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1、 02 书面表达概要写作60 词左右的内容概要。【命题趋势】提供一篇 350 以内的短文,要求考生基于该短文写出一篇考查要求:对原文要点的理解和呈现情况;应用语法结构和词汇的准确性;上下文的连贯性;对各要点表达的独立性情况。【满分技巧】如何确保要点齐全?【诀窍】划分段落【不以自然段为单位】段落数=要点数说明文的段落划分 TOC o 1-5 h z . 描述某事物的性质功用等:性质/定义功用/功能应用 / 利好.针对某问题提出解决办法或措施:问题成因解决方法/ 措施.介绍某现象及其原因结果:现象原因结果议论文的段落划分三要素:论点、论据和结论:论点一论据1论据n结论记叙文的段落划分人物、情节(w
2、ho did what) 、时间、地点:夹叙夹议者:+观点/ 哲理性推论:情节1一情节2情节n一启示【热点话题】社会热点;学生生活;暑期活动【限时检测】 (建议用时: 30 分钟)A(2019年浙江省高考真题)话题:父母鼓励孩子的方式难度:建议用时:5分第二节读后续写(满分25分)67.阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Parents everywhere praise their kids. Jenn Berman, author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and ConfidentKids, says,“ Wd ve gon
3、e to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict.giving kids a lot of praise, parents think they re building their children s confidence, when, in facopposite. Too much praise can backfire and, when given in a way that s insincere, make kids afraid to try ior take
4、 a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their pare nts praise has put them.Still, don t go too far in the other direction. Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much.Kids will feel like they re not good enough or that you don t care and, as a result, mayaseeo
5、n o point in tryitheir accomplishments.So what is the right amount of praise? Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity.If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as often as your child does somethingthat deserves a verbal reward.
6、 We should especially recognize our children s efforts to push themsehard to achieve a goal, says DonahuePaurthnthngf Without Fear: Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters . Otheng to remember is that it s the process not the end product that matters.”Your son may not be the best bas
7、ketball player on his team. But if he s out there every day and pkshould praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses. Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. But
8、whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate( 相称的)to the amount of effort your child has put into it.【写作思路】完成一篇概要写作,需要经过三个步骤,.读懂原文,抓住段落主题句。在阅读过程中,需要准确把握文章的段落大意,学会剔除非重要信息,弄 清楚不同体裁的文章的内部逻辑关系以及文章的篇章结构。.组织语言,转换表达。在找到主题句明确全文中心的基础上,组织好语言,注重语言表达的独立性和准 确性以及高级性,不全盘照抄原文句
9、子,尽量用自己的语言转换表达,同时要注意篇幅的比例安排,用较 多的文字去表达重要的内容。.通读全文,逻辑连贯。要牢记各段落要点之间的逻辑关系和自然衔接,用恰当的关联词去连贯全文。【参考范文】Parents tend to go to extremes when it comes to praising their kids.(要点)Yet, both too much and too little praise can be equally damaging.(要点二)When giving praise, parents should be sincere and concentrate o
10、n the process instead of the result.(要1点三)Similarly, they ought to give praise for how much effort their kids have invested in the work they re involved0n.)(【名师点评】本次浙江高考书面表达采用了概要写作题型。概要写作是阅读理解和书面表达的沟通桥梁,考查的是 学生在实现自由的思维表达之前,对他人的信息在理解的基础上进行概括表达的能力。选材上,提供一篇 350词以内的短文,题材不限,要求考生写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。B(2020届江苏南京
11、师大苏州实验学校高三上第一次模拟考)话题:机器人难度:建议用时:5分请认真阅读下面的短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Robots will create double the number of jobs that they will destroy, according to the World Economic Forum(WEF), but there will be significant shifts in the structure of America s workforce that may im|The report says that 75 million
12、jobs will be replaced by artificial intelligence(AI), robotics and automation. But it also suggests that 133 million new jobs may be created as organizations shift the balance between human workers and machines.It is a widely held belief that routine, low- skilled jobs are most at risk for automatio
13、n, but the report shows that many middle- class roles are also at risk. Financial analysts, accountants and lawyers could all see significant changes by 2022. But manual workers could be among the hardest hit.Meanwhile, there could be a huge change in the structure of the workforce, with the executi
14、ves surveyed by WEF expecting a shift away from full- time work to flexible employment with a focus on productivity.All industries expect big skills gaps, stating that at least 50 percent of their workforce will require reskilling of some degree. The aviation, travel and tourism industry will have t
15、he largest demand for reskilling.【写作内容】.用约30个单词概述短文的主要内容;.用约120个单词发表你的观点,内容包括:(1)这一现象产生的原因有哪些(不少于两点);(2)面对即将到来的 智能时代”你所做的准备。【写作要求】.阐述观点或提供论据时,不能直接引用原文语句;.作文中不能出现真实女4名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。【参考范文】【概要】Robots are replacing human beings but are also creating twice as many jobs as they have destroyed, bringing ab
