2020年高考英语作文高分素材训练：1.5做好起承转合行文美不胜收

1、5.做好起承转合，行文美不胜收 1回境提升完成了审题的过程，有了具体要点和整体布局后，就要整合信 息点，让庞杂的内容变得富有逻辑性和层次感。在句与句内在衔接的 基础上，做到段落间的起承转合，使文章有整体性、连贯性。学会正 确使用连接词、衔接句，能为写作助一臂之力。1 .用好连接词在句与句之间、段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接性词 语是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。连接性词语归纳如下：1. 起始关系：to begin with, first of all, as we all know, as is known, as is shown in. . ., according to 等。A

2、s we all know, good learning habits contribute to efficient study.2. 时间J顺序:at the beginning, then, later, finally, at last, in the end, afterwards, since then, after that, immediately, meanwhile 等。At the beginning, I collected all the things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped

3、 the dust off all the furniture . After that, I mopped the floor.3. 条件关系:if, unless, in case(of), as/so long as, on condition that, provided(that)等。I would be very grateful if you could meet my uncle at the airport.4. 转折关系:but, yet, however, while, otherwise, on the contrary,nevertheless 等。However,

4、not until the match was over did we realize that we lost it.5. 因果关系:because, as, since, for, thanks to, due to, as a result of, so,therefore, as a result/consequence 等。Therefore, there is no reason for us to look down upon ordinary jobs.6. 并列关系:and, or, as well as, not only. . . but also. . . , eith

5、er. . .or. . ., not. . . but. . ., neither. . . nor. . . 等。We will have a good time there and I will send you some photos takenthere.7. 递进关系:besides, what s more, moreover, furthermore, what s wostill less, to make matters worse, worse still, more importantly 等。Many of them can hardly look after the

6、mselves, still less manage theirown lives.8. 列举事实:such as, for example/instance, take. . . for example, that isto say, as follows, in other words, on the one hand. . . on the otherhand. . ., for one thing. . . for another. . . 等。On the one hand, I can earn some money by doing it to help myparents;on

7、 the other hand , I can gain some experience from it, which willdo good to my future life.9. 表示观点:in my opinion, in my view, from my point of view, as far as Iam concerned, as for me, personally等。As far as I am concerned, they stand for love, friendship and unity.10. 总结 :in short, in brief, in concl

8、usion, in a word, to sum up, all in all, on the whole, in general, generally speaking 等。All in all , traveling is the best choice for us to enrich our lives and get ready for the new challenges.n.写好衔接句1 . 引出开头It is well known to us that. . .我们都知道As far as my knowledge is concerned. . .据我所知Recently t

9、he problem of. . . has been brought into focus. =Nowadays there is growing concern over the problem of. . .最近问题引起了关注2 . 表达不同观点People s views. o. n. vary from person to person.Some holdthat. . . However, others believe that. . .People may have different opinions on. . .人们对可能会持有不同见解3 . 表示结尾In short, i

10、t can be said that. . .总之 ,意思是From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that.从上面提到的，我们可以得出结论4 .提出建议It is high time that we put an end to the trend.该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。Only in this way can we 一只有这样，我们才能。5 .预示后果Obviously, if we don ' t control the problemhe chances are that. 一 w

11、ill lead us in danger.6 .表示观点As far as I am concerned/In my opinion .就我来说7 .给出原因或顺序For one thing, . . . for another thing,.=On the one hand, . . . on the other hand.一方面另一方面1 口目预测请根据上下文填写适当的连接词，并体会其用法。Dear Jack,Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle. Here is som

12、ething about it.We should do something to protect our environment. At first, we should save water and electricity. We shouldn ' t waste our water So we should use the same water again and again If we leave our room, we should turn off lights and computer timely. Second we shouldn ' t throw the trash everywhere. And we should separate the garbage process