2020届高三英语一轮复习：Polish-your-composition教学突破课件-

WelcometoMyClassWelcome没文化的人：哎呀我去,你看那个太阳太好看了！有文化的人：落霞与孤鹜齐飞，秋水共长天一色没文化的人：哎呀我去,你看那个太阳太好看了！有文化的人：落霞2没文化的人：我的天啊！上个山太难了！有文化的人：噫吁嚱，危乎高哉！蜀道之难，难于上青天！没文化的人：我的天啊！上个山太难了！32020届高三英语一轮复习：Polish-your-composition教学突破课件-4

我喜欢这个剪纸，它非常漂亮。

没文化：Ilikethepaper-cutting.Itisbeautiful.

稍有文化：Iamfondofthepaper-cutting.Itisattractive.知识青年：Thepaper-cuttingwhichI’m

fascinatedbyisgorgeous.

我喜欢这个剪纸，它非常漂亮。

稍有文化：Iamfon5高考英语作文评分标准1.完全完成试题规定的内容2覆盖所有内容要点3.应用较多语法结构和词汇4.使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇;具备较强的语言运用能力。5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。第五档作文(21-25分)

6.完全达到预期写作目的高考英语作文评分标准1.完全完成试题规定的内容2覆盖所有PolishyourcompositionPolishyourcomposition2.丰富的句式3.恰当的连接词1.运用高级词汇与短语华丽变身三原则2.丰富的句式3.恰当的连接词1.运用高级词汇与短语华1.运用高级词汇与短语华丽变身三原则之一1.运用高级词汇与短语华丽变身三原则之一Advancedwords/phrases

1.Thepaper-cuttingisgood.

2.Theseactivitiesareinteresting.3.Iwillthankyouifyouacceptmyinvitation.4.Totakethisopportunityishelpful.5.Iwantyourreply.Advancedwords/phrases

1.The1.Thepaper-cuttingisgood.

wonderful;fantastic;amazing;splendid;excellent…1.Thepaper-cuttingisgood.2.Theseactivitiesareinteresting.amusing;entertaining;2.Theseactivitiesareintere3.Iwillthankyouifyouacceptmyinvitation.Iwouldappreciateitif….Iamgratefulif…Iwillshowmygratitudeif….3.Iwillthankyouifyouacc4.Totakethisopportunityishelpful.Totakethisopportunityisofhelp.Totakethisopportunityisbeneficial.4.Totakethisopportunityis5.Iwantyourreply.lookforwardtobekeento/onbelongingfor

5.Iwantyourreply.lookfor2.丰富的句式华丽变身三原则之一2.丰富的句式华丽变身三原则之一ThereisnothingIcouldn'tgiveyou.ThereisnothingIwoulddenyyou.Nothingwillchangemylove.

Openyourhearttome.Nothingwillchangemylove.Advancedsentencepatterns

强调句

定语从句

名词性从句

With复合结构…

被动句

双重否定句

非谓语动词

倒装句

状语从句

Advancedsentencepatterns

1.Studyhard,andyouwillsucceed.

Studyhard,oryouwon’tsucceed.

1.Studyhard,andyouwillsu2.Timepassedbyquickly,andIimprovedalot.Asthetimepassedbyquickly,Iimprovedalot.

Withthetimepassingbyquickly,Iimprovedalot.2.Timepassedbyquickly,and3.OurEnglishteacherwillgiveusanopenclassinaverycoldclassroom.AnopenclasswillbegiveninaverycoldclassroombyourEnglishteacher.WewillbegivenanopenclassinaverycoldclassroombyourEnglishteacher.3.OurEnglishteacherwillgi4.Everythingispossible.Nothingisimpossible.4.Everythingispossible.Not5.Therewillbelotsofinterestingactivities.FromtheseactivitiesyouwillhaveaclearerpictureofChina.Therewillbelotsofinterestingactivities,fromwhichyouwillhaveaclearerpictureofChina.5.Therewillbelotsofinter6.Tohissurprise,thewomanwithnomake-uplookslikeaghost.a.Whatsurprisedtheboyisthatthewomanwithnomake-uplookslikeaghost.b.Itissurprisingthatthewomanwithnomake-uplookslikeaghost.6.Tohissurprise,thewoman7.Thegirlisstandingthere.Iknowher.

Iknowthegirlstandingthere.7.Thegirlisstandingthere.8.Mybrotherisbraveandintelligent.SoIadmirehimverymuch.

Mybrotherisbraveandintelligent.That’swhyIadmirehimverymuch.8.Mybrotherisbraveandint9.YoulikeChineseculturemost.a.ItisChineseculturethatyoulikemost.b.ItisyouwholikeChineseculturemost.9.YoulikeChineseculturemo10.BecauseIknowthatyoulikeChineseculturemost,I’mwritingtoinviteyou.

