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.雅思大作文的15大察看内容察看频次最高专题：教育：少儿，中学，大学教育系统和方法科技发展对生活的影响3.文化的组成要素和保护4.生活方式的转变和社会见解全球化及其影响环境问题和环境保护政府投资察看次要点专题：艺术的价值7.弱势集体：妇女的权益，妇女参军雅思写作错误检查表〔10条〕1.使用了正确的语法构造：时态语态，主谓一致，从句，用词正确(名词，动词，形容词的形式)，介词，冠词句式有变化使用了必然量的词汇拼写没有错误见解明确，语意精确不模糊每段主题句都说了然该段中心思想，所有拓展句支持句都紧扣主题大量的过渡性词语(逻辑连结词)，使句子间和段落间都拥有逻辑性和条理性供应了足够的细节，例子或论据每一段话都获得充分张开每一段话都紧扣文章主题怎样应用：1347当作检查项目，其他当作考前提示时间紧，就改第一段和每段的前两句话.大作文首段基本写作策略---三步走转述背景，扩展题目(setting/backgroundinformation)：把题目所供应的背景再用自己的话拓展转述同义代替一下题目：Itisgenerallybelievedthatsomepeoplearebornwithcertaintalents,forinstanceforsportsormusic,andothersarenot.However,itissometimesclaimedthatanychildcanbetaughttobeagoodsportspersonormusician.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.考官写的开头段：Therelativeimportanceofnaturaltalentandtrainingisafrequenttopicofdiscussionwhenpeopletrytoexplaindifferentlevelsofabilityin,forexample,sports,artormusic.2.说明妄图(statementofpurposes)：写作妄图=你的立场或许见解，争取用一句话说明你的见解，地点能够是在首段的最后一句3.提及下文，分支见解的摆列和总结(summaryofmainpoints):对主要见解用短语或许短句形式进行总结概括开头段写作套路赏析Itisinevitablethatastechnologydevelops,sotraditionalculturemustbelost.Technologyandtraditionareincompatible,youcannothavebothtogether.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?开头段1：Itisafactoflifethattheadvanceofscienceandtechnologyhasbeenaccompaniedbyadeclineintraditionalculture.(背景转述)Inmyopinion,thisisnotnecessarilyabadthing,becausesomeaspectsoftraditionalculturehamperprogressandshouldbeabandoned.Moreover,itisnaturalthatpeopleshouldwanttofindnewwaysofdoingthings.(写作妄图)Itisafactoflifethat这是现实中的事实.Itisnaturalthat很自然.Itisquitecommonthesedaysthat当前很宽泛的是.开头段2：Itisanundeniablefactthatscientificandtechnologicaldevelopmentshavebroughtconsiderablebenefitstoeverywalkoflife.EspeciallysincetheIndustrialRevolutiontookplace,ourliveshavebeenmademuchmoreconvenientbyinventionssuchastrains,airplanesandcomputers.(背景转述)ButIthinkthatthelossofourtraditionalcultureistoohighapricetopayforit.(写作妄图)1.Itisanundeniablefactthat不可以否定的是2.AistoohighapricetopayforBA关于B来说是一个巨大的代价Theenvironmentaldeteriorationanddestructionaretoohighapriceforoureconomicgrowth.四.讨论文五大题型分类和写作套路(一)讨论型discuss题目表述：Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.讨论正反两方面见解并给出你的见解比方:题目1Somepeoplebelievethatthereshouldbefixedpunishmentsforeachtypeofcrime.Others,however,arguethatthecircumstancesofanindividualcrime,andthemotivationforcommittingit,shouldalwaysbetakenintoaccountwhendecidingonthepunishment.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.题目2：Somepeoplebelievethatculturewillberuinedifitisusedtoearntourismrevenue,butothersconsiderthattourismistheonlywayofprotectingaculture.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.讨论型discuss写作套路开头段：不表达个人见解立场主体段1:反方见解(你不倾向的见解)--2点原因主体段2:正方见解(你相对倾向的见解)--2点原因结尾段：方法1---你同意其中一个见解方法2---都同意套路2.一方倾向式---两个见解不公正讨论开头段：表达个人见解或立场主体段1:详谈正方见解(你相对倾向的见解)----2-3点原因主体段2:简谈反方见解(你不倾向的见解)----1-2点原因结尾段：重申你的见解或立场文章布局及思路练习题目1---犯法类Somepeoplebelievethatthereshouldbefixedpunishmentsforeachtypeofcrime.Others,however,arguethatthecircumstancesofanindividualcrime,andthemotivationforcommittingit,shouldalwaysbetakenintoaccountwhendecidingonthepunishment.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.正方见解—处分固定1.Fixedpunishmentwillhaveadeterringeffectonsociety.(对有威慑作用),accomplishthepurposeofdeterrenceGuarantee/ensuresocialstabilityandsecuritytoalargeextentAsignofthetriumphofgoodoverevil4.fixedpunishmenttoeachtypeofcrimecouldraiseindividuals’awarenessofobeyingthelaw.