2023届新高考英语写作精讲和模板5申请信-(解析)

专题01・5申请信2023届新高考英语写作精讲+写作模板.(2022.陕西渭南二模)为加强外籍人员的管理，确保新冠疫情防控工作稳定、常态化进行，市应疫办现公开招募暑期疫情防控(theepidemicpreventionandcontrolproject)志愿者。假设你是李华，符合招募条件,现申请报名。招募条件：年满18周岁，有意愿参加志愿者服务，英语交流能力强。注意：1.词数100左右：.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】DearSir/Madam,IamLihua,an18-year-oldseniorschoolstudent.Knowingthatyouarerecruitingvolunteersfortheepidemicpreventionandcontrolproject,Iamwritingtoapplyforit.Theepidemicpreventionandcontrolworkishappeningasadailyroutineinourcountry.Asapartofthesociety,Ifeelmorethanobligedtocontributetoit.IbelieveIamaqualifiedcandidate.Myexperienceasavolunteerlastyearintheepidemicpreventionandcontrolprojectenablesmetohaveabetterunderstandingofthiswork.Moreover,IamcapableofspeakingEnglishfluently,whichisbeneficialtoEnglishcommunication.Iwillbegratefulifyouwouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Yourssincerely.Lihua【简要分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文之申请信写作。要求考生给市应疫办公室写一封申请做志愿者的信。题干所给的要点比拟多也较为分散，故考生要将要点捋一捋、并一并、顺一顺。第一段：自我介绍（把自己的年龄顺在这里表达）、写信的缘由（得知对方正在为防疫工程招募志愿者，表示自己的申请愿望）；第二段：申请做志愿者的背景（新冠疫情防控工作稳定、常态化进行，作为社会的一分子，觉得自己有义务为社会做出贡献。根据招募条件简介自己）；第三段：表示期望。【句式拓展】原句：Knowingthatyouarerecruitingvolunteersfortheepidemicpreventionandcontrolproject,Iamwritingtoapplyforit.拓展：AsIknowyouarerecruitingvolunteersfortheepidemicpreventionandcontrolproject,Iamwritingtoapplyforit.【亮点句型】.Knowingthatyouarerecruitingvolunteersfortheepidemicpreventionandcontrolproject,Iamwritingtoapplyforit.（运用了现在分词作原因状语）.Moreover,IamcapableofspeakingEnglishfluently,whichisbeneficialtoEnglishcommunication.（运用了非限制性定语从句）.（2022・广东高三阶段练）假定你是高三学生李华，你校正在组织由外教Mr.Smith选拔两名同学参加英国牛津大学（UniversityofOxford）的冬令营。请你给外教Mr.Smith发一封邮件申请参加。内容包括：1.自我介绍；.申请理由；.期待获准。注意：1,词数80左右；.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】DearMr.Smith,IamLiHua,aSeniorThreestudent.HavinglearnedawintercampwillbeheldbytheUniversityofOxford,Iamwritingtoapplyforaplace.Tostartwith,IcanspeakEnglishfluentlyandI'malwaystryingtoimprovemycommunicationskills.Whafsmore,IamafriendlypersonwhoiseasytogetonwithandIlovetoworkwithothersinateam.ThisprogramattractsmesomuchbecauseitwillnotonlygivemeachancetogettoknowmydreamschoolbutalsoaddtomyunderstandingofWesternculture*IhopeIcouldbechosentotakepartinthiscampandIamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【简要分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文之申请信写作。要求考生给外教Mr.Smith发一封邮件申请参加英国牛津大学的冬令营选拔活动。信中内容包括：自我介绍；申请理由以及期待获准。题干所给要点非常笼统，开放度较大。考生要重点围绕“申请理由”来扩展要点（英语熟练程度、与他人的沟通、相处与合作等等）才能顺利完成写作任务。三段式写作：第一段：自我介绍，写信的目的（包括与申请相关的信息）；第二段：申请理由；第三段：期待获准和写申请信的套语。【句式拓展】2.句式拓展陈述句变倒装句原句：ThisprogramattractsmesomuchbecauseitwillnotonlygivemeachancetogettoknowmydreamschoolbutaddtomyunderstandingofWesternculture.拓展：ThisprogramattractsmesomuchbecausenotonlywillitgivemeachancetogettoknowmydreamschoolbutaddtomyunderstandingofWesternculture.【亮点句型】.Whafsmore,IamafriendlypersonwhoiseasytogetonwithandIlovetoworkwithothersinateam.（is用了who引导的限制性定语从句）.ThisprogramattractsmesomuchbecauseitwillnotonlygivemeachancetogettoknowmydreamschoolbutaddtomyunderstandingofWesternculture.（运用了notonly...butalso…固定句型）.（2022.全国.高三专题练习）假设你是李华，现正在在英国学习，担任学校中国语言与文化社社长。近期，校学生会发布了举办“国际文化节”的通知，请结合通知要求写一封邮件申请参加此活动。AnnouncementThisistoinformthattheannualInternationalCulturalFestivalistobeheldonJune15th,2022.AnystudentclubthatintendstojoinpleasesendanemailtobyMay15th,2022toapplyforabooth（摊位）.Thenameoftheboothandmainactivitiesshouldbeincludedintheapplication.StudentUnion注意：1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearStudentUnion,Sincerelyyours,LiHua【答案】DearStudentUnion,IamLiHua,presidentofChinalanguageandCultureSocietyandnowI'mstudyinginEngland.IamgladtoknowthattheannualInternationalCulturalFestivalistobeheldonJune15th,2022.1amwritingtoapplyforabooth.ThenameoftheboothisChineseTeaArtShow,wherewewillintroducedifferentkindsofChineseTeaanditsbenefits.Chineseteaisconsideredasthemostbeneficialdrinkwithalonghistoryofplanting.Ithasbecomeagreen,healthyandpopulardrinkinourdailylife,throughwhichwecanenjoyahealthyandpleasantlife.BesidesstudentsvisitingourboothwillenjoydrinkingvariousChinesetea.