四级漫画作文写作方法课件

1、漫画作文写作在2012年6月六级（CET-6考试）中，就考查了互联网对人际交流的影响这样一篇漫画作文题目。考题贴近日常生活化 英语实用性须重视 . 自“多题多卷”改革以来，继四六级听力不断向日常生活化靠拢后。从今年的考题可以看出，作文也像日常生活化靠拢。考查方式的改变，实际上是引导考生们在平时复习过程中，一是更加重视能力的日积月累；二是引导英语学习的实用性。对于作文这一块，无论考何种形式作文，最简易的处理方式是：有汉语提纲则按照汉语提纲写相应的功能段落，若无汉语提纲则按照话题和内容要求直接写相应的功能表达或自己列出基本提纲再写相应功能表达！图表和图画、书信亦可如此！图画、话语评论和图表作文可按

2、照相同模式来处理：首段引出话语，图画和图表，并对其内容描述评论；二段写对应现象、意义或危害，尾段写看法和建议并展望！2013.122013.12Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture above. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in peoples life and then explain

3、 the consequence of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.2013.12Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture above. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone

4、in peoples life and then explain the consequence of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.分析:传统的作文归类方式，如观点对比、问题解决或按图画、图表或名言警句类划分的方式正逐渐退出历史舞台。相反，按照题目要求写相应的“功能段落”和表达是答题的永恒方式，永远不会因为出题方式的改变而失效。本篇作文体裁明确，话题清晰，内容要求具体，即：简要解释手机的过度使用并分析其可能产生的后果。可以看出，题目明确要求写的“现象”、“危害”，此外可

5、写的是“建议”。第一段写作方法1. Given is satirical but thought-provoking cartoon: a host of people are crossing the street; to our great shock, they focus all their eyesight on cell phones rather than the road, and in order to see, they rely on their walking sticks.2. As the drawing presents, there is a man walki

6、ng across the street absorbedly focusing on his cell phone without noticing the surroundings. This sort of phenomenon is not uncommon and rare in some cities, especially among the youngsters.第一段写作方法3. From the cartoon given above, we can observe that there are many people crossing the street. Instea

7、d of looking at the way, they are staring at their cell phones and using walking sticks to see. It is obvious that they are fascinated with cell phones while even ignore their security.4. The thought-provoking drawing mirrors a common phenomenon in contemporary society that there is the negative inf

8、luence of mobile phone. As is subtly shown in the picture，so many people are too much addicted to cell phones that they use walking sticks to see the road. What a meaningful cartoon!第一段写作常用句式1. From the cartoon given above, we can observe that2. The thought-provoking drawing mirrors a common phenome

9、non in contemporary society that 3. As is subtly shown in the picture4. As the drawing presents5. This sort of phenomenon is not uncommon 6. . Given is satirical but thought-provoking cartoon: Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. Yo

10、u should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.“Dear Andy, -How are you? Your mother and I ar

11、e fine. We both miss you and hope you are doing well. We look forward to seeing you again the next time your computer crashes and you come down-stairs for something to eat. -Love, Mom and Dad.分析:显然，首先的第一项要求写的内容是“网络对于人际交流的影响”，却非图画描述。之后，提出一个问题“电子交流是否会替代面对面交流”，考生需要自己给出观点。This simple but thought-provoki

12、ng cartoon can be naturally associated with the impacts of Internet on interpersonal communication: Internet shortens distance in communication, but it leads interpersonal relationship to be indifferent.The modern technology has greatly altered the mode of communication among people. With the help o

13、f the Internet, people can easily contact each other anytime anywhere. However, the side effect is that many people have become over-dependent on the Internet and neglected face-to-face communication.2013.12Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the pic

14、ture above. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in peoples life and then explain the consequence of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.第二段写作方法(写后果)1. We learn from the cartoon that cell phones have been

15、increasingly widespread in peoples life（现象描述，呈上）. Cell phones are of great benefit to all of us. One of the most obvious advantages is that we can contact with our friends and relatives more conveniently than ever before. （好处）However, it is mobile-phones advantages that lead some people to overuse o

16、r be addicted to them（自然过渡到不好的影响）, which tends to exert a negative impact on our life. For example, overusing cell phones will reduce face-to-face communication among people（具体说明不好的影响是什么）. 第二段写作方法（写后果）2. It is to me that indulging in mobile phones produces negative influences on body and mind(开门见山提出

17、总括句). First and foremost, overusing mobile phones is detrimental to physical health for watching mobiles for a long stretch definitely impairs ones eyesight. （第一）Suppose that a man is addicted in cell phones in whatever situation, it will be very disadvantageous for him to concentrate on his work, l

18、earning, or daily life（第二）. Furthermore, overusing cell phones adversely affects state of mind. An addict may stay inside his bubble instead of pursuing other endeavors, which eventually prevents the growth of think skills.（第三）第二段写作方法（写后果）3. What the picture illustrates is the prevailing situation t

19、hat has long existed in todays China（呈上）. That is the mobile phone obsession. With the advent of information age, people are becoming increasingly fascinated on the electronic products, especially the cell phones（现象阐述）. Not surprisingly, you could easily notice that most of us are obsessed in sendin

20、g messages, playing online games with their mobile phones（进一步阐述现象）. It cannot be denied that this phenomenon may negatively impact the relationship among people, and therefore they will become estranged and isolated（负面影响）.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay b