反方见解—处分不固定1.Takingthecircumstancesandmotivationofacrimeintoaccountisaprerequisiteforestablishingandensuringjusticeandequity.绿色部分：同类信息大量携带〔并列〕前提,先决条件：precondition,premise,prerequisite在.的前提下:underthepremiseprecondition/prerequisiteof3.Criminallawshavetoprovideminimumandmaximumpenalties处分forthepunishmentandthelawalsohavetoforeseecertaincasesofexemptions.免去，宽免文章布局及思路练习题目2---旅游类Somepeoplebelievethatculturewillberuinedifitisusedtoearntourismrevenue,butothersconsiderthattourismistheonlywayofprotectingaculture.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.正方见解---旅游业有益于文化保护1.Intergratingtourismandculturalheritagecouldprovideeconomicincentivesforprotectingculture.economicincentives=financialsupport2.Museums,historicalsitesandruinsenablethevisitorstogetadeepinsightintolocalcustomsandpractices,experiencelocaltraditions,artandheritages,respectthehostcommunityanditsenvironment,promotethedialogueovernaturalandculturalresourcesbetweendifferentcountries.反方见解---旅游业有害于文化保护1.Tourismcreatespollutionandwaste.Therubbishdiscardedbytravelerswouldhaveanegativeimpacton/doharmto/dogreatdamagetothetouristspotsandlocalculturalruins.Excessivebuilding(roads,hotelsetc.)destroysnaturalhabitatsandspoilsthelandscape.3.Localtraditionsmaybelostduetotheexoticculturalconflicts.4.Traditionaljobsandskillsdieout(e.g.farming,fishing).Localpeopleareforcedtoworkinthetouristindustry,whichwouldtaketheirattentionandvigorawayfromtheculturalconservation.(二).同意与否型agreeordisagree题目表述：Doyouagreeordisagree?Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?考试要点比方:题目1Itisoftensaidthatthesubjectstaughtinschoolsaretooacademicinorientationandthatitwouldbemoreusefulforchildrentolearnaboutpracticalmatterssuchashomemanagement,workandinterpersonalskills.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?题目2：Somepeoplethinkthatstricterpunishmentfordrivingoffendersistheonlyeffectivewaytoimprovesafetyontheroad.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?同意与否型agreeordisagree写作套路开头段：明确表达个人见解立场辩白段：用2-3个原因(分支论点)为自己立场辩白,每个分支论点后紧跟2-3句支持句退步段：认同对方见解有益处(1句)并讲解(1-2句)，尔后指出其弊端并进一步修正它或提出改进建议(1-2句)结尾段：重申立场并引申展望文章布局及思路练习题目1---教育类Educationusedtobeashortperiodoftraining,buttoday,peopletreatitlikealifelongpractice.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?接受一生教育的原因1.Inordertosurviveinthefiercecompetitionoutofsociety,peopleneedtoreceivereeducationtoimprovequalificationandobtainspecializedexpertiseorall-roundability.People’seducationconceptisintransition,studentsarenotconfinedtoacertainagegroupandeveryonecouldchoosethewayofstudysuitabletohimself.3.Valueoflife,self-value,self-worth,自我价值ambition,questforknowledge求知欲andspiritualneedsmotivate/urge/stimulate/spur促进peopletopursuelifelongeducation.退步：教育能够是短期的Somekindsofschoolingcouldbeaccomplishedinarelativelyshortperiod,suchaslanguagetraining,orcomputerskillstraining.Forsomerelativelyimpoverished/poverty-strickenfamilies,ashort-termeducationismuchmoreaffordableandaccessible.文章布局及思路练习题目2---政府职能类Thereisnowanincreasinglytolerantattitudetowardshomosexualityinsociety,especiallyinthewest.Somegovernmentsshouldchangethelawtoallowhomosexualmarriages.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?同意特别喜好者成婚Effectivelyslowdownthebirthrateandpopulationgrowth.Isgoodforeliminatingdiscriminationagainsthomosexualsingeneral.Ensurethejusticeandequityofsocietyandcivicrights.Lightenthespiritualburdenandkillthelonelinessofthehomosexuals不同样意特别喜好者成婚Asgayorlesbiancouplesareunlikelytohavechildren,thereisnorealnecessityfortherighttomarry---marriageisthegraveoflove.Mostofthemajorreligionsintheworld,suchasChristianity,IslamandJudaismfrownuponhomosexuality.frownupon:不同意，不同意(三).