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/8(1)精读文章，确定文章线索。每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索，如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等，这样有利于考生」顺藤摸瓜(结尾)"o(2)仔细审题，明确续写要求。一般短文后面的M注意M都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制、使用几处下划线关键词语、续写段落的首句提示，这样考生做到M心中有数M。(3)回扣原文，揣摩续写思路。根据文章后面的要求，再次快速回读短文，抓住文章的思路，结合段首的提示语，最终确定续写段落的思路，同时结合文章划线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。学科~网(4)拟写草稿，修改错词病句。在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中划线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。(5)标出续写部分中使用到的原材料中标有下划线的关键词语。这一点可以帮助考生自己检查关键词的使用情况并根据情况做出修改。最后在誉写文字时，务必做到“字迹工整、清晰M。通关演练(2018浙江卷)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad'sfriend,pickedsupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast."Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,"hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens.whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn'tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains."Don lateforsuppert/bUnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothetracksothatyoudongetlost!""OK!"mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(编织的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.汪忠：.所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。写作指导读后续写要求考生首先要读懂已有信息，不仅能读.懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络。续篇这篇短文时，考生要搞清楚故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置、人物思想情感的变化等。在此基础上，考生要顺着文章的思路，根据线索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用语言表达出来。通过阅读所给文章可知，父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活， 见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。根据第一段所给首句Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse. 这一句是故事发展的转折点，可从rabbit出现后带来的反应扩展开，可以写马的反应，也可以写人的反应，但要注意与第二段首句相呼应。第二段首句是Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.这一句呼应前文UnclePaul的叮嘱一一不要误吃晚饭，可从如何寻路返回农场去写。续写时注意要使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语， 我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为 150左右；续写完成后要用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。【范文】 Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.MyhorseturnedtothelefttoavoidthelittlerabbitasIheldontightlyandtriednottofail.Thenmydadturnedaroundandshouted,on!”Allofasuddenthehorsebegantorun.Mydadtriedtokeepupbehindus.Forafewminstmyhorsesloweddownandthenstoppedbesideariver.Ilookedaroundandrealizedthatwewerewayoffthetrack.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Luckilythestarscameoutandgaveusalittlelightwhenwewerelookingforthewaytothefarmhouse.Afterwhatmusthavebeenseveralhours,wesuddenlyheardthesoundofsheepinthedistance.MydadandIbothrodeourhorsestowardsthesoundofthesheep.AswegotcloserwesawUnclePaulwithaflashlightwavingusover.Whatanight!2阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。WhenIsawhertonightshesmiledandrecognizedme.Ismiledbackather.Shewaslookingmorerelaxedeventhoughshewasstillbusydoingherjob.Ihavenoticedherseveraltimesthislastfewmonthsandshealwayslookssomuchhappiernow.TonightwhenItalkedwithherInoticedhernametag.HernameisPamela.Pamelaworksattheexpresscheckoutsinabusysupermarket.Shedealswithproblemswhentheself-servicecheckoutexperiencesaproblem(nopriceonproduct,machineproblems,etc.).Shemonitorsthesecheckoutsandusuallyhashardlydealtwithonecomplaintbeforeanotheriscreated.WhenIfirsttalkedtoPamela,IhadcalledhertothecheckoutIwasusing.Therewasn 'tarwiththecheckoutthough.MyproblemorshouldIsayconcernwasaboutPamela.Shelookedtiredandwasunderalotofstressasshequicklymovedfromonecheckouttothenext.Itbitofafire-fightingj6b.saItoldPamelathatsheneededtoslowdownItoldhershewasn'tgettingpaidenoughtobeworkinghardasshewasworking.Itoldherthatwe,thecustomers,couldwaitanditwasverybadforherhealthtobeputtingherselfundersuchpressure.Itoldherthatourexpectationswerenotashardastheonesshesetforherself.Pamelatoldmeshewouldslowdown.IcouldtellshewastouchedthatnotonlydidInoticeherstressbutIchosetotalktoheraboutitandwasconcernedforherhealth.Igentlytoldherthingshadtochange.ItoldherIwouldbelookingoutforherinfuturetoseeifshehadtakenmyadviceonboard.Shesmiledandsaid,"IpromisethatIwillnexttime."