KnowingthatyoulikeChineseculturemost,I’mwritingtoinviteyou.10.BecauseIknowthatyouli11.Wewillnotonlyhavesomeshows,butalsosomeactivities.Notonlywillwehavesomeshows,butalsosomeactivities.11.WewillnotonlyhavesomeBrainstorming一句多译：众所周知，地球绕着太阳转。Brainstorming2020届高三英语一轮复习：Polish-your-composition教学突破课件-3.恰当的连接词华丽变身三原则之一3.恰当的连接词华丽变身三原则之一表文章顺序：firstofall;tostartwith;firstandforemost;firstly,secondly…intheend;表并列补充：what’smore;besides;moreover;inaddition;notonly…butalso…表文章顺序：33表转折关系:

but;however;while;表因果关系：because;so;thus;therefore;asaresult;for;since表转折关系:34表总结关系:

inshort;brieflyspeaking;inaword;inconclusion;generallyspeaking;表条件关系:

if;unless;aslongas;onconditionthat表总结关系:35inaddition;therefore;although;assoonas;for;ononehand,ontheotherhand;onconditionthat;what’sworse;before;when;1.Hemustbeill,_______heisabsenttoday.2.Isharedthecostofthegaswithmyfriends.___________,Isaved$80.3.Eatingsugarisbadforourteeth.___________,itmaymakeusfat.ThereforeWhat’sworsefor

inaddition;therefore;althou364.XiaoMingwaswalkinginthestreet___________heheardsomeonecryingforhelp.5.___________heheardthecryforhelp,hejumpedintothewatertosavethegirl.Assoonaswhen

inaddition;therefore;although;assoonas;for;ononehand,ontheotherhand;onconditionthat;what’sworse;before;when;4.XiaoMingwaswalkinginth37inaddition;therefore;although;assoonas;for;ononehand,ontheotherhand;onconditionthat;what’sworse;before;when;6.Itwasnotlong_______thepolicecame.7.Therewillbeapaper-cuttingexhibition.___________,therewillbelotsofactivities.8.Nothingisimpossible_______________youtry.before

onconditionthat

Inadditioninaddition;therefore;althou38inaddition;therefore;although;assoonas;for;ononehand,ontheotherhand;onconditionthat;what’sworse;before;when;9.__________heispoor,sheloveshim.10._____________,thesharingbicycleisconvenient._____________,itisenvironmentally-friendly.Although

OnonehandOntheotherhandinaddition;therefore;althou39PracticePractice40某学生作文范文

Ourschoolwillholda

Chinesepaper-cuttingexhibition.BecauseIknowthatyoulikeChinesetraditionalculturemost.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutotheexhibition.

Theexhibitionwillbeheldinthemuseum.Itwilllastforonlyoneday.Wewillnotonlydisplayworks,butalsowewillhaveagoodsetofpaper-cutting.Therewillbelotsofinterestingactivities.FromtheseactivitiesyouwillhaveaclearerpictureofChina.Iwillthankyouforacceptingmyinvitation.Iwillwaitforyourreply.某学生作文范文41secret

WordphrasesentenceConjunctionaddssignificanceAddalittleconfidenceYouwillmakeadifference.secret42Homework

Polishthecompositionoftheweeklytest.Homework

Polishthecomp43Thankyou!Thankyou!44WelcometoMyClassWelcome没文化的人：哎呀我去,你看那个太阳太好看了！有文化的人：落霞与孤鹜齐飞，秋水共长天一色没文化的人：哎呀我去,你看那个太阳太好看了！有文化的人：落霞46没文化的人：我的天啊！上个山太难了！有文化的人：噫吁嚱，危乎高哉！蜀道之难，难于上青天！没文化的人：我的天啊！上个山太难了！472020届高三英语一轮复习：Polish-your-composition教学突破课件-48

我喜欢这个剪纸，它非常漂亮。

没文化：Ilikethepaper-cutting.Itisbeautiful.

稍有文化：Iamfondofthepaper-cutting.Itisattractive.知识青年：Thepaper-cuttingwhichI’m

fascinatedbyisgorgeous.

我喜欢这个剪纸，它非常漂亮。

稍有文化：Iamfon49高考英语作文评分标准1.完全完成试题规定的内容2覆盖所有内容要点3.应用较多语法结构和词汇4.使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇;具备较强的语言运用能力。5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。第五档作文(21-25分)

6.完全达到预期写作目的高考英语作文评分标准1.完全完成试题规定的内容2覆盖所有PolishyourcompositionPolishyourcomposition2.丰富的句式3.恰当的连接词1.运用高级词汇与短语华丽变身三原则2.丰富的句式3.恰当的连接词1.运用高级词汇与短语华1.运用高级词汇与短语华丽变身三原则之一1.运用高级词汇与短语华丽变身三原则之一Advancedwords/phrases

1.Thepaper-cuttingisgood.

