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1、02-国画展仿写之分析和下水作文假定你是李华，你校最近举办了主题为uGrowing up with the Red Songsv的校园音乐会。请你为校英文 报写一篇报道，内容包括：.时间、地点.音乐会过程.同学们的感受注意：1）词数80左右；2）可适当增加细节，可是行文连贯。审题：（此文当做对浙江卷国画展作文的仿写）此文为报道，时态已一般过去时为主，人称：第三人称为主；尾段已第一人称为主首段：点名音乐会时间和地点主体段：音乐会过程，这也是对于同学来讲最难的局部，就是不知道写什么。结合浙江卷国画展的写法, 思考音乐会应该是怎样的。可参考我们学校平时组织的文艺晚会，无非就是主持人，演员两类 人，而

2、这些人无非就是老师和学生，由他们来表演节目，此为共同点一；共同点二就是一般开 头和结束的时候都会有大合唱，可以考虑；而区别的是：常规的文艺晚会各种形式都有，这个 音乐会要局限于“红歌”，既然是“红歌”，那就只能是弹唱或者跳了，围绕这几点去展开， 思路就慢慢成形了。推荐写法：1）.音乐会开头和结尾；2）.音乐会中尾段：同学们的感受。注意：这段很容易写自己的感受，那么审题就出现偏差了！语言组织：.星期六晚上，一场已“Growing with the Red Songs”为主题音乐会在学校礼堂举行。A concert themed Growing with the Red Songs/with it

3、s theme Growing with the Red Songs” was held in the school hall on Saturday night.（此句90%以上使用our school作主语，用主动，个人认为被动会更好）.音乐会以老师们的合唱春天的故事开始。期间来自于各个班级的学生演唱或演奏了人们耳熟能详 的乐曲。The concert began with a chorus sung by teachers-the Story of the Spring, during which the students from different classes sang or p

4、erfbmied many songs that were familiar to people.音乐会最后，当合唱我爱你，中国，台下的同学们也伴随着动人的旋律，满怀激情地 放声歌唱，At the end of the concert, the students off stage sang I Love You, China with great passion/passionately to the charming music while the chorus rang out.音乐会很受学生们的欢迎，许多人说，这真的是一场耳朵的盛宴。The concert gained great p

5、opularity with the students. The majority of them said that it was really a great feat fbr the ears.音乐会不但让同学们更好地了解了中国的历史和成长历程，还弘扬了中国优秀的传统文化，培养了学 生的爱国精神。Not only did the concert allow students to have a better understanding of the history and development of China, but it also promoted the splendid tr

6、aditional culture and cultivated their patriotism.结合上面分析和理解，屠屠老师下水作文：A concert themed Growing with the Red Songs/with its theme Growing with the Red Songs was held in the school hall on Saturday night.The concert began with a chorus sung by teachers-the Story of the Spring, during which the students

7、 from different classes sang or performed many songs that were familiar to people. At the end of the concert, the students off stage sang I Love You, China with great passion/passionately to the charming music while the chorus rang out.The concert gained great popularity with the students. The major

8、ity of them said that it was really a great feast fbr the ears. Not only did the concert allow students to have a better understanding of the history and development of China, but it also promoted the splendid traditional culture and cultivated their patriotism.参考例文Our school held a concert themed Z

9、/Growing with the Red Songs in the school hall last Sunday.The concert began at 4:00pm. There was not an empty seat in the hall. First, a group of young teachers sang the well-known red song “The Eat is Red, their singing was full of feelings and really touched my heart. Then students from different

10、 class played a few red songs and gave some creative performances. We finished the concert with the song Ode to the Motherland.Throughout the concert, the atmosphere inside the hall was exciting and encouraging. While we watched and listened, we felt proud of being Chinese and we new out country wou

11、ld become stronger and more beautiful.今日作业仿写：假定你是李华，上周你校举办了中国古典音乐演奏会。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1,时间和地点；.演奏内容；.音乐会反响。注意：1）词数80左右；2）可适当增加细节，可是行文连贯。A Chinese Classical Music Concertwas held in the school hall on Saturday night.The concert was really popular with the students, Many said that they would pass on

12、the traditional music and look forward to the next music feast.A Chinese classical music concert was held in the school hall on Saturday night.（被动比主动 好）Many masterpieces of ancient musicians（of+名词作后置定语）,such as High Mountain and Flowing water and The Spring Snow were played by a famous band. The stu

13、dents present felt the mountain, the water; the winter snow the silk bamboo and the endless call of life flowing in the air at the concert. Additionally, students from different classes also performed music that was familiar to people.The concert gained great popularity with the students, especially those who love Chinese classical music. It was really a great f