英语四级作文14.12

1、英语四级作文14.12大学英语四级考试在2014年12月20日上午已 经结束了，小编第一时间为大家提供英语四级作 文的解析，供大家参考。由于考试是以花卷的形式来考查的，今年主要有三个话题：分别是A course that has impressed youmost in college （大学中给你印象最深的一门课）：A campus activity that hasbenefited most （使你受益最深的一项校园 活动）Aclassmate of yours who has in fluenced you most incollege （大学中对你影响最深的一位同学）。这三个话题均为

2、我们所熟悉的话题性作文，写作 手法可以采用叙议结合的方式，完成难度相对较 低。考生可以很灵活的套用考前文都老师给大家 准备的相关模板句。对于下面的功能句，如果能 收放自如的灵活应用，考取高分绝对是轻而易举 的事情。一、开头句：主题词has been playing an increasingly importa nt rolein in dividuals growth. It hasbrought a lot of ben efits.（已在个人的成长中，扮演着越来越重要的角 色它给我们带来了许多好处。）这里的主题词可以换成我们这次的 有意义的课 程/活动”（themeaningful co

3、urse/activity）、深厚的友谊”（the deep friendship）直接替换 即可。二、中间段：在具体展开原因时，可以从主次的角度来展开：mainly owing to the fact that .and partlydue to the fact that .（主要原因是.次要原因 是.）例如，这次题目二就可以直接套用：The activity orga ni zed by the campus is the mostmeanin gful for me mai nly owi ng to the fact that it canstre ngthe n our body

4、and partly due to the fact that itmakes me realize the spirit of teamwork.（由学校组织的体育比赛对我来讲是非常有意义的，主要原因是 由于它有助于增强我们的身体素质，次要原因是 由于它让我们意识到了团队精神。）作文中能写出这样的句子，无疑属于高分亮点 句。三、结尾段：至于结尾部分可以直接套用下列句型，简洁收尾。Taking all these factors into con siderati on, In aturally come to the conclusi on that把所有这些因素加以考虑，我自然会得出结论

5、Taking into acco unt all these factors, I mayreas on ably come to the con clusi on that考虑所有这些因素，我可能会得出合理的结论Hence/Therefore, Id better come to thecon clusi on that因此，我最好得出这样的结论There is no doubt that.毫无疑问的是 对你影响最大的同学A classmate of yours who has in flue need you most incollegeRose is my roommate, class

6、mate and my best frie nd inmy college. She has a round face and a little plump.One can always find a nice smile on her face, whichreflects her amiable and pleasa nt character. Our friendship attributes to her great in flue nce on me.In terms of study, she is good at En glish, while En glishis not my

7、 cup of tea. Whe n I am con fused aboutteachers expla nati on oftexts, she always in terprets them to me in an explicitway. I really appreciate her help.Besides, she also imparts me a fewIan guage lear ning tips and recomme ndati ons whicharouse my learning in terest.In additi on, in the leisure tim

8、e, she helps me a lot aswell. Because I am not the local stude nt and myhometow n is far away from here, sometimes I feelhomesick. However, I always have Rose on my side.Her accompa ny gives me great comfort.I feel so lucky that I could have such a good friend, whoteaches me and help me in my study

9、and leisure life, soshe is the classmate that has in flue need me most incollege.TwoI have met so many frie nds in my college life. Theyhave exerted eno rmous in flue nee on my life.However, one of my most impressive frie nds is myroommate, Li Ming.In the class meeti ng on the first day of school, L

10、i Mingdid not impress us at all.We started to no tice him because he was always latefor classes. We were thus impressed by his laz in ess. Icame to know him and his situati on because we wereroommates and spe nt much time together: his motherwas seriously ill and sick abed in Ion g-term, his fatherl

11、eft him and his mother mercilessly. Hen ce, it was himthat shouldered the heavy burde n of tak ing care of hissick mother support ing the whole family. Fin ally, under great pressures, he bala need his life and studyperfectly: he was no Ion ger always late, took good careof his mother and eve n won

12、the scholarship manyyears in a row.The experie nee of Li Ming can be one of the mostconvincing cases of the power of persistence and will.He left a deep impressi on and imposed a durable influe nce on me. In deed, frie nd such as him can beregarded as asset and property in our life. We haverights to

13、 choose our own friends,but we should alsobe prude nt and sen sible eno ugh to choose frie ndswho can bring us“positive energy”. (228 words)【参考译文】在我的大学生活中，遇到了很多朋友。他们对我 的人生产生了重大的影响。然而，我印象最深的 朋友是我的室友李明。在开学第一天的入学班会上，他没有给全班同学 留下任何印象。李明让我们开始认识他，是因为 他总是上课迟到，同学们都以为是个懒惰的人。 因为我们是室友，平时的交往比较多，后来我才 慢慢了解到他的情况：原来

