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1、reci ion、imi ion（整篇背诵、模仿） reci ion、imi ion（整篇背诵、模仿） (trend,2、大作文（20分/15分开头what、中间why/effect、结尾how 3、小作文（10 分） trendstructure Trend1原题重现（仅替换漫画101月cultural (2002年卷2 / 05年to14年mutual05年to14年mutual数据单调/ 数据比133 / 话虚开头(描述) + 宽泛、宏观的点评，50话虚开头(描述) + 宽泛、宏观的点评，50 Howsuggestions: 规则，行为。60字左Coolstructure +lumino

2、us4 / 写作提纲. ensivelybybusinesscycle-economicoverestimationofeconomicprosperity,hesecuritiesandthecase:oneofmyfatherscolleagues,makeuseofinstallmentpolicy,写作提纲. ensivelybybusinesscycle-economicoverestimationofeconomicprosperity,hesecuritiesandthecase:oneofmyfatherscolleagues,makeuseofinstallmentpolic

3、y,speculateinreales emarket,onlypayoftotally-neededfundssess3apartments,withtheaggregatepriceoverRMB2million“cooperation”-layingdownthe deliveringthemoderateoutlookofensuringourinvestingmannersmoreMThe global economy, who is ng t stretcher, like a helpless-sick wreck, is being emergency treatment by

4、 worldwide-ing systems, which are trying their best to save the by cooperation. Conspicuously, this is a horrible ction related to/concerning the economic downturn the Several factors weigh heavily for this round of economic , yet there are two spended the top ofthe list which should never be of all

5、, the economic slide in business cycle, as the of economic crisis(the Great happening n 1929-1933 for le), would make its every 10-30 years onthe average, so would this time! Furthermore, the overestimation of economic prosperity has resulted in a great multitude of bubbles in the securities and the

6、 realties. A case in po is one of my colleagues, who made use of installment policy to speculate in real es e industry, thus, only paying 30% totally-neededfundssess3apartments,withtheaggregatepriceover RMB2Actually, it is not the Day of Judgment! What we are glad to see is the keyword“cooperation”!

7、 If the drastic measures would be taken immedia y,justaslayingdown theasso tive-effective disciplinetoprevent the crisis from spreading all over the world, delivering the moderate outlook of consumption and ensuring ourinvestingmannersmorerational,wewillsurelygetthroughthistoughperiodbefore（二）大作文：开头

8、whatwhy/effect、结尾What 虚开头（描述）+ 宽泛、宏观的点What 虚开头（描述5 / 2012It is hardly/barely difficult for us to figure out in the left half of2012It is hardly/barely difficult for us to figure out in the left half of picture given tdown-hearted and long-faced, is rooting in his chamber and regretting his unhappy b

9、ygones. However, in rightone,anotherman,bluepr -sufficientandenergy-continuous,is climbingupon aladdertoreachhispie bar 饼curve diagramlinechart 曲线（1）Thistableorderlyarrangestheinformation/percentagedistribution/proportionof, 句子(整体趋势具体数据) t 6 / case: 不同地区吸烟人数的比Eg：This table orderly arranges the infor

10、mation concerning the population of American smokers different es, t the weather andthe natural environment play critical roles in humanbeingslifely,Onthecontrary,（2）Thiscurvediagram indicatestyfluctuation of overtheperiodfromcase: 不同地区吸烟人数的比Eg：This table orderly arranges the information concerning

11、the population of American smokers different es, t the weather andthe natural environment play critical roles in humanbeingslifely,Onthecontrary,（2）Thiscurvediagram indicatestyfluctuation of overtheperiodfromto , 率This curve diagram indicates the period from 2001 to 2003, ty variation of juvenile op

12、-5 metropolises t high economic boom may panied by even more lorders. Tobeginwith,表示上升的趋势表示下降的趋势growgorocketriseupsurgedrop表示平衡的趋势：stabilize（stable/steady）keeplevel reak表示波动的趋势用于修饰的副词dramatically steadily increasedramaticallyby70 percentfrom1000in2001to1700inThethirdquarter,however,breakseven,slight