2.Theseactivitiesareinteresting.3.Iwillthankyouifyouacceptmyinvitation.4.Totakethisopportunityishelpful.5.Iwantyourreply.Advancedwords/phrases

1.The1.Thepaper-cuttingisgood.

wonderful;fantastic;amazing;splendid;excellent…1.Thepaper-cuttingisgood.2.Theseactivitiesareinteresting.amusing;entertaining;2.Theseactivitiesareintere3.Iwillthankyouifyouacceptmyinvitation.Iwouldappreciateitif….Iamgratefulif…Iwillshowmygratitudeif….3.Iwillthankyouifyouacc4.Totakethisopportunityishelpful.Totakethisopportunityisofhelp.Totakethisopportunityisbeneficial.4.Totakethisopportunityis5.Iwantyourreply.lookforwardtobekeento/onbelongingfor

5.Iwantyourreply.lookfor2.丰富的句式华丽变身三原则之一2.丰富的句式华丽变身三原则之一ThereisnothingIcouldn'tgiveyou.ThereisnothingIwoulddenyyou.Nothingwillchangemylove.

Openyourhearttome.Nothingwillchangemylove.Advancedsentencepatterns

强调句

定语从句

名词性从句

With复合结构…

被动句

双重否定句

非谓语动词

倒装句

状语从句

Advancedsentencepatterns

1.Studyhard,andyouwillsucceed.

Studyhard,oryouwon’tsucceed.

1.Studyhard,andyouwillsu2.Timepassedbyquickly,andIimprovedalot.Asthetimepassedbyquickly,Iimprovedalot.

Withthetimepassingbyquickly,Iimprovedalot.2.Timepassedbyquickly,and3.OurEnglishteacherwillgiveusanopenclassinaverycoldclassroom.AnopenclasswillbegiveninaverycoldclassroombyourEnglishteacher.WewillbegivenanopenclassinaverycoldclassroombyourEnglishteacher.3.OurEnglishteacherwillgi4.Everythingispossible.Nothingisimpossible.4.Everythingispossible.Not5.Therewillbelotsofinterestingactivities.FromtheseactivitiesyouwillhaveaclearerpictureofChina.Therewillbelotsofinterestingactivities,fromwhichyouwillhaveaclearerpictureofChina.5.Therewillbelotsofinter6.Tohissurprise,thewomanwithnomake-uplookslikeaghost.a.Whatsurprisedtheboyisthatthewomanwithnomake-uplookslikeaghost.b.Itissurprisingthatthewomanwithnomake-uplookslikeaghost.6.Tohissurprise,thewoman7.Thegirlisstandingthere.Iknowher.

Iknowthegirlstandingthere.7.Thegirlisstandingthere.8.Mybrotherisbraveandintelligent.SoIadmirehimverymuch.

Mybrotherisbraveandintelligent.That’swhyIadmirehimverymuch.8.Mybrotherisbraveandint9.YoulikeChineseculturemost.a.ItisChineseculturethatyoulikemost.b.ItisyouwholikeChineseculturemost.9.YoulikeChineseculturemo10.BecauseIknowthatyoulikeChineseculturemost,I’mwritingtoinviteyou.

KnowingthatyoulikeChineseculturemost,I’mwritingtoinviteyou.10.BecauseIknowthatyouli11.Wewillnotonlyhavesomeshows,butalsosomeactivities.Notonlywillwehavesomeshows,butalsosomeactivities.11.WewillnotonlyhavesomeBrainstorming一句多译：众所周知，地球绕着太阳转。Brainstorming2020届高三英语一轮复习：Polish-your-composition教学突破课件-3.恰当的连接词华丽变身三原则之一3.恰当的连接词华丽变身三原则之一表文章顺序：firstofall;tostartwith;firstandforemost;firstly,secondly…intheend;表并列补充：what’smore;besides;moreover;inaddition;notonly…butalso…表文章顺序：77表转折关系:

but;however;while;表因果关系：because;so;thus;therefore;asaresult;for;since表转折关系:78表总结关系:

inshort;brieflyspeaking;inaword;inconclusion;generallyspeaking;表条件关系:

if;unless;aslongas;onconditionthat表总结关系:79inaddition;therefore;although;assoonas;for;ononehand,ontheotherhand;onconditionthat;what’sworse;before;when;1.Hemustbeill,_______heisabsenttoday.2.Isharedthecostofthegaswithmyfriends.___________,Isaved$80.3.Eatingsugarisbadforourteeth.___________,itmaymakeusfat.ThereforeWhat’sworsefor

inaddition;therefore;althou804.XiaoMingwaswalkinginthestreet___________heheardsomeonecryingforhelp.5.___________heheardthecryforhelp,hejumpedintothewatertosavethegirl.Assoonaswhen

inaddition;therefore;although;assoonas;for;ononehand,ontheotherhand;onconditionthat;what’sworse;before;when;4.XiaoMingwaswalkinginth81inaddition;therefore;although;assoonas;for;ononehand,ontheotherhand;onconditionthat;what’sworse;before;when;6.Itwasnotlong_______thepolicecame.7.Therewillbeapaper-cuttingexhibition.___________,therewillbelotsofactivities.8.Nothingisimpossible