2022高考英语写作备考之读后续写2则：爱的教育 善意暖人心

1、2022高考英语写作备考之读后续写2那么:爱的教育 善意暖人心原题阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短 文。续写的词数应为150左右。Tom was a young boy with a hard life. He wasnz t interested in studying. When Tom was in fifth grade, Mrs. Janet was asked to teach his class. She gradually noticed the boy. Months after Janet saw no improvement in T

2、oms performance, she decided to learn more about him.So one day, she entered the archive（档案室）.She found that in Grade lz Tom showed promise as a good student. But in Grade 2, his mom was terribly ill and his studies were affected. In Grade 3, his mom passed away. Toms grades worsened completely in h

3、is fourth grade. He was hardly at school. When he did attend classes, he showed no interest in studying and got terrible grades. And his father tried hard to support the family and could spare little time for Tom. Janet sadly left the archive, deciding to pay more attention to Tom.Soon, it was the l

4、ast day of the first term. And it was a tradition for children of Toms school to present their teachers with gifts to thank them for their hard work. It happened every year. And the children looked forward to it; the teachers would open the gifts right before their eyes.That year, Tom put his mother

5、7 s bracelet（手镯）in a shoebox and packaged the shoebox using cheap paper. When he gave Janet the shoebox, Toms classmates laughed because it looked so broken and dirty. They were certain it must have been taken from a rubbish can. Janet quieted the kids and opened the box. They saw a bracelet with so

6、me stones missing.The kids started laughing again at Tom, s unimpressive gift. However, Janet was very glad to receive it. She found the bracelet was beautiful even with some stones missing. She knew it was not easy for Tom to prepare a gift for her. Then she said out loud, “Tom, please help me put

7、the bracelet on.Paragraph 1: “Okay, Madam,“ Tom said shyly and stepped forward to help.Paragraph 2: Just before Tom would leave, Janet said, Id like to help with your studies.写作思路分析从前文可知，Tom因为母亲去世影响了学习成绩。Janet老师默默关注着Tom , 希望能帮助他。很快就到了第一学期的最后一天。学校的传统是每一个学生给老师送 礼物。Tom送Janet老师的礼物是她妈妈的手镯。但是因为包装破旧，受到了同学们

8、 的嘲笑。Janet老师不希望Tom被嘲笑，请求Tom帮她戴上手镯。从 Paragraph 1: “Okay, Madam,z Tom said shyly and stepped forward to help.可知，Tom害羞地走上前来帮助。接下来可以描写，Tom仔细地帮Janet老师 戴上手镯，老师接下来地反响，语言和动作。同学们的反响，态度的转变。从Paragraph 2: Just before Tom would leave, Janet said, Id like to help with your studies. 可知，老师在Tom离开前告诉他，想要帮助他学习。接下来可以描写

9、,Tom的反响， 回答和心情。Tom之后在学习态度和学习成绩上的变化以及对老师的感激。参考范文Paragraphl:“Okay, Madam/ Tom said shyly and stepped forward to help. After Janet put the bracelet on with Toms help, she asked all the kids, Isnt it beautiful? Most of them nodded. In this way, she managed to stop Tom from getting laughed at. After the

10、other kids left, Tom walked up to Janet, saying softly, My moms bracelet looks pretty on you. Im glad you like it, Mrs. Janet. His words touched Janets heart. She realized it was the most precious gift she had ever received.Paragraph 2:Just before Tom would leave, Janet said, Id like to help with yo

11、ur studies. Tom gladly agreed. When the next term began, Tom changed his attitude towards study. Whenever he met problems, he would actively ask Janet for help. Janet always explained the problems to him patiently and praised him when he made progress. Gradually, Tom showed a great improvement in hi

12、s school work. Janet continued helping him. After the final exams, Tom got the best grades in his class. He thanked Janet deeply for what she had done for him.高考英语读后续写：善意暖人心原题阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。When Jessica and her husband Edward welcomed their first child, they quickly understood that pa

13、renting would not be easy. Edward owned a textile 纺织 business in Texas, but it was struggling. With a baby at home now, expenses went up, while income stayed the same or even went down in some months. There was constantly a lack of money.Luckily, Edwards business grew slowly, and Jessica managed to

14、save some money. But just when it appeared that they would be having a less stressful month, another problem knocked at their door: the washing machine broke down again.After considering her options, Jessica realized that there was no point in getting the machine repaired. Jessica sat down to search

15、 online for a machine that she could afford. An hour of searching led her to one good find, but it cost $250, and Jessica could only afford to pay $150. In the end, she decided to see the owner James in person.Upon arrival, a man opened the door. There was sadness in his eyes. z,How may I help you?”

16、 he asked. Hi! r m Jessica. I messaged you regarding the washing machine. Can I have a look at it? Oh , sure. Come inz James said. It seemed that the man was planning to move away.Well, I hope you remember I said I wanted to talk about the price, Jessica said embarrassedly. I cant extend my budget b

17、eyond $150.We just had a babyz and you know things are not so well financially, so I am wondering if you could give me a discount?James stood there silently for a while. The woman, s sincere request made him think about his wife again, who had just passed away. He remembered she once told him that i

18、f he had the resources , he should help those who are less fortunate. Then he nodded his head in agreement. Sure. $ 150 sounds like a good deal to me, he said. Jessica7 s eyes widenedin surprise. Really? You are so nice. Thank you so much!Paragraph 1: As Jessica entered the roomf she saw the white m

19、achine.Paragraph 2: After getting homef Jessica was shocked to find $150 in the machine.写作思路分析从原文可知Jessica 一家最近生活过得比拟艰难，恰巧洗衣机又坏了。Jessica打算买 一台新洗衣机，但是看中的洗衣机250美元Jessica的预算只有150美元。于是Jessica 打算亲自见店主James讲价。James的妻子刚刚去世，他非常悲伤。Jessica在讲价时， James想起了妻子说过的话，如果James有足够的资源，那么他应该帮助没那么走运的 人“。所以 James 打算帮助 Jessi

20、cao 根据 Paragraph l:As Jessica entered the room, she saw the white machine.可知，Jessica进屋去看新的洗衣机。第一段可以描写，Jessica 看到新洗衣机之后激动的心情，对James的感激。付钱买下了洗衣机。根据Paragraph 2: Aftergetting home, Jessica was shocked to find $150 in the machine.可矢口，Jessica 回家后，震惊地发现洗衣机里有150美元。第一段还可以描写3ames把Jessica买洗衣 机的150美元放回到了洗衣机里。可以

21、描写此时James的动作和心理。第二段可以写, Jessica看到钱之后的反响和心情。这一经历对Jessica之后生活的影响。突出善良，温暖， 感恩的文章主题。参考范文Paragraph 1:As Jessica entered the room, she saw the white machine. It appeared brand new, exactly as she had seen it online. After checking the washing machine, Jessica was quite satisfied and quickly paid for it. Then James carried the huge machine to Jessicas car. Before m