2020英语写作高分必备：2.3高考概要写作高分技巧Word版含答案

1、3.高考概要写作高分技巧（2019浙江高考）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Parents everywhere praise their kids Jenn Berman, author ofTheA to Z Guide to RaisingHappy and Confident Kids, says, a We ve gone to the opposite extremes a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict . By giving kids a lot of praise, parents

2、 think they ' re building their children ' s conwdencejn fact, it may be just the opposite. Too much praise can backfire and, when given in a way that ' s insinceremake kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parents' .praise

3、 has put 廿Still, don' t go too far in the other direction Not giving enoughpraise can be just as damaging as giving too much Kids will feel like they ' re not good enough or that you don'ast aaresuHd, maysee no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.So what is the right amount of

4、 praise? Experts say that the quality ofpraise is more important than the quantity . If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward“ We shouldespecially recognize our children' s efforts to push

5、themselves and workhard to achieve a goalsays D,onahue, author of Parenting WithoutFear: Letting Goof Worry and Focusingon What ReallyMatters." Onething to remember is that it' s the process not the end product thatmatters. ”Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team But if

6、he' s out there every day and playing hardyou should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. But whatever it is, p

7、raise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate（ 相称的）to the amount of effort our child has put into it . 练考场审题Step 1精准审题谋篇布局文体议论文时态一般现在时原文分析第一段:指出父母过多表扬孩子的弊端第二段:指出表扬得太少也不好第三、四段:给出建议，要根据孩子实际付出的努力而非最终的结果来表扬孩子Step 2头脑风暴字字珠玉（1）美词:extreme, enthusiasm, insufficient praise, anappropriate

8、 amount of, based on, rather than（2佳句 Experts warn about two extremes when it comes to parents praise for their children. Therefore, the given advice is that an appropriate amount of praise should be given based on process rather than the result Step 3斟酌词句妙笔生花要点1:专家警告家长们不要太多或太少表扬孩子。一般表达：Experts warn

9、 parents not to praise their children too much or too little.句式升级（时间状语从句）专家警告说，父母对孩子的表扬存有两个极端。Experts warn about two extremes when it comes to parents ' praise fortheir children .要点2:因此，家长们应该基于过程而不是结果表扬孩子。一般表达：Therefore, parents should praise children based on the process rather than the result.

10、句式升级（表语从句，被动语态）因此，给出的建议是，适当的表扬应该基于过程而不是结果。Therefore, the given advice isthat an appropriate amount of praise should be given based on process rather than the result Step 4衔接过渡斐然成篇praiseExperts warn about two extremes when it comes to parentsfor their children . On the one hand, too much praise might

11、 lead tochildrens lack of enthusiasm to explore new thingsr theyre afraidthey won ' t meet parents ' expectOroiblse other hand,insufficient praise might let children consider efforts pointless.Therefore, parents should praise children based on the process ratherthan the result.,前得再借鉴1读下面短文，根

12、据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。If you ' ve heard people say they are having“ high teaexclusive, smart hotel lobby, you can smile to yourself, knowing that “ high tea “ is seldom served to tourists with fancy lodging“ High tea “ doesn ' t refer to the'thanceganfixitves,in somethe pure-white table line

13、ns, or the luxury surroundings of a high-classsalon.It is actually the main meal of the day, served between 6:00and 7:00 p. m. Thehigh ”in the phrase comes from the timhay,-9 -meaning “late ” or “high ” in the afternoonFor a long time, the lower and middle classes could afford only onemeal per day.I

14、n order to make it through to the next day, the mainmeal would be taken after work and would consist of anything from the remnants of lunch to the very basic food staples of the time:a slice of bread, a hunk of cheese, a piece of sausage, all of which were eaten while drinking their evening tea. How

15、ever, as the country advanced, the common people got wealthier, and evening meals began to be supplemented with heavier foods like roast beef, fish, eggs, vegetables, and potatoes.Sometimes referred to as a“ meat tea ” , or athe ternham tea ” ,“ high tea ” has been replaced with the modern equivalen

16、t of dinnerIn contrast, “low tea or, “afternoon tea ” is served earlier in the afternoon, usually between 4:00 and 5:00 Originally started by Anna, the Duchess of Bedford, the tradition began when Anna needed a little sustenance to tide her over.Tidbits were served with tea, and Anna invited friends