比较优弊端型advantagesanddisadvantages题目表述：AdvantagesanddisadvantagesBenefitsanddangersStrengthsandweaknessMeritsanddrawbacksPositiveandnegative比方:题目1Inordertoimprovethequalityofeducation,studentsshouldbeencouragedtoevaluateandcriticizetheirteachers.Doyouthinktheadvantagesofthispracticeoutweighitsdisadvantages?题目2：Nowadays,moreandmorestudentschoosetopursuetheiradvancedstudyinforeigncountries.Discussthemeritsanddrawbacksofstudyingabroad.比较优弊端型写作套路开头段：先不用表达个人立场主体段1：阐述advantages主体段2：阐述disadvantages结尾段：表达个人立场文章布局及思路练习题目1—教育类Inordertoimprovethequalityofeducation,studentsshouldbeencouragedtoevaluateandcriticizetheirteachers.Doyouthinktheadvantagesofthispracticeoutweighitsdisadvantages?学生参加评估老师的利处1.Contributetotheimprovementofteachingmethods,changethetraditionallearningbyrote照本宣科orspoon-feedschooling.填鸭式学习，booststudents-centered/students-orientededucation,andeventuallyrealizetheimprovementofinstruction.2.Strenghtenteacher-and-studentinteractionandrelationship,openupaheart-to-heartdialoguebetweentheteachersandstudents,whichcouldnotonlyenhancetheteachingqualityoftheteachersbutalsocontributetothepsychologicalgrowthofthepupils.3.Evaluationfromthestudentsmaybethemosteffectiveway,forstudentscouldjudgewhethertheteachingisproductiveornotaccordingtotheincreasedknowledge,comprehension,motivationandresult.学生参加评估老师的害处1.Theevaluationcouldcontainprejudiceandpersonalwillingness,whichcoulddisruptthenormalteachingprocess.2.resultinalossofrespectfortheteachersanddisciplineintheclassroom.3.causethephenomenonthatsometeacherswouldcaterto迎合thestudentsanddistorttheeducationcontent,whichwillmakeeducationloseprestigeandoriginalpurposes.文章布局及思路练习题目2---留学类Nowadays,moreandmorestudentschoosetopursuetheiradvancedstudyinforeigncountries.Discussthemeritsanddrawbacksofstudyingabroad.出国留学的优点Immerseinto融入anenvironmentthatcanaidlanguageslearningExpandone’soutlook,experiencediverseculture,localcustomsandpractices,matchtheneedofthisshrinkingworld.MakefulluseoftheadvancedteachingandexperimentalfacilitiestoimproveacademiclevelPromoteacademiccommunication5.Cultivatetheabilityoflivingaloneandconfidence，layasolidfoundationforthefuture出国留学的弊端1.Causeculturalconflicts,difficulttoassimilate接受anewcultureovercomedifficultyindailylife,feellonelyanddepressed3.Highfinancialexpense,includingcostoflivingandtuitionfees4.Complicatedgroundworkbeforegoingabroad,includingvisa,passportandIELTSishighlytime-consuming(四)个人见解型opinion题目表述：Whatisyouropinionabout?Whatdoyouthinkof?Howdoyouthinkabout?个人见解型写作套路此种题目写法较灵便，你的回复能够是正面也能够是反面，还能够从正反两方面阐述最便利的写作套路：转移成同意与否型agreeordisagree写作套路文章布局及思路练习—动物类Somepeoplestronglyopposeanimalexperimentation,believingthatitcausespaintoanimals,whilesomeotherpeopleconsideritnecessarybecauseitcanpromotethescientificdevelopment.Whatisyouropinion?同意用动物做实验Humancouldnotfindbetterreplacements/alternativesofanimalsatthepresenttime.Humaninterestsshouldbeplacedaboveanimals’welfare健康,幸福,繁华,福利3.Animalexperimentationcontributesto/isconduciveto有助于scientificprogressandbreakthrough不同样意用动物做实验Overexploitationofanimalstodoexperimentwoulddisruptthebiologicalchainandeventheecologicalbalance2.Animalshavetherightoflife生计权likehumanSomepeopleuseanimalstopursuecommercialbenefitsratherthanexperimentalpurposes(五).