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1、 Read the instructions carefully and decide the style. Follow typical patterns List the key points. Put the key points into sentences.（列提纲）（列提纲）（明审题）（明审题）（选句型）（选句型）（妙联句）（妙联句）(细复查细复查)Develop the sentences into passage. Check your work.0909浙江卷书面表达浙江卷书面表达5月月1日。高二（日。高二（3）班的学生志愿者）班的学生志愿者Li Yue和和Zhang Hua

2、去阳光敬老院（去阳光敬老院（Sunshine Nursing Home) 开展志愿开展志愿者活动（送水果、打扫、聊天等）。假如你是校英语报者活动（送水果、打扫、聊天等）。假如你是校英语报的记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则的记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则100120个词的新个词的新闻报道。闻报道。 1. 时间、地点、人物、活动；时间、地点、人物、活动； 2. 老人们的反应；老人们的反应； 3. 简短评论。简短评论。 4. 注意：报道的标题和记者姓名已给出（不计词注意：报道的标题和记者姓名已给出（不计词数）。数）。 Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the

3、 Elderly By Chen Jie, School Newspaper命题特点：命题特点：坚持坚持“半开放半开放”的命题思路；的命题思路；话题贴近学生生活，有话可写，有感可话题贴近学生生活，有话可写，有感可发发; ;有一定的发挥空间有一定的发挥空间 Style:News report(半开放式）Theme:Student volunteers work for Sunshine Nursing Home. Event:whenWhereWhowhatThe outline of the passage（提纲）：（提纲）：On May DaySunshine Nursing HomeLi

4、Yue and Zhang HuaThey did some voluntary workThe reaction of the elderlyComment on the event. Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work. Upon their arrival, Li Y

5、ue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people. When it was time for the volunteers to

6、 leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness. They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever. What Li Yue and Zhang Hua did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives. In addition, it is we youngsters duty to care for the elderly, who have devoted

7、 a lot to our society. Skills of writing a good article Transition Words Varied Varied sentence sentence patternspatternsA good passageA good passage 高级词汇高级词汇丰富的结构丰富的结构恰当的过渡词恰当的过渡词Advanced Advanced vocabulariesvocabulariesThey gave the elderly flowers and fruits.They presented the elderly with flowe

8、rs and fruits.What Li Yue and Zhang Hua did has made others happy and is also good for their own lives.What Li Yue and Zhang Hua did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.Advanced vocabularies1.That is a difficult job. 2.We all think he is a great man.3.Suddenly I thought out a good

9、 idea. I. 怎样使用较高级的词汇怎样使用较高级的词汇We all think highly of him .A good idea occurred to me./ A good idea suddenly struck me.That is a challenging job. 4. He is good at English.5.There is an increase in the number of womens jobs. 6.Some students who live in remote areas cant have listening material easily.

10、 There is an increase in the number of jobs available for women.He has a good command /knowledge of English.availableaccessSome students who live in remote areas have no easy access to listening material.Varied sentence structuresUpon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, Respect

11、fully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.They started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.It was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.What Li Yue and Zhang Hua did has

12、 brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.It is we youngsters duty to care for the elderly, who have devoted a lot to our society. 介词短语作时间状语介词短语作时间状语副词作方式状语副词作方式状语现在分词表伴随现在分词表伴随独立结构作时间状语独立结构作时间状语名词性从句作主语名词性从句作主语动词不定式作主语动词不定式作主语/定语从句定语从句状语从句状语从句 To his surprise, the little girl can speak En

13、glish fluently.What surprises him is that the little girl can speak English fluently.Practice 怎样使用较丰富的句式怎样使用较丰富的句式The Little girl can speak English fluently, which surprises him.He is surprised to find that the little girl can speak English fluently.The fact that the little can speak English fluentl

14、y surprises himHe is surprised，for the little can speak English fluently.The little girl can speak English so fluently that he is surprised.小女孩英语说得很流利，这使他非常惊讶。小女孩英语说得很流利，这使他非常惊讶。一句多译一句多译Transition wordsThen, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.In addition, it is

