中考英语写作公开课(共25张)课件

1、A Lesson of WritingA Lesson of Writing假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。 英语课上老师要求展开小组调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班 内汇报。 请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查汇报。SurveyNamesHobbiesDream JobsReasonsYi KewritingwriterBring her pleasure and successLi Ruitrave11ingguideExperience 1ife and 1earn about different cu1turesWu Fan1

2、ooking after anima1sWWF workerhe1p anima1s 1ive in peaceI(Xiao Peng) 假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。 英语课上老师要求展开小组How to write a composition.How to write a composition.认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息。写作第一步审写作第一步审假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。 英语课上老师要求展开小组调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班 内汇报。 请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查

3、汇报。SurveyNamesHobbiesDream JobsReasonsYi KewritingwriterBring her pleasure and successLi Ruitrave11ingguideExperience 1ife and 1earn about different cu1turesWu Fan1ooking after anima1sWWF workerhe1p anima1s 1ive in peaceI(Xiao Peng) 主题字数人称体裁提示要点补充信息一般现在时时态假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。 英语课上老师要求展开小组用简单的句子或短语列出文章要

4、点。列写作第二步用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。列写作第二步 Yi Kes hobby is writing. She wants to be a writer. She thinks writing makes her relaxed and it brings her pleasure and success. Li Rui likes travelling best. He wants to be a guide . He can experience different life and learn about different cultures. Wu Fan s hobby is

5、 looking after animals. He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace. My dream is to work at school . I want to be an English teacher.Because I like speaking English. I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased. Yi Kes hobby is writing. 加加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾

6、的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。写作第三步：加加首尾，使结构完整。写作第三步：Yi Kes hobby is writing. She wants to be a writer.Writing brings her pleasure and success. Li Rui likes travelling best. He wants to be a guide . He can experience different life and learn about different cultures.Wu Fan s hobby is looking after animals. He wants t

7、o be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace.I want to be an English teacher.I like speaking English. I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased. Boys and girls，Everyone has hobbies and dreams.Now let me share ours with you.I hope we enjoy our hobbies and our dreams can come tr

8、ue.a nice heada nice taila nice bodyYi Kes hobby is writing. She 连恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。写作第四步：连恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。写作英语写作时常用的过渡语:表并列或递进：and, besides, bothand，not onlybut also，whats more, 表转折：but, yet, however, though，although表因果关系：because, so, therefore, as a result表先后顺序：First, Second, T

9、hird, Next, Then, Finally表时间关系：when, while, after, before, then, 表列举说明：for example , for instance, such as发表观点：in my opinion, to my understanding, from my point of view,表总结陈词：in general, all in all, in a word, generally speaking英语写作时常用的过渡语:表并列或递进：and, besid Boys and girls，Everyone has hobbies and dr

10、eams.Now let me share ours with you.Yi Kes hobby is writing. She wants to be a writer. She thinks writing makes her relaxed and it brings her pleasure and success. Li Rui likes travelling best. He wants to be a guide . he can experience different life and learn about different cultures.Wu Fan s hobb

11、y is looking after animals. He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace.I want to be an English teacher. I like speaking English. I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased. I hope we enjoy our hobbies and our dreams can come true.alsoIn this wayBecause Boys and girl

12、s，alsoIn this wa美选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。写作第五步：美选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。写Boys and girls，Everyone has hobbies and dreams.Now let me share ours with you.Yi Kes hobby is writing. So she thinks writing makes her relaxed and it also brings her pleasure and success. Li Rui likes travelling best. I

13、n this way he can experience different life and learn about different cultures.Wu Fan s hobby is looking after animals. I want to be an English teacher. Because I like speaking English. I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased. I hope we enjoy our hobbies and our dreams can come

14、 true.She wants to be a writer .She wants to be a successful writer in the future, just like Mo Yan. He wants to be a guide . He is looking forward to travelling abroad so he wants to be a guide in foreign countries. He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace. When she grows up, she w

15、ants to be a WWF worker to save the animals in danger and help animals live in peace.Boys and girls，She wants to be适当运用名言或俗语Time is money. 一寸光阴一寸金Time waits for no man.岁月不待人Knowledge is power.知识就是力量Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者，事竟成Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧Its never too old to learn. 活

16、到老，学到老适当运用名言或俗语Time is money. 一寸光阴一寸Skill One Make your sentences correctGood good study, day day up.We should do sports a week once.Watch TV too much is bad for your eyes.There is going to have a meeting today.I hope I can come true my dream.once a weekWatchingbeachieveSkill One Make your sentences

17、Skill Two Express in different ways When he spoke, he got more excited. The more he spoke, the more excited he got. We should learn English grammar. Its important to learn English grammar.Skill Two Express in differe 他们在海滩上听音乐。 A They listened to the music on the beach.B They enjoyed the music on th

18、e beach. 他们在海滩上听音乐。 A They listene 她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。A She is very young. She cant carry the heavy box.B She is too young to carry the heavy box.C She is so young that she cant carry the D She is not old enough to carry the 她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。A She is v书面表达写作技巧审列加连美书面表达写作技巧审列加连美中考作文评分标准第五档（很好）（25-21分） 完全完成了试

19、题规定的任务，涵盖了所有内容要点，或在发挥时内容有新意或亮点；语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。第四档（好）（20-16分） 完成试题规定的任务，涵盖了基本内容要点；语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。第三档（一般）（15-11分） 基本完成试题规定的任务，写出了一些内容；语言有一些错误，行文不够连贯。第二档（较差）（10-6分） 未能恰当完成试题规定的任务，只能写出个别要点；语言错误较多，未能清楚传达信息。第一档（差）（5-0分） 未能完成试题规定的任务，只能写出与内容有关的一些单词；语言错误较多，未能清楚传达信息。中考作文评分标准第五档（很好）（25-21分）Rome is not

20、 built in a day.Tips:1. 卷面工整。2. 规范写作过程。3. 多背诵美文，积累素材。Rome is not built in a day.TipHave a Try!Have a Try!书面表达以 “I have a dream”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文。Sentence patterns for reference(以下句型供参考）My dream is to be/to do/to goI enjoy /like/preferTo make my dream come true, I If my dream comes true书面表达以 “I have a dream”为题写一篇不少于Thanks !Thanks !1.学习语文是一种享受，你会发现语文学习是在与另一个人对话，也是在与自己对话。每当你读一篇文章时，仿佛作者就在你身边，他的经历、他的情感都进入了你心中。2.不论读名家名篇，还是自己创作，你会更清楚地认识到自己，每次学习语文，其实都是对