问题分析型problem+reasons+recommendations题目表述：Whatcausedthisproblem,andwhatsolutionscansolvethisproblem?一般会出现reason,cause,problem,effect,suggestion,solution,recommend,recommendation,what等词(但whatextentdoyouagreeordisagree和whatisyouropinion除外)问题分析型写作套路开头段：背景拓展+改写题目主体段1：列出2-3个原因，每个原因后支持句1-2句主体段2：列出2-3个解决方案，每个方案支持句1-2句结尾段：总结原因和解决方案文章布局及思路练习---环境类Wehavedevelopedintoa“throw-awaysociety”andarefillingupourenvironmentwithplasticbagsandrubbishthatwecannotfullydisposeof.Whatarethecausesofthisphenomenonandrecommendsomemeasurestoreducethisproblem.原因1.populationgrowth-----theincreaseofmaterialneeds----theincrement增添,增量，增添ofrubbish2.Disposableitems---disposablechopsticksLowawarenessofwasteissuesamongthepublicLackeffectivemonitorandsupervisionfromrelevantdepartmentsLack用法1.Vt：lacksthHelackssincerity.2.N:lackofsthLackofsincerityishisbiggestproblem.3.Adj.---Lacking:belackinginsthHeislackinginsincerity.解决方案1.Enforce/enactsomerelatedlawsorrules,stepupsupervision加大看守力度Raisepeople’sawarenessofpreservingenvironment,reducethedischargeofrubbish.AdoptsomerecyclingschemesReducetheuseofrawmaterials原资料总结：分清题型，确定题材题型：五种题型----能够简单归为两大类：1).需要双边讨论:discuss,agree,advantage,opinion2).不需要讨论，需要分析：problem----suggestion换掉被人用烂的恶俗表达1.Payattentionto=lay/placeemphasison=attachimportanceto2.Make/letsbdo=enable/allowsbtodoMakesbadj.=rendersbadj.3.Basis=cornerstone,foundation,groundwork4.Eachcoinhastwosides.=isadouble-edgedsword.5.Sthiswrong=sthisunwarranted/unjustified6.Sthisthefirstthing=giveprioritytosth7.Belikelytodo=tendtodo=beinclinedtodo8.Thereisnodoubtthat=Itgoeswithoutsayingthat=itismanifestthat.9.Mostlikely,=inalllikelihood,=asisoftenthecase,很可能，平常是10.Thistrendiscommon=thistrendisnotrestrictedto..这个现象不只限于11.Inthisside/aspect=inthisrespect/regard在这方面12.Mostofthetime=moreoftenthannot,constantly,frequently13.Difficult=painstaking,burdensome,troublesome,formidable,rough,stiff,knottydifficulty=hardship,adversity,obstacle14.Realize=beawareof,beconsciousofConsider=takeintoaccount,takeintoconsideration,takeaccountof.Help=aid(n,v)/assist(v)/assistance(n)17.Sbmaydo=itisstandardpracticeforsomeonetodo某人平常会18.Sbshoulddo=sbwouldbewell-advisedtodo某人应当做19.AisimportanttoB=AistoBwhatfoundationistoaskyscraper./wateristofish./heartistoaman.高分合成字典范：time-consuming,time-saving,fast-paced,thought-provoking,attention-getting,environmentally-friendly,decision-maker,fast-changing,well-informed,在高分范文搜寻积累，好的表达不是难词，而是巧词妙词，不要显摆专业术语五.雅思大作文审题要素找要点词：先确定主语和谓语2.找拥有强烈意愿的修饰语：adj,adv找句子骨干:先主句，后从句；先主谓宾，再定状补依照题目表述确定文章题型，题材，文章布局每个题目最少读3遍比方：Successfulsportsprofessionalscanearnagreatdealofmoneythanpeopleinotherimportantprofessions.Somepeoplethinkthisisfullyjustifiedwhileothersthinkitisunfair.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.题材：体育媒体类题型：discuss文章布局：四段式---开头段反方见解正方见解你的见解六.雅思讨论文开头段写法(一)agree,discuss,advantage,opinion开头段写法：(3句话左右)Sentence1:background/generalstatement背景介绍，引入话题Sentence2:rephrasethetopic/thesisstatement改写题目,点明论题，两方见解Sentence3:personalopinionorbriefdescriptionofthemainbody个人见解立场〔主体部分的简要介绍〕怎样写Sentence1---背景句：记着常用句式例:Somepeoplewhohavebeensuccessfullyinthesocietydon’tattributetheirsuccesstothetheoreticalknowledgetheylearnedfromtheiruniversity.Doyouagreeordisagree?背景句典范1：Incontemporarysociety,theimportanceoftheoreticalknowledgetoone’ssuccessisatopicwhichhasarousedpublicattentionanddebate.