14、他的母亲罹患重病，长期卧床，父亲残忍地离开他们而去，照顾生病 的母亲和养家重任只能由他来承担了。 令人惊讶 的是，在重压之下，他将自己的生活和学业平衡 地很好：他不再总是迟到，将妈妈照顾的很好并 且连续几年获得奖学金。李明的经历是坚持和意志的作用的最有说服力 的例子之一。他给我留下的印象无法磨灭，他对 我造成的影响持续深远。的确，这样的朋友被视 为我们生活中的财富和资产。我们有权利选择自 己的朋友，然而交友的过程中，我都应该足够理 智和谨慎，选择那些能够给我们带来正能量的真 正的朋友。最深刻的一门课A course that has impressed you most in collegeT

15、here are many courses in each college year. But thecourse which impressed me most in college is Advaneed En glish Audio-Visual & Speak ing. The reas onswhy I like this course are as follows.The first reas on is that I have lear nt a lot from thiscourse. My liste ning ability, speak ing ability a

16、s well astran slati on ability has improved greatly after tak ingthis course. The sec ond reas on is that I like theteacher of this course, Mr. Qin, very much. He is acharming gentleman with great patie nee. His oral English is perfect, sounding like America n speakers. Hetreated us very strict but

17、we still like him extremely.Just as the proverb goes,“A strict teacherproduces outstanding students.”Thanks toMr. Qins guidanee and teachings in this course, allmy classmates have made great progress in En glishlear ning.【参考译文】大学中给你印象最深的一门课大学阶段各个年级都有很多课程，但给我印象最 深的一门课是高级视听说”。之所以喜欢这门 课，有很多原因，现将原因列举如下。

18、喜欢这门课的第一个原因是我在这门课上学到 了很多东西。我的英语听力水平、口语水平和翻 译水平都得到了很大提升。喜欢这个课程的第二 个原因是我很喜欢教我们这门课的老师一一秦 老师。他是一个既有魅力又有耐心的人。他的英语口语很棒。乍一听，完全就是美国本土人在讲 英语。他对我们要求很严格，但我们依然很喜欢 他。正如谚语所说：严师出高徒”。多亏秦老师在这 门课上的悉心指导和教诲，我们班同学的英语水 平都得到了空前的提升。【写作知识点】形容“记么说？简单句的类型：（1）肯定陈述句：somethi ng forever.（2）否定陈述句：somethi ng.（3）隐否定陈述句：Somethi ng be

19、 unforgettable.（4） 改述陈述句：Something give somebody deepimpressi on.Better choice:某事深深植根于某人的记忆当中。Somethi ngbe deeplyin ones memory/mind.主语系语 状语表语主语补足语例如：童年时代，我有过一次永生难忘的痛 苦经历。The horribleexperienee in my childhoodis deeply rooted in my memory.万能“亮点”句：Somebody rememberSomebody never forgetrooted我敢说这段美好的经

20、历我永生难忘。I am sure that this great experie nce+非谓语动词作后置定语+ will be deeply rooted in my/your memory.【2014年12月真题】【题目一】A course that has impressed you most incollege.（大学中给你印象最深的一门课）例子：I am sure that this great experienee takingthis course will be deeply rooted in my/your memory.【题目二】A classmate of yours

21、who has in flueneed you most in college.（大学中对你影响最深的一位同学）例子：I am sure that this great experienee makingfriends with him/her will be deeply rooted in my/yourmemory.【题目三】A campus activity that has ben efitedmost.（使你受益最深的一项校园活动）例子：I am sure that this great experieneeparticipatingthis activity willbe dee

22、ply rooted in my/your memory.运用技巧：（1）欢迎信欢迎留学生题目要求以学生会的名义给即将到来的外 国留学生写一封欢迎信，并为他们的校园生活提 出一些建议。【例句】I would like to extend mywarmestwelcome to all of you. I am sure that this greatexperience visiting our university will be deeply rootedin your memory.（2）推荐信一一推荐电影题目要求给好友推荐一部自己喜欢的电影。【例句】I would like to re

23、commend an Americanmovie, Titanic, to you. I am sure that this greatexperience seeing this film will be deeply rooted in yourmemory.（3） 告示招募志愿者愿者【例句】We would like to extend thein formati on that we will recruit 100 volun teers for thecomi ng in ter nati onal conference on globalizati on onMarch 20,2

24、010 in our college. I am sure that this greatexperience participating this activity will be deeplyrooted in your memory.题目要求要为一个全球化国际会议招募志(4)申请信 资助希望工程题目要求希望参与希望工程，表达资助欲望 及捐赠计划。【例句】I would like to request your assista nce tofind a child in a remote area as the beneficiary of myfinancialaid. I aisure that this great experie nce support ing a child inpoverty will be deeply rooted in my memory.(5)题目要求告诉老板辞职的决定，对公司提供的机会，领导的认可和同事的帮助表示感谢，