学生写作常见错误和2022高考作文押题讲义-高三英语写作专项

1、作文专题十二：学生写作常见错误和高考作文押题一、学生写作中容易出现错误的地方：1. 带有标题或主题的活动的“表达法：Last week witnessed the first Culture Festival themed /called/ named “the Beauty of Chinese Traditional Culture” held by our school.Recently, an activity, the theme of which / whose theme is The Most Beautiful Chinese Culture1 , was held in o

2、ur school hall2、知道你对感兴趣，因此我写信一，的表达法：Learning that you are about to a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese custom & I am writing to put forward some advice.Im 史lad that are interested 加 the silk culture of China and the Belt and Road Initiative.m more than happy totell you somethi

3、ng about them.3.为了的的3.为了的的，我们学习开展活动的表达法:Last Saturday, our school held the English Classic Recitation Competition at the lecture hall to encourage students to appreciate English culture.In order to。丸rich school life and build up our body, last weekend our school organized a 5km cross-country running

4、 activity.Aimiitf! to arouse students interest ir taking various activities, last week witnessed an extraordinary school cultural festival held in our school.4.”活动的时间地点”的表达法：一般情况下，地点在前，时间在后。地点：从小到大排列。时间：几点钟，月日 年排列。例 如：The lecture will begin at, and end at ,lasting 3 hours.As scheduled, the activitie

5、s are held on the playground from 5:30 to 6:00 every afternoen.On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall.My family and I plan to be there from May 1st to 7th, in which period we would like to visit most of the scenic spots and shoppin

6、g centers.5、活动过程或细节”的表达法：在表达过程中要注意用例如：Winter sports benefit us in many ways. First of all, compared to indoor workouts, sports activities that are carried out during winter tend to help us burn off more calories. Moreover, they help us build endurance and muscle and also improve our sense of balance

7、 in addition to their positive effects on physical health. Last but not least, we will feel extremely happy while playing winter sports because we may feel bored inside the house in chilly weather.注：（1） to begin with, then, furthermore, finallyto start with, next, in addition, finallyfirst and forem

8、ost, besides, last but not leastmost important of all, moreover, finally6、特别小心使由there be句型：例如：（1）有20位同学参加了这次活动。There were 20 students participate in the activity （错误）-（be 动词不能直接与实义动词连用）There were 20 students participating in the activity （正确）（用非谓语）There were 20 students who participated in the activ

9、ity （正确）（用从句）There are many students are playing basketball on the playground.（错误）There are many students who are playing basketball on the playground.（正确）（用 从句）There are many students playing basketball on the playground.（正确）（用非谓语）7、多个动赢用:英语中，几个动词不能随便放在一起。例如： rd like to communicate with students co

10、me from foreign countries. （错误）rd like to communicate with students who come from different countries.（正确）（变成从句）Ed like to communicate with students coming from different countries.（正确）（变成非谓语）Id like to communicate with students from different countries.（正确）（用一个谓语）8、尽量不使用枯燥的,单调的，同一结构的目亢例如：In the sch

11、ool, I like playing football. Tom likes playing football. We often play football after class.（单调、枯燥、 同一结构）。In the school, I like playing football. So does Tbm, and we often play football after class.（变换句式，并使用过渡词）。 9、特别提醒：（1）要点齐全：a、重点要点（详写）；b、次重点要点（略写）；c、隐藏要点（必须写出）。（2）时态准确：常用主要时态：a、一般现在时；b、一般过去时；c、一般

12、将来时。根据具体情况选准时态。（3）书写规范：a、间隔一致（间隔一个a字母）；b、每个字大小一致（必须整洁规范）；c、写清楚和写清晰（例 如：g和y;a和u； I和v） ;d、标点符号准确（1、英语中句号为而不是2、没有“，若要表达专有 名词，首字母大写即可。）例如：China Dailyis a great help to the English learn6rs.（错误）China Daily is a great help to the English learners（正确）10、三段式作文口诀：背景第一段，主题开门现；细节第二段，层次一二三；总结第三段，希望与祝愿。二、押题范文：（-

