中考英语复习 备考：2022年上海中考英语作文的全面解析

1、中考英语复习备考：2022年上海中考英语作文的全面解析最新中考英语作文解读VIL Writing （作文）（本大题共1题,共20分）84. Write least 60 words according to the given situation （根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格）你校将增设一间学生活动室（student activity room）,现有以下六种关于活动室用途的设想;读者之家依eadMg corner）劳校工坊（Mini workshop） 艺体大地例小and sports centre） 义卖集市（Chaffy market） 科创，卜屋（Hig

2、hach lab） 心灵驿站room） 学校正通过校报了解学生的意向。假设你是李华，请给校报张老师写封邮件，说明你 奉:喜欢的一种设想，并说明理由。 （注意：I.邺件中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否那么不予评令。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分.） 命题特点：1基本与2021年的体裁和形式一致：应用文+议论文相结合，培养思辨能力的同时，更强调英语的实际书面沟通需求。2题目比2021年的要相对简单，即说明理由。从某程度上来说其实就是兴趣爱好类文章的变形。3人称和时态的要求，需要同学注意。写前三定；1确定题材2评分标准（内容）：（1）邮件的格式1分说明最喜欢的一种设想1分说明理由5分（2-3个论点并加以适

3、当展开）有结尾1分3确定人称和时态中考英语作文的评分标准01内容评分内容7-8分主题鲜明；内容切题、充实；意思清楚、完整。5-6分主题较为明确；内容基本切题，较为充实；意思基本清楚.但不够完整。34分主题不够明确；内容不够切题，大致充实；意思不够清楚、离题目要求较远。02分主题不明确；文不对题；内容薄弱；意思不清。02语言评分语 言拼写每错扣0.5分，同一错误不重复计数。语法同上。标点符号.大小写每两处错误扣0. 5分，但标点符号和大小写的扣分总和均不得超过1分。总体1语言分最多扣8分。总体2如文章整体用语丰富地道，偶见不影响理解的表达瑕疵，可不扣语言分03篇章&文采评分篇 章 & 文 采 结

4、 构4分上下文流畅.逻辑关系清晰，熟练运用关联词；话题有创意，表达有思想性，能够基于主题展开拓展或提升； 用语丰富地道，句型句式多样并且运用恰当。3分上下文比拟通顺，适当运用一些关联词； 话题有一定的独到之处，能够将事件建立联系； 用语规范，句型句式富于变化。2分上下文基本连贯，能够运用关联词；用语准确，句型句式有一定变化或能运用一些习惯表达。1分思维连续不跳跃，无或少些废话；句型句式有变化，无或少见中文式表达。0分通篇句型、句式单一,词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，一般也不给组织结构分评分档次档次内容语言篇章&文采A ( 18-20)7-87-83-4B (15-17)6-86-81-2C (1

5、2-15)4-74-71D (12-8)4-64-60E （8分以下）0-30-30A类作文赏析1 Heart-to-heart roomDear Mr.ZhangIt is said that our school will add a student activity room.In my opinion , Heart-to-heart room is the best choice.Here are several reasons which can account for my opinion as below.First z There will inevitably be gre

6、at pressure in learning as students. We need a space to release it. Heart-to-heart room is a good choice.Next, students can exchange thoughts with each other and effectively make their mood happierTinally, we can also communicate with teachers there and receive psychological counseling, which is ben

7、eficial to the development of our mental and physical health.In one word, noting is more important than adjusting psychological emotions in time. I hope we can meet together in the Heart to heart room soon.SincerelyLi Hua2 Arts and sports CentreDear Mr. Zhang,I read the school newspaper and our scho

8、ol will add a new student activity room. From the point of my view, my favorite one i s the Arts and sports Centre. There are several reasons which can account for my opinion as be 1ow.First, at school, students have to finish a lot of classes and homework to do every day. As an old going says, all

9、work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Arts and sports Centre i s the perfect place for students to relax themselves. Second, it i s necessary for students to cult i vat e some interests i n the arts and sports, which can enrich the school life of us. Last but not least, sports and arts can make ou

10、r body stronger and healthier.In one word, nothing i s more important than balancing work and lei sure. Let s join in the the Arts and sports centre without hesitation.Yours sincerelyLi HuaCharity MarketDear Miss Zhang,I ve heard that our school i s doing a survey about what kind of new student acti

11、vity room we can create. I prefer the Charity market best. There are several reasons account for my opinion as be 1ow.Firstly, an advantage of creating a Charity market i s that we can raise money for the chi Idren in poor areas which can help us understand the importance of kindness. In addition, t

12、he students can learn about how to trade and sell their goods which can also cultivate their financial intel 1 igence. Last but not least, i t can also sell items to those who need them most, which could be more environmental friendly.As far as I am concerned, Charity market i s of great valuable fo

13、r us to create. Only in this way will we be able to a more colorful school life .Sincerely,Li HuaReading CornerDear Miss Zhang:With the setting of our student activity room, I have some ideas about my favorite type of the student activity room to tell you.In my opinioru what attracts me most is Read

14、ing Corner with some advantages as below.First of all, Reading Corner enables students to read more and different kinds of books.As the old saying goes, reading a good book is just like making a friend. Moreover, the habit and the interest of reading can be get into by reading in the Reading Corner,

15、 which can help students improve their reading skills and widen their horizons. Last but not least, Reading Corner gives students a good place to get relaxed, or just have a small rest.In brief, Reading Corner will be of great benefits to students. Only in this way we set Reading Corner will we be able