个人陈述(PS)范文—会计专业

1、如何撰写个人陈述（PS）、动机信今天我们来聊聊个人陈述Personal statement, 以下简称PS,的撰写，包括一篇个 人陈述应该包括哪些部分，以及撰写个人陈述常见的误区。 tips :文末有范文申请时，除了学习成绩等“硬背景”，个人陈述 （PS）可谓留学文书中最重要的部 分。能否在几百字的文章中突出自己的优势和闪光点，提交一份Killer PS,取得招生老师的青睐和认可，是每位同学都要用心关注的重中之重。PS就像给自己做广告，你该从哪些方面、用什么样的表达方式向梦想的学校展示自 己？为什么选择这所学校，而不是其他学校？为什么选择这个专业，这个专业又为 何应选择你？等等一系列问题，都应

2、该在这则“广告”中体现出来。而你，恰恰是 最了解自己的人，包括你的专业、你的经历、你的优势所以，我建议大部分有能力 的同学，先自己完成初稿。下面我想与大家分享我的观点，关于一篇个人陈述应该包括哪些内容。个人陈述应包括哪些内容？你为什么选择这个专业/项目？ 项目中的哪些课程最吸引你？你最想学到什么？你对什么感兴趣？请提供你对这个项目有所了解的“证据”。这意味着你要认真去学校官网查看项目详情，这是非常重要的！例如，这个项目有去到某个公司的实习机 会，你可以提到这样的机会和你的职业愿景非常匹配，可以提升你的职场竞争力。例如，这个项目的有一个研究课题，是你非常感兴趣的，你认为这个项目可以帮助你提高学术

3、水平。你为什么值得被录取？你为什么适合学习这个项目？你现在所学习的专业是否与这个项目相关？你是否有相关技能以及经历，能够让你在这个项目中取得成功？其实对于学校而言，录取到一个好的学生，你就成为了学校的宝贵财富，而你要阐述你为什么可以成为学校的财富。你是否参加过课外实践或实习，以证明你对这个项目/课程的热爱和擅长？提供和项目相关的工作经历，并且将这些工作经历和学校期望的技能/能力联系起来。例如，你有在肯尼亚的交换经历，而你申请的项目是一个非常国际化的商科项目。那么你在肯尼亚的经历就可以分享给你的同学和老师，为他们带来看问题的新视角。思考你自己的兴趣爱好以及平时参与的活动。他们如何展现出你的个性和

4、技能？最好将这些技能和你所申请的项目/课程联系起来。例如，你说你很喜欢潜水、羽毛球和爬山。 但只是提到这些是不够的，你最好说说这些爱好让你成为了一个怎样的人。例如，你爬过各大高峰，每次爬山前你都会缜密计划以达成目标；而在学习的时候也是一样，你会详细安排以取得优异成绩。这个专业 /项目如何能帮你实现职业目标？尝试描述你在学业有成后对未来有什么打算， 以及这个项目将如何帮你在未来取得更大成就？例如，你有三年的HR 经验，现在想通过理论学习，在HR 领域获得更广泛的知识，并用这些学术知识解决工作中的问题。（记得思考让你为之骄傲的成就， 思考哪些经历和特色使得你是独一无二 的候选人。）F面，我们来聊聊

5、通过读一些朋友的个人陈述，我都发现了哪些常见问题吧个人陈述常见问题问题1:读起来很无趣，真的很无趣啊很多朋友就是记录了一下自己的 所作所为"，有点像流水账：我做了这个，我做了那个。结尾说：我真的很优秀，你们要录取我啊！（只留下招生老师一脸黑人问号？ ？ ？）tips :请大家精简亮点！亮点！把你所有相关经历中最不一样的摆上来，“夺人眼球”。同时，你要清楚你告诉申 请学校这些经历的目的一一那就是，你的这些经历能体现出你很优秀！请很明确地 展现出来，不要只说些高大上的话，拿出事实来证明吧哈哈哈！这里可以参考我个人陈述中对巴西和芬兰实习经历的总结：I want to make mycare

6、er in building stronger trade connections between China, Europe, and Brazil. I recently completed a one-year internship has focused me on learning more so thatI can achieve at a higher level. Working in Brazil. This firsthand experience in international trade has helped me realize how much I do not