16、out great changes in the structure of workforce and requirements for reskilling.【论述】Behind the phenomenon are various reasons. For one thing, great advances in science and technology make it possible for robots to be widely employed in many fields. For another, productivity has been greatly increase
17、d by using robots, which in turn helps promote the popularity of robots. Meanwhile, the widespread application of robots has generated great changes in the way people work as well as their choices of jobs.Feeling lucky to live in the intelligent age, I like to e qudp myself with relevant knowledge a
18、nd enjoy the convenience it brings us. Besides, I will try to cultivate creative thinking and the sense of innovation so as to meet the urgent needs of the fast development of science and technology.C(2020届新素养大二轮专题浙京津鲁琼版模拟卷1)话题:手机摄影大赛+收集难度:建议用时:5分第一节 应用文写作(满分15分)假如你是李华,获悉中国日报(China Daily )将举办 厉害了,我的
19、国(Amazing China汗机摄影大赛。请写封邮件建议你的美国留学生朋友George参加,邮件内容包括:.作品要求:展示风土人情,附上作品名称;.投稿方式与截止时间:12月30日前发邮件至 ac ;.表示愿意提供帮助。注意:1.词数80左右;.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;.开头及结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。Dear George,How is everything going ? Yours, Li Hua第二节阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。While it takes time , energy and money that could surely be p
20、ut to a much more productive use , there are millions of collectors around the world. People collect postcards, chocolate wrappers or whatever they like.Collecting must be one of the most varied human activities, and it one that many psychologists find fascinating.Many forms of collecting have been
21、dignified with a technical name: an arctophilist collects teddy bears, a philatelist collects postage stamps and a deltiologist collects postcards.There are people who collect something because they want to make money, and this could be called an instrumental reason for collecting , that is, collect
22、ing as a means to an end.They will look for , say, antiques(古董) that they can buy cheaply and expect to be able to sell at a profit.But there may well be a psychological factor too : buying cheap and selling dear can keep the collector a sense of achievement.And as selling online is so easy , more p
23、eople are joining in.If you think about collecting postage stamps, another potential reason for it is its educational value.Stamp collecting opens a window to other countries and to the plants , animals or famous people shown on the stamps. Similarly , in the nineteenth century many collectors amass
24、ed(积累)animals and plants from around the globe and their collections provide a vast amount of information about the natural world.Without those collections, our understanding would be greatly inferior to what it is.Not all collectors are interested in learning from their hobby , though, so what we m
25、ight call a psychological reason for collecting is the need for a sense of control and a sense of fulfillment , perhaps as a way of dealing with insecurity. Stamp collectors , for instance, arrange their stamp albums, usually very neatly, organizing their collections according to certain commonplace
26、 principles perhaps by country in alphabetic order or grouping stamps by what they describe people, birds, maps and so on.【应用文范文】Dear George,How is everything going? I have some exciting news for you that China Daily will hold a mobile photo contest named “Amazing China ” . I know you have a great l
27、ove for photography, so why not give it a try?The contest welcomes submissions about natural scenery, attractive figures or local customs of China. It will be better if each photo is accompanied with a title. You d better send your photos to acchinadaily . and the deadline for entries will be Dec.30
28、th.I believe it is a great opportunity to share your precious experiences with us.If you are interested, I m more than happy to be your helper and offer my advice. I am looking forward to seeing your great works.Yours, Li Hua【概要范文】Collecting wins the hearts of many people despite the time , effort a
29、nd money they have to invest.To make a fortune is one of the reasons accounting for the habit of collecting , where a sense of accomplishment is also granted.Its academic merits are also obvious because people may have a better comprehension of the world with the information their collections provid