已经惹起关注，讨论，争议hasaroused/sparked/givenriseto/created/caused/provoked/triggered/invited惹起hot/heated/fierce热忱的，强烈的debate/discussion/controversy/concern/attention讨论，争议，关注背景句典范2:Inthepresentage,theoreticalknowledgeisplayingasignificantpartineverywalkoflife,nevertheless,individualshavehadahardtimereachingconsensusonwhetheroursuccessresultsfromthetheoreticalknowledgelearnedfromuniversities.reachconsensuson对完成共鸣背景句典范3Theimportanceoftheoreticalknowledgetoone’ssuccessisamatterfordebate/isafrequenttopicofdiscussion.背景句典范4：Individualshavelongbeeninterestedinidentifyingthefactorsthatcontributetopersonalachievement.背景句常用表达Inthefast-changingworld,heateddebatehasbeengoingonconcerningwhetherNowadays,isatopicofpublicinterestandconcern.Inthecontemporaryworld,therehasbeenmuchdiscussionrevolvingaroundtheissueofwhetherWhenitcomesto,peoplehavemixedviewsonwhetherNowadaysthereisagrowingawareness/tendencyamongthepublicthat6.ItishightimethatweexploredthetruthofNowhereinhistoryhastheissuebeenmorevisiblethat8.Commonsense/Commonknowledgetellsusthat9.Inthisfast-pacedworld,neveristheissueconcerning(whether)failingtoattractoureyes.isafrequenttopicofdiscussion.首句—背景句写作练习Theadvertisingisdiscouragingpeoplefrombeingindividualandmakespeoplebeorseemtobethesame.Doyouagreeordisagree?Discourage:1.负气馁;使丧气；使气馁

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1Theinfluenceofadvertisingonourbuyingbehaviorsisasubjectmatter.Subjectmatter:2Inrecentyears,muchmoreemphasisthaneverbeforehasbeenplacedontheinfluenceofadvertising.Sentence2---,1:Doyouthinkitisbettertosendcriminalstojailorletthemreceiveeducationorjobtraining?----Thetreatmentofcriminalshasbeenopentodebateinrecentyears.Someindividualsclaimthatimprisonmentisbetterthaneducationorjobtrainingintreatingcriminals,whileothersbelievetheotherwayaround.believetheotherwayaround:1.Whenitcomestosomeindividualsassert/claim/arguethat,whileothersbelievetheotherwayaround.2.Peopleholddifferent/divergent/contrasting/conflicting/contradictory/opposingviews/perspectives/standpointswithreferenceto/concerning3.Thereisaperceptionthat,whileacounterargumentisthat4.Currentlypeopleinever-increasingnumbersarecomingtobeawareoftheimportanceof.Someindividualsareagainstandsomeforit.5.Thereisnoconsensusofopinionamongthepublicastothestandpointof.Somesuggestthat,whileothersarguethatnowplayssuchanessentialpartinourlifethatitisnecessaryforustohaveaclearperspectiveofwhetheritisablessingoracurse.Witheveryrespecttakenintoaccount,Ibelievethathasbothmeritsanddemerits.7.Perhapsnothingismoredominant/popular/indispensable/attention-gettingthaninthemodernworld.Obviously,itdoessomegoodtous.Whenweapplauditsbenefits,nevertheless,itisnecessaryforustoacknowledgeitsenormouspotentialthreat/danger/damage/harmtoourlife.Sentence3---1.Personally,Iaminfavoroftheformer/thelatterview.2.Frommyperspective,Ifirmlysubscribetotheopinionthat3.Asforme,IvoteforthestandpointthatIaminclinedtothepointthatAsfarasIamconcerned,myfavorgoestothepointthatIamfirmlyconvincedthatPersonally,ItendtobelievethatMypersonalviewisthatInthisessay,Iwillcompareandcontrastthetwotypicalviewsregardingthisissue.Therearesomepointsinbothaspects.Thisessaywillcompareandcontrastitsbenefitsanddownsides.开头段最后一句承前启后的过渡性句子1.Mystatementwillbejustifiedandexemplifiedinthefollowingaspects.AsfarasIamconcerned,themeritsoffailtojustifythedemerits.Withregardtothisissue,adetailedanalysiswillbeprovidedinthefollowingtextfromtheperspectiveofmyown.3.Thereasonsformysupportofthisviewareoutlinedasfollows.牛掰~~~Thereareseveralpointstobelistedasfollowstojustifymyperspective.