英语教研组-张迪-原创教学课件

Proof-reading

Part1.Listentoashortpieceofmusic，thencorrectthewrongwords(10)

IwillrunIwillclimbIwillsoar

（1）I’mundefeated

（2）Jumpingoutofmyskinpullthechord

（3）YeahIbelieveit

（4）Thepastiseverythingweweredon’tmakeuswho

weare

（5）soI‘lldreamuntilImakeitreal

andallIseeisstars

（6）It’snotuntilyoufallthatyoufly

（7）Whenyourdreams

comealiveyou‘reunstoppable

（8）take∧shotchasethesun,findthebeautiful

a

（9）Wewillglow

inthedarkturningdusttogold

（10）Andwe'lldreamitpossiblePossibleAndwe’lldreamitpossible

I'vehadmanydreamssinceIwasachild.Nowmydreamistoopensacafe.Thoughitmayappearsimple,itrequiredalotofideasandefforts.WhatIwantisnotjustanordinarilycafebutaveryspecialone.Iwantmycafehaveaspecialthemesuchaslike"TangDynasty".Inthecafe,customerswillenjoyyourselvesinthehistoricalenvironmentwhatiscreatedforthem.IfIsucceedinmanageone,Iwillopenmore.Iwishtohaveachainofcafesinmanydifferentcity.Eachofmycafeswillhaveadifferentthemeandanuniquestyle.requiresthemselvesordinarytothat/whichamanagingcitiesopen∧Part2.实例展现（2019全国3卷）四不改:

①标点符号不改。

②大小写不改。

③词序错误不改。

④单词拼写不改。四原则：1.以保持原意不变为原则2.以单词形式变化最小为原则3.以多“改正”少“添删”为原则4.一对一原则Part3.AnalyzethetextingpointsoftheproofreadingTask1Whatkindoftextingpoints?1.（2019全国卷3）Nowmydreamistoopensacafe.2.（2019全国卷1）Alltheplayersontheplaygroundcheeredloudly,saythatIhadatalentforfootball.

3.（2018全国卷3）ItwasMondaymorning,andthewritingclasshadjustbegin.4..(2018全国3卷）

Everyonewassilent,waittoseewhowouldbecalledupontoreadhisorherparagraphaloud.5.(2017全国卷3）Aboutonemonthafterthisphotowastook,Ienteredmysecondyearofhighschool.6.（2016全国2卷）Someclassmatessuggestwecangotoplacesofinterestnearby.beguntakenwaitingsayingshouldopen一、动词的形

(1)动词的

和

，

不一致的错误；（2）

的误用。（doing，done，todo）（3）偶尔会有

动词的误用。（第6题）时态语态主谓非谓语动词情态动词Task2Whatkindoftextingpoints?1.(2019全国3卷）Iwishtohaveachainofcafesinmanydifferentcity.2.(2019全国2卷）SinceIwasakid,IhaveconsidereddifferentjobIwouldliketodo.

3.(2019全国1卷）Alltheplayerontheplaygroundcheeredloudly4.(2018全国3卷）Theclassroomisaplaceforlearningandthatincludesleaningfromtextbooks,andmistakeaswell."5.(2017全国2卷）Besides,

theyoftengetsomeinformationsfromtheIrmationmistakescitiesjobsplayersSummary二、名词的数1.

与

名词的混用。2.

的

的错用。可数不可数可数单复数注意：可数名词单数形式不能单独使用，要么用复数，要么前面加冠词。常见的不可数名词：air，furniture，equipment，fun,homework,paper,news,progress,advice,information,work(工作），baggage,luggage等等。Task3Whatkindoftextingpoints?1.(2019全国1卷）Istoppedtheballandkickedithardlybacktotheplayground.2.(2019全国2卷）…..,whoseuniformlookedsocoolly.3.(2019全国3卷）WhatIwantisnotjustanordinarilycafébut….4.(2018全国1卷）Ifelthappilythattheirlifehadimproved.5.(2018全国3卷）

Immediate,

Iraisedmyhand.ordinaryImmediatelyhappyhardcoolSummary三、形容词和副词1.形容词和副词

级和

级的使用。

修饰名词。3.

修饰动词、副词、形容词或者

句子。比较最高级形容词副词整个Task4Whatkindoftextingpoints?1.（2019全国卷3）Iwantmycafétohaveaspecialthemesuchaslike“TangDynasty”.2.（2019全国卷2）WhenIstudiedchemistryhighschool…..3.（2018全国卷2）StillIwasunwillingtoplaythegamesforthemsometimes.4.（2017全国卷1）ItwasareliefandIcametoasuddenstopjustinthemiddleontheroad.withof∧in/atSummary四、介词的误用、多用和少用主要考察习惯搭配，错误形式主要有

、

和

少词多词固定搭配Task5Whatkindoftextingpoints?1.（2019全国卷2）WhenIstudiedchemistryathighschool,

Ireconsideredmygoalordecidedtobeadoctor.2.（2019全国卷1）Suddenlyafootballfelljustinfrontofmebutalmosthitme.3.（2019全国卷3）Customerswillenjoythemselvesinthehistoricalenvironmentwhatiscreatedforthem.4.（2018全国卷3）

Everyonewassilent,waitingtoseewhowouldbecalledupontoreadhisandherparagraphaloud.5.（2017全国卷3）Aroundmeinthepicturearethethingstheywereveryimportantinmylifeatthattime.orwhich/thatandandthat/whichSummary五、连词1、连词

等词的前后逻辑误用。2.从句连接词的误用。定语从句名词性从句状语从句but、and、or、so、because、although/though、therefore、howeverTask6Whatkindoftextingpoints?1.（2019全国卷3）Inthecafé,customerswillenjoyyourselvesinthehistoricalenvironment.2.

（2018全国卷3）IhaddonemyselfhomeworkbutIwasshy.3.（2018全国卷2）Theywouldsaytousthatplayingcardswouldhelpmybrain.4.(2017全国卷3）Thispictureoftenbringsbacktomemanyhappymemoriesofyourhighschooldays.my/thememythemselvesSummary六、代词人称数1.前后

不一致。2.人称代词（主格、宾格）、

、

的误用。

的混用和误用。（anything、something、another等。）人称物主代词（形容词性

、名词性物主代词）反身代词不定代词Task7Whatkindoftextingpoints?1.（2019全国卷3）Eachofmycafeswillhaveadifferentthemeandanuniