《优化设计》 短文改错汇编 （有答案）

1、.2019·全国甲The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday.We can chose between staying at home and take a trip.If we stay at home,it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money.But in that case,we will learn little about world.If we go on a

2、trip abroad,we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books.Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby.I thought that it is a good idea.It does not cost many,yet we can still learn a lot.答案：第二句:howwhat第三句:chosechoose;taketaking第四句:butand第五句:about后加上the,构成the

3、 world第六句:yourviewour;knowledgesknowledge第七句:删掉can或是canshould第八句:thoughtthink第九句:manymuch2019·山东潍坊高三二模One day,an old man was returning home after shopping.Suddenly,a bag of waste fell in the sky,nearly hitting him on his head.He was greatly frightening by the unexpected incident.Dropped the thi

4、ngs he had bought to the ground,he ran away rapidly.What dangerous it was!Obviously,the accident caused by a careless neighbour living highly in an apartment.It was that person who was to blame for.Every one of us should behave politely and think more about other.Only when we each behaved properly c

5、an our society be changed into a pleasing one.答案：第二句:fell infrom;histhe第三句:frighteningfrightened第四句:DroppedDropping第五句:WhatHow第六句:caused前加was;highlyhigh第七句:去掉for第八句:otherothers第九句:behavedbehaveChildhood is a time when there are little duties.If a child has good parents,he is fed,looked after and lov

6、ed no matter when he may do.Its impossible for him to be given such much again in his later life.But a child is not so free to do as he wishes it.He is continually being told not to do this,not to do that,or being punished for what he had done wrong.When the young man starts to make their own living

7、,he becomes free from the rules of school and parents.Therefore,he can no longer expect others to pay his food,his clothes and his room.He has to work hard to live comfortable.If so,he can have the great happiness of build up his own position in society.答案第一句:littlefew第二句:whenwhat第三句:suchso第四句:去掉it第

8、五句:hadhas第六句:theirhis第七句:ThereforeHowever;pay后加for第八句:comfortablecomfortably第九句:buildbuildingThe person who has taught me most about the life is my grandmother.She was more than just a grandmother to me.When she died a few years before,I felt I lost a really good friend.She always looked very nice o

9、n her age.She did everything she could make me feel at home.She was imaginative and would spend hours telling me stories she has made up.I am sure it was because of her which I became a story writer.Apart from kept a young boy entertained,she taught me a large number of important thing on how to beh

10、ave.I was rather impatient when I was a child and she taught me that good things happened if I could wait for it.She was a positive person but she also taught me how to look for the good in everything.答案：第一句:去掉第二个the第三句:beforeago第四句:onfor/at第五句:make前加to第六句:去掉has或hashad第七句:whichthat第八句:keptkeeping;th

11、ingthings第九句:itthem第十句:butand2019·全国丙卷The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and worse years in my life.At the first,I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.However,my parents didnt seem to think such.They always tell

12、me what to do and how to do it.At one time, I even felt my parents couldnt understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them.I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.Now I am leaving home to college.At last,I will be on my own,but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever

13、 need help.答案：第一句:yearyears第二句:worseworst第三句:去掉first前的the;yourselfmyself第四句:suchso第五句:telltold第六句:freelyfree第七句:wearwearing第八句:tofor第九句:whenever后加IWhen I was at middle school,I have a nice classmate.She was friendly and very pretty,that was the first foreigner I had ever met.She was good in three la

14、nguages,although he was born in China.It was interested that her father was a Frenchman while her mother came from England.All of them were teaching at a university at that time.She loved collecting stamps,listening pop music as well as playing the football.Her dream was to be an engineer,so she usu

15、ally studied harder to achieve it.She often told funny stories in English to make us laughing.We all liked her.答案：第一句:havehad第二句:thatwho第三句:inat;heshe第四句:interestedinteresting第五句:AllBoth第六句:listening后加to;去掉the第七句:harderhard第八句:laughinglaughFailure was something unavoidable.Properly handling,though,i

16、t can teach us a lot.Firstly,we should face it brave instead of complaining about a unfairness of life.Secondly,we should analyze the reasons timely to avoiding making similar mistakes.Last but not least,we are supposed to make appropriate changes and more effort.Only in this way we more likely to s

17、ucceed.As for me,I have a positive attitude in failure,because I believe there has always wisdom to learn from failure.I will keep it in my mind that failure is the mother of success.答案：第一句:wasis第二句:handlinghandled第三句:bravebravely;athe第四句:avoidingavoid第五句:effortefforts第六句:way后加are第七句:into/toward第七句:

18、hasis第八句:去掉myAs everyone knows it,health is the most important thing in our life.Firstly,by doing sports,we get our body training.Secondly,doing proper activities keeps us physical fit.Lastly,when taking part in sports,we can learn not only the spirits of cooperation and optimism,but also what to ha

19、ndle difficulties.Whats worse,now our country carried out a national campaign of the students sports.The motto is that “Doing sports for one hour each day,and then you will be healthy in fifty years and live happy life forever.As for me,I enjoy doing sports because it is a good thing for both of us.

20、答案：第一句:去掉knows后的it第二句:trainingtrained第三句:physicalphysically第四句:spiritsspirit;whathow第五句:worsemore;carriedcarries第六句:DoingDo;live后加a第七句:bothallDear Jin Jing,Your problem is common one among middle school students.Maybe the following advices can help you.First in all,believe in yourself.Your greatest

21、problem is that you are lack self-confidence.The first thing you must do is to smile at your classmates.One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word.Your smile will show that you are friendly to him.Next,trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same

22、interest as you.You can discuss your studies with a classmate,and you can talk about your hobbies as well.Unless someone is in trouble,you should be ready to help him or her.Once you have confidence,you can make as many friends as possibly.Yours,Lily答案第一句:is后面加上a第二句:advicesadvice第三句:第一个inof第四句:去掉are

23、第六句:loudlouder第七句:himthem第八句:tryingtry;shareshares第十句:UnlessIf第十一句:possiblypossibleDear Sir,The moment I see your poster asking for volunteers,I knew I should try my lucky.I am always a strong supporter of environmental protection.Besides,my hometown is popular tourist attraction.In terms of your ch

24、aracter,Im happy to tell you that Im an outgoing and devoting person with good teamwork spirit.I have learned a lot from participating in some volunteer program in the past few months,such as cutting hair for empty nesters or collecting rubbish on the river at weekends.I am confident in that my invo

25、lvement in this project will make it very differently.Look forward to hear from you soon.Yours sincerely,Li Hua答案：第一句:seesaw;luckyluck第三句:is后加a第四句:yourmy;devotingdevoted第五句:programprograms;orand第六句:去掉confident后的in;differentlydifferent第七句:hearhearing2019·山东临沂高三二模Jennie is very keen on running.Si

26、nce she was six years,she has been getting up early and running every morning before school.She has also been cycled to school ever since she was learned to ride a bike.Last year she became the sports champions of our class.I know she had been hoping that she will be included in the locally sports team next year.Perhaps he will go to a university where concentrates on sports.Anyway,I am sure that