15、 we youngsters duty to care for the elderly, who have devoted a lot to our society. 表示对比的过渡词有：however；on the contrary；on the other hand；等。表示说明的过渡词有：for example；for instance；such as; namely等表示强调的过渡词有：above all；in fact；in particular；等。表示总结的过渡词有：all in all；finally；in brief; on the whole等。 表示时间顺序的过渡词有：f

16、irstly; first of all; above all；to begin/start with ；first and foremost; finally; in the end; eventually; last but not least等。表示递进的过渡词有：furthermore；in addition；moreover；what is more等。常用的常用的过渡词过渡词三三. 过渡词的应用过渡词的应用 学生习作学生习作Online Shopping As a new way of shopping, online shopping is becoming more and m

17、ore popular in our daily life. Online shopping has many advantages. Online shopping makes it easier for us to buy things. Instead of searching a crowded store, we just need to watch the computer screen and choose the things we like. It is much faster for us to do shopping. We dont have to spend a lo

18、t of time going to shops. We can see a great deal of goods shown on the computer screen at the same time. Online shopping is not so perfect. The pictures of goods shown on the computer screen are not always what they are. We can be cheated easily. We can not see the things in detail. It is an advanc

19、ed way to do shopping. So we should develop and make good use of it.给下文加上恰当的过渡词给下文加上恰当的过渡词 As a new way of shopping online shopping is becoming more and more popular in our daily life. Online shopping has many advantages. Firstly, online shopping makes it easier for us to buy things. Instead of sear

20、ching a crowded store, we just need to watch the computer screen and choose the things we like. Secondly, it is much faster for us to do shopping. We dont have to spend a lot of time going to shops. In addition, we can see a great deal of goods shown on the computer screen at the same time. However,

21、 online shopping is not so perfect. The pictures of goods shown on the computer screen are not always what they are. As a result, we can be cheated easily. Whats worse, we can not see the things in detail. In my opinion, it is an advanced way to do shopping. So we should develop and make good use of

22、 it. 当前我国政府和人民正努力把我国建设成一个社会关系当前我国政府和人民正努力把我国建设成一个社会关系和谐的国家。我们高三学生与家庭成员以及班级同学的和谐的国家。我们高三学生与家庭成员以及班级同学的关系处理总体上是好的，但也存在着一些问题，如容易关系处理总体上是好的，但也存在着一些问题，如容易发怒，与同学吵架，不听从家长和老师的教育等。发怒，与同学吵架，不听从家长和老师的教育等。假如我校外教假如我校外教Andrew正在调查我们高三学生与家庭成员正在调查我们高三学生与家庭成员和班级同学、老师之间的关系处理情况。作为高三学生，和班级同学、老师之间的关系处理情况。作为高三学生，现在请你把以上的情

23、况向现在请你把以上的情况向Andrew反映并提出一些关于如反映并提出一些关于如何改进关系的意见。何改进关系的意见。要点：要点：1、目前的实际情况：存在的方面；、目前的实际情况：存在的方面； 2、你个人的改进意见、你个人的改进意见(至少两条至少两条)。 注意：注意：1、文章的开头已经给出、文章的开头已经给出(不计入总词数不计入总词数)，你只，你只需接着写，可适当发挥；需接着写，可适当发挥；2、词数：、词数：120左右。左右。 Nowadays the government and people of China are trying to build a country with a harmo

24、nious relationship. _命题特点：命题特点：“半开放半开放”的命题思路；的命题思路；话题贴近学生生活，有话可写，有感可话题贴近学生生活，有话可写，有感可发发; ;有一定的发挥空间有一定的发挥空间 Para.1PhenomenaPara.2the relationshiplose their temperquarrel with othersturn a deaf ear tosuggestionsimprove the situation.respectcommunicationrelaxationThe outline of the passage（提纲）：（提纲）：用于描

25、述现象的句型：用于描述现象的句型： Recently,has become the focus of the society/our school. Nowadays, there is a growing concern for There exists some problems in Nowadays it is common to hear/see Nowadays,has become a problem we have to face.用于陈述想法的句型：用于陈述想法的句型：My own experience tells me that.In my opinion, we should attach more importance toAs far as I am concerned, I plan toPersonally, I tend toFinish the composition and hand it in tomorrow.【参考范文】 Nowadays the government and people of China are trying to build a country with a harmonious relationshi