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1、 On the day back to school, dark clouds hung low in the sky. The rain poured down, with cold drops and angry winds slapping (拍;掴) my face. I was drowned in floods of warm tears and freezing rain.1.渲染了忧伤的气氛.2.揭示了故事发生的背景.3.立体感和真实感I can well remember that there was a time when a deep blue sky, the song

2、 of the birds, moonlight and flowers could never have kept me spellbound.(M1U1)写作思路写作思路一一：第一步第一步，先尝试概括性描述（，先尝试概括性描述（总体描述总体描述）。）。第二步第二步，在概括描述的基础上增加，在概括描述的基础上增加细节描细节描述述，注意逻辑关系及语意的合理。，注意逻辑关系及语意的合理。外面刮起了大风，吹的树枝乱摆，地上的灰尘乱飞，让人睁不开眼睛。Outside, there was a _wind, and the branches were blowing in_. The dust on

3、the ground was flying in disorder, _made people unable to open their eyes.strongdisorderwhich 这个冬季，天气异常寒冷。此刻没有风，世界好像停止在这一刻，河流也停下了脚步。This winter, the weather is _cold.There is no wind _this moment,the world seems to have stopped, the river has stopped its_.unusually atfootsteps The dark rainy evening

4、, the wind, the thundering clouds held me entirely in their power.(M1U1)写作思路写作思路二二：第一步第一步，先尝试，先尝试细节细节描述。描述。第二步第二步，总体总体描述描述。 2017.11 浙江高考真题应用Para 2 ._ The wind was _ dreadfully and the rain was_from the heaven, _ against the branches of lined trees.The world was_ with a sea of darkness. howlingpourin

5、gwhippingburdened/loadedThe wind was howling dreadfully and the rain was pouring from the heaven, whipping against the branches of lined tress. The world was burdened with a sea of drakness. A：I was seized with the roaring power of nature. a sense of horror creeping up on meB：A flood of fear washing

6、 over me, I immediately turned around to slide into the bed and curled up. The sun looked at her with a glowing smile and the flowers nodded merrily towards her. The breeze patted her on the face, warm and comfortable.Everything was the same, only his father being away forever. 怎样将一丝忧伤融入大自然的景色？ The _(甜蜜的)fragrance of flowers, the faint _(嗡嗡声)of insects as well as the gentle touch of the _(微风)brought back memories of the bygone days sha