人教版初中英语中考作文复习课件

1、2022-4-24人教版初中英语中考作人教版初中英语中考作文复习课件文复习课件activitiessubjectsclassmatesteachersbusy/interesting/wonderful/colorful/fantasticboring/terrible/so-soTalk about your school lifePair work: What do you usually do?What do you think of?What/Who is your favorite?How are you getting on with?Do you?扩写练习：扩写练习：likes

2、playing sports healthyhealthyHe is a boy.He is a _ boy.He is a _ boy who_.I like music.I like_ music.I like_ music that_.dancedancecan make me excited仿写练习：仿写练习：目的目的原因原因She always_ to _ because_.relaxlistens to some musicmusic is fantasticrelaxstudy betterget some knowledgekeep healthyhave a resthave

3、 funget good gradesMiss CoolMr. Ball仿写练习：仿写练习：It is _for_ to _.necessaryhimdifficult/easy/exciting/interesting/scaring/strangedangerous/difficult/wonderful/possibleimpossible/unbelievable/unexpectedIt is _ for children to play in the street.read booksdangerousI always_ to _ because_.It is _ for_ to

4、_.who/ that 引导的定语从句。引导的定语从句。Use these sentence patterns(句型句型) to describe（描述）（描述） your school life.Group work:activitiessubjectsclassmatesteachersI am going to have a trip to the West Lake with my friend. I will do some studies to improve my math because I am a little weak in it. It is necessary for

5、 me to do some housework, such as cooking breakfast and cleaning rooms. 找出用所学句型写的好句。找出用所学句型写的好句。 Choose good words and sentences to improve your writing strategyCompare:B is better than A in 08省考试说明范文省考试说明范文How glad I am! I can do many things of my own. I am going to have a trip to the West Lake wit

6、h my friend. I will also do some studies to improve my math because I am a little weak in it. Of course it is necessary for me to do some housework, such as cooking breakfast and cleaning rooms. Isnt my plan nice?beginningkey sentencelinking words连词连词ending I am going to have a trip to the West Lake

7、 with my friend. I will do some studies to improve my math because I am a little weak in it. It is necessary for me to do some housework, such as cooking breakfast and cleaning rooms. fluency流畅流畅 consecution条理条理 My hobbies ( Beginning ): _. ( Key sentence A):_. I often read in my free time. I read m

8、any kinds of books. And I like the stories that have good endings. (Key sentence B ): _. I like all kinds of music. I often listen to the music programs on radio. Although I cant sing English songs well, I like them a lot. (Key sentence C ): _.I often play ping-pong after classes. When I am doing sp

9、orts, I forge all my trouble and worry. Of course it is necessary for students to play sports. (Ending) _.Can you add a beginning, two other key sentences, some linking words and an ending?Practice:I am a lover of readingTitle:_ totogeneral总总specific分分specific分分general总总I have a lot of hobbies and e

10、njoy doing many things in my free time.I am a lover of reading.I am also a music lover.I like sports as well.In short, I enjoy my life in school. Reading books, listening to music and doing sports are very helpful to my health and my studies.My hobbiesBeginning: Key sentence B: Key sentence A: Endin

11、g: Main part(正文正文): Key sentence C: (linking words)Make an outline for the following composition:三年的初中生活马上就要结束了，记下你的校园生活。题目自三年的初中生活马上就要结束了，记下你的校园生活。题目自拟拟(80词左右词左右)（2007衢州卷衢州卷)Title: _ Beginning: Key sentence B: Key sentence A: Ending: Main part(正文正文): Use outline提纲提纲 to improve your writing strategy

12、outline提纲提纲Title: _ Beginning: Key sentence 2: Key sentence 1: Ending: Main part(正文正文): According to your own outline ,use some good words and sentences to finish your composition.Writing I alwaysto becauseIt is for to who/ that 引导的定语从句。引导的定语从句。评价评价: 请对照下面这个表格评价同桌的作文。请对照下面这个表格评价同桌的作文。1. fluency流畅流畅

13、consecution条理条理: (Yes or No) Beginning ( ) key sentences( ) linking word( ) ending ( )2. Choice of words and sentences: The number of spelling mistakes ( )The number of grammar mistakes ( )Does he write good words or sentence? ( )3.Others:_ A ( 13-15 分分 ) :包含内容要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚包含内容要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表

14、达清楚B ( 11-12 分分 ) :基本包含内容要点，语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本包含内容要点，语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚基本清楚C ( 8-10分分 ) :内容包含部分要点，语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意内容包含部分要点，语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意D (6-7分分 ) : 要点不明确，语言错误多，影响意思表达要点不明确，语言错误多，影响意思表达E (3-5 ) :只抄了提只抄了提示词，错误百出，不知所云示词，错误百出，不知所云F ( 0-2分分 ) :白卷或文不对题白卷或文不对题作者：作者：_得分：得分：_ 评价人评价人:_How to improve your writingTips :1.Make an outline. 2.Choose good words and sentences.Homew