30、e.Actually , people sometimes just enjoy the feeling of domination and collecting serves as a hobby to resist insecurity.D(2020届江苏专用增分冲刺卷1)话题:快餐连锁难度:建议用时:5分请认真阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。As global fast-food chains and coffee shops begin phasing out(逐步淘汰)single-use plastic straws, McDonald s China in
31、troduced a “ strawless) for cdld(beverages at 10 Beijing restaurants on Nov.1,2018.Like many consumers , Wu Yanmei, a bank clerk in Beijing , had never thought about the impact a simple straw could have on the environment.Addiany t like using straws but the cups at fast-food restaurants are alldesig
32、ned for use with a straw , she said. I don strawsiare necessary, so the moves are a good way to raise people s awareness of not using singlee plastic products. ”However, Jiang Jianguo, a professor of environmental studies at Tsinghua University , said he doubts such activities alone can have a major
33、 effect on the global pollution problem.I don t think the move by McDonaldbe a success because previously there were lots of hotels calling for a ban on single-use plastics , but it ended in nothing because businesses compete by trying to make things convenient for consumers , “ he said.写作内容:.用约30个单
34、词概括上述材料的主要内容;.用约120词谈谈你对快餐连锁店逐步弃用塑料吸管”的看法,并用23个理由或论据支撑你的看法。写作要求:1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;.不必写标题。【背诵范文】【概要】 Fast-food chains like McDonald s have taken action to stop using plastic straws gradually to be environmentally friendly , but as to whether such a move can have effects on improving
35、 the environment , people hold different opinions.【论述】 Though plastic straws can afford people great convenience , I think phasing them out in fast-foodchains is advisable.First , plastics are a major source of pollution because they re difficult to degrade.Therefphasing them out is greatly benefici
36、al to the environment , such as reminding people of the urgency to protect the environment.Moreover , without straws , consumers can still have their drinks.So why must we equip each drink with a straw ? Why don t we save such resources for other usesMaybe, somewhere, the plastics saved can make a b
37、ig difference to the society.As a senior three student, I hope all the Chinese people will take an active part in the campaign against using plastic straws , which is of great benefit for our living environment.E(2020届浙江省绿色评估联盟高三10月试题)话题:英语竞赛+高科技对学生的影响难度:建议用时:5分第一节应用文写作假定你是李华,报名参加了全国中学生英语能力竞赛(NEPCS)
38、赛前,为更好地提高写作能力,请给外教Michael写封邮件,请他帮忙修改一篇作文并提出建议。一、/ 注息:.词数80左右;.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。第二节 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Nowadays, more and more college students have no problem walking into a classroom and opening their laptops. Others may spend an entire study period with a smartphone in hand. Some people argue
39、 that the increasing use of technology can have many helpful effects on society. But a recent research suggests that using technology during class time may harm college students ability to remember and process the subject material.Arnold Glass, a professor in Rutgers University in New Jersey4, and a
40、 student researcher investigated the issue of divided student attention. The study involved 118 Rutgers students who were taking the same level college class. The students were permitted to use any electronic device during half of their daily class periods. During the other half, no one was allowed
41、to use any technology.The researchers found that the average daily quiz results showed no evidence of harmful effects from the use of technology. However, the average results of the larger tests and final exam showed that all the students performed poorly when they were permitted to use technology i
42、n the classroom. Glass argues that it shows the use of electronic devices in the classroom prevents students from processing information. When the students hear what the professor is saying, they might be buying things online or reading unrelated emails at the same time. And that, Glass says, makes
43、it harder for the information to enter their long term memory. Even though the students know what the professor said at that time, they no longer remember it a week later because they missed the opportunity.However, Lauren Margulieux, an assistant professor at Georgia State University in Atlanta arg
44、ues that there are times when classroom use of technology is unavoidable. So, he says, educators need to consider that something other than technology is distracting students.In fact, a special software program has been created. Students can use the program, which engages students more with the clas
