2021年1月八省联考高考英语读后续写真题解析(原文分析+范文赏析)课件

1、目录The Given TextSampleConceptionComprehensionAccumulation2021年1月八省联考高考英语读后续写真题解析The Given Text01Car RepairingDuring this past year, Ive had three instances of car trouble. Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadnt bothered to help. One of those times, I was on the side

2、 of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windows, big signs that said NEED A JACK（千斤顶）, and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out.He sized up the situation and called for hi

3、s daughter, who spoke English. He conveyed through her that he had a jack but that it was too small for the Jeep, so we would need something to support it. Then he got a saw（锯子）from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and w

4、e were in business.I started taking the wheel off, and then, if you can believe it, I broke his tire iron. No worries: He handed it to his wife, and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the job, and I was a very happy man.The two of us

5、 were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pot of water for us to wash our hands. I tried to put a $20 bill in the mans hand, but he wouldnt take it, so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexico, she said. They wer

6、e in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could work on a fruit farm for the next few weeks. Then they would go home.Paragraph 1: When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if Id had lunch.Paragraph 2: After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.Comprehension02Key Elements From the Given

7、Text (1)major characters personalitiesappearances relationship Imother and daughtercynicalenthusiastic; helpfuldirty and sweatyhelp-receiverhelperenthusiastic; consideratefatherdirty and sweatyhelperno descriptionKey Elements From the Given Text (2)timeplacefinal given timefinal given placeDuring th

8、is past year.One of those times.on the side of the roadno descriptionpossibly beside the truckupset and disappointedI was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep but no one came to help.delighted and hopefulA Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and came to help me.

9、happy and gratefulWe finished repairing my Jeep and I tried to give $20 to the family.relative emotions with the development of the storyline(1) Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadnt bothered to help.I believed that people were indifferent and felt cynical. (2) One

10、 of those times, I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep.(3) I tried to put a $20 bill in the mans hand, but he wouldnt take it, so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could.Id been waiting for a long time so I was hungry and tired.T

11、he man didnt want to accept the reward.More Hidden InformationConception031234Para 1Para 2PLOTEMOTION二条四点Paragraph 1: When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if Id had lunch. Iemotionplotawkwardmovedrefuse the girls kindness have lunch with the familysay goodbye to the familyParagraph 2: Aft

12、er they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. Isurprisedthankfulemotionplotfind more food in the bagfind a $20 billreexamine my cynical view before1. What would I do next? I refused the girls lunch. I accepted the girls kindness with pleasure.2. What happened before they left? The girl

13、gave me a paper bag. We had an enjoyable meal.Paragraph 1: When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if Id had lunch. Paragraph 2: After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.Initiate the framework according to the final given plot and the two initial given sentences with the

14、4 connected sentences.3. What might happen after I opened the paper bag? I found a note in the bag. I found a $20 bill in the bag.Paragraph 2: After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.4. What might be the ending of this story? I felt grateful to the family for their kindness. I d

15、ecided to help others in the future. I would remember the family forever. I would pay more attention to foreigners.Initiate the framework according to the final given plot and the two initial given sentences with the 4 connected sentences.The possible lessons or conclusionsFrom this experience, we l

16、earned that.Who helps others can get the help of others.The roses in her hand, the flavor in mine.There is one thing alone that stands the brunt of life throughout its course: a kind heart. Sample04Paragraph 1: When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if Id had lunch. My gut feeling was to re

17、fuse. But my stomach was growling since I hadnt eaten for more than four hours. Seeing my embarrassment, the girl just pressed some bread into my hands and changed the subject to talk about my car. After the seemingly simple meal which pulled us closer together, the family was ready to leave. When t

18、he father started his truck, the little angel handed me a paper bag, then waved goodbye to me. I stood and watched the truck until it vanished around a turn. Read one possible version and make sure you know how the plot develops.动作动作动作动作动作指代拟人Read one possible version and make sure you know how the

19、plot develops.Paragraph 2: After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. The fruit inside didnt look perfect, but the tantalizing aroma filled the air. Picking one up to take a big bite, I found a $20 bill in the bag. Recalling their sincere eyes and smiles while chewing the juicy fr

20、uit, I felt the warmth flowing into my heart. Certainly, Ive encountered many indifferent people and Ive experienced some helpless moments, but I still put my trust in this beautiful world. Because I finally realized one thing that stands the brunt of life throughout its course: a kind heart. (176 w

21、ords)动作神态出彩结尾Accumulation05Useful Expressionsgut adj. 本能的 based on feelings and emotions rather than thought and reasongrowl v. 低声吼叫，咆哮 to say sth. in a low angry voiceseemingly adv. 看似；貌似；表面上 in a way that appears to be true but may in fact not bevanish v. 突然消失 to disappear suddenly and/or in a way

22、 that you cannot explaintantalize v. 逗引，招惹 to make a person or an animal want sth. that they cannot have or doaroma n. 芳香；香味 a pleasant, noticeable smellsincere adj. 真诚的；诚挚的 showing what you really think or feelindifferent adj. 漠不关心 having or showing no interest in sb./sth.stand the brunt of sth. 首当

23、其冲1. My stomach was _ (growl) since I hadnt eaten for more than four hours. 2. After the _ (seem) simple meal which pulled us closer together, the family was ready to leave. 3. I stood and watched the truck until it _ (vanish) around a turn. 4. The fruit inside didnt look perfect, but the _ (tantalize) aroma filled the air.growlingvanishedseeminglytantalizin