7、know, and focused me on learning more so that I can achieve at a higher level. 尤其是已经在海外交换过的小伙伴，大家肯定会有多多少少的感悟。记得不要把所 有经历都记录下来，用一到两句话概括你最大的收获就够了。例如上面这个小段落 就有个很清楚的开头，来表达我对未来的计划。Additionally, I believe it is important to be able to evaluate information and produce reliable research. I believe that your

8、program can help me perfect all of these skills. 最后小段结尾我提到了自己心目中重要的事，而所要申请的项目可以帮我达成这些 技能。另外，学校录取的学生来自全世界，大家可能都有很多不同的“奇葩”经历，所以我们不要认为自己的经历有多么厉害，非要所有细节一字不漏写上去，其实作为读者很可能看着看着就睡着了= = 你需要的是简单概括而不平淡无趣。问题 2：净说些无关紧要的话 在申请某项目时，最重要的是表达你为什么选择这个项目和这所学校，不要扯得太远。For example ，有朋友申请计算机专业，结果申请信上说他非常想到欧洲读计算机专业是因为对西班牙斗牛感

9、兴趣（excuse me ？）tips ：请不要浪费你的“口水”，去写一些毫不相关的理由学校想看到你对这个专业学习的热情；学校想看到，你会在这个专业上下功夫；学校想看到，这个专业对你未来的职业发展有什么帮助；学校想了解的是你这个人，想被你说服，为什么你是最优秀的候选人！当你把一些不相关的兴趣爱好写上去时， 请思考一下写这个的目的。你告诉学校你很喜欢西班牙斗牛，难道人家就会认为你是一个非常优秀的计算机学生？（这种想法有点太天真咧）问题3：必要时没有具体内容支撑我发现大家有时会写一些非常空乏的话，比如有个朋友想证明他自己很有领导能力，于是说自己参加了非常多的活动，然后就没有下文了。句子与句子，段落

10、与段落之间，一定得有很好的连接，否则读者会感到非常困惑。tips ：必要时列举具体内容支撑观点例如当时我怕想证明自己是一个思想开放、易于融入他国文化的人，于是我举了个栗子： I believe that I grow as a person from being immersed in other countriesand cultures. I have already worked and studied abroad, and each time I have gained greater insight into my strengths and talents.但是盆友们，光是举这个

11、例子还是不够滴，我们还需要一个过渡。比如这里specifically 就是一个很好的连接词，你需要说明你举这个例子的目的是什么。你是想告诉学校你从这些经历成长了吗？或者增加了专业知识？或者这个项目可以帮助你更好地成长？在举例之后，我立刻阐明我举例子的目的：Specifically, I have already worked as an intern abroad both in Finland and in Brazil.In Finland I taught about Chinese culture in high schools for four months. In Brazil m

12、y work was much more complex. I was responsible for contacting potential buyers and suppliers globally, and for finding co-operative business partners in China.两三句说说你工作都做了什么当然还不够，这些工作到底教会了你什么呢？These experiences in Finland and especially Brazil were invaluable. They enhanced my ability to work effect

13、ively in multicultural teams and to manage employees with different backgrounds. I also learned how to handle situations which require a change of plans to reach the end goal. I expect that your program will offer me a more focused opportunity to develop my skills in my personal development, which I

14、 believe will continue by being immersed with different cultures. I believe that your course will best equip me to achieve these aims. 表达自己学会了和不同背景的人打交道，并且在情况改变的情况下能够很好适应。最后和开头段落链接起来，表达自己就是一个喜欢不同文化的人，而你的课程可以 帮助我继续和不同文化的人打交道。就像语文老师教过我们的那样，文章要有起承转合。大家可以思考下自己的申请信 是否做到了这几点？问题4：没有清晰结构，思路混乱虽然有句歌词唱得好：跟着感觉走

