备战2022年新高考英语读后续写真题逐步解析专练01 温暖亲情类Word版

1、备战2022年新高考英语读后续写真题逐步解析专练专题01温暖亲情类一、真题链接（2021 新全国I卷）A MOTHERJ S DAY SURPRISEThe twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother? s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and c

2、hicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a p

3、ot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff s

4、tarted frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake

5、. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeffs hand touched the hot burner a

6、nd he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右。2 ,请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.The twins carrie

7、d the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.一、真题解析整体把握:主题语境人与自我-生活与学习-家庭生活本篇读后续写为记叙文，文章大意为母亲节当天，双胞胎想要做一顿丰富的早餐语篇话题作为母亲节礼物，给母亲惊喜。故事要素when： on Mothers Day where：At home情节梳理who： The twins Jenna and Jeffwhat： The twins planned to make a delicious breakfast for their mother. On Mother? s Day, they g

8、ot up early and began to make breakfast. However, everything didnt go smoothly as they wished.通过第一段首句 “As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.可预测，续写思路为：爸爸指导-孩子重新尝试-进展顺利-成功-欣 喜假设狂。情节走向通过第二段首句 “The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.” 可预测，续写

9、思路为：孩子们呈现惊喜给妈妈-妈妈喜极而泣-孩子们献上母亲 节的祝福-母亲感动至极一家人幸福相拥。2.2逐句写作:第一段:.父亲的出现对于两孩子来说就像救世主一样。Fathers appearing was like a savior to the wo children.了解了事情的经过后，父亲并没有责骂他们，而是鼓励他们再试一次。Knowing what had happened、instead of scolding his children, he father encouraged them to cook breakfast again.在父亲的指导下，孩子们收拾了残局，重新开始做

10、早餐。Under thei】 fathers guidance、he kids started to ry again and everything was going smoothly.当他们煎面包的时候，父亲帮助他们调整了火候，这是成功的关键。While they were frying the bread、father helped them adjust the fire、which was the key to success.5,一切进展顺利，不一会儿，一顿美味的早餐就成形了。In no time、a delicious breakfast started to take shap

11、e.6 .他们欣喜假设狂！迫不及待地想让妈妈品尝他们亲手做的早餐。Wild with joy, they couldnt wait to let mom taste their homemade breakfast.第二段：.当看到美味和完美的早餐在她面前，妈妈又惊讶又兴奋。When theirther saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her, she was very surprised.一阵暖流涌上心头。A warm current welled up in her heart.不仅是这份早餐，而且孩子们对她的爱也使她

12、感动落泪。It was not only the qift, bu the love of the childien for her thal moved he】 very much.孩子们大声说：“母亲节快乐!”The children said loudly, Happy Mothers Day!”.妈妈无法掩饰内心的欣喜，紧紧地拥抱着他们，说：“非常感谢你们，杰夫和詹娜。我相信这将是我一生中 最棒的早餐。我为你们感到骄傲！”Mother hugged them tightly、saying Thank you so much、Jeff and Jenna. I believe it wi

13、ll be the best breakfast in my life.”.听到这话，双胞胎骄傲地笑了。Hearing this, the twins smiled proudly.3范文赏析As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Father appearing was like a savior to the two children. Knowing what had happened, instead of scolding his children, the father enc

14、ouraged them to cook breakfast again. Under their fathers guidance, the kids started to try again and everything was going smoothly. While they were frying the bread, father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. In no time, a delicious breakfast started to take shape. Wild with

15、joy, they couldnt wait to let mom taste their homemade breakfast.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her, she was very surprised. A warm current welled up in her heart. It was not only the gift, but

16、the love of the children for her that moved her very much. The children said loudly, “Happy Mothers Day! ” Mother hugged them tightly, saying HThank you so much, Jeff and Jenna. I believe it will be the best breakfast in my life. nHearing this, the twins smiled proudly.二、素材积累.1情绪类素材积累 喜悦扃兴高兴的 deligh

17、ted/cheerfi】l(jcyfnl 因而高兴 he jcyful ever令某人高兴的是 tQ ones delighL 欣喜假设狂 be wild with joy难以形容的开心 hu induscrihahly jnyful极为感动 he CYerwhulmingly mevnd几乎无法掩饰他兴奋的心情 can hardly conceal his excitement既兴奋又开心 a mixture, of excitumunt and happiness惊讶惊讶的 surprised/shocked/astonished/amazed令某人惊讶的是 to ones surpris

18、e惊讶地 in amazement张大嘴惊呆了感动感至U温暖 feel warm 特另U感动 be moved/touched profoundly 心被融化 heart melt 感动落泪 be moved to tears一股暖流涌上心头a warm cunent welled up in ones mind.2动作类素材积累笑开怀大笑smile broadly朝微笑 flash a smile at.表情变得明亮 face lights up/brightns面露喜色 a wide smile appears on/spreads across ones Bee喜极而泣 shed tea

19、rs of joy脸上绽放笑容 face broadens in。a smile哭眼泪夺眶而出tears well up XX 的泪水流过脸颊tears of XXX roll down拥抱紧紧拥抱 hug tightly-温柔地抱着某人hug sh. guntly/tendurly 投入某人的,怀扣1onpsplf into pmhrPCL四、模拟演练练习（一）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。Jim slumped on the couch. Mothcr-Day-was coming up, and he didnt have a present, How can I

20、buy a present without any money? he thought.Jim picked up the newspaper that was lying on the couch. He noticed a large advertisement on the front page. The local department store was sponsoring a contest. Tell us why your mom is special and win a shopping spree （购物狂欢）for her/5 said the ad.“This is

