2019高考英语复习第四板块书面表达7步成文第四步基本框架搭建好“美化词句”细推敲讲义4537

1、2019高考英语复习第四板块书面表达7步成文第四步基本框架搭建好“美化词句”细斟酌讲义_45372019高考英语复习第四板块书面表达7步成文第四步基本框架搭建好“美化词句”细斟酌讲义_453710/102019高考英语复习第四板块书面表达7步成文第四步基本框架搭建好“美化词句”细斟酌讲义_4537步成文第四步基本框架搭建好，“美化词句”细斟酌假如说前三步旨在教考生写得中规中矩、像模像样，那么四至六步则教考生写得潇潇洒洒、洋气实足；假如说前三步是在底稿中达成对写作基本内容的架构，那么四至六步则是对底稿内容的完美、润饰和升格；前三步让习作达成，四至六步让习作完满，从第四步至第六步，教考生“略施粉黛

2、”，略加美化，让作文由“四档”巧升“五档”。一、“四档”“五档”差在哪第四档(1620分)考纲表述第五档(2125分)考纲表述达成了试题规定的任务。完整达成了试题规定的任务。虽遗漏一两个次重点，但覆盖全部。覆盖重点。应用了的语法构造和词汇。应用的语法构造和词汇能。语法构造或词汇方面应用基本正确，些许语法构造或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽错误主假如因试试较复杂语法构造或力使用较复杂构造或；具备较。强的语言运用能力。应用语句间的连结成分，使全文结使用了语句间的连结成分，使全文结构紧凑。了预期的写作目的。构紧凑。了预期的写作目的。从“第四档”与“第五档”的评分标准来看，四档与五档的评分标准差异是细小的

3、，主要集中在“亮点词汇”、“亮点句式”、“过渡连接”、“语法构造”等一些能力层级上，固然这两个品位的评分标准差异比较细微，但四档与五档的分差却成为考生成绩平凡与优秀的分水岭。第五档中提到，“语法构造或词汇方面有些许错误，但为全力使用较复杂构造或较高级词汇所致。”这就是说，假如考生仅运用基础词汇和基本句型，不可以表现出较强的语言运用能力，即便表达无语法错误，也不必定能得高分；相反，即便文章中有少许错误，假如是因为使用复杂构造或较高级词汇所致，文章仍可按最高品位给分。第五档中“有效地使用了语句间的连结成分，使全文构造紧凑”，这表示适合运用过渡性词语能够使文章构造紧凑，过渡自然，进而提高得分品位。典

4、例感悟(2018全国卷)假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信咨询你校学生体育运动状况。请给他回信，内容包含：1学校的体育场馆；2.主要的运动项目；3.你喜爱的项目。注意：1.词数100左右；2.能够适合增添细节，以使行文连结。“冤枉的”四档作文(得分19分)DearPeter，Iamverydelightedtohearfromyou.Inyourlastletter,youaskedmeaboutthephysicalexerciseinourschoolandthefollowinginformationmayhelpyouknowmoreaboutit.Tobeginwith,ane

5、wstadiumhasbeenbuiltup,andithasbecomethenewlandmarkinourschool.Moreover,withthestadiumsetup,manykindsofsportseventsareabletobeheld,ofwhichPingpong,footballandrunningcompetitionsareverypopular.Asforme,Iminterestedinbasketballsinceithasbeengivingmestrengthtofacethechallengesinmylife.Allinall,Isincerel

6、yinviteyoutocometoourschoolandseeforyourself.Yours，LiHua升格后的五档作文(得分24分)DearPeter，Iammorethandelightedtohearfromyou.Inyourlastletter,youaskedmeaboutthephysicalexerciseinourschooland,Ithink,thefollowinginformationmayhelpyouhaveabetterunderstandingofit.Tobeginwith,anewstadiumhasbeenbuiltup,whichhasbeco

7、methenewlandmarkinourschool.Moreover,thestadiumsetup,awiderangeofsportseventsareabletobeheld,ofwhichPingpong,footballaswellasrunningcompetitionsenjoygreatpopularity.Asforme,Iminterestedinbasketballsinceithasbeengivingmestrengthtobravelyfacethechallengesinmylife.Allinall,Isincerelyinviteyoutocometoou

