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1、If the dream is big enough, the facts dont count.如果梦想远大，就一定可以克服艰难险阻。Dear John， Its a pity that I have to say sorry to you ! It was not _ I read your letter that I knew you loved me so much and wanted to marry me , for we havent seen each other _ we parted . _ we are all busy, I just have to drop a f

2、ew lines to you. The fact that youre not good at English disappoints me , although you love me. To tell you the truth , I cant stand anyone who cannot speak English well. So _happens, Im glad to have met you, and in fact, _ time goes by, youll gradually forget me . Best wishes Alice untilsinceNow th

3、atwhateverasa dear John letterAdverbial Clause（绝交信）（绝交信）1.It is not until I read your letter that I know you love me so much and want to marry me.2. we havent seen each other since we parted . 3. Now that we are all busy, I just have to drop a few lines to you.4.Whatever happens, Im glad to have met

4、 you.5. As time goes by, youll gradually forget me .I will never marry you. 高考:Never will I marry you.四级四级:You are the last man I am willing to marry.六级六级:Under no circumstances will I marry you.GRE: If you were the last man in the world, I would definitely remain single.写作技能提升：句子润色写作技能提升：句子润色How to

5、 beautify the Adverbial Clause in WritingWhile writing ,try to use different forms of verbs and clauses(从句从句) to make your essay simple, clear, vivid and full of varieties.2012广东高考基础写作广东高考基础写作你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。【写作内容写作内容】请根据以下信息，介绍一位传奇人物请根据以下信息，介绍一位传奇人物姓姓 名：名：Allan Ste

6、wart国国 籍：澳大利亚籍：澳大利亚出生日期：出生日期：1915年年3月月7日日世界纪录：世界纪录：2006年获硕士学位时年龄最大年获硕士学位时年龄最大学习态度：挑战自我，永远为时不晚。学习态度：挑战自我，永远为时不晚。第一个学位：第一个学位：1936年获得年获得第二个学位：医学博士第二个学位：医学博士第三个学位：第三个学位：80多岁时决定学习法律，多岁时决定学习法律，2006年获得硕士学年获得硕士学位。位。第四个学位：第四个学位：2012年通过网络学习获得，善于合理安排学年通过网络学习获得，善于合理安排学习时间，受到老师表扬。习时间，受到老师表扬。Because he was good a

7、t arranging his study time, he got praise from his teacher 学会使用复合句学会使用复合句现象现象学生作文中出现很多错别字学生作文中出现很多错别字原因原因 每天有很多作业做，没有记住生字。每天有很多作业做，没有记住生字。参考词汇：参考词汇：错别字错别字: : wrongly-written characters要求：要求：1. 1. 用用状语从句状语从句表达表格的表达表格的原因原因 2. 2. 语句间要有语句间要有连贯性连贯性 现象：现象：There are many wrongly-written characters in stude

8、nts compositions. 2. They have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters.1. 1. 每天有很多作业做每天有很多作业做 2. 2. 没有记住生字。没有记住生字。 They have much homework to do every day.3. With so much homework to do, they fail to memorize the new characters.1. Because they have so much home

9、work to do, they fail to memorize the new characters.第三步：合并句子第三步：合并句子 They fail to memorize the new characters.第一步：拆分成几个简单句第一步：拆分成几个简单句第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句Highlights of Adverbial Clause while writing 1.状语从句与分词之间的灵活转换状语从句与分词之间的灵活转换2.高考状语从句中的倒装高考状语从句中的倒装3.高考状语从句中的省略高考状语从句中的省略4.状语从句与其他从句之间的转换状语

10、从句与其他从句之间的转换5.Some proverbs :When I think of the trip to Shanghai , Im impressed most with Mr. Rui. He is my oral English teacher. （2012广东高考读写广东高考读写任务任务:老师影响学生的话题老师影响学生的话题 )1.状语从句与分词之间的灵活转换状语从句与分词之间的灵活转换请试试改写下面的句子吧！(改后改后)Thinking of the trip to Shanghai , Im impressed most with Mr. Rui, my oral Engl

11、ish teacher. 1.After I realized the importance of learning, I studied even harder.Realizing the importance of learning, I studied even harder.2.状语从句与倒装状语从句与倒装inversion1）. I was addicted to online games. And I was even absent from school. I was _addicted to online games_ I was even absent from school