15、，但大家千万别跟着自己的感觉写申请信。一会 儿说自己的成绩有多棒，一会跳到自己参加的活动有很多，一会儿说自己过去喜欢 旅游，一会又跳到自己专业知识有多丰富。唉，这样的申请信没有丝毫的逻辑严谨性。tips ：画思维导图帮助理顺思路在英国求学期间，老师经常叫我们画思维导图。在纸上，把自己所有想要表达的观点一一列举。写作个人陈述时，我建议大家把想说的都写出来然后归类。所有和学术相关的内容归为一类，所有和实习工作相关的归为一类，所有无关紧要的，归为一类然后剔除，最后再按照一定顺序和逻辑去架构自己的文章。初稿完成后，建议大家找几个专业人士读你的个人陈述。我当时找了大概有10-15个的 native sp

16、eaker 的朋友帮我修改，他们给了很中肯的意见，并且我发现只改语法是不够的，写作思路与结构也需要提高。会计专业个人陈述范文Born in 1974 to parents who valued education above everything else, I consistently excelled my classmates in primary and high school. My father, a senior engineer of a huge manufacturing company, would not accept any second best performan

17、ce in my studies, and I never disappointed him. One way for me to stay the top student was to pursue a wide variety of intereststhat helped to keep me physically strong and intellectually sharp. As anacclaimed football player, I led my high schools fooatsbaitlsl tceaapmtaininto winning the city s fo

18、otball championship. I also enjoyed literature, music and traveling.As the best student of my high school, I was well prepared in 1991 when I took the National University Entrance Examinations, held nationwide once every year to screen high school graduates for higher education. Of the 100,000 high

19、school graduates who took the exams that year in my province, I ranked the fourth in overall scores. On the strength of these scores, I gained acceptance into the Finance & Accounting Department of the Beijing University, which President Clinton described as the Harvard of China on his recent tr

20、ip to this country.At the Beijing University, the country s best institution of higher learning, I continued to be the best student of the class. The universitys businessschool, to which the Finance & Accounting Department belongs, emphasizes, English and computers. I did well in all of them. In

21、 the final exams, I got the full grade for calculus, and the highest grade in my class in statistics, liner algebra, microeconomics, finance, banking and econometrics. My average grade was 90 on the 1 to 100 scale, making me the undisputed academic leader among my fellow students.I began to have sig

22、nificant academic publications while I was still an undergraduate student, something highly unusual in China. Taking advantage of the university csuwltievlal ted atmosphere of academic freedom, I undertook extensive research on top of my regular course load, which culminated in the publication of a

23、book, titled “ Out ofDilemma”. As the principal author of the book, I made sure that the book presented an insightful study of the Western business management methods, especially those proven effective in the experience of the Fortune 500 corporations. The book was unique at the time in that detaile

24、d case studies were presented on a number of well-known Chinese companies against the Western business management approaches introduced in the book.I was also the only undergraduate in my department who published a research paper in an academic journal. In the“The investment risk and itsmeasurement

25、” , published in the January 1996issue of Chinese Technology and Economy Science, I presented a mathematical model I myself have developed on the measurement of market risks. Although the model has yet to be proven in empirical research, it has received positive review among Chinese economists. It s

26、hould serve as an advanced starting point for me to conduct further studies and research.With an impeccable academic record and virtually unprecedented publications, I received many awards and honors, including the Outstanding Student Honor in October 1992, the Guanghua Scholarship in 1994, and the

27、Outstanding Student Honor in 1996. In recognition of my achievements, the Business School of the Beijing University offered in 1996 to accept me for graduate studies without the normally mandatory examinations, a privilege that is granted to only what the university considers the exceptionally gifte

28、d.I, however, declined the offer by my alma mater. Instead, I joined the Chinese DaChuan (Group) Company, one of the worlds biggest shippingcompanies, to work with its Planning & Financial Division at its headquarters in Beijing. I wanted to apply what I had learned both in class and outside of

29、it to analysis of real business operations before I commenced my graduate studies.That has since proved to be the right decision. Working with the Chinese DaChuan Company, with its 117 branches around the world, gave me a vantage point from which I easily and regularly observe all sorts of financial

30、 activities, such as the capital flow, the investment, the making of accounting statements, the cost control, and the innovation in accounting computer systems. This has not only enriched my knowledge of finance and given me clear perception into the company itself but also provided me with the necessary empirical dat