21、ased on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.“Dear Andy, -How

22、are you? Your mother and I are fine. We both miss you and hope you are doing well. We look forward to seeing you again the next time your computer crashes and you come down-stairs for something to eat. -Love, Mom and Dad.分析:显然，首先的第一项要求写的内容是“网络对于人际交流的影响”，却非图画描述。之后，提出一个问题“电子交流是否会替代面对面交流”，考生需要自己给出观点。Th

23、is simple but thought-provoking cartoon can be naturally associated with the impacts of Internet on interpersonal communication: Internet shortens distance in communication, but it leads interpersonal relationship to be indifferent.From my perspective, the electronic contact can/cannot replace face

24、to face communication owing to the following factors. .As far as Im concerned, electronic communication cannot fully replace the direct contact among people. From my perspective, the electronic contact cannot replace face to face communication owing to the following factors. To begin with, over-reli

25、ance on electronic contact will damage the interpersonal relationship, for the cold machine never replaces a warm-hearted greeting face to face（个人关系）. For example, the aged parents would like their only son who works far away home to come back home more often rather than to talk with him on the inte

26、rnet occasionally（例证）. Whats more, face to face communication is preferable because it is beneficial to build a harmonious society（社会层面）, for it attaches more importance on human affection and feelings instead of convenience and speed.2013.12Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to w

27、rite a short essay based on the picture above. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in peoples life and then explain the consequence of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.2013.12第一段：现象描述。第二段：过度使用手机的后果。第三段

28、：个人看法，建议或危害。Judging from the evidence above, certain measures should be taken（建议）. Firstly, certain institutions in China should launch relevant campaigns to limit the excessive us of cell-phones（社会层面）. Moreover, we ,as college students, should put emphasis on it right from ourselves as a start（个人方面

29、）.建议控制手机的使用。2013.12第一段：现象描述。第二段：过度使用手机的后果。第三段：个人看法，建议或危害。Personally, in view of the overuse of mobile phones, I hold that we individuals should raise the necessary awareness that good relationship are reinforced by sincere and face-to-face communication.强调面对面交流的重要性。注：face-to-face communication. comm

30、unicate face to face.2013.12第一段：现象描述。第二段：过度使用手机的后果。第三段：个人看法，建议或危害。It is high time that we took effective measures to curb/control this trend. I cherish a belief that cell phones themselves are not good or bad and we can benefit a lot from it as long as we take a good control over them. 态度中庸， 强调一定条件下

31、手机的作用。Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face conta

32、ct. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.第三段写作建议：建议控制网络的使用。 强调亲情的重要性，建议面对面交流。强调网络的有效性的同时，建议适当使用，可作为面对面交流的补充。Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impac

33、t of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.第三段写作建议：建议控制网络的使用。 强调亲情的重要性，建议面对面交流。强调网络的有效性的同时，建议适当使用 。Hence, it is necessary for us to use Internet in

34、a reasonable way. After all, Internet is invented to bring conveniences to our life rather than set a barrier to keep people beyond reach（以网络的作用作为前提条件，以便提出建议）. If we want to keep our interpersonal relationship more effectively, we should spend more time with them face to face in real life（建议）. Only

35、in this way can we not only make full use of the communication tool（替换e-mail,避免重复） on the net but also make our relationship tighter. （进一步强调建议。） Technology development enables us to communication with parents and friend in a brand new and fast way（承认电子交流方式的作用）, but it is face-to face contact that de

36、epens the feelings and emotions between people（同时强调直接交流的好处）. 下面提供英语四级写作中常用词的替换词，让你的作文不再平庸。在考前这几天中每天上午看一遍、下午背一遍，晚上再默写一遍，确保熟记于心。大多数人 most people 2) 经常 often 3) 我相信 I believe 4) 必须 must5) 知道 know 6) 因为 because 7) 最后 at last 8) 然而 but 9) 如果 ifthe majority of the populationfrequentlyfrom my standpointIt

37、is a must for us tobe aware ofin thateventuallyhoweverProvided that10,各行各业的人 all kinds of people 11) 引起，导致 lead to 12) 人 people 13) 好的 good 14) 怀的 bad 15) 很多many 16) 越来越 more and more 17) 很 very 18) 方面 side 19) 表明 showPeople from all walks of lifeContribute toindividualsBeneficial, desirableundesira

38、blenumerousan increasing number ofextremelyaspectsDemonstrate, indicate20) 利用 use 21) 因此/结果 so 22) 部分 part 23) 提高 improve 24) 改变 change 25) 强调/重视 emphasize 26) 培养 develop 27) 解决 deal with utilizeThereforeproportionenhanceTransform, alterattach great importance toCultivateTackle, figure out28.普遍的 eve

39、rywhere 30) 明显的 obvious 31) 在当今社会 in the modern society 32) 使 makeuniversalapparentIn the current societyenableSave our environment (model test 1) From the picture, we can see a man standing on an empty ground, with nobody around and no trees and birds in sight.(描述周边环境) He was carrying an oxygen gen

40、erator, without which he could hardly breathe（描述，并解释原因） , as the dark clouds floating in the air are a sure sign of extremely serious environment pollution.（由图表描述引出中心话题）A decade ago, most of us took it for granted that we would forever be blessed by nature(以退为进，用来对比). However, we have come to realiz

41、e that Chinas economic success has taken an unbearable toll on the environment as we are facing grave challenge of environmental protection（解释污染的原因）. In the recent years, many chemical factories discharged poisonous gas without filtering it, cities were covered with so much poisonous gas that people were killed by the air they breathed in（举例说明）. If we co