13、dropofonly0.3percentcomparedwiththeformer（二）大作文：开头whatwhy/effect、结尾What 虚开头（描述）+ It is a striking morning call / a typical wake-up call to send us a significant t has hespotlightincurrentsociety hasaroused wide concern at anycorner of our soEg: 家庭成It is a striking wake-up call to send us a significa

14、nt t the topic concerning the way / problem concerning how to get along properly with family members has he spotlight in 句) + 原因/影响+ 句Among the topic concerning 上位, as the dction/ pictureshows,themostcardinaltipisrelatedto the ie of Eg: 家庭关Among thetopic concerning familyer-holdingrelationship, asth

15、ection shows, the 7 / cardinaltipisrelatedtotheeofraising句人数Among the topic concerning pursuing knowledge abroad, as the dction shows, the most cardinal tip is related to the ieof whetheryouhavemade anelaborate preparationtofacethe newstudyingatmosphereandlifestyleinforeignSeveral factors could weig

16、h heavilyfor (the happening of) cardinaltipisrelatedtotheeofraising句人数Among the topic concerning pursuing knowledge abroad, as the dction shows, the most cardinal tip is related to the ieof whetheryouhavemade anelaborate preparationtofacethe newstudyingatmosphereandlifestyleinforeignSeveral factors

17、could weigh heavilyfor (the happening of) ,yet suspendedatthetopofthelistareo aspects. To begin with, . Additionally, Several factors could weigh heavily for the depressing se of Chi respectingandraisingseniors,yetsuspendedatthetopofthelistarethefollowintraditional virtue oIt is hardlysaryfor me to

18、cite all the evidence of the revolutionaryoperationgivesriseto.Tobeginwith, Apartfromt) the It is hardly sary for me to cite all the evidence of the revolutionary staffingthebureauresultsin. Tobeginwith, Apartfrom(t) the craze Agoodcaseblowingmymindnowis n. 人/物 , who/ Eg：Agoodcaseblowingmymindnowisa

19、worldwell-knownman,whosenameisBillGates,committinghimself tocharity industry after his retirement. Consequently, the highl ladder and the vast esteem are tothisgreatnotabilitywithout-expec 1. 单向话The factors contributing to a big rise/ a conspicuous slide/ a shocking aggravation in (n.) are vastly co

20、mplex. Some attribute it to （n.) . Others place the blame on / Others place the high value on (n.) . Still the rest complain of / attach importance toThe factors contributing to a big rise in teenager smoking are vastly complex. Some attribute it to juveniles themselves, who cannot resist temp ion f

21、rom their roommates producing the second-hand cigarettes ( t are) harmful to our health.Others place the blame on the neglectful parents who tolerate or even stimulate their kids to indulge 8 / clove cigarettes. Still the rest complain of the dramaticobaccosadvertisements as well as whichenablekidst

22、oapproach555,MarlboroandParliamentAccording to my , every sword is double-edged; this kind of cultural shift isclove cigarettes. Still the rest complain of the dramaticobaccosadvertisements as well as whichenablekidstoapproach555,MarlboroandParliamentAccording to my , every sword is double-edged; th

23、is kind of cultural shift is itive and negative. To begin with, it goes without distinctt the new-changed customs and habits On one hand, they abort the superstition and the ignorance of traditional accordancewiththefastrhythmofculture to keep On the other hand, they eliminate “culture gap” to provi

24、de more opportunities for communication as eraction among people of different nations, , colors and religions, thus, making our world 过渡句 Although/ While the new-changed customs and drawbackswhenthefollowingiso过渡句 joy considerable merits, they still have their Although/iddingfarewelltothenjoysconsid

25、erablemerits,itstillhasitsownA good case coming to my mind now is the comic ition of tgraduate English Exam, whichdescribestheeclipseofoneofthevirtuesreadilyraisingAfter all, lots of old traditions stand for the essence of our nations main-stream virtue. So, to discard nationsclassicculturallegacyma

26、ybeconsideredasakindofbetrayaltosomeHow suggestion （规，行为1.Laydowntheeffectiveregulationsto 呼2.Deliverthenoutlooktoguideusbothphysicallyand3.Exert/ implement/ practice the rational 词 manners to live in a ore harmonious Laydowntheavailable/reliableregulationstoprotecttherightsofLaydownthedrasticmeasur

