对比观点型作文课件

对比观点型作文

写作初探

2005年高考(江西卷)人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。赞成的理由:1.广交朋友2.可自由表达思想3.利于外语学习反对的理由:1.浪费时间2.影响学习3.可能上当受骗你的看法:Lead-in文体：时态：内容要点：

议论文一般现在时1．赞同2．不赞同3．我的看法

广交朋友可自由表达思想利于外语学习浪费时间影响学习可能上当受骗Shouldstudentsmakefriendsonline?Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Somepeopleholdtheviewthattheinternethelpsmakemanyfriends.Chattingonline,studentscanmorefreelyexpresstheirfeelingsandopinions,andevengethelpwiththeirforeignlanguagestudies.However,otherstakeanoppositeside,firmlybelievingthatmakingfriendsonlineisawasteoftime,whichshouldbespentmoremeaningfullyonstudy.Besides,somestudentsgetcheatedonline.AsfarasIamconcerned,studentsshouldplacetheirstudy,healthandsafetybeforeotherthings.Asforfriendship,wecanreadilyfinditinourclassmatesandotherpeoplearoundus.Therefore,Ithinkthere’snoneedtomakefriendsonline.

topicPros(赞成)Cons(反对)

conclusion

Thestructureofthearticle介绍讨论的主题(开头句)：我们举行了一场讨论，讨论内容是学生是否可以……

Wehadadiscussionaboutwhetherstudentsshouldbeallowedto…我们已经作了一个调查，调查内容是学生是否可以……

We’vehadasurveyonwhetherstudentsshouldbeallowedto…我写信是要告诉你我们的一场讨论，讨论内容是否可以……

I’mwritingtotellyouaboutadiscussionwehavehadaboutwhetherstudentsshouldbeallowedto…Howtointroducethetopic总起:

Differentpeopleholddifferentopinions.Opinionsaredividedonthisproblem.Peoplehavetakendifferentattitudestowards…Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem.Peopletakedifferentviewsonthisproblem.

Howtobeginwith进一步介绍反方观点What’sworse,/Evenworse,/Worsestill,/Tomakemattersworse…Inaddition,…Apartfromthat,…过渡句However,…ofthemholdadifferentview./…ofthemholdtheoppositeopinion.Peoplewhoareagainstitdon’tthinkso.However,eachcoinhastwosides.

Transitionsentence总结（你的观点）AsfarasIamconcerned,Frommypointofview,Butforme,Personally,Itismyopinionthat…Inmyopinion,Conclusion

时下，很多学生带手机上学。为此，某英语报在你校组织了一场讨论。讨论的主题：中学生是否有必要带手机去学校。下表提供的信息供参考，给报社写一封信，介绍讨论情况并发表自己的意见。大多数同学认为：可方便与家长、同学联系；是一种时尚。 大多数老师认为：中学生年龄尚小，还不能自控；用手机玩游戏，发短信浪费时间；容易引起攀比。你的观点： 注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。2．词数：100左右。3．参考词汇：攀比：viewith…在校园内：onthecampusDeareditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussion…Writing

仔细审题（4确定）

（1）style(体裁)

__________________（2）content__________________________

______________________________________________（3）中心人称Person

__________________（4）主体时态Tense

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aletterthethirdpersonthesimplepresentwhetheritisnecessaryfor

middle

schoolstudentstocarrymobilephonestoschool内容

2.提炼要点，确定重点词汇要点：正反观点+我的观点Point1:可方便与家长、同学联系Point2:是一种时尚Point3:中学生年龄尚小，还不能自控Point4:用手机玩游戏，发短信浪费时间Ponit5:容易引起攀比Mypointofview:

convenient,keepintouchwith

fashioncontrolthemselvesawasteoftime,playgames,sendmessagesviewitheachother3.连词成句1.可方便与家长、同学联系2.是一种时尚

Itisconvenientforthemtokeepintouchwiththeirparentsandclassmates.It’safashion.4.组句成篇（1）巧妙使用连接词，使文章结构紧凑（2）灵活运用好句式，使文章文采飞扬

按要点间的内在关系组织文章,使用关联词。1．表示转折关系

but/yet/whereashoweverotherwiseinspiteof/despiteinstead(of)ratherthan（2）巧妙使用连接词2．表示递进关系

aswellasinaddition(to)besidesmoreoverwhat’smore

5.检查誊写(checkandcopy)仔细誊写，保证字迹工整，卷面整洁。注意事项:1.单词的拼写；大小写；名词的单复数；动词的过去式、过去分词的拼写。2.时态的运用。3.人称的一致（议论文）4.句子的完整。5.主谓一致6.任务按要求完成，不跑题；清晰表达意义避免中文式英语与您交流WritingDeareditor，I'mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe'vehadaboutwhetheritisnecessaryformiddleschoolstudentstocarrymobilephonestoschool.Themajorityofthestudentsthinkthatitismoreconvenientforthemtokeepintouchwiththeirparentsandclassmatesiftheyhaveamobilephone.Andwhat'smore,it'safashion.However,mostteachersthinkthatmiddleschoolstudentsarenotoldenoughtocontrolthemselves.Itisawasteoftimeforstudentstoplaygamesandsendmessagestoeachotherbymobilephone.Andit'seasytocausethestudentstoviewitheachother.Inmyopinion,followingthefashionisunderstandable.Butasmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldputallourheartintoourstudies.Isittothepoint?Isyourmostimportantpointobvious?Haveyouusedsimplelanguage?Willyourreaderunderstand?Isitbrief?Haveyou