21、perfect!,? thought Jim. He ran to his room with the newspaper. Taking a pencil and a blank piece of paper from his desk, he started to write.“My mom is thu bust mothur in the world. She always makes a lunch for me to take to school, and she never forgets my dessert. She reads as many books to me bef

22、ore bed as I want. She always remembers to check under the bed for monsters. And she gives the best hugs, but never in front of my friends, who would laugh at me for hugging myJim liked what he had written. He copied it neatly and got an envelope and a stamp from his dad. He ran to the mailbox with

23、his entry （参赛作品）.Mom will love having a shopping spree/9 he thought.Jim checked the mailbox every day foiUiU-piiJ2）ays passed by, and then weeks. Soon it was the day before Mothers Day. Jim still hadnt heard anything about the contest.“What am I going to do now?” he wondered. He didnt have a present

24、, and he didnt have a shopping spree. And he still didnt have any money. He had to think of something. Jim closed his eyes and curled his toes and thought so hard that his ears hurt.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；.续写局部分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4,续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Suddenly, he ha

25、s an idea.Paragraph 2:The next morning Jim handed his present to his mom.练习（二）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。In 1945, a 12-year-old boy saw a beautiful brooch （胸针）in a shop window that set his heart racing. But the pricefive dollarswas too high for Reuben Earle. Five dollars would buy almost a weeks food

26、 for his family.Reuben couldnt ask his father for the money. Everything his father made through fishing went to his mother, Dora. Slim and beautiful, she was the center of the home and the glue that held it together. The housework was never-ending, and she struggled to feed and clothe their five chi

27、ldren, but she was happy as her family and their well-being were all she cared about.Nevertheless, he opened the shops door and went inside. Standing proudly and straight in his flour-sack （面粉 袋改做的）shirt and washed-out trousers, he told the shopkeeper what he wanted, adding, But I dont have the mone

28、y right now. Can you please hold it for me for some time?”Til try J the shopkeeper smiled. nPeople around here dont usually have that kind of money to spend on things. It should keep for a while.”Reuben respectfully touched his worn cap and walked out. He would raise the money and not tell anybody,

29、for he thought Mum would get surprised when she saw that brooch. On hearing the sound of hammering （捶打） from a side street, Reuben suddenly had an idea that he could raise money by selling the used nail bags. People built their own homes in Bay Roberts, using nails bought in bags from a local factor

30、y. Sometimes the used bags were thrown away at the construction site, and Reuben knew he could sell them back to the factory for five cents a piece. That day he sold two nail bags and hid the money in a rusty soda tin.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1:Every day after school, Reuben s

31、tarted his plan.Paragraph2:Finally, the time came!练习（三）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。When Micah was a child, I used to do many things with her. Later, I got promoted and was always on constant business holidays. 3 years* devotion to work resulted in my absence from her life and now she was a

32、teenage girl. Recently, I eventually managed to have abundant time to accompany her.For the last few weeks, Micah had watched mockingbirds make a nest in a tree and lay eggs there. Sometimes, I came to accompany her without being invited. But whenever I made an attempt to break the ice, Tm good“ was

33、 about all she said to me. Code fbr “Leave me alone”.“Why doesnft she want to do things with me?T tho ught as I set the table fbr dinner one evening, hoping fbr an emotion bridge to reappear between us. Did she feel hurt with my long absence or feel ignored ? Lost in thought, I was seeking to mend t

34、he relationship.Mom! Micah yelled suddenly. uCome quick!”Surprised, I rushed out, only to find a little baby bird on the ground, weak and helpless. My eyes went to the branches above.“The wind must have blown him out of the nest JI said.No, it was Mr. Whiskers -our cat. You let him go outside! Micah

35、 said, a bit annoyed.Looking at the nest without the parents, Pm sorry,I said and put the bird in my palm cautiously and gently. She didnt respond, but did not refused my offer to help, either. Deciding to take care of the little baby till it became independent, I placed it in its nest. What should

36、we do next?” I asked. No response again. Instead, Micah went inside and hopped on her iPad. “Bird videos? I asked. Yes, Pm finding out what to feed it, she said seriously. 注意：.续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1:She was more focused than ever.Paragraph 2:Before long, the bird food was deliver

37、ed and we fed the bird Chance at once.范文赏析练习（一）Paragraph 1:Suddenly, he had an idea. Jim found his original contest entry. He copied it with a bright red crayon on his biggest piece of yellow construction paper. Then he decorated the paper with puiple glitter and glued a picture of his mom to the bo

38、ttom with care. He would like to use this as a Mothers Day gift for his dear mother if he couldnt win a shopping spree for her.Paragraph 2:The next morning Jim handed his present to his mom. Happy Mothers Day!” he yelled. Mom read Jims poster uMy mom is the best mother in the world.*. By the time sh

39、e finished, she was smiling and crying at the same time. nThank you, she said, wiping her eyes. This is the best present I have ever had. Jim smiled. nI have something else for you, too, he said. He checked to make sure no one was looking, and then he gave his mom a big hug. 练习（二）Every day after sch

40、ool, Reuben started his plan. Cold and hungry, Reuben wandered around, searching for nail bags carefully from one street to another. To save more money, the determined boy even decided to deliver papers on the early morning. Every coin he won went to a soda tin, his treasured bank”, and then all the

41、 tiredness disappeared magically. Each time he passed by the brooch in the shop window would remind him what he did was worthwhile. Day by day, his soda tin became heavier and heavier. Six weeks passed before he even knew it. Then approached the Christmas Eve.Finally, the time came! Reuben stole into his room and cautiously took out the soda tin, poured all the coins out and began to count. Five dollars and twenty cents! He counted it a second time, and no mis