12、.sothatSo addicted to online games was I that I was even absent from school.2）. She is a child. She knows a lotAlthough she is a child, she knows a lot.Child as she is, she knows a lot.当当so+adj./adv.+that句型中的句型中的so+adj./adv.放在句首时，主句谓语放在句首时，主句谓语用部分倒装。用部分倒装。当当as（尽管）引导让步状语，该从（尽管）引导让步状语，该从句的表语、状语或动词原形等习

13、惯上句的表语、状语或动词原形等习惯上要放到从句最前面。要放到从句最前面。2009年广东卷年广东卷 英语作文英语作文你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况：你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况：时间：上周末时间：上周末对象：眼科医生对象：眼科医生(eye-doctor)王教授王教授主题：我国中小学生近视主题：我国中小学生近视(short-sightedness)问题问题基本信息：基本信息：(1)发生率：略高于发生率：略高于50 (2)人数：世界第一人数：世界第一专家解读：专家解读：(1)原因：很复杂原因：很复杂 (2)治疗：没有哪一种药物能治愈近视治疗：没有

14、哪一种药物能治愈近视 (3)建议：不要过度用眼；多参加户外活动建议：不要过度用眼；多参加户外活动 (4)特别提示：如何握笔也和近视有关特别提示：如何握笔也和近视有关 根据以上情况写一篇采访报道，并包括如下内容：根据以上情况写一篇采访报道，并包括如下内容：1采访的时间、对象和主题；采访的时间、对象和主题；2中小学生近视的发生率及人数；中小学生近视的发生率及人数；3专家解读。专家解读。原因很复杂，以致于没有哪一种药物能治愈近原因很复杂，以致于没有哪一种药物能治愈近视。视。He also pointed that the causes for short-sightedness are so com

15、plicated that no medicine can cure short-sightedness.He also pointed that so complicated are the causes for short-sightedness that no medicine can cure short-sightedness.1. Dont speak until you are spoken to . 2. He was a swimmer when he was a child. 3.She stood at the gate as if she was waiting for

16、 someone. 4. Ill buy a TV set if it is necessary. 5. Though it is cold, he wore a shirt.（ ）（ ）（ ）（ ）（ ）3.点击高考状语从句中的省略点击高考状语从句中的省略Ellipsis :什么时候可以省略什么时候可以省略?怎么省略怎么省略? 在含有状语从句的复合句中在含有状语从句的复合句中若从句的主句是若从句的主句是it或与或与主句的主语相同，且在谓语中含有主句的主语相同，且在谓语中含有be时，常省略从时，常省略从句的主语和句的主语和be。 1._ (在北京的时候在北京的时候), I paid a vis

17、it to the Summer Palace. 2._(除非修理除非修理), the machine is of no use. 3. _(如果有必要的话如果有必要的话), you can help us to do something. 4. A girl stood at the gate of the school as if _ _(跟老师讲跟老师讲话话).When/While in BeijingUnless repaired talking with a teacherIf necessary4.状语从句与其他从句之间的转换状语从句与其他从句之间的转换1).I wont beli

18、eve what he says. （no matter what状语从句）状语从句）2).When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (the morethe more)No matter what he says, I wont believe.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.1. 有志者事竟成。有志者事竟成。Where theres a will, theres a way. 2. 读万卷书不如行万里路读万卷书不如行万里路A million miles is better than a

19、 million books3. 入乡随俗入乡随俗.When in Rome do as the Romans do.4. 万事开头难万事开头难All things are difficult before they are easy.5. 只要不灰心，就一定能成功只要不灰心，就一定能成功.As long as you dont lose heart, youll succeed.5.Useful proverbs:Try to make your sentenceAfter class try to search for such beautiful and vivid sentences

20、in your books, OK? 写作中运用状语从句时的常见错误写作中运用状语从句时的常见错误1.I didnt give up. Because my mother often told me, where there is a will, there is a way.”2. She worked so hard that could catch up with others.3.Only we keep optimistic can we succeed.4.When he hesitating, a man came up to him. 写作中状语从句的几个写作中状语从句的几个常

21、见错误常见错误: 1.I didnt give up. Because my mother often told me, where there is a will, there is a way.” 2. She worked so hard that could catch up with others. 3.Only we keep optimistic can we succeed. 4.When he hesitating, a man came up to him.,becauseshe whenwas1.只有从句，没有主句只有从句，没有主句2.从句中缺少主语从句中缺少主语3.缺少