8、rschoolandseeforyourself.Yours，LiHua左栏作文用词正确，分段合理，并且使用了with复合构造和“ofwhich”指引的非限制性定语从句等，整体来说是一篇相当不错的作文。可是看一下右栏提高后的名作文，就会叹息其语言更地道、更自然流利，堪称妙笔生花，技高一筹。词汇的提高师及enjoygreat有六处，特别是haveabetterunderstandingof,awiderangeof点popularity的使用会令人赞美作者深沉的语言功底，同时也提高了得分品位；句式的评thestadiumset提高有三处，插入语Ithink,which指引的定语从句，及独立主格u

9、p的使用都恰到利处，相关于左栏的作文有了大幅度的提高。二、怎样由“四档”升“五档”词汇要“亮人一眼”词汇要美，就要多使用较高级词汇。那么何为较高级词汇？尽人皆知，词汇原来并无“高低贵贱”之分，但某个词汇一旦放在了详细语境中，假如使用极为适合，表现了该词的美好价值，为句子添色，让文章添彩，它就是较高级词汇。下边介绍词汇向较高级词汇的转变。4招，以实现由较初级第1招：“语”众不一样，防止亦步亦趋写作时适合得体地使用他人可能想不到的词汇或短语，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。Afterthefilm,eachclassissupposedtohaveadiscussionandallthestudent

10、sarewelcometotalkandexpresstheirviewsaboutthefilm.Afterthefilm,eachclassissupposedtohaveadiscussionandallthestudentsarewelcometomakecommentsandexpresstheirviewsaboutthefilm.(2018全国卷书面表达)IamverygladtoknowyouareinterestedinTangpoems.IammorethandelightedtoknowyouareinterestedinTangpoems.(2017全国卷书面表达)Is

11、houldbefreeanytimeafterschoolnextweek.Ishouldbeavailableanytimeafterschoolnextweek.(2016全国卷书面表达)第2招：更新换代，防止重复写作时应尽量防止重复使用同样的词语，要用贴切多变的词语来展现自己的水平。用词不一样、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。Thebox-officeincomeofChinesemoviesabout17billionyuanin2012toover40billionadeclineinitseconomicgrowthratelastyear.witnessedaconstantincr

12、easefromin2015.However,ChinawitnessedThebox-officeincomeofChinesemovieswitnessedaconstantincreasefromabout17billionyuanin2012toover40billionin2015.However,Chinasawadeclineinitseconomicgrowthratelastyear.(2017江苏高考书面表达)Anystudentwhoisinterestediswelcometoparticipate.Ifyouwanttoparticipate,youcansendyo

13、urphotostointlphotoshow.Anystudentwhoisinterestediswelcometoparticipate.Ifyouwanttojoinyoucansendyourphotostointlphotoshow.(2016全国卷书面表达Wemayhavedifferentopinionsinorganizingclassactivities.Wemayhavedifferentwaystodealwithsuchasituation.,)Wemayhavedifferentopinionsinorganizingclassactivities.Wemayhav

14、evariouswaystodealwithsuchasituation.(2015浙江高考书面表达)第3招：单词短语，奇妙互用一般状况下短语优先，应多使用词组、习语来取代一些单词，以增添文采。但有时单词却比短语重生动，能够“一词传神”。因此我们应把单词与短语奇妙互用。Thetrainingschedule,apartfromregulartraining,includesjoininginvariousactivities,suchasparticipatinginsomenationalcompetitions.Thetrainingschedule,apartfromregulartra

15、ining,includesjoininginavarietyofactivities,suchasparticipatinginsomenationalcompetitions.(2018天津高考书面表达)CinemashavegraduallygivenwaytotheriseoftheInternetandtheticketpriceisincreasing.andcellphones,CinemashavegraduallygivenwaytotheriseoftheInternetandcellphones,andtheticketpriceisontheincrease.(2017

16、江苏高考书面表达)IwanttotellyousomethingaboutmyplanforthesummervacationandIdlikeyoutohelpme.IwanttotellyousomethingaboutmyplanforthesummervacationandIdlikeyoutodomeafavor.(2016全国卷书面表达)Wecanlookatthisprobleminmanyways.Wecanviewthisprobleminmanyways.(view比lookat更有内涵)第4招：高级代替，初级裁减也就是说，尽量用高级阶段学到的词取代初级阶段学到的词。And