牛掰~~~Convincingandlogicalargumentscanbemadethat..(能够提出有说服力的凭证来证明.的见解),andmyviewsarebasedonthefollowingconsiderations.牛掰~~~开头段写作练习练习1.Somepeoplebelievethatairtravelshouldberestrictedbecauseitcausesseriouspollutionandusesuptheworld’sresources.Doyouagreeordisagree?练习1参照开头段答案：Thereislittleroomfordoubtabouttheconveniencebroughtbyairtraveltoeverywalkoflife.Nonetheless,withreferencetoitsimpactontheenvironment,noconsensushasbeenarrivedat.AsfarasIamconcerned,itsbenefitsfailtojustifyitsharmfuleffects.Adetailedanalysiswillbeprovidedinthefollowingtextfromtheperspectiveofmyown.练习2.Childreninsecondaryschoolstudyinternationalnewsasasubject,butsomethinkthatisawasteoftime.Discussbothviews.练习2参照开头段答案：Internationalnewsrepresentsoneofthemainsourcesofinformationfromwhichwediscoverwhatishappeningaroundtheworld.Nevertheless,whenitcomestoincludingitinthecurriculuminsecondaryschool,thereisanongoingdebate.Mypersonalviewisthatstudyinginternationalnewsisofbenefitstostudents.练习3.Inmanycountrieschildrenareengagedinsomekindofpaidwork.Somepeopleregardthisascompletelywrong,whileothersconsideritasvaluableworkexperience,importantforlearningandtakingresponsibility.Whatareyouropiniononthis?练习3参照开头段答案：Theissueofchildrendoingpaidworkisacomplexandsensitiveone.Itisdifficulttosaywhohastherighttojudgewhetherchildrenworkingiswrongorvaluable.Opinionswillalsodifferastolearningbenefits:nodoubtteachersandfactoryowners,forexample,wouldhavevaryingconcerns.练习4.Somepeopleprefertospendtheirlivesdoingthesamethingsandavoidingchange.Others,however,thinkthatchangeisalwaysagoodthing.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.练习4参照开头段答案：Overthelasthalfcenturythepaceofchangeinthelifeofhumanbeingshasincreasedbeyondourwildestexpectations.Thishasbeendrivenbytechnologicalandscientificbreakthroughsthatarechangingthewholewayweviewtheworldonanalmostdailybasis.Thismeansthatchangeisnotalwaysapersonaloption,butaninescapablefactoflife,andweneedtoconstantlyadapttokeeppacewithit.考官稀少用词组~~~1.beyondourwildestexpectations高出了我们最狂野的想象，让人惊讶=atastaggeringrateonandailybasis以平常的基础，每日adaptto:适应keeppacewith与保持同步，齐驱并驾开头段“四不要”不要照搬照抄题目不要太负担冗长，一般3句左右不要模板化印迹太重不要出现任何语法和拼写错误，要不考官会吐血的问题解决型开头段写法：3句话左右Sentence1:文章的背景介绍，引入话题〔同其他四类开头段写法〕Sentence2:概括造成这一问题的原因Sentence3:说明文章要讨论的内容例:Whatarethecausesandsolutionsofproblemofthescarcityofwaterresources?Sentence1:背景句：Watershortageisoneofthemostchallengingissuestoaddressinmanycountriesonaworldwidescale.onaworldwidescale:在世界范围内Sentence2:概括原因Therearesomefactorscontributingtothisproblem.Sentence3:表示下文Inthisessay,themostcommonfactorswillbediscussedandanalyzed,followedbysomeresponsiblesolutions.问题类开头段常用句总结Inthisageofchange,thehumansocietyisprocessingrapidlyinvariousfields.Yetmeanwhile,manyproblemshavearisen,anattention-getting/thought-provokingoneofwhichis.Inthisessay,somepossiblecausesofthisphenomenonwillbeanalyzedandsomeadvisablesolutionswillbeproposedaswellfromtheperspectiveofmyown.Advisable=feasible=available可取的，可行的，理智的问题类开头段练习1练习：Intermsoflivingstandards,thereisagapbetweenlivinginthecityandlivinginthecountryside.Whatarethereasonsinyourcountryandhowcanthedifferencebereduced?问题类开头段1练习参照答案Intermsofstandardofliving,thegapbetweentheurbanareasandruralareasiswideningatastaggeringrateinmanynations.Therearesomefactorscontributingtothisissue.Thefocusofthisessayistoillustratethecausesandexploresomerelevantandfeasiblemeasurestocombatthissituation.问题类开头段练习2Happinessisconsideredveryimportantinlife.Whyisitdifficulttodefine?Whatfactorsareimportantinachievinghappiness?