汪忠：.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:WhenIsawhershewasstilldoingherjobbuttherewassuchadifference.Paragraph2：Iamproudofmyself.【思路点拨】前文概要Pamela在一家超市的快速结账通道上班，作者看到她非常忙碌，看起来很疲惫，因此建议Pamela把工作节奏放慢一点，对自己的要求不要过高，否则对她的健康非常不利。 Pamela很感动。作者说以后会关注看她是否听取了自己的建议， Pamela笑着说她保证一定会的。本文采用了倒叙的写作手法。文章第一段提到今天晚上作者在超市见到了 Pamela,她认出了作者并向作者微笑致意。最近几个月她工作时看起来轻松多了，并提到了今天晚上作者和她 ，交谈的时候，注意到了她的名字。续写的Paragraph1的开头说到当作者看到她的时候她仍然在工作，但是有了很大的变化，暗示本段应该写到Pamela的具体变化，还有作者和她交谈的具体内容等。续写时可用的关键词有：Pamela,customers,herhealth,supermarket等。学科…网Paragraph2开头说到作者感到很自豪，暗示本段的续写应该涉及作者的心理感受， 以及从此事中悟到的人生哲理。可用的关键词有：pressure,concern,slowdowr^。【范文】Paragraph1WhenIsawhershewasstilldoingherjobbuttherewassuchadifference.Ipraisedthenewher.NowPamelasaidthatothercustomerswouldhavetowaitfortheirturnwhileshedealtwithanothercustomer.Shetoldmethechangehadsignificantlyimprovedherhealth.Sheaddedthatshe'saredshwhatIsaidwithhercolleagues.AsIwalkedawayfromPamelamyheartwaslightened.Shehastakenmyadviceonboardandtriedtoslowdownherworkingpace.Aday'sworkmeansjustthat.Itdoesnthatoneshouldputtwodays'workintooneday.Paragraph2Iamproudofmyself.NotonlyhaveIcausedPamelatoreflectonthepressureshewasputtingherselfunder,butalsosheinturnhasencouragedhercolleaguesinthesupermarkettodothesame.Ireallyfeelveryhappyandsatisfiedformyconcernandactofkindnessdomakeadifferencetothoseinneed.Itsimpleactoflovethatcostsnomoney.Somyfriends,ourkindnessdoesn 'thavetobemateloving.Blessyouallforallyoudoforothers.【思路点拨】1、阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Istillrememberit,likeitwasyesterdaywhenmyparentstoldmethenews.ItwastheweekbeforeChristmasonThursdaymorningwhenmyparentssaid,“Stacy,stpatckingyourthingssowecangotoFloridafortheholidays.”“Okay,】responded.WedothiseveryyearforChristmasandNewYear.It'ksndofafamilytraditionwehave.WegoeveryyearbecauseweliketovisitsomefamilymemberslivinginFlorida.TherehasneverbeenayearwhenwemisseveajriptoFloridafortheholidays.IwassoexcitedtogoonthistripbecauseChristmasismyfavoriteholiday,buttotopitoffIwasgoingtogettocelebrateitwithmyfamily.Thenextmorning,mymotherenteredmyroom. “Stacy,wa!kWepieedtogototheairportsothatwecangetourplaneJickeistoFloridabeforetheysellout. ”IjumpedoutofbedandgotreadyasfastasIcould,Whenwewereonourwaytotheairportcouldn'tstoptalkingandsmilingbecauseIwastooexcitedaboutgettingourtickets.“ArenyoujustexcitedtogotoFlorida?”Iasked.“Yes,Iam.Wecanfinallycatchupwiththefamilyanddrinkhotcocoarespondedmymother.Theairportwassocrowded.Somepeoplewereleavingtoothercountriesandotherswerejustvisitingfortheholiday.Therewassuchahugelineintheairportbecausesomanydifferentpeoplewerebuyingplanetickets.Whenitwasourturn,mymothersaid,“ThreeticketstoFloridaoChristmasEveplease.”Theladyworkingthereresponded,"Well,youguysareluckyYougotthelastthreeticketstoFlorida.MymotherandIbothsmiledinrelief（松了口气） andpaidforourticketsandwentbackhometofinishpacking.注意：1、所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2、应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3、续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4、续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Whenwearrivedhome,wefoundfatherwasParagraph2:Afterweleftfortheairporttobuytickets,amanclimbedintoourhousetostealmoney.