13、）【告知】假定你是李华，美国朋友David来信说他对中国的丝绸文化以及一带一路”倡议很感兴趣，请给他 回信，要点如下:（1）丝绸之路的起源。（2）古丝绸之路的作用（3） 一带一路”倡议的影响。注意：（1）词数120左右；（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：一带一路倡议 the Belt and Road Initiative;新石器时代 Neolithic Age;蚕茧 cocoonDear David,Im glad that you are interested in the silk culture of China and the Belt and Road Initiati

14、ve. Im more than happy to tell you something about them.As a matter of fact, silk has a long history in China, which dates back to the Neolithic Age. It is known to all that it is made from silkworm cocoons. So it is not only elegant but also environmentally friendly. Therefore, silk attracts people

15、 all over the world. From the Han Dynasty, China opened up the Silk Road, which greatly promoted the communication between China and the other countries in the world.At present, our government has put forward the Belt and Road Initiative, which encourages cooperation between China and other countrie

16、s. There is no doubt that it will have a great effect on all the relevant countries and contribute to the economic and cultural development of the world.Im looking forward to your reply.Yburs,Li Hua（二1【告知】假定你是李华，最近，你校成功举办了以最美中国文化”为主题的文艺表演活动。请给你的英国 朋友David写一封邮件与他分享此次活动，内容包括：.活动的时间,地点.参加者；2.表演的节目；3.参加

17、活动的感受。注意：L词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear David,Recently, an activity called The Most Beautiful Chinese Culture was held in our school hall. All the students in my school took part in it.The performers prepared for the performance for about two weeks. 66 students rec ited Di Zi Gui, which helped us k

18、now what children in ancient times were taught in school. Then 30 students showed different types of clothes that were popular in the Han Dynasty. Then came the kung fu show, which was the most popular. The last program was that a group of students played some classic dramas and music. This activity

19、 provided a chance for us students to learn more about classic Chinese culture.What about activities in your school? Looking forward to your sharing.Yburs,Li Hua （三1【发言稿】假如明天的英语课上将讨论有关生活习惯的话题，请你用英语准备一篇发言稿。内容包括.为什么要讨论这个话题;2.应在哪些方面养成好习惯（如饮食,作息.锻炼等）;3.你的感受或期望。 注意：1.词数100词左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头、结语已为你

20、写好。Dear classmates,My topic is about life habits. As we know, no matter who we are, we should have good life habits to behave ourselves. Now as for us, it seems more important to follow some good habits, which are useful in our daily life. For example, if we follow the schedule to learn, go to bed a

21、nd get up, we will feel quite relaxed, refreshed and efficient ； if we choose proper food and go on a healthy diet with enough exercise, we will always have a strong body and mind to learn .In a word, as long as good habits are formed, we should stick to and improve them. Thus were sure to benefit f

22、rom them!Thafs all. Thank you for listening.（四【咨询和推荐】假定你是李华，你校交换生Daniel回国前向你询问可以给父母带什么中国特色礼物。请你 给他写一封电子邮件，要点如下：1 .推荐礼物；2.说明原因；3.表达祝愿。注意：L词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Daniel.Learning that youre considering what souvenirs with Chinese quality you should bear for your parents, Im writing to give you

23、some suggestions.Two gifts are strongly recommended. One choice is gipao made of Chinese silk. Qipao is one of the most typical Chinese costumes for women, making it a perfect gift for your mother. Another option is Chinese knots, which have a long history and a symbolic meaning. People in China use

24、 them for decoration on clothing or have them hanging from the ceiling or on the wall to express good wishes.I hope the above tips can be helpful. Send my best regards to your family and wish you a happy journey.YoursLi Hua（五X【报道】你校正在开展阳光体育活动（Sunshine Sports activities ）,请你据此给某英文报社写一篇文章， 内容包括：1 .活动目

25、的；2.开展方式；3.你的看法。注意：L词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Nowadays, many a student doesnt have enough time to do sports, which causes some health problems like being overweight and short-sighted. Therefore, our school is conducting Sunshine Sports activities with the aim of arousing our interest in sports and i