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucantakemyapplicationintoaccount.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Sincerelyyours,LiHua【简要分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文之申请信写作。要求考生结合通知要求写一封邮件申请参加国际文化节活动。别看题干中英文文字那么多，但是题干实际所提供的要点却非常的少（李华，现正在在英国学习，担任学校中国语言与文化社社长）。其余的要点需要考生根据通知中的要求“Thenameoftheboothandmainactivitiesshouldbeincludedinthe叩plication”去设计。考生要围绕自己熟悉或有话可说的话题去设计要点。比方范文就是围绕群众化的话题“中国茶艺术秀（摊位名称）”来设计具体活动的。【句式拓展】原句：Chineseteaisconsideredasthemostbeneficialdrinkwithalonghistoryofplanting.拓展：Chineseteaisconsideredasthemostbeneficialdrink,whichhasalonghistoryofplanting.【亮点句型】.ThenameoftheboothisChineseTeaArtShow,wherewewillintroducedifferentkindsofChineseTeaandtheirbenefits.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句。）.Ithasbecomeagreen,healthyandpopulardrinkinourdailylife,throughwhichwecanenjoyahealthyandpleasantlife.（运用了throughwhich引导的非限制性定语从句。）.（2022.云南曲靖市第二中学高二期中）假定你是李华，目前正在英国学习，你校《文学评论》杂志现招聘助理编辑。请给负责人MsJohnson写一封电子邮件应聘。内容包括：1.写邮件的目的；.你的文学功底；.希望应聘成功。注意：1,词数100左右；.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。DearMsJohnson,Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearMsJohnson,I'mLiHua,aseniorthreestudentfromourschool.HavingreadTheLiteraryReviewmagazine'sadvertisementforeditorassistant,Ican'twaittosubmitmyapplicationfbrthepost.Borninaneducatedfamily,myparentsintroducedmetoliteratureataveryyoungage.IreadlotsoftheworldfamousandtheChineseclassics,whichhelpmebroadenmyhorizonsaswellasdevelopmyknowledgeofliterature.Besides,asanoutgoingandwarm-heartedgirl,Idoquitewellincollaboratingwithothersandworkingingroups.Furthermore,Iwonaprizeforcreativewritinginacity-levelcompetitionlastyear.Idohopethiswonderfulopportunitywouldbeofferedtome.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【简要分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文之申请信写作（该书面表达是一封应聘信，而实际上就是一封申请信）。要求考生（李华，目前正在英国学习）给学校《文学评论》杂志负责人MsJohnson写一封电子邮件应聘助理编辑一职。题干中已经将自我介绍、写信的背景和写信的目的交代清楚了（这是第一段所要表达的内容：李华,是学校的高三学生。读了《文学评论》杂志招聘编辑助理的广告，迫不及待地想申请这个职位）。第二段要求考生围绕“自己的文学功底”去设计要点。比方：与文学有关的家庭背景、阅读世界著名的和中国的经典文学著作、自己的性格、与他人合作以及在与文学有关的比赛中获奖情况等等。第三段表达希望应聘成功、并表示期待对方尽早回复。【句式拓展】原句：Idohopethiswonderfulopportunitywouldbeofferedtome.拓展：Iwouldappreciateitifthiswonderfulopportunitycouldbeofferedtome.【亮点句型】readlotsoftheworldfamousandtheChineseclassics,whichhelpmebroadenmyhorizonsaswellasdevelopmyknowledgeofliterature.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）2.Besides,asanoutgoingandwarm-heartedgirl,Idoquitewellincollaboratingwithothersandworkingingroups.（运用了动名词作宾语）5.（2022.江苏金陵中学高三阶段练）假定你是新华中学高三学生李华，在新闻报纸上看到某外资出版集团MrSmith刊登的招募翻译志愿者的广告，你的任务是把出版物中的英语翻译成中文。请根据广告写一封邮件。内容包括：1.自我介绍；.写信原因；.申请的优势。注意：1.词数100左右；2,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;.开头和结尾已写好，不计入总字数。DearMrSmith,Yoursfaithfully,LiHua【答案】DearMrSmith,I'mLiHua,aGrade3studentinXinhuaHighSchool.TdliketoapplyfbrthepositionasavolunteertranslatorafterIreadyouradvertisementinanewspaper.IdobelievethatIamqualifiedforthispostbecauseIhaveagoodcommandofbothEnglishandChinese.IhavestudiedEnglishforeightyears,andIoftenworkasapart-timeEnglishtouristguideinmyholidays.Additionally,IhavesomeexperienceintranslatingEnglishintoChinese.Lastbutnotleast,I'mquiteafasttypistandIcanusethe