【答案】Whenwearrivedhome,wefoundfatherwaslyingonthefloor,bleeding.Thoughwefeltverysurprised,wesenthimtohospitalatonce.Withthehelpofdoctors,myfathercamebacktolifeonChristmasEve,whichmadeourfamilypleased.Myparentslovedeachotherverymuch,somymotherkeptmyfathercompanydayandnight,completelyforgettingthetriptoFlorida.Aftermyfatherwokeup,hesaidsorrytousandtolduseverythingthathappenedtohim.Afterweleftfortheairporttobuytickets,amanclimbedintoourhousetostealmoney.Myfathercaughthimandbravelyfoughtwithhim,butunfortunatelythemanhurtmyfather.Hearingthenews,wewereproudofhim.OnChristmasEve,weheldapartyinhospitalformyfather.EveryonegottogetheraroundtheChristmastreeandsangChristmassongstohim.ThatChristmasEvewasquiteunusualandmeaningful.IwillneverforgetthetimeIspentwithmyfatheronChristmasEveinhospital.2、阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Duringlunchtime,Emmasuggestedgoingtothezootofeedtheanimalsandhermomagreed.“Wellstopbythebakeryandpicksomebreadup.Nowhurryandeatandthenwe 'll（bealovelyday.Grandmaiscomingwithus.She'llbehereany'mrinatesaid.Emmaateherlunchandthenranintoherroomtogethershoes.Theproblemwasthatshecouldonlyfindoneofthem.Shelookedunderherbed,butallshecouldseeweredirtytowelsandpants.Shemovedsomeofhertoysoutoftheway.butstillcouldn'tfshoheAftershe'dcheckedeverywhereinherroomsheranintothekitchen. "Mocan'tfindmyshoe.WillyouwaitwhileIlookforit“sheasked.Hermomthoughtabouthowmanytimesshe'toldEmmatocleanherroomup.ShewhisperedsomethingtoEmmasgrandmaandthensaidoEmma,“Youwillhavetostayhome.YourdadandIwilltakeRyantothezoo.Grandmawillstayherewithyou. ”“NoPleasewaitforme.Iwanttogotothezoo.Emmacried.“I'msorry,Emma.I'vetoldyoua

timestocleanyourroomandyouignoredme.Youcan'tyoUrshoenow.It'yourownfaultfornotdoingasIasked.Youwillstayhome.Emmaranintoherbedroom,crying.Hermomcametothedoorandsaid,“Emm,acleanthatroomofyoursbeforeIgethome.I'vetoldgrandmanottogivesyoeeayoursbeforeIgethome.I'vetoldgrandmanottogivesyoeeanyntilyoufinishthework.“ntShew（outtothecarwithRyanandEmmasdadandthentheydroveaway.outtothecarwithRyanandEmmasdadandthentheydroveaway.汪忠:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Emmasatonherbedandcriedforalongtime.Paragraph2:Emmaandhergrandmaweresittingatthetable,eatingwhenhermom,dad,andRyancamehome【答案】Emmasatonherbedandcriedforalongtime.AndthenshewipedhereyesandstartedtocleanherroomIttookhertwohourstocleanuptheroom.!”sheIsaiidiproudly.Sheevenfoundhermissingshoe.Sheranintothelivingroom.GrandmaComeandsee.Icleanedmyroomandfoundmyshoe."GrandmalookediEmma'sroom."Ifyouhadkeptitthisway,youwouldhavelostyourshoe.Comeandhavesomesweetsnow.shesaid.Emmaandhergrandmaweresittingatthetable,eatingwhenhermom,dad,andRyancamehome.“We|1100katEmmasroom!It'cean."herdadsaid."wHaswthezoo?Didyouhavefun?IwishIcouldhavegonetherewithyou."Emmasaid.ytfukeepyourroomclean,wemaygoandseeanimalsagain."hermomsaid.Fromthenon,Emmatriedherbesttokeepherroomclean.3、阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。ItwasahotandwetdayinJuly.Iwasdrivingtothelocalgrocerystore杂货店）becausetheheat（热）hadmademybananasgofromyellowtobrownovernight.Myairconditionerinmycarwasonhigh,butitstillwasn'tcoolingmedown.Suddeh&ca门nfrontofmesignaledthatitwaspullingoff.Ipressedonthebrakes（杀U车）andsloweddown.OutofthecornerofmyeyeIsawseveralteenagersstandinginthesummersun.Theyweren'tplaying,killingtime,orhangingaroundthoughTheyweren'tdrinkingsmoking,chatting,orlookingattheircellphones.Theywereworkingonaporch走廊）.Irecognizedthemimmediatelyasoneofthechurchworkcamps.FormoreyearsthanIcanremembertheseyoungmenandwomenhavevolunteeredtheirspringandsummervacationstocomehereandhelprepairthehomesofpoorpeople.IsmiledwhenIsawthemtheresweatingandworkinghardtodosomegoodinthisworld.Whilethenewsheadlinesweresofullofmurder,hate,andviolenceinour（sociely,theseyoungpeopleweredoingtheirbesttosharesomeloveandlightwithothers.InmyheartandmindIheardthewordsonceagain,“Iwashungryandyougavemefoqdwasastrangerandyouwelcomedme;Iwasnaked㈱体的）andyougavemeclothi