26、mproving our physical and mental health.As scheduled, the activities are held from 5:30 to 6:00 every afternoon. We are free to do whatever we like, such as rope skipping, martial arts, table tennis, and badminton. The schoolyard is full of laughter and life, with a smile of satisfaction on everyone

27、*s face.The Sunshine Sports activities, as the name suggests, make us sunshine boys and girls. Besides, we have a better understanding of sports, friendship as well as team spirit.（六1【报道】上周，你校邀请社区卫生服务站的医生进行健康知识讲座，请你为校英文报写一篇报道， 内容包括：L时间地点；2.讲座内容；3.活动意义。注意：L词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。To improve student

28、s health awareness, our school invited Doctor Li, a health expert from the community health service station, to give us a lecture.As scheduled, the lecture was delivered from 3 to 5 last Friday afternoon in the school lecture hall. It was mainly about basic health care knowledge and how to keep heal

29、thy in simple but effective ways. At the end of the lecture, there was a lively question-and-answer session, when students had face-to-face communication with Doctor Li for answers to their prepared questions.Thanks to the lecture, we fully understood the importance of health. Some even decided imme

30、diately they would take regular exercise. It was really a great and successful activity!（七X【投稿】2022北京冬奥会虽已完美闭幕，但它在中国掀起的冷运动热潮经久不散。请你以冰雪运动为 话题，为班级英语角写一篇短文。内容包括：1 .你喜欢的冰雪运动；2.冰雪运动的好处；3.呼吁人们参与。注意：L词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Winter sports have gained in great popularity thanks to the Beijing 2022 Winter O

31、lympics. As far as Fm concerned, skiing and skating are my favorite winter sports.Winter sports benefit us in many ways. First of all, compared to indoor workouts, sports activities that are carried out during winter tend to help us burn off more calories. Moreover, they help us build endurance and

32、muscle and also improve our sense of balance in addition to theii* positive effects on physical health. Last but not least, we will feel extremely happy while playing winter sports because we may feel bored inside the house in chilly weather.Therefore, I sincerely call on more people to take full ad

33、vantage of these sports.（八）.请对你的即将到来的大学生活作一个规划。Now, I have already been an senior student and I have confidence that I can pass the college entrance examination and be enrolled by college. Therefore, T already have a plan for my college, which is my dreaming life in college.First of all, study is st

34、ill the most important thing in college. I will choose my interest as my major in college, which would make me work harder on study. I like reading so much that the library may be my favourite place. Besides, I would study some elective subjects that T am interested in or are useful for my future. M

35、oreover, I would take part in extracurricular activities. College is a perfect stage to develop practical abilities. There are many associations in college, which help you do something for your interests. Besides, joining the student union is also a good way to develop a students comprehensive abili

36、ties.This is the general plan for my college life and I am looking forward to my college life.（九）、【咨询与告知】假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jim将作为交换生来中国学习，他来信向你询问如何更好地 融入寄宿家庭和应该注意的餐桌礼仪方面的问题，请你就此内容给他写一封回信。注意：1.词数：100左右。2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯Dear Jim,Im glad to know you will come to China as an exchange student Here are my sugge

37、stions about your behavior in a Chinese family.As far as I am concaned, helping your host family with some housework is definitely an effective approach to engaging with them. Furthermore, a warm and harmonious atmosphere can be created. When it comes to table manners, we often let the seniors eat f

38、irst to show respect for them. Besides, you should avoid tapping the bowls with chopsticks, which is impolite. In fact, the best policy is When in Rome, do as the Romans do”.I hope my advice is of some help to you. Looking forward to seeing you soon.Ydufs,Li Hua（十）,【报道】上周日，你参加了校金话筒英语演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇短文，

39、介绍一下这次经历，内容包括：1.赛前准备2.比赛过程（十）,【报道】上周日，你参加了校注意：1.词数100左右。2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary Golden Microphone English Speech Contest in our school.With the aim of improving my oral English skill, I determined to attend the competition. Before the contest, I turned to professionals for guidance and devoted myself to practicing over and over again. However, when the big moment finally arrived, my heart was beating wildly. Taking a deep breath, I greeted the