17、ItreasurethisasagoodchancetobroadenmyperspectiveandimprovemyspokenEnglish.AndItreasurethisasagoodchancetobroadenmyperspectiveaswellasimprovemyspokenEnglish.(2018浙江高考写作)Theeditingpartafterthatwasdifficult.Theeditingpartafterthatwastough.(2017北京高考书面表达)ThissummerIwanttodoapart-timejobinaforeigncapitalc

18、ompany,throughwhichIwouldliketobroadenmyhorizons,getsomeworkingexperienceandmeetmorenewfriends.ThissummerIintendtotakeupapart-timejobinaforeigncapitalcompany,throughwhichIwouldliketobroadenmyhorizons,gainsomeworkingexperienceandmeetmorenewfriends.(2016全国卷书面表达)句式要“高人一筹”句式单调、缺少生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不行能得高分。出色句

19、式的合理使用会使文章增添亮点，提高品位。考生在写作时应多运用一些高级句式和复合句，并注意句式的灵巧多变，让文章读起来抑扬顿挫，让考生深沉的语言功底得以表现，让作文跨上五档线！升格句式时，可从双方面着手。(一)利用复合句和非谓语动词，提高文章品位1增添亮点的定语从句定语从句的应用能够特别有效地提高表达品位，在写作中假如我们把两个简单句归并为一个含有定语从句的复合句，或许把并列句改为含有定语从句的复合句，都能为文章增添亮点。Tohelpthembetterunderstandourtea-drinkingtearoominourschool,whereIintroducedthehistorycu

20、lture,wetookthemtotheoftea-makinganddifferentkindsofteaandsoon.(2018北京高考书面表达)Forexample,therearehugeamountsofreferencebooks.Iamoftenconfusedtochoosefromthem.Forexample,therearehugeamountsofreferencebooksfromwhichIamoftenconfusedtochoose.(2018江苏高考书面表达)Paper-cuttingisatraditionalartforminChina.Ithasah

21、istoryofmorethan1,500years.Paper-cuttingisatraditionalartforminChina,whichhasahistorythan1,500years.(2017全国卷书面表达)ofmore2吸引眼球的状语从句在英语写作中，状语从句是常常用到的句型，它的灵巧运用能使作文更具吸引力。SinceyouhavelongbeeninterestedinChineseculture(原由状语从句),IthinkBeijingLanguageandCultureUniversityisanidealplaceforyou.(2018北京高考书面表达)Ifyo

22、ureinterestedintheChinesefolkart(条件状语从句),pleasee-mailme.(2017全国卷书面表达)Wecansetoutearlysothatwewillhavemoretimetoreadandselectbooks(目的状语从句)(2016全国卷书面表达)3提高品位的名词性从句名词性从句包含主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句，是写作中常有的高级表达方式。Itisworthmentioningthatourvolleyballteamwonthechampionshiptwiceinthenationalmiddleschoolvolleybal

23、lmatch(主语从句)(2018全国卷书面表达)Ihopethesesuggestionswouldbehelpfultoyou.(宾语从句)(2018全国卷书面表达)ThatswhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzeRiverisabetterchoice.(表语从句)(2017北京高考书面表达)4言简意明的非谓语动词适合地运用非谓语动词，不单能使句型多样、句子灵巧多变，并且读起来构造紧凑、言简意明。AnEnglishshortfilm,calledGrowingTogetherhallat7：30pm.(2018全国卷书面表达)Togetadmitted,Ihave

24、madegoodpreparations,willbeshownintheschoolbeforehand,tryingtoknowasmuchasIcouldaboutmycity.(2017天津高考书面表达)Ourclasscameupwiththeideatomakebetteruseofusedmaterials.(2016北京高考书面表达)(二)利用特别句式，彰显能力水平写作中，假如考生能够使用如重申句型、倒装句型等特别句式，不单能彰显考生的英语水平，还可以提高写作品位。1重申句型ItwashiscontinuouseffortsthatcausedChinatochangegrad

25、ually.(2016北京高考书面表达)Itiscounts.(2015notthestory福建高考书面表达itself)butwhatisreflectedinthestorythat2倒装句Onlyinthiswaycanwestudentsstudyhappilyandeffectively.(2015湖南高考满分作文)Notonlydoesitaffectourdailylife,butitalsoputspeopleslivesatrisk.(2015江苏高考书面表达)3省略句Isatatatable,explainingeverystepoftheprocesstea.(2018

