2022新高考一、二卷读后续写：越野跑比赛

1、2022年6月新高考卷（1、2）读后续写越野跑比赛CONTENTS解读续写文本1抓伏笔自问式思路启发2下水作文3相似续写考题对比4小情节构建及可读性细节描写5PART One解读续写文本 It was the day of the big cross-country run. Students from seven different primary schools in and around the small town were warming up and walking the route(路线)through thick evergreen forest. I looked arou

2、nd and finally spotted David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence. He was small for ten years old. His usual big toothy smile was absent today. I walked over and asked him why he wasnt with the other children. He hesitated and then said he had decided not to run. What was wrong? H

3、e had worked so hard for this event! I quickly searched the crowd for the schools coach and asked him what had happened “I was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him” he explained uncomfortably. “I gave him the choice to run or not, and let him decide.” I bit back my frustration(懊恼).

4、I knew the coach meant well - he thought he was doing the right thing. After making sure that David could run if he wanted, I turned to find him coming towards me, his small body rocking from side to side as he swung his feet forward. David had a brain disease which prevented him from walking or run

5、ning like other children, but at school his classmates thought of him as a regular kid. He always participate to the best of his ability in whatever they were doing. That was why none of the children thought it unusual that David had decided to join the cross-country team. It just took longer -thats

6、 all. David had not missed a single practice, and although he always finished run long after the other children, he did always finish. As a special education teacher at the school, I was familiar with the challenges David faced and was proud of his strong determination.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的

7、相应位置作答。We sat down next to each other, but David wouldnt look at me. I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners.PART Two抓伏笔自问式思路启发Story plotDavid : with a brain disease Prepare for the cross-country raceStory plotOther kids in the school accepted what David chose to doHe

8、 feared the kids in the other six different primary schools Shadowing David had a brain disease which prevented him from walking or running like other children, but at school his classmates thought of him as a regular kid. He always participate to the best of his ability in whatever they were doing.

9、 That was why none of the children thought it unusual that David had decided to join the cross-country team. It just took longer -thats all. David had not missed a single practice, and although he always finished run long after the other children, he did always finish. As a special education teacher

10、 at the school, I was familiar with the challenges David faced and was proud of his strong determination.David was determined to go and I knew his challenges.So what I would do when I learned David was ashamed of his physical condition facing the kids from other schools?We sat down next to each othe

11、r, but David wouldnt look at me. I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners.1. Why did David not look at me?2. How should I comfort and encourage him?3. What would David do ? 1. Did David agree to run the race？2. How did the audience from the other six school react? 3. W

12、hat was the result of the race for David? ThemeWill he overcome the fear of being laughed at?Ending & ThemeWill he be changed by his decision to run?Ending & ThemeThe power of running is to inspireEnding & Theme Do what you can with what you have PART Three下水作文下水作文 We sat down next to each other, bu

13、t David didnt look at me. He lowered his head and wriggled his hands. “Do you fear the audience will laugh at you?” Asked I. He nodded with shame and guilt. It suddenly dawned on me that he was ashamed of his physical condition. I hugged him firmly, “I have faith in you and you will not be looked do

14、wn upon. Instead, everyone will cheer up for your efforts to make it!” David was inspired instantly and accepted to run. I watched him move up to the starting line. As the signal to run ignited, runners shot out like bullets, except David. He dragged his leg with great efforts, step by step. All the

15、 audience realized that he was determined to go in spite of physical weakness, and they exploded exclamation. With everyones encouragement, David finally finished the race, though it was the last one to accomplish. People were deeply moved by his perseverance and it was the dearest thing in sportsma

16、nship.下水作文 We sat down next to each other, but David wouldnt look at me. Clearing my throat, I started,Now, could you tell me your real thought, David? Hesitated, he customarily lowered his head and averted my gaze, numb there for seconds. I patted his head gently and said, I am always proud of your

17、 strong determination. I know you will always participate to the best of your ability in whatever you were doing. Just be yourself. Shortly afterwards, inspired, he took a deep breath, summoned up his courage, I, I would like to give it a shot. Hearing his decision, I hugged David tightly and promis

18、ed I would accompany him until the end of the competition. I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. The eyes of the audience from other schools fell upon David. So embarrassed was he that he wanted to disappear from the spot. I gave him a determined look, smiling and

19、cheering for him, which seemed to boast his courage and he nodded at me with confidence. The competition began. As time went by, the distance between him and other runners was widening. Struggling to to keep his legs moving, he ran faster than ever. He used up all his power to march on. I watched wi