45、s material on their personal devices during a given class. It can also be used to observe student activity and prevent them from opening unrelated pages and programs.【背诵范文】第一节应用文写作Dear Michael,I have signed up for the NEPCS. In preparation for it, I think what I am in desperate need of is to improve
46、 my writing ability. Would you please do me a favor about it?I ve finished an essay, but still find it far from satisfactory. I m noonsjof oo the proper expre English words, which makes the essay lack naturalness. Besides, there may also be some mistakes in grammar and sentence pattern. So I wonder
47、if you can help me with these problems.I would appreciate it if you could give me some suggestions. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua第二节概要写作A recent research shows using technology in class may prevent college students remembering and processing information. (要点一) 118 students participated
48、in the research where they used technology during half of class periods. (要点二) The researchers found in the long run the students performances were poor when using technology because they were distracted.(要点三) But another researcher thinks something else except technology is to blame for distracting
49、 students.(要点四)Actually, a special software program has been made to keep students focused.(要点五)(76 wo、rds)F(2020届浙江省绿色评估联盟高三10月试题)话题:暑假户外活动难度:建议用时:5分请认真阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。A decade ago, summer vacation for college students was all about outdoor activities, whether they traveled with their f
50、riends or conducted fieldwork. Nowadays, while there are still students who love to go outside, the majority of students prefer to stay indoors.According to a recent survey on Chinese college students mer vacation activities by The Dynasty, almost 60 percent of the respondents say that they barely s
51、tep outside. Waking up naturally, surfing the Internet all day long and ordering some takeout food have become the new norm.The indoor trend among college students has undoubtedly raised some concern. Zhu Haoliang, an associate professor of psychology at Wenzhou University, warns that students lack
52、of outdoor activities not only affects their physical condition, but also weakens their psychological well-being.“Humansare born to be social. We gain self-esteem and self-respect through social interactions, he told China ScienceDaily . If they are spending too much time at home, students may lose
53、interest in life or even suffer from social anxiety, loneliness and depression , he added.【写作内容】.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;.用约120词阐述你对大学生暑假期间宅在家里”的看法,并用23个理由或论据支撑你的看法。 【写作要求】1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。【背诵范文】【概要】Nowadays, many college students prefer to stay indoors during their summer vac
54、ation rather than take part in outdoor activities, which according to a university associate professor, could do harm to their physical and mental health.【论述】I couldn t agree more with the professorstly, staying indoors means there will be a lack of exercise. As the saying goes, “ A sound mind is in
55、 a sound body. Thaoneto ssynind and body are closely related. If onephysical health fails, his mind will be very likely to suffer. Secondly, we human beings are creatures that interact greatly with other members in our society. With our personal development highly dependent on the overall developmen
56、t of our society, without social interactions, we ll be cut off from the outside world , fall into loneliness and even suffer from depression.Therefore, as far as I am concerned, college students should go outside rather than stay at home during their summer vacation.G(2020浙江宁波诺丁汉大学附属中学二上期中)话题:工作难度:
57、建议用时:5分阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Work is a very important part of life in the United States. When the early immigrants came to this country, they brought the idea that work was the way to God and heaven. This attitude still influences America today. Work is not only important for the salary, but also for social and psychological working, being productive. For most Americans, they are what they do. What happens, then, when a person retires at the age of sixty-five or seventy?It s easy to imagine that retirement is no easy thing. Retirees often feel they are un
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