26、北京高考书面表达)As(itis)scheduled,weparticipatedactivities.(2016天津高考书面表达)inwhile(Iwas)makingseveralinstructive4虚构语气Shouldyouacceptmyapplication,Itoyousatisfaction.(2018浙江高考写作)wouldsparenoefforttocommitmyselfIwishthatyouculturefurther.(2017couldgraspthisopportunitytolearntraditionalChinese全国卷书面表达)5with复合构造I

27、ntheend,wetookagroupphoto,thisunforgettableexperience.(2018withcupsorteainourhands北京高考书面表达),torecordInthepicture,wecanseeaboyinwornclothes,sittingatashabbywoodentablewithapileofbooksonit.(2015福建高考书面表达)6并列句型AllstudentshavetwoPEclassesaweekandrunfor20minuteseveryday.(2018全国卷书面表达)Tobehonest,voterssomet

28、imesfeelannoyed,notbecausetheyhatevoting,butbecausetheyaredividedbetweenemotionandfairness.(2016江苏高考书面表达)7it句型ItisareallygoodopportunitytoexperienceChineseculture.(it作形式主语)(2018全国卷书面表达)IthinkitgreatfuntolearnthepoemswrittenintheTangDynastywithyou.(it作形式宾语)(2017全国卷书面表达)讲堂应用体验.请用更高级词汇代替黑体词汇1Theteacher

29、directeddifficultchallengingthegiftedstudentstowardsthemoredifficultcourses.2Welltryourbesttodevelopthetraditionalfriendshipbetweenus.developpromote3Icannolongerbearthewayhespeakstous.bearput_up_with4Imetoneofmyclassmatesonmywaytoschoolyesterday.metcame_across5Hehasdecidedtobeateacherwhenhegrowsup.d

30、ecideddetermined/made_up_his_mind6Developingveryquickly,theInternetcausesthebreakdownofface-to-facecommunication.causesgives_rise_to7Whenyouareboredwiththepeoplesometimes,youdbetterfindaquietplace,listeningtosomeclassicalmusic._bored_withfed_up_with8Moreandmorevisitorshavebeenattractedtothisplace.Mo

31、re_and_moreAn_increasing_number_of9Heclass.didnt_listen_10SuddenlyI_thought_of_an_didntlistentowhatIsaidintoturned_a_deaf_ear_toIthoughtofanideathatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.ideaI_came_up_with_an_idea/an_idea_occurred_to_methe.按要求改写以下句子1Myfavoritehobbiesarereadingbooksandnewspapers.Theyhavebecomea

32、necessarypartofmydailylife.My_favorite_hobbies_are_reading_books_and_newspapers,_which_have_become_a_necessary_part_of_my_daily_life.(用定语从句归并句子)2Thattheyhadhadprofessionaltrainingimpressedmemost.What_impressed_me_most_was_that_they_had_had_professional_training.(用主语从句和表语从句改写句子)3Afterwehadpracticedpl

33、ayingbasketballforalmosttwomonths,westronglydesiredtobethewinner.Having_practiced_playing_basketball_for_almost_two_months,_we_strongly_desired_to_be_the_winner.(用分词作状语改写句子)4IdidntknowrealhappinessuntilImetyou.It_was_not_until_I_met_you_that_I_knew_real_happiness.(用重申句型改写句子)5Theweatherwassocoldthatw

34、ehadtostayathome.So_cold_was_the_weather_that_we_had_to_stay_at_home.(6Thelocalgovernmentdidntrealizetheproblemuntil用倒装句改写句子)theriverwasseriouslypolluted.Not_until_the_river_was_seriously_polluted_did_the_local_government_realize_the_problem.(用倒装句改写句子)7Itstimeforustotakemeasurestoprotectendangeredan

35、imals.Its_time_that_we_took/should_take_measures_to_protect_endangered_animals.(用虚构语气改写句子)8Whenweapproachedthecitycenter,wesawastonestatueofabout10metersinheight.Approaching_the_city_center,_we_saw_a_stone_statue_of_about_10_meters_in_height.(用此刻分词短语作时间状语改写句子)9Theyareexperienced,knowledgeable,patientandunderstanding.Theyarenotonlyexperiencedandknowledgeable,butalsopatientandunderstanding.(用notonly.butalso.句型改写句子)10Weshouldspeakmo