(完整word版)英语专业基础写作=句子改写部分的考核(word文档良心出品)

I.重写句子(15points,1.5pointseach.)Revisethefollowingsentencesaccordingtotherequirement.Example:ThehistoryofEnglishwordsisthehistoryofourcivilizationinmanyways.(periodicsentence)Inmanyways,thehistoryofourcivilizationisthehistoryofEnglishwords.Myroommateclosedherbookswhenitwasnearlymidnight.(simplesentence)Myroommateclosedherbooksnearlyatmidnight.Wemustplanourfamilybudgetcarefully.Thepriceoffoodhasrisenrecently.(compoundsentence)Wemustplanourfamilybudgetcarefully,forthepriceoffoodhasrisenrecently.Hisvisionbeginstofade.Heknowshe 'dbettergetsomeBenttencsmplexWhenhisvisionbeginstofade,heknowshe 'dbettergetsomerest.Tomhadworkedattheconstructionsiteallday.Hewastootired.Hedecidednottomeethisfriendsatthedinner.(compound-complexsentence)BecauseTomhadwordedattheconstructionsiteallday,andhewastootired,hedecidednottomeethisfriendsatthedinner.Therearemanyexercisestodoifyouwanttobuildamuscular(肌肉发达的)body.(periodicsentence)Ifyouwanttobuildamuscularbody,therearemanyexercisestodo.Itwasnearlydark.Asnowmobileappeared.Thesnowmobilewasroaring.Itwasrunningwithoutlights.IthitMrs.Li.(longsentence)Itwasnearlydarkwhenaroaringsnowmobileappeared,runningwithoutlights,andhitMrs.Li.Mysisterwasateacher,aschoolprincipal,andfinallyshebecameasuccessfulbusinessexecutive.(parallelstructure)Mysisterwasateacher,aschoolprincipal,andfinallyasuccessfulbusinessexecutive.Hefeltthattheworldhadcometoanendwhenhefailedintheuniversityentranceexamlastyear.(periodicsentence)Whenhefailedintheuniversityentranceexamlastyear,hefeltthattheworldhadcometoanend.Thefilmprojectorbrokeforasecondtimeinthecinema.Somepeopleintheaudiencehissed,andothersmadecatcalls.(compound-complexsentence)Whenthefilmprojectorbrokeforasecondtimeinthecinema,somepeopleintheaudiencehissed,andothersmadecatcalls.Englishisofferedonlyinthemorning.Lawcanbetakenatnight.(complexsentence)Englishisofferedonlyinthemorning,whileLawcanbetakenatnight.Hockeyisasportwhichispopularinmanycountriesaroundtheworld.(simplesentence)Inmanycounetriesaroundtheworld,hockeyisasportwhichispopular.NotuntilhecrossedthelineandfeltthetapesnapagainsthischestdidJohnsonknowhehadwontherace.(loosesentence)Johnsondidnotknowhehadwontheraceuntilhecrossedthelineandfeltthetapesnapagainsthischest.Ihavecheckedmydocumentsseveraltimes.Istillcan ’tfindtheproblem.(compoundsentence)Ihavecheckedmydocumentsseveraltimes,butIstillcan ’tfindtheproblem..Theteacherreturnedthehomework.Theteachernoticedtheerror.(complexsentence)Theteacherreturnedthehomeworkwhen(after)shenoticedtheerror..Whenwearerelievedofworkingpressuresoftheoffice,wecanenjoyhappinessandrelaxationathome.(modifyingphrase)Relievedofworkingpressuresoftheoffice,wecanenjoyhappinessandrelaxationathome..Alanpassedthetest.Alanhadstudiedhard.Alanhadunderstoodthematerial.(complexsentence)AlanpassedthetestbecauseAlanhadstudiedhardandunderstoodthematerial..Fossilfuelsarenon-renewable.Weneedtofindalternativeenergysources.(compoundsentence)Fossilfuelsarenon-renewable,soweneedtofindalternativeenergysources..Weslippedontheroadwhenwecouldseenolightsintheheavyrainthatnight.(periodicsentence)Whenwecouldseenolightsintheheavyrainthatnight,weslippedontheroad..Attheinternationalmuseum,youcanfindancientEgyptianart.YoucanexploreAfricanartifactsthere.Youcandiscoverbeautifultextilesfromaroundtheworldthere.