任务型写作指导与训练课件

任务型写作指导与训练篇章结构有人曾将读写任务的篇章结构归纳如下，可作为参考：(1)标题。(有时不一定要求拟标题)(2)第一段：用一两句话概括所给短文内容要点，约30词。建议控制在25—35词之间。(3)第二段：议论文——过渡词引出主题句——自己的观点——例证，约100词。记叙文——过渡词+与阅读文章主题相同但情节不同的故事，约100词。(4)第三段：即总结句，套语配名言来进行点题，要前后呼应，三位一体，约30词。任务型写作模板

㈠Thepassagemainlytellsusabout________.Ittalksabout_____and_______,whichis_____.

㈡AsfarasIamconcerned,Ithinkthat_____.Because________________________________.

㈢Takemyselfforexample,Iexperiencedsuchathingthatmanyyearsago,1_____________.

㈣Astheoldsayinggoes,“___________”.Inaword,weshould__________and___________.（每段有主题句，整篇要有中心思想，忌各段“各自为政”。）概括的形式：“主题句+支撑句”即“主题+主题的什么”。文体主题句支撑句议论文文章论点（一句）文章论据（两三句）记叙文故事的写作目的/主题（一句）故事大意（两三句）说明文说明的对象/观点/现象解释/分述Practising阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Habits,whethergoodorbad,aregraduallyformed.Whenapersondoesacertainthingagainandagain,heisdrivenbysomeunseenforcetodothesamethingrepeatedly,andthenahabitisformed.Onceahabitisformed,itisdifficult,andsometimesimpossibletogetridof.Itisthereforeveryimportantthatweshouldpaygreatattentiontotheformationofhabits.Childrenoftenformbadhabits,someofwhichremainwiththemaslongastheylive.Olderpersonsalsoformbadhabitslastingaslongastheylive,andsometimesbecomeruinedbythem.Thereareotherhabitswhich,whenformedinearlylife,areofgreathelp.Manysuccessfulmensaythatmuchoftheirsuccesshassomethingtodowithcertainhabitsinearlylife,suchasearlyrisingandhonesty.Amongthehabitswhichchildrenshouldnotformarelaziness,tellinglies,stealing,copyinghomework,dislikinghardwork,hatingcooperatingwithothers,wasting,smokingandsoon,whicharealleasilyformedhabits.Weshouldkeepawayfromallthesebadhabits,andtrytoformsuchhabitsaswillbegoodforourselvesandothers.【写作要求】1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。【思路点拨】1.选取具体的某一方面来描述；2.应该描述自己的真实感受和体验；3.注意记叙和议论相结合；4.思路要清晰，用语要简洁，问题分析要透彻；5.注意句型和词汇的使用。【要点词汇】1.找理由掩盖错误

2.害怕3.编造4.养成习惯5.重新振作findexcusestocovermistakesbeafraidof…makeupdevelopthehabitofrefresh【句式结构】1.我有很多坏习惯，其中最坏的习惯就是我经常找理由掩盖错误。Ihavealotofbadhabits,_____________theworstoneisthatIoftenfoundexcusestocovermistakes.2.多亏我的班主任，他使我意识到我致命的坏习惯。_____________myheadteacher,hemademe_______________thatlife-threateninghabit.3.即使我有时迟到了，我告诉老师真相。___________Iwassometimeslate,Itoldmyteacherthetruth.amongwhichThankstoawareofEvenif【佳作欣赏】Habits,whethergoodorbad,aregraduallyformedbyanunseenforce.Onceformed,theyarehardorevenimpossibletogetridof.Soforyourgood,breakbadhabitsandbuildsmartones!Ihavealotofbadhabits,amongwhichtheworstoneisthatIoftenfoundexcusestocovermistakes.Longtimeago,becauseofmylaziness,Ioftengotuplate,andwasafraidofscoldingsorpunishmentsfromteachers.SoImadeupvarietiesofexcusestopersuademyteacherstobelieveme.GraduallyIdevelopedthehabitoftellingliesautomatically.Thankstomyheadteacher,hemademeawareofthatlife-threateninghabit.First,Igotanalarmjustlikeareminder,setthetime,andgotupontime.EvenifIwassometimeslate,Itoldmyteacherthetruth.Ijustreplacedthisbadhabitwithasmartone,whichwasthekeywaytorefreshmyself.Honestyisthebestpolicy.Imakespeoplearoundmetrustmeandrespectme,whichisveryimportantformetomakeasuccessfullife.◆2008年第二节读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Hi,IamMike.Ijustwentthroughmyfirstyearofcollege.Thetoughestpartonmeatfirstwasthegeneraladjustment.1wenttoaverysmallhighschoolwheremymomwasateacherandshedidpracticallyeverythingforme.ButatthecollegeIneededtoknowsomebasiclifeskills.suchasbalancingacheck—book,OnethingIthinkisimportantistogetyourselfactiveinthings.Iwasonthedanceteamincollegeandmetatonofpeoplethatway…itwassomucheasiertomakefriendswhenyouhadacommonground.[写作内容]学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动，你参加其中的“大学校园生活”讨论。听完Mike的发言之后，你准备写一份发言稿，题目是“PreparingMyselfforCollegeLife”，内容要点包括：1.以约30个词概括Mike的发言要点；2.然后以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活，内容包括：(1)对中学生活的感受；(2)理想的大学生活；(3)中学生活和大学生活的差别，以及你打算如何适应。[参考范文]Mikesaiditwastoughtoaccomplishthegeneraladjustmentbuthebegantoenjoyhimselfafterthatduetovariousactivities.Headvisedfreshmentobeactiveinordertomakenewfriends.AsfarasIamconcerned,I’mpreparingtoenterauniversityandleavingthehighschoolwhereI’vebeenstudyingforthreeyears.IreallyhadagreattimeinthisschoolwhereIgrewfromanaïvekidtoagrown-up.IthinkIwillabsolutelymissmylifehereandmisseverysinglepersonthatImethere.Butinthemeantime,Iamlookingforwardtomynewlifeinthecollege.IsometimesdaydreamthatmaybeI’llbumpintoahandsomeboy,havefirefriendlyroommatesandbetaughtbyagroupoffabulousteachers.Itwouldbewonderfulifthisidealdaydreamcomeintoreality!提高作文档次五招1.表达精练简洁。表达不要啰嗦，若能用非谓语动词做定语或状语就不要用定语从句或状语从句。2.避免低级错误。避免语法和拼写的低级错误，避免被扣印象分。3.保证赏心悦目。注重书写美观，保持卷面整洁，提高印象分。(1)切忌书写不清、涂