问题类开头段2练习参照答案Happinessisverydifficulttodefine,becauseitmeanssomanydifferentthingstodifferentpeople.Whilesomepeoplelinkhappinesstowealthandmaterialsuccess,othersthinkitliesinemotionsandlovingpersonalrelationship.Yetothersthinkthatspiritualpaths,ratherthaneitherthematerialworldortherelationshipswithpeople,aretheonlywaytotruehappiness.问题类开头段练习3Inmanycountriesschoolshavesevereproblemswithstudentbehavior.Whatdoyouthinkarethecausesofthis?Whatsolutionscanyousuggest?问题类开头段3练习参照答案PoorstudentsbehaviorseemstobeanincreasinglywidespreadproblemandIthinkmodernlifestylesareresponsibleforthis.七.雅思讨论文主体段写法1.主体段整体要求：1〕correctness(正确性)：用词句法正确2〕coherence&consistency(一致性):前后论证一致，逻辑性好3〕cogency(说服力):见解要有力度,紧扣题目2.主体段构造：Topicsentence+Supportingsentences(1)Topicsentence:highlightyourcentralpointwithonesentence(1sentence)(2)Supportingsentences：sentencesfortheextension,explanationandjustificationofthetopicsentences(2—3sentence)例:Dothepositiveeffectsofadvertisingoutweighitsnegativeeffects?例题三个分支见解Tobeginwith,oneofthemajorfunctionsofadvertisingistoassistconsumerstofindandbuysuitableproducts.〔正面见解1〕Whatisalsoworthnoticinghereisthatadvertisingservestostimulateconsumptionandcontributestoeconomicdevelopment.〔正面见解2〕3.Inspiteofitsimportance,thereisnodenyingthateverynowandthen,advertisingleadscustomersintoanimpulsivepurchase,therebycausingwastefulspending.〔反面见解〕3.写分支见解的注意事项分支见解要清楚显然:放在段首分支见解之间使用信号词：分支见解之间要有显然的逻辑连结词来彰显清楚的构造和思路先重后轻原则:2-3个论点依听说服力合理排序分支见解之间不要语意重复或重叠分支见解追求reasonable,不要别开生面4.怎样构想分支见解？----全能原因(一)与物有关的话题：1.便利和方便：节俭时间，提高效率，加速节奏Convenience:betime-saving,enhanceefficiency,quickenthetempoof经济和发展：带来就业机会，提高就业率，增添税收收入，促进当地经济发展，促进有关产业发展Economyanddevelopment:bringjobopportunities,raiseemploymentrate,increasetaxrevenue,promotetheprogressoflocaleconomyandrelevant/associatedindustries安全：食品安全，人身安全，财产安全，社会安全security:food,personal,property,socialsecurity空间：过分建设,占用土地，生活空间减少，人口密集，对当地造成就业，资源，交通各方面压力Space:overconstruction,occupylandillegally,thedecreaseoflivingspace,bethicklypopulated,posegreatpressureonemployment,resourcesandtraffic环保和生态：损坏或保护生态环境，生态平衡，荒漠化，滥砍滥伐，酸雨，臭氧层空洞，噪音，水污染，温室效应，辐射，白色垃圾Environmentalprotection:damageecologicalenvironment,ecologicalbalance,desertification,deforestation,acidrain,ozonedepletion,noise,waterpollution,greenhouseeffect,radiation,whitetrash科技发展：全球化带来机会和挑战，工业生产，高科技产业，媒体，网络，高效率，数字化Scientificdevelopment:globalizationhasbroughtopportunitiesandchallenges,industrialproduction,high-techindustry,medium(复数media),theInternet,highefficiency,digitization社会：社会整体发展,公共设备，法律，社区安全，医疗卫生Society:theoveralldevelopmentofsociety,infrastructure,lawsandprinciples,communitysafety,medicaltreatmentandhygiene〔二〕与人有关的话题：1.健康：身体健康---营养平衡，强壮体魄，缓解压力，减少忧虑，辐射，垃圾食品的危害Health：Physicalhealth:nutritionbalance,buildupone’sstrength,relieve/easestress,reduceanxiety,radiation,junkfood心理健康---面对困难和挑战时乐观积极，充分认识自己，对自己的能力作适合的估价保持优秀的人际关系，适当的情绪表达与控制，保持人格的完满与友好Psychological/mentalhealth:optimisticandmotivated,fullyunderstandoneself,properlyevaluateone’sability,keeplovinginterpersonalrelationship,properemotionexpressionandcontrol,keeppersonalitycompleteandharmonious沟通和感情：交朋友，集体活动，促进互相沟通和理解，增进感情，扩大视野，促进人际关系发展communication:groupactivities,promotemutualunderstanding,promotefeeling,expandone’soutlook,promoteinterpersonalrelationship成就感和自我价值：为国家增添荣誉，获得社会和民众必然，实现自我潜力和价值，成立正确价值观Asenseofachievementandself-value:addhonortothecountry,receiveappreciationandapprovalfromthesocietyandpublic,realizeone’spotentialandvalue,establishone’svalue4.