27、estoprotecttheenvironmentinwhich weLaydowntheself-remindingdisciplinetocultivateourhabitsconcerningstudyingaswellasDeliverthemoderates/life/material/ world/knowledge/energy/moral/aestheticoutlooktousbothphysicallyandExert the rational energy-consuming s-attaining manners to live in a ore Asaclassics

28、ayinggoes,ajourneyofabeginssingle9 / t depending on the lack of Yet, it is very probable to / laws / education / moral manycitizens / youths would have beenimmersedin such an extreme condition for a longtime.t depending on the lack of Yet, it is very probable to / laws / education / moral manycitize

29、ns / youths would have beenimmersedin such an extreme condition for a longtime. Does opportunitiesforustomakeachange?/Issibletomake a “a journeyof abeginssingle step”.Wewill surelyhandle/ optimize / refrain fromaslongastheabovementionedalswouldbeimplementedimmedia t depending on the lack of l consen

30、sus, many citizens / Yet, it is very probable to would have been used to such a moral-disastrous condition for a long time. Is sible to make a single step”. We will Actually, as a classic saying goes, “a journey of a begins refrainfromabandoningourselvestotheslumpofmoralityaslongastheabovementionedi

31、mplementedimmedia alswouldt depending on the lack of available legal Yet, it goes without any , citizens / youths would have been immersed in such a consumerism-oriented era for a long time. Does opportunities for us to make a change? Actually, as a classic saying goes, “a journey of a begins single

32、 step”. We will surely build a thriftylifestyle as long as the above mentioned wouldbeimplementedy# It isdescribedbythettheagingproblemhasshownanirreversibletrendinChina.As can see, the ders above 60 years old he whole population has risen up steadily 0.4%-0.8%age every yearfrom 11.6% in2007to 13.7%

33、 in2011, which has broughta heavy burdento lsecurity10 /Generally speaking, the aging society is the strongest proof of a countrys sound development. It is difficult for us to figure out itive sign in developed countries. However, what we should not ignore is complicatedsituationinour, China is Gene

34、rally speaking, the aging society is the strongest proof of a countrys sound development. It is difficult for us to figure out itive sign in developed countries. However, what we should not ignore is complicatedsituationinour, China is a vast economic and political entity with the huge population. I

35、f there are too many olds relatively less youngsters, we ve enough labors available to keep our development sustainable. Chinas l securitysystem, involving insurancemechanism, health care policy, etc., is still in a low-level, whichcanbarelymeettheneedsof vastmajorityofThus, we still have along hard

36、 trail to blaze. t the aging problem is termed as a critical to l stability, we have all reasons to be serious about it. Also, systemimmedia ytobuildupasenseofjusticeandernment should reform the Its the eresting cartoon Iveever he latest 10-year real rs. We can he under every with pairs of words, fo

37、r le, justice (left) and efficiency(right), environment anddevelopment(right),etc.If the he right scissors the rope, both the he leftand himself/herself will lose the chance survive.Actually,tohurtsomeoneisgoodtononebut worsetoyourself,asaclassicsayingThesedays, weveseenalot ofmoral disastersvialnet

38、works. Theunderlyingreasonforourindhurt each other t we are used to let our own ego he background of the “fast and furious” development, every specific al options.Normally, the wayto fit the can feel under unspeakable re due to the limited occupations ituation is to change yourself. However, fewpeop

39、le are willing to get of the way of themselves. Rather, they have indulged themselves in egoistic impulse, sacrificeothersay lead them Whats worse, it is hard to be aware of the teraction abounds in human society, eans hurt someone today, they will send you a negative feedback no matter accidentally

40、 entionally. For itsveryirrational tol he name of efficiencybecausetheterminal of happinessis caretowardseveryonentherichnessofminority.Whenefficiencykillsjustice,hehimself willdie11 /Forthesakeofyourself, pleasecherisheverylittledripofotherskindnessanddiscardtheDevil Forthesakeofyourself, pleaseche

41、risheverylittledripofotherskindnessanddiscardtheDevil ）Dear Professor Itismygreathonortoextendyouour sincereinvi ionofanacademicforumheldon具体时间in/at地点whichfocusesonthetopicThe forum mentioned above will be arranged as ly, at 8 am. will startthe opening of the which includes a brief presen ion with r

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