2019-浙江高考读后续写真题范文赏析精品教育

1、2019.9浙江高考：OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom."I'mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp"andwalkedaway.W

2、ithnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace.sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!"shecried."Help!"Noreply.Ifonlyshehadnotlefthermobileph

3、oneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty

4、.Shecouldhearwatertrickling（滴落）somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow.Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefully

5、alongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语：

6、3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Paragraph2ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.2019.6Onabright,warmJulyafternoon,MacHollan,aprimaryschoolteacher,wascyclingfromhishometoAlaskawithhisfriends.Oneofhisfriendshadstoppedtomakeabicyclerepa

7、ir,buttheyhadencouragedMactocarryon,andtheywouldcatchupwithhimsoon.AsMacpedaled（骑行）alongalone,hethoughtfondlyofhiswifeandtwoyoungdaughtersathome.Hehopedtoshowthemthisbeautifulplacesomeday.ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim."Man,that'sabigdog!”hethought.Buwhenhelookedtotheside,hesawi

8、nstantlythatitwasnll,butawolf,aqdog；1ateatchingupwithhim.Mac'sheajumped.Hefoundouthiscanofhearspray.Withonehandonthebars,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtoMac'srelief,itfellback,shakingitshead.Butaminutelater,itwasbyhissideagain.ThenitattackedthebackofMac'sb

9、ike,tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,itfellbackonlytoquicklyrestartthechase（追赶）。Macwaspedalinghardnow.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcarsbutwascarefulnottoshowdown.Hesawasteepuphillclimbbeforehim.Heknewthatoncehehitthehill,he'dbeeasycaughtupandthewolf'steethwouldbetearing

10、intohisflesh.Atthismoment,PaulandBeekyweredrivingtheircarontheirwaytoAlaska.Theydidn'tthinkmuchofitwhentheysawtwocyclistsrepairingtheirbikeonthesideoftheroad.Abitlater,theyspottedwhatthey,too,assumedwasadogrunningalongsideamanonabike.Astheygotcloser,theyrealizedthatthedogwasawolf.Macheardalargev

11、ehiclebehindhim.Hepulledinfrontofitasthewolfwascatchingupfast,justadozenyardsawaynow.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语：3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1Thecarabrubtlystoppedinfrontofhim.Paragraph2Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.201911.浙江高考Avacation

12、withmymotherIhadaninterestingchildhood:Itwasfilledwithsurpriseandamusements,allbecauseofmymother-loving,sweet,andyetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtotho

13、sestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwe'deverseethemagain?Finally,themomentofourdepiavejitedreturnedhometogetthepurseandweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatent

14、intothecarandbravelydroveoff.WebravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterweandtravelerscMhadforgotten.DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhileDadslept:"YoustandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileIgo,andI'llstandoutsicdoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo."Ihad

15、terriblepicturesinmyrreyicwherearethe"Hkids?”"What?!Oh,GoshIthoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet."Wewereneveractuallylebehindinastrangecity,butweweren'tabouttotakeanychances.Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Momsuddenlygotagrea

16、tidea:Whydidn'twefindaho-keekirithalikelybackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourobjections.Ifastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorsteps,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneintheworldasasniceassheis.Wefina

17、llyfoundavacancyinthenexttown.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Para1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Para2:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.20196Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoav

18、acationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad'friend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandK

19、yle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast."Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,"hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens.whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepo

20、uttograze（吃草）.IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahoseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn'tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyay.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountain

21、s."Don'tbelateforsupper,"UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothetracksothatyoudongetlost!""OK!"mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfamhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscen

22、e.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven（编织白blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；2 .至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.参考范文一：Paragraph1Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasget

23、tingdarkagain.Janehadtostayaloneintheforestforanothercoldnight.Atthatmoment（时间）,shefeltalittlesad,butshewasn'sofrightened（情感）.Sheremindedherselfconstantly,（心理）-Tommusthavecalledforthosehelicopters.Maybe（情感）hewasinoneofthemandwillreturnsoon（动作）!Ihavetoguidehimtomorrow."Shefeltasleep作）anddrea

24、medofseeingTom（动作）.Paragraph2ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Sheatesomeberriesandthen（时间）walkedalongthestream,hoping（心、理）tofindasuitableplacetoguidethehelicopter.Shewalkedandwalked,exhaustedbutfullofhope.Suddenly（时间）,shespotted（动作）ahugeflatrock.Shemanaged（动作）toclimbontoitandwaitedwithpatience.Themoment（

25、时间）thehelicopterappeared（动彳）again.Theneareritgot（动作）,themoreshewaved（动作）theyellowblouse.Tohergreatjoy,（情感）thehelicopterdidn'missJanethistimeanditlandednearthebigrockslowly.Tomjumpedoffthehelicopterandrushed（动作）towardsJane.Theyhuggedeachothertightly（情感）andburstintotears（情感）.参考范文二：Thecarabrubtlyst

26、oppedinfrontofhim.Macjumpedoffhisbicycleanddashedforthebackdoorofthecar.Itwaslocked.Hethenranaroundtothepassengerdoor,butitwaslocked,aswell,sohebegantoclimbthroughtheopenwindow.Whenspottingthis,Paulquicklyunlockedthedoor,andthefrightenedmandivedin,slammingthedoorbehindhim.Paullookedoutthebackwindowa

27、ndsawthewolfstandingoverMac'sbiketaseirfeakill.Shortlyafter,theanimalranoff.Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.Macemergedfromthecarandhuggedhisfriends.aIthoughtIwasgoingtodie,criedto'thMaMacretrieved（取回）hisbicycle,andthethreemenresumed（继续）theirroadtrip,agreeingtokeepinoneanother'

28、;ssightline.Afewmilesdowntheroad,Macpulledoverandburstintotears."Therestofthetripwasamazing,butIhadtolettheformeremotionout.”参考范文三：Para1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Mominsistedthatwemustmakefulluseofitsincewehadbroughtit.DavidandIlookedatDad,hopinghecouldstophercraz

29、yidea.Toourgreatdisappointment,heagreed.Wespentawholeafternoonseekinganicecampingplaceandsetupourtentbeforethenightfell.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadthoughtmomcouldbewiseasIadmiringourstunningtent."Oh,Iforgotthepillows!”whatamisconcDespitetheacheofmyneck,wehadsomegreatnights.Para1:Wedrovethroughsev

30、eralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.Thebrightbluesky,thelimitlessgreengrass,thegroupofsheep,thesettingsunandthecountlessstarsinthecurtainofnightskeptmespellbound.Notonlydidweseehepicturesquescenery,wealsomanagedtoconsidermom'sscandalsasakindoffun.IreaalylovemyMum.Toourrelief,wearrivedat

31、grandparents'placeandwentbacktoourhomewithalloffourpeople.Itwassofortunatetoseemyfriendsagain.范文四：Paragraph1Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Instinctively,Iyelledoutloud,pullingbackthereinshardinordertostopthehorsefromhurtingthelittlecreature.Badlystartledbythesuddenincident,thehor

32、sespedoffthetrackintoanotherdirection.Dadfollowedcloselybehind,callingouttotellmehowtosoothetheterrifiedhorseandIdidastold.Finally,thehorsecalmeddown,butweseemedtogetlost,unabletogobacktothemountainroad.Paragraph2Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Wanderingaround,wewerestillstuckinthedilemma.Muchtoourdelight,thesoundofwaterinthedistancecaughtourattentionanddroveustotheriverbank.Dadproposedthatweshouldwalkalongtheriverwhichmayleadustothefarmhouseandnothingseemedbetterthanthat.Timeappearedto