江雪英译对比赏析

江雪千山鸟飞绝，万径人踪灭。孤舟蓑立翁，独钓寒江雪。江雪柳宗元题目的翻译“江雪”Snow（1处）/RiverSnow（3处）RiverSnowfall（1处）Snowontheriver（2处）/Snowingontheriver（1处）FishinginSnow（2处）TheSnowboundRiver（1处）千山鸟飞绝AhundredmountainsandnobirdNosingingofbirdsinthemountainrangesFromhilltohillnobirdinflightFromathousandhills,birdflightshavevanishedOnathousandhillallbirdslifeiscutoffOvermountainsandmountainsnobirdisonthewing“万径”Athousandpaths/trails/thousandsoftrails/tenthousandpathsFrompathtopathEndlessroads/allroadsthousandlinesofthepathways“人踪灭”withoutafootprint/nofootprint/nofootprintsofmennotatraceofmen/thereisnotraceofhumanfootstepsnomaninsight/Notamanhumantraceswipedoutnomoretravelerspassby“孤舟”aboat/alittleboat/onlyoneboat/aloneboat/alonelyboat“蓑笠翁”anoldman/anoldfisherman/AnoldanglerAstraw-cloak-oldmananoldmaninrustichatandcapeanoldmaninastrawraincape独钓寒江雪1.Anoldmanfishinginthecoldriver-snow.2.Withanoldmaninrustichatandcapedanglingalineinthefrigidwaters——asolitaryfigureveiledinsilentsnow.3.Whostandsondeckandfishesbyhimself/wherethesnowfallsonthecoldriver.4.Isfishingontherivermidstthesnow-drift.5.Fishingonrivercladinsnow.6.Isfishingsnowinalonelyboat.7.Anglingsilentlyintherivercoveredwithsnow.8.Fishingaloneinthecoldriversnow.9.Fishingaloneonrivercoldwithsnow.10.Sitsbyhimselffishingtheriverinthewintersnow.11.Inpalm-barkcapeandstrawhat,dropshisanglestring.SnowingontheriverNotabirdoverthehundredsofpeaks,Notamanonthethousandsoftrails.Anoldangleraloneinaboat,Withhisrodandline,inrainingoutfit,Isfishingontherivermidstthesnow-drift.FishinginSnowFromhilltohillnobirdinflight;Frompathtopathnomaninsight.Astraw-cloak-oldmaninaboat,lo!Fishingonrivercladinsnow.RiverSnowfallAmidstallmountains,birdsnolongerfly;Onallroads,nomoretravele