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1、WELCOME1.Do you have any trouble in writing English?2.What are they?English Writing 英语书面表达训练课堂练习写一篇短文 书面表达请根据下面的提示，以“Internet and Our life”写一篇文章，80个词左右。开头已给出。 1、21世纪是信息时代，随着科技的发展，信息越来越重要。 2、电脑改变着我们的生活。电脑带来了崭新的联系方式，缩小了世界。电脑提供了大量的信息，满足了人们的需要。 提示： communication n. 联系，交流 communicate v. 联系 Internet and O

2、ur life It is said that the 21st century is the Information Age.作业选评要改进吗？为什么？精彩范文赏析 It is said that the 21st century is the Information Age. With the development of science and technology, information has become more and more important to everyone. Nowadays, more and more people have their own compu

3、ters and the Internet plays a very important part in their daily life. First, the Internet brings us a new way of communication. In every corner of the world we can find internet. We can communicate with our relatives and friends living abroad on the internet. Second, the internet brings us a lot of

4、 information. We can know what is happening in the world and what were interested in. With the internet, we can see the world has become smaller and smaller.书面表达六 步 法书面表达六步法书面表达六步法一、审题确定基本要素:5W1H何 时 何 地 何 人 为何 如 何 做 了 何 事书面表达六步法二、抓要点确定主要行为What happened?书面表达六步法三、扩展成句形成基本语义单位Who did what?书面表达六步法四、连句成文时间 空间 细节连贯 呼应书面表达六步法五、查错改错要尽量剔除错误书面表达六步法六、誊写卷面不工整要扣分第二步 抓要点时态直达 语态到位介/副词紧随抓要点，配动词第三步 扩展成句把要点变成完整的句子。注意使用介/副词第四步 连句成文增加细节 呼应首尾句与句相连词与词搭配第五步 查错改错主谓一致吗？时态正确吗？语态正确吗？有“半截话”吗？第六步 誊