17、 to share conversation over these small snacks before the affair of the evening meal.In reality, people who have beautiful"teas ” with fancy pastries andcakes nowadays, are partaking of the“low tea " or “light tea ” thatso many years ago in Anna .' s timeWhile the refreshments are pret

18、ty, they arelightand theemphasis of the “ afternoon tea ” is on the presentation ofrlde tea, the conversation of the guests.【参考范文】As the filling between two days by the poor historically, high tea is now the main meal, served between 6:00 and 7:00 p m.（要,4 1） Incontrast, afternoon tea was once serve

19、d by Anna, the Duchess of Bedford, before the big meal to her guests with snacks （要点 2 ） Gradually, with t he improvement of people ' s living stanoffinner grew out of high tea, and people are focusing on conversation over afternoon tea.（要）4 3）2阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。The U. S.Fish and Wildlif

20、e Service（ FWS） has issued a majorupdate to the nation s policy on elephant ivory. The measure bans almost all ivory sales and trade in the US It was already 川egal to import elephant ivory from other countries . The new restrictions cover ivory that has already been imported.Officials hope the move

21、will help stop poaching of elephants African elephants are a threatened species, in large part because of 川egal hunting. Conservation groups estimate that between 30, 000 and 50, 000 wild elephants have been killed by poachers each year since 2008The main reason why poachers target elephants is for

22、their ivory,which is very valuableThe U S.is the second-largest market forivory, behind China Anti-poaching groups say the new ban makes an important statement.The new ivory ban includes very few exceptions Some antiques and objects that contain a relatively small amount of ivory, can still be bough

23、t and sold. The new restrictions replace a complex set of rules that made it both difficult to know what ivory was legal to sell and easy to cheat the system.For example, it was legal to trade ivory objects thathad been made before elephants became endangered Unfortunately, some ivory dealers got ar

24、ound this rule by deliberately making new items appear older. These and other strategies meant it was relatively easy to sell illegal ivory in the U. S.The FWS' s new restrictions close such 100PholesConservationists agree that one of the most important ways to protect elephant populations is to

25、 give poachers fewer ways of making money from their kills. The less demand for ivory there is, the less appealing it will be to poach elephantsSome people are worried that the new ban will turn people who currently own antique items containing ivory, like musical instruments and trinkets, into lawb

26、reakers. Conservationists applaud the restrictions, however.The U. S is also hoping other nations willfollow in its footsteps with more restrictive ivory rules . As it becomes more challenging to sell ivory products, the hope is that poaching will slow and elephant populations will grow.【参考范文】Ivory

27、products benefit dealers so much that poachers spare no effort to kill elephants without mercy, leaving them dying out.（要）4 1） To protect the endangered species, FWS bans any ivory sales and trade, including those imported long ago.（要）与、2）Though there are concerns from some, conservationists stand b

28、y the ban strongly （要,4 3） Also, America is expecting other nations to follow suit to make the elephants multiply quickly.（要点 4）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Hunger is a result of poverty, but it also causes poverty In many countries women, although they do much of the fanning, lack access to training,

29、credit or land. Conflict, poor or corrupt management of natural resources, displacement of small farmers by natural disasters, and financial and economic crises that eliminate jobs at the lowest levels, all contribute to creating conditions that push the poorest into hunger.To break this vicious cyc

30、le, the United States launched, in 2010, Feed the Future Initiative, which aims to reduce global hunger, poverty, and undernutrition by focusing on smallholders, increasing investments in agriculture and supporting country-owned plans forimproving food security and nutrition while generating opportu

31、nities for economic growth and trade.Back then, the U. S government selected 19 countries in Africa,Asia and Latin America to participate in the initiative, based on 5 criteria.Since 2010, Feed the Future has helped 9 million people living in the participating countries, pull themselves out of pover

32、ty.The passage of the U S.Global Food Security Act of 2016endorsed Feed the Future ' s approach and ushered in a new era of the US government global food security investment. A new, corresponding global food security strategy developed by the U S government is guiding Feed the Future' s work as the initiative into itssecond phaseOn August 31st, USAID Administrator Mark Green announced thatBangladesh, Ethiopia, Ghana, Guatemala, Honduras, Kenya, Mali, Nepal, Niger, Nigeria, Senegal, and Uganda were s