(parallelstructure)Attheinternationalmuseum,youcanfindancientEgyptianart,exploreAfricanartifacts,discoverbeautifultextilesfromaroundtheworld..WelivedinasmalltownwhenIwasasmallchild.WemovedtoShanghailater.Myfatherlandedabetterjobthere.(compound-complexsentence)WelivedinasmalltownwhenIwasasmallchild,andwemovedtoShanghailaterbecausemyfatherlandedabetterjobthere.II.改写病句(15points,3pointseach)Correcttheerrorsinthefollowingsentences.Example:Afterseeinganoffensivemouthwashadontelevision.Iresolvednevertobuythatbrandagain.Afterseeinganoffensivemouthwashadontelevision,Iresokednevertobuythatbrandagain.ShegotA'sinhermathexambyusingherpocketcalculator.Whichshewasotallowedtouseatschool.(fragment)ShegotA'sinhermathexambyusingherpocketcalculator,whichshewasnotallowedtouseatschool.Hewasstaringatthegirlbythevendingmachine(投币式自动售货机)wearingdarkglasses.(misplacedmodifier)Bythevendingmachine,hewasstaringatthegirlwearingdarkglasses.Saraleapedupscreamingablackspiderwasonherleg.(lackofconjunction)Saraleapedupscreaming,forablackspiderwasonherleg.Relievedofyourresponsibilitiesatyourjob,yourhomeshouldbeaplacetorelax.(danglingmodifier)Relievedofyourresponsibilitiesatyourjob,youshouldbeabletorelaxathome.CharlottelovedthemovieGonewiththeWind,butLydehatedit.Hischiefobjectionbeingthatitlastedfourhours.(fragment)CharlottelovedthemovieGonewiththeWind,butLydehatedit.Hischiefobjectionwasthatitlastedfourhours.26.Insummer,Juannadidn'lovetravelinginRomeshefeltitwastoohotthere.(lackofconjunction)Insummer,Juannadidn'tlovetravelinginRomebecauseshefeltitwastoohotthere.27.Shakespearewrotecomedies,tragedies,romances,andtheplayswhichwerebasedonhistoricalevents.(unclearrefererence)Shakespearewrotecomedies,tragedies,romances,andsomeplayswhichwerebasedonhistoricalevents.scar.28.WhiledrivingonBlueberryAvenueyesterdayafternoon,atreefelltowardJackscar.WhileJackwasdrivingonBlueberryAvenueyesterdayafternoon,atreefelltowardJack’scar.(danglingmodifier)29.OneofJenny’gsreatestjoysinlifeiseatingdesserts.Suchasmilkshake,cookiesorstrawberrycake.(fragment)OneofJenny’sgreatestjoysinlifeiseatingdesserts,suchasmilkshake,cookiesorstrawberrycake.30.Peterorderedthemealforhisfriendsrangingfromfriedshrimptochoppedbeef.(misplancedmodifier).Forhisfriends,Peterorderedthemealrangingfromfriedshrimptochoppedbeef.InDcollegeDmy□friend□Beth□was□very□ambitious□notDonly□for□herself□but□for□her□friends□she□was□interested□in□foreign□relations^in□travel□and□in□goingDto□law□school□I□plan□to□be□secretary□of□state□someday□she□would□say□matter-of-factly□one□mutual□friend□tostudy□literature□had□planned□to□go□to□a□graduate□school□andhe□would□be□the□chairman□of□the□Yale□English□departmentDanotheiOfriend□was□interested□in□political□journalism□and□would□someday□edit□the□Times□magazine□I□was□a□biology□major□which□was□a□problem□Beth’□sbest□friend□from□childhood□was□also□studying□biology□and□Beth□had□already□decided□she□would□win□the□Nobel□Prize□I□was□proud□of□Beth□for□herambition□although□I□did□not□agree□to□his□fanciful□ideas□□IDhadDonlyDone□truthful□friendDin□college^．Choosethemoresuitablewordfromthetwoprovidedforeachblankinthefollowingsentences.(20points,2pointforeach)Theirhardwork (effected,affected)rapidprogressinthework.Thechairmanmadeso