20、th amusement as he gradually shortened the distance. 200 meters. 100 meters. 50 meters left! Although David was the last one, the whole audience burst into thunderous applause as they watched David. Upon dashing towards the finishing line, the roar of the audiences cheers was thundering all around t

21、he spot. I trotted towards David and gave him a bear hug. You did it! I said with a trembling but pleasant voice. David cast his usual big toothy smile and said, Thank you, it was you that who made me realize Id always come out a winner if I wanted something badly enough to work for it. Just be myse

22、lf, and I can be the master of my own destiny.题源原文题源原文题源原文PART Four小情节构建及可读性细节描写小情节1. 表示难过 He nodded and bit his lip, tears welling up his eyes. 他点点头，咬了咬嘴唇，眼泪涌上了眼睛。他很难过，我能看到他眼中的泪水，但他尽力不哭出来。He was very upset and I could see tears in his eyes but he tried very hard not to burst out crying. 小情节2. 受到启发“

23、I believe that with ongoing efforts, you will finish the run and everyone will applaud your efforts”. David raised his head, with brilliant sparkle in his eyes. “我相信，通过不断的努力，你将完成跑步，每个人都会为你的努力喝彩”。大卫抬起头，眼中闪烁着灿烂的光芒。我对你有信心，你不会被看不起。相反，每个人都会为你的努力而欢呼！”大卫立即受到鼓舞，接受了跑步。I have faith in you and you will not be

24、looked down upon. Instead, everyone will cheer up for your efforts to make it!” David was inspired instantly and accepted to run. 小情节3. 主题升华Although David was the last one to finish, his determination and persistence were beyond description. 虽然大卫是最后一个完成比赛的人，但他的决心和毅力是无法形容的。人们被他的毅力深深打动，这是体育精神中最宝贵的东西。P

25、eople were deeply moved by his perseverance and it was the dearest thing in sportsmanship. PART Five相似续写考题对比The football season, was almost over. Sally had been playing football all summer. She really enjoyed running around with the other players in her bright orange uniform, chasing the black and w

26、hite ball across the grassy field. As much as she tried, though, Sally still had not scored one single goal.Before each game, they had a practice session. The coach showed Sally and her team how to pass the ball to each other and take shots at the goal. Sally was pretty good at passing the ball, but

27、 even during practices, she couldnt kick the ball past the goalkeeper. She wondered if she should quit football and join a different club.“Dont give up,” said the coach. But it was half-time, and Sally was feeling frustrated (沮丧). She was trying! Every time she got a chance to kick the ball, it woul

28、d go in the wrong direction or a player from the other team would take control of it. She sipped at her cola and pouted (撅嘴).The break was over and the referee blew his whistle to start the game again. The two teams walked back onto the field, both determined to win. Sally bent, tied up her shoelace

29、 and heard her mother whisper in her ear. “Stay focused. Keep your eyes on the ball. Look for an opportunity to get the ball. You can do it.”Sally stood up and took a deep breath. Even if she didnt get one goal all summer, she knew that she had tried her best. That was something to be proud of. So s

30、he smiled at her mother and headed to her position. The whistle blew, and the game continued.The score was tied with one goal each. The green team was pretty good, but Sallys orange team was fast. The girls ponytails bounced as they ran, with many feet kicking frantically (拼命地) at the ball when it c

31、ame near them. It was a rather boring game and Sallys heart was no longer in it. Sally started daydreaming about joining other school clubs.Recalling her mothers words, Sally was woken from her daydream.2021年深圳市高三年级第一次调研考试Sally started daydreaming about joining other school clubs. She could be a mem

32、ber of the hip hop club, which her best friend Tracy kept talking about. She imagined herself dancing on stage of a big auditorium with thousands of people cheering for her. She could also try a different sport, like jogging or cycling. Anyway, football would be her last choice. Just as her mind was

33、 wandering, she saw a familiar face in the crowd. It was her mother. “Stay focused. You can do it.”Recalling her mothers words, Sally was woken from her daydream. At that very moment, her teammate passed the ball to her. She took control of it and dribbled it between her feet, moving forward toward

34、the net of the green team. She passed a few players and was soon positioned right in front of the net. Focused on the ball, she kicked it as hard as she could. The referee blew her whistle. “Goal!” Sallys team won. Her mom was right. All she had to do was to stay focused.Para 1 Sally started daydreaming abou