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强化写作笔记整第一 描述图AHowvivid,intuitiveandthought-provokingthepictureisindescribingoneserioussocialproblem/acommonsocialphenomenon!Whatavivid,intuitiveandthought-provokingpictureitisindescribingoneserioussocialproblem/acommonsocialphenomenon!BCurrently,inpublic’seyesappearsapicture,whichhighlightsoneofthemostCurrently,inpublic’seyesappearsapicture,highlightingoneofthemostconcernedCBeingoneofthemostoutstandingpainters,VanGoghoncesaid:“Todrawistoreflecttherealworld.”andthepictureaboveperfectlyexpresseshiswords.Mr.ZhangDaqian,oneofthegreatestChinesepainters,saidinhisbiography:“Apictureisaworld,anydotorlineisallfromourlife.”andthepictureaboveperfectlyexpresseshisRegardedasoneoftheleadingphotographers,Mr.Rankinonceremarked:“Aphotographisamirrorofoursociety”andthephotoaboveperfectlyexpresseshiswords.二、第二句(五大分句1,23,4分句一As+1＋and2＋shown替换词＋inthepictureItis+1＋and2＋shown替换词＋inthepictureaboveWhatis+1＋and2＋shown替换词+inthepictureis副词 分句二分句三结构:,（feeling+adj.+and+adj.to分句四结构分句五结构with+n.(静态)+介词短语(位置,with+n.(动态)+ng/done…(动作,throughwhichthemeaningisshownintheChinesecharacters+位置themeaningofwhichisdemonstratedintheChinesecharacters+,themeaningofwhichcanbeinferredfromtheChinesecharacters+thatwherethereis词,thereisabrightfutureforus.Undoubtedly,whatthedrawerintendstorevealisnotmerelythepictureItisdoubtthatthedrawerdoesnotintendtorevealmerelythepictureItisoutofquestionthattheinnerintentiongoesfarthepicture多图作Howvivid,intuitiveandthought-provokingthepicturesareinWhatvivid,intuitiveandthought-provokingpicturestheyareinCurrently,inpublic’seyesappearapairofpictures,whichhighlightC…andthepicturesaboveperfectlyexpresshisAs+1＋and2＋shown替换词＋inthefirst/upper/leftpicture分句二图画Howeverwhatwecanseeinthesecondpictureisthat+1with/without+Contrarytotheformeroneevidentchangesemergewhenitcomestothesecondpicturethat+1+with/without+2.Presentinganotheroppositescene,thesecondpictureshowsanotherentirelydifferentsituationthat+1+with/without+2.Likewise,whatwecanseeinthesecondpictureisthat…conduct(s)thesimilarUndoubtedly,whatthedrawerintendstorevealisnotmerelythepictures第二 分析现结构:引出句+主旨Theintention/purposeofthedrawing(s)istorevealthat词isquitevitaltous/ourSimplebutprofoundasthedrawingis,theinnersensehidesbehinditthat词isquitevitaltous/oursociety.Howeverdiversetheouterformisthepictureservesasamirrorwhichreflectsacommonsocialphenomenoninourcontemporarysocietythat词playsasignificantroleforus.结构Ontheonehand,万能理由1Ontheotherhand,万能理由类01.类万能理由1：经济Withtherapiddevelopmentofeconomyandfiercesocialcompetitions,词（文化交流/）hascountedformuchforthegrowthofanation(文化类)/anindividual（类Withtheboomandburstofeconomyandfiercesocialcompetitionsfollowing,hasfar-reachinginfluenceontheprogressandgrowthofanation/anWitheconomydevelopment,globalizationandmodernizationgettingmoreandmoreuniversal,whichalsobroughtaboutfiercesocialcompetitions,词,asadrivingforceorimpetusfortheprogressandgrowthofanation/anindividual,isquiteimportant.万能理由2：社会Ourmodernsocietyhasencounteredhugechanges,inwhich现象(文化交流/问题emergedandbroughtgood/badGreatchangeshavetakenplaceinourmodernsociety,while/whereassomerelevantaspectsfollowthisstep,suchas+现象,whichworkssomewhatpositively/negatively.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourmodernsociety,afterwhichcamesomerelevantaspects,suchas+现象,generatingpositive/negativeconsequence.万能理由3：传统Theadvantageofschooleducationisbookknowledgeandexam,whichignoresoverallaspects,suchaslackof词(/正面现象).Theadvantageofschooleducationisbookknowledgeandexam,byreasonofwhichseveralproblemsfallbehind,thuslackof词haseserious/severe.Theadvantageoftraditionaleducationistovalueinlectandbasicskills,andherecomesthe ingthattoomuchemphasisontheseignoresoverallaspectsleadingtolackof词.Countlessasthereasonsare,thosementionedabovearethemostWerethesefactorsnottakenintoaccount,theissuewouldnot intoNomatterhowcomplextheysesmayappear,whatwetakeintoaccountherecanexplainwhethertheissueisimportant.第三 个人评ABasedontheysisabove,someeffectiveandefficientmeasuresshouldbeBTakingtheysisaboveintoaccount,itishightimethatwetooksomeeffectiveandefficientmeasures.CBetheissueobviousor mon,realizedorunknown,simpleordeep,necessarymeasuresshouldbetaken.类类个人万能措施AOurernmentshouldmakeuprelatedlawsandregulationstoput词(文化交流/正面现象)intopractice.Bernmentsordepartmentsconcernedhavethedutytoenactandcarryoutlawsandregulationsinordertopromote词.Cernmentsordepartmentsconcernedhavethedutytoenactandcarryoutlawsandregulationslest词facecertainobstacles.万能措施2：个AItisimportantthatsocialmembersrealizetheweight/seriousnessofthisissue,andactBAllwalksoflifemustfacetheissuesoconsciouslythatduethoughtsaswellasactionsshouldbeputintopractice.CSoconsciouslymustallwalksoflifefacetheissuethatduethoughtsaswellasactionsshouldbeputintopracti