2016年高考英语新题型-续写

读后续写训练12021/5/91Myfatherisa________

tome.teacherfriendsupermanheroliar2021/5/92Sometimesloveishiddenbehindactions,whichmaybeunseentooureyeswithoutspecialattention.Whathaveyoulearnedfromthevideo?2021/5/93Readingforbrief

informationWho:What:acoupleoflovers,God,thedoctor____coupleofloversledan________(envy)lifeinatown.___________(fortunate),themanhadanaccidentandwasseverely_____(injure).Thewoman___________(attend)himdayandnight._________herloverwasstillsleeping,_________(hope),shemadeadeal______God:tobeabutterflyforthreeyearsinexchangefortheman’s________(recover),_____wasahardchoicebuteasytomaketoawillingheart.AenviableUnfortunatelyinjuredattendedtoButhopelesslywithrecoverywhich2021/5/94ReadingforsummaryTheplot（情节）ofthestoryDevelopmentEndingBeginningClimax(高潮)A.Themanwasbadlyinjuredandshowednosignsofrecovery.B.ThewomandealtwithGodtosaveherloverbutanothergirlappearedbetweenthem.C.Themanandthewomanhadanenviablelove.ACB2021/5/95

*structures（结构）*sentencepatterns

（句式）*words&phrases（词和短语）1*theme：negative/positive*interpretation（解意）*keywords（关键词）

*clues（线索）Step3polish（润色）Step2draft（拟稿）

Step1compose(构思）

Readingforwriting2021/5/96

underlinedwordsenjoyingthesunrisethesunsetconsciousnessthechurchGodtearsloveregretbecamethebutterflyflysweetheart-stricken

underlinedwords（选5个以上）who(人物）：God

thebutterflywhere（地点）：thechurchevent（事件）：enjoyingthesunrisethesunsetconsciousnesstearsloveregretbecameflysweetheart-stricken

clues“Icanhelpyou…for

threeyears…”“Yes,Ido!iwon’tregretdoingthat!”Godalsofeltsad…“Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone?”2021/5/97ReadingforcreationThepossibleversionsoftheendinge….b.Themanandthedoctormarried,andthewomanremainedtobeabutterfly.Themanandthedoctormarried,andthewomanleft.c.Themanproposedtothedoctor,butGoduncoveredthetruthtothemanandgavetheseparatedloversahappyreunion.d.Themanproposedtothedoctor,butGoduncoveredthetruthtothemanwhichinvolvedhiminadilemma.Finally,themanleft.√negativenegativepositivenegative2021/5/98Competition2021/5/99Chooseyourteamleader!2021/5/9101.目睹；见证

(2分)vt._________2.他说过的最甜蜜的话(2分)（提示词sweet）_________________________________3.蝴蝶难过得情不自禁地哭了。(4分)（提示词tears）__________________________________________________________________see/witnessThesweetestwordshehaseversaidThebutterflycouldn’thelpsheddinghertearssadly./Thebutterflycouldnolongerholdbackthetears./Tearsfilledhereyesandthebutterflycouldnolongercalmdown.2021/5/9112.第三年的最后一天(2分)____________________________Onthelastdayofthethirdyear1.变深；使加深(2分)vt./vi._________deepen3.他们的爱已成为回忆。(4分)____________________________________________________________Theirlovehasbecomememories./Theirlovehasturnedintomemories./Theirlovehasbecomeapast.2021/5/9122.揭露真相(2分)_____________________1.被打动的；受感动的(2分)adj.be_________bytoucheduncoverthetruth/exposethetruth/revealthetruth/moved/impressed3.对于我为他所做的事我从来没有后悔过。(4分)

（提示词regret,用倒装句式）________________________________________________________________NeverhaveIregrettedforwhatIhavedoneforhim.2021/5/9131.唤醒(2分)vt._________awaken/rouse2.遭受许多挫折(2分)_____________________gothroughmanyobstacles/suffermanystruggles3.男人震惊了，越发觉得后悔和内疚(4分)

（提示词regrets/guilt）____________________________________________________________________________Themanwasshocked,andthefeelingofregretsandguiltgrewstronger.2021/5/914draftParagraphy1:Thebutterflyknewthatalltheseshouldhavebelongedtoher,butnowtheybelongedtoanotherwoman.Shecoulddonothingbutrestontheman’sshoulderoffandon.__________________________________________________Paragraphy2:Godalsofeltsadandsighedtothebutterfly,“Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone?”________________________________________________________四人一组，完成写作任务，每人扮演重要角色如下：Role1：ThemecontrollerRole2：StructurebuilderRole3：GrammarcheckerRole4：Coherence(连贯）master（每人至少写两句）

VersionCThemanproposedtothedoctor,butGoduncoveredthetruthtothemanandgavetheseparatedloversahappyreunion.2021/5/915Paragraphy1:Thebutterflyknewthatalltheseshouldhavebelongedtoher,butnowtheybelongedtoanotherwoman.Shecoulddonothingbutrestontheman’sshoulderoffandon.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________draft

Itwasheartbrokentoseetheirlovedeependaybyday.Timewentbyquickly.OnthelastdayofthethirdyearwhenthedealbetweenGodandthebutterflywasalmostover,themanproposedtohisgirlfriend.Hetookoutabeautifulringandsworethesweetestwordshehaseversaid.Hearingthis,thebutterflycouldn’tbreathe.Herdarkeneyeswerefulloftears.sheflewawaysilentlyingreatgriefanddespair.Atthatmoment,sherealizedthathewouldn’tknowhersacrificesandtheirlovehasbecomeapast.2021/5/916Paragraphy2:Godalsofeltsadandsighedtothebutterfly,“Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone?”____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________draft

Thebutterflysaid,“No.NeverhaveIregrettedforwhatIhavedoneforhim.”movedbyherwords,Godwaslostinthought:shehadgonethroughsomanystrugglesandsheshouldn’tdeservethat.So,thedaybeforethemanandthedoctor’swedding,Goduncoveredthewholetruthtohim.Obviously,themanwasshockedandthefeelingofregretsandguiltgrewstronger.Thelovedeepinsidewasawakened.Herushedtothechurchtobegforthewoman’sforgiveness.Andhedeterminedthatthistimehewon’tlethergo.Hewilltakehertoenjoythesunriseandthesunsetforalifetime.

2021/5/917Paragraphy1:ThebutterflyknewthatalltheseshouldhavebelongedToher,butnowtheybelongedtoanotherwoman.Shecoulddonothingbutrestontheman’sshoulderoffandon.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________afterrevisionWitnessingtheirlovedeepen

witheachpassingdayswasextremelyhardforher.Timeslippedbyquickly.OnthelastdayofthethirdyearwhenthedealbetweenGodandthebutterflywasalmostover,themanproposedtohisgirlfriendwithabeautifulring,swearingthesweetestwordshehaseversaid.Thebutterflycouldnolongerholdbacktears.Shewastremblingandcouldnotfeelherheartbeating.Withdeepgriefandgreatdespair,sheflewaway.Atthatmoment,shecompletelyrealizedthattimehasburiedeverythingaswellashersacrifices,andtheirlovehasturnedintodustymemories.2021/5/918Paragraphy2:Godalsofeltsadandsighedtothebutterfly,“Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone?”______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thebutterflycleanedhertearyeyesandsaid,“No.IneverfeelsorryforanythingIdoforhim.”Struckbyherreply,Godwaslostinthought:thewomanwhosufferedsomanystrugglesshouldn’tdeserve

suchatragedy.Andhehadotherplans.Thedaybeforetheirwedding,Godreveal