经验习惯：知识积累，工作和生活经验丰富，好的习惯促进人格的全面健康发展Experienceandhabit:accumulateknowledge,enrichworkandlife,goodhabitspromotetheall-roundgrowthofpersonality5.品德：独立，合作精神，不卑不亢，乐观，勤奋，负责，老实，成熟Personality:independent,teamwork,cooperativespirits,perseverant/persistent,optimistic,diligent,responsible,honest,mature5.怎样写分支见解后的支持句分支见解后的支持句很重要！！考官最喜欢把玩你的地方最能表达你逻辑思想的地方凑字数的最好方式4.每个分支见解后的支持句最少2-3句，能够连续多发挥几句，但不要高出5句写支持句的五大方法Explanation:延长讲解法---对分支见解进行讲解和说明，进一步细化它的含义---车轱辘话法常用讲解句表达：Thatistosay,Thatmeans.Tobemoreprecise/specific,2.Extension:因果关系法分支见解中的情况出现——影响原因——分支见解中的情况出现追忆分支见解中的现象产生的原因，或许分之见解中的现象会致使什么结果主题句：Therearemorejobopportunitiesreadilyavailableinthebigcitiesthaninsmalltowns.支持句:Theeconomicconditionsinbigcitiesaregenerallybetterthanthoseinsmalltowns,which,inreturn,attractsmoreinvestmentfromcommercialcorporations.Therefore,comparedwithmostofsmalltowns,therearealwaysmoremodernandinternationalenterpriseswhichcanoffercityresidentsnumerousjobopportunities.原因句常用表达Oneofthemostcommonfactorsisisalsoresponsibleforthisproblem.istherootcauseofthisphenomenon.AnothercontributingfactorisPerhapstheprimaryreasonisData:胡扯数据法用数听闻话，能够依照题目适合编撰，但不要太离谱，必然要写明数据出处常用表达：Accordingtoarecentlyconductedresearch/investigation/surveybyauthorities/department,.Peopleinmyhometowndonotcareaboutforest.Theyareshortsightedastosellthesetreescheaply.Theirdescendentswouldhavenotreesiftheycontinuedtodoso.2.Accordingtoarecentlyconductedinvestigationbythegovernmentinmyhometown,myhometownusedtohaveonemillionacresofforest.Peoplehereareshortsightedastosellthetreesfor$10perpiece.Treesaresoldatarateofapproximately100thousandpiecesannually,aspeedfastenoughtoleavenotreestotheirdescendentswithinadecade.4.contrasting比较反证法--假定消失法描绘和中心句相反的情况,或许对题目中的要点词进行假定(在无言以对时特别有效的一种方法)主题句：Themostapparentlyimportantcharacteristicofairplanetravelisthehighspeedinvolved.支持句：Ahundredyearsago,whenwedidnothavetheflightsinthesky,andwhentherewereonlyships,theonlytransportationfacilityacrosstheocean,aninternationaljourneywasexhaustingandtime-wasting.IttookweekstocrosstheAtlanticorPacificoceansviaaship.Todaywiththeadventofairplanesinourlife,thosesametripscouldbeaccomplishedinamatterofhours.常用假想句总结,wewould2.Ifwedidnothaveinourlifeinthefuture,wewould..3.Onehundredyearsagowhenwedidnothaveinourlife,.4.Thesituationwouldbecompletelydifferentwithout5.Exemplification:举例论证法举例论证分支见解更为详尽形象举例常用表达总结：Forexample/forinstanceTake..forexample,take..asanexampleisacaseinpoint.ThispointcanbeconfirmedbytheexampleofThispointisbestillustratedwiththeexampleof5.Frommyownperspective,noillustrationismoreconvincingthanthisone.6.couldbestsubstantiatemypointofview.用事实支持(某主张、说法等);证明,证明7.Whatcanvividlyexemplifythisfactis举例论证时的注意事项平常而非个人：根绝举个人经历的例子，自己，亲戚，朋友---将个人例子宽泛化，转变成一种宽泛趋势根绝中式谚语：不要硬性翻译中式谚语，外国谚语能够考虑，但也不可以泛滥。“是福不是祸是祸躲可是”3.少举纯中国式的例子：一个国家不代表整体，上涨为好多国家的共同情况1.ManyfactoriesinChinadisposeofindustrialwastewithoutanypreliminarytreatment.2.Manyfactoriesaroundtheworld,especiallythoseindevelopingcountries,disposeofindustrialwastewithoutanypreliminarytreatment.怎样写支持句举例Tobeginwith,oneofthemajorfunctionsofadvertisingistoassistconsumerstofindandbuysuitableproducts.〔正面见解1〕Whatisalsoworthnoticinghereisthatadvertisingservestostimulateconsumptionandcontributestoeconomicdevelopment.〔正面见解2〕3.Inspiteofitsimportance,thereisnodenyingthateverynowandthen,advertisingleadscustomersintoanimpulsivepurchase,therebycausingwastefulspending.〔反面见解〕拓展例题的第一个分支见解Tobeginw