初中英语人教版九年级Section B 3a-3b Selfcheck 33 课件

1、Learn to Be Grateful课型：话题写作课授课教师：东莞市望牛墩中学 李小丽九年级写作研讨1. Learn to describe one event;2. Learn to express gratitude (感恩之情);3. Enable to write a passage and grade it with the standard;4. Learn to be grateful and keep positive (乐观);Learning Objectpre-writingWarm upan eventWhen : Last Sunday morningWhere:

2、 a supermarket Who: I; a boy What: lost my wallet; gave back Feeling: ThankfulLast Sunday morning, I went shopping in a _. Unluckily, I lost my _. I felt worried. Later, a boy came to me and _ my wallet. I was very _ to him. Warm upan eventWhen : Last Monday evening; rainy Where: in the classroomWho

3、: I; my classmate Lucy What: had to stay in the classroom; lent me an umbrellaFeeling: warm and movedLast Monday evening, it was _ when the class was over. I had to _ because I had no umbrella. suddenly, my classmate Lucy _. At that time, I felt _. SummaryHow to describe an event?WhenWhowhereWhatFee

4、ling重点Key 1: 抓住“W+F”要点Key 2: 叙述事件使用_时态一般过去Tell Your storyWhenWhowhereWhatFeelingPair work请描述一件你得到帮助的事件素材库Last month, I failed my math exam and cried. After seeing this, my math teacher encouraged me and helped me with my study after school every day. With his help, I did well in the next exam. I fel

5、t very happy. 2. Last Friday, I fell down from stairs when I went up. My legs hurt badly. Luckily, my friend Tony came by and sent me to the hospital at once. I felt thankful.In everyday life, we often get help from other people. What can you do to express your gratitude (感恩之情)?1. Discuss and finish

6、 the mind-map with key words; 2. Write at least 3 ways each group;(格式：ways + reason/result)Ways to express my gratitudeExample: I can, because/so that I should / I mayBrainstormGroup workLets reportYou can report like this:To express my gratitude, I can do something. Firstly, I can Secondly, Thirdly

7、,素材库I can make a card for him and write on the card: Thank you, my dear teacher!2. I should write a thank-you letter to her and tell her how much I want to thank her.3. I think the best way is to study harder and make progress every day. 4. Why not be ready to help people in need?SummaryTo express m

8、y gratitude, I can do something. Firstly, I can Secondly, Thirdly,Ways to express my gratitudewrite a thank-you letterstudy harder and get good gradesbuy a giftKey 1: How to express your gratitude:SummaryI can do something to express my gratitude. Firstly, I can Secondly, Thirdly,Key 2:合理使用连接词，表达观点更

9、清晰:第一,第二,第三一方面另一方面此外,而且, 还有总而言之First, Second, ThirdOn the one hand; on the other handWhats more; BesidesAll in all; In a wordwhile-writing 我们每个人在生活、学习或各种活动中得到过周边人的帮助，我们应该学会感恩。我校文学社正在举办主题为“用行动表达感恩”的征文活动，请你根据下面提供的信息，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。内容包括：1.你最想感谢谁？描述一件你得到帮助的事件；2.你想如何用行动表达感恩？(至少两点)；3.呼吁大家学会感恩，让世界充满爱。Writin

10、g Task内容包括：1.你最想感谢谁？描述一件你得到帮助的事件；2.你想如何用行动表达感恩？(至少两点)；3.呼吁大家学会感恩，让世界充满爱。感谢谁？描写一件事(when, who, where, what, feeling) (一般过去时)2. 如何表达感恩(两点)？3. 呼吁1圈要点+2列提纲+3定分数15分=内容8分+语言6分+字数1分1分3分3分1分在A、B、C中，选择自己想挑战的一篇写作，并把它完成。10 min4 写 初 稿记得分段哦！检查：1. 内容是否写全；2. 连词是否合理使用；3. 单词拼写；4. 语法结构；5 修 错 误post-writingsample Here I

11、 would like to express my thanks to my math teacher. (感恩谁 :1分) Last month, I failed my math exam and cried. After seeing this, my math teacher encouraged me and helped me with my study after school every day. With his help, I did well in the next exam. I felt very happy. (一件事:3分) To express my grati

12、tude, I can do something. Firstly, I can make a card for him and write on the card: Thank you, my dear teacher! Secondly, I think the best way to express my gratitude is to study harder and make progress every day. (如何表达:3分) In a word, lets learn to be grateful in life and make the world full of lov

13、e. (呼吁:1分)写作高分技巧：1.合理使用主题句，让层次更分明； 2.恰当使用过渡词(So, But, However, In a word)和连接词(Firstly, Secondly, And, Then, Finally)； 内容(8)语言逻辑(6)字数/书面(1)1.最想感谢谁 (1分)错误扣分不够40词扣1分40-60词扣0.5分2.描写一件你得到帮助的事件(3分)3个0-14-10个1.5-33.如何用行动表达感恩的?(至少两点) (3分)11-16个3.5-54.呼吁大家学会感恩，让世界充满爱 (1分)16以上5.5-6得分： Total(总分15)：15Grading st

14、andard(评分标准)Mark the writing15分=内容8分 +语言6分 +字数/书面1分 Here I would like to express my thanks to. Last Monday evening, it was rainy when the class was over. I have to stay in the classroom because I had no umbrella. suddenly, my classmate Lucy lend me an umbrella. At that time, I felt warm and moving.

15、To express my gratitude, I can do something. Firstly, I can write a thank-you letter to Lucy. Secondly, I should help people in need, just like Lucy helped me. In a word, lets learn to be grateful in life and make the world full of love. 少感恩谁: -1语法错误: -113Mark the writing15分=内容8分 +语言6分 +字数/书面1分 Here

16、 I would like to express my thanks to. Last Monday night, I have a fever. My mother is worried. She take me to see a doctor and look after me all the night. I feel warm. To express my gratitude, I can buy some flowers and say thank you. All in all, lets learn to be grateful in life and make the worl

17、d full of love. 少1个做法: -1.5语法错误: -2字数: -0.510少感恩谁: -1Peer AssessmentPair workExchange your writing with your partner (同伴互评)Lets sum up1. How to describe one event:WhenWhowhereWhatFeeling重点Key 1: 抓住“W+F”要点Key 2: 叙述事件使用_时态一般过去Key1: 合理使用连接词，表达观点更清晰;Key2: 写作高分技巧：1.合理使用主题句,让层次更分明； 2.恰当使用过渡词(So, But, However, In a word)和连接词(Firstly, Secondly, And, Then, Finally)；Lets sum up2. How to express your opinion:Lets sum up3. How to write a good article:a) Steps 写作五步曲：圈要点列提纲 定分数写初稿修错误1圈2列3分4写5修15分=内容8分 +语言6分 +字数/书面1分b) Structure 作文结构: event (事件) opinion (观点)hope (总结)让