22、从句的连接词缺少从句的连接词4.从句中的谓语不完整从句中的谓语不完整summary：1.先阅读写作内容，将从句剥离出来，先阅读写作内容，将从句剥离出来，弄懂句子意思弄懂句子意思.2.写作中用状语从句优化句子写作中用状语从句优化句子3.避免使用状语从句时出现的错误避免使用状语从句时出现的错误.4.研读范文中从句的使用研读范文中从句的使用5.适当使用含状从的名言警句适当使用含状从的名言警句6.Practice makes perfect!以下是网上走红的以下是网上走红的“低碳哥低碳哥”的基本情况的基本情况时间：时间：2011年年人物介绍：人物介绍： “低碳哥低碳哥(Low-carbon Broth

23、er)”，用行，用行动宣讲环保概念的年轻人动宣讲环保概念的年轻人主要做法有：主要做法有：1.捡起废纸，用空白一面写字。捡起废纸，用空白一面写字。 2.不开灯看电视，还把电视亮度调到不开灯看电视，还把电视亮度调到最低（最低（minimum）。）。 3.上班骑自行车，不开车等。上班骑自行车，不开车等。【写作内容写作内容】根据以上根据以上“低碳哥低碳哥”的基本情况的基本情况，写，写一篇介绍，内容包括：一篇介绍，内容包括：1. “低碳哥低碳哥”的的简要介绍简要介绍及走红的及走红的时间；时间；2.他的主要他的主要做法做法及你的及你的看法看法。 【写作要求写作要求】 只能用只能用5个句子表达全部内容。个句

24、子表达全部内容。【评分标准评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，句子结构准确，信息内容完整， 篇篇章结构连贯。章结构连贯。Homework To complete the exercises on the printed material. To complete the composition.2012年高考基础写作评分说明：年高考基础写作评分说明：基础写作主要考查考生语言结构的应用能力；基础写作主要考查考生语言结构的应用能力；能够用正确、规范的语言表达特定的内容。能够用正确、规范的语言表达特定的内容。 本试题要求考生根据所提供的信息，本试题要求考生根据所提供的信息，使用使用5个个句子表达句

25、子表达写作内容写作内容所提供的全部内容所提供的全部内容。命题思想是希望考生在表达这些内容时能够：命题思想是希望考生在表达这些内容时能够：正确使用正确使用动词不定式、分词短语、介词短语等动词不定式、分词短语、介词短语等来整合信息来整合信息。正确使用正确使用复合句，比如：定语从句、宾语从句、复合句，比如：定语从句、宾语从句、状语从句等。状语从句等。 Possible version： A young man called Low-Carbon Brother became a hit on the Internet in 2011，who suggests living a low-carbon

26、life with actions. He always picks up some waste paper on the street ， using the blank side to write something and goes to work by bike instead of driving. Besides, while he is watching TV, he always turns down the brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. Some people think what he is doing

27、 is just a show because no one can live such a simple life with so many modern inventions around us，but as far as I am concerned, I strongly support his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, he at least can enjoy a healthy life. 08年基础写作年基础写作背景：射击最初只是生

28、存工具，背景：射击最初只是生存工具，1919世纪末才世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。发展成为一项体育运动。18961896：第一次成为奥运项目：第一次成为奥运项目19041904：中断：中断19281928：中断：中断19321932：重回奥运会：重回奥运会19681968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛现状：稳步发展，现状：稳步发展，18961896奥运会只有三项射击奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有项目，现今有1717项。项。 After shooting was canceled in 1904 and 1928, it returned to the Olym

29、pics in 1932. Although shooting develops steadily now, it only includes 3 events in 1896, while 17 recently.07 “谁是你的偶像谁是你的偶像”调查报告调查报告根据以上数据，写一篇短文，包括以下内容：根据以上数据，写一篇短文，包括以下内容： 1调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象；调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象； 2男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异；男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异； 3“父母父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异；在男女生偶像中的排序差异； 4男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同；男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同； 5你的偶像及理由。你的偶像及理由。你的偶像及你的偶像及理由理由。Basic writing because5 5你的偶像及理由。你的偶像及理由。As for myself, Liu Wei, an armless Pianist, is my idol because he never gives up his dreams and always i