雨伞Emerald /?em(? )r?ld/ green leaves 翠绿的叶子Vivid green stems 鲜艳的绿色茎Like flutteri ng, emerald ribb ons像飘动的翡翠丝带Blazi ng carpet of bluebells 耀眼的风信子Red and o

8、range berries 红色和橙色浆果* Dew-soaked grass like a field of liquid diam on ds露水浸透的草像一块液态钻石* Thick jun gle of dense forest 密林* Spidery kn ot of trees and bushes 蜘蛛结样的树丛* Huge, thick limbs 又大又粗的树肢* Bleached skeletons of dead trees 漂白的枯树干* Rotting leaves and dead branches 枯叶枯枝* crawli ng in sects 爬行昆虫* Bla

9、 nket of fog 浓雾高频短语-动词* Spread out above him 在他上方展开* Stretched as far as the eye could see 一直延伸到眼睛能看到的地方* Framed the deep blue sky 勾勒出深蓝的天空* Impossible to find a way through 找不到出路* Could nt tell one part of the forest from the rest无法区分森林的一部分和其余部分* Swayed to the rhythm of the wi nd随风摇摆* Flu ng their

10、leaves up to the sky 把树叶抛向天空* Arched in the wi nd 在风中弯腰* Hu ng like swayi ng feathers 像摇摆的羽毛一样悬挂* Waved like hun dreds of tiny han ds像几百只小手一样挥舞* Stretched like a carpet of jewels 像珠宝一样伸展* Lay like a carpet of con fetti像铺着五彩纸屑的地毯* Dotted with red poppies 点缀着红色罂粟花* Sun danced on the leaves 在树叶上摇曳的阳光*

11、Bathed in light 沐浴在阳光中* Sho ne with patches of misty light闪烁着一片片薄雾* Pa in ted the ground with flickeri ng shadows 在地上闪烁的阴影* Blocked the path 阻塞了路* Littered the ground 散落在地上* Cloaked in a bla nket of dark ness 被隐藏在黑暗中高频句子和段落以下段落涉及到树、草、花、叶子：They were welcomed by wave after wave of the gently nodding h

12、eads of daffodils and the bowed headsof a blaz ing carpet of bluebells. The ground was pain ted with red poppies and yellow gorse. The petalshad bee n shake n off the bush and lay like a carpet of pink confetti on the floor. It was impossible tomove quickly through the spidery tan gle of trees and b

13、ushes. Some trees stood tall and proud, flingingtheir bran ches up to the sun to frame the deep blue sky. Some trees were joined together like a crowdof vivid green umbrellas. The branches swayed to the rhythm of the wind and their leaves fluttered likegraceful butterflies. Patches of misty light sh

14、one through the gaps in the trees. The leaves glowed in theearly morning light like hun dreds of tiny han ds.迎接他们的是在轻轻点头的水仙花和垂着头的耀眼的风铃草。地面被涂上 了红色的罂粟花和黄色的金雀花，花瓣已经从灌木丛中摇落，像铺在地板 上的粉色五彩地毯。在树丛和灌木丛的蜘蛛丛中不可能迅速移动。一些树 高高在上，傲然挺立，把树枝向太阳抛来，衬托出深蓝色的天空。一些树 木像一群鲜艳的绿色雨伞一样连在一起。树枝随着风的节奏摇摆，叶子像 优美的蝴蝶一样飘动。一片片朦胧的光从树缝里照进来。树

15、叶在清晨的阳 光下闪闪发光，像几百只小手。其它的和黑夜的一些句子：The forest was a dark, tangled maze and it was impossible to find a way through.森林是一个黑暗的迷宫，很难找到一条路穿过。The branches of the thick, tangled trees had spread and twisted to form dark, overhead tunn els andcreated secret paths.浓密、缠绕的树枝伸展、扭曲，形成黑暗的高架隧道，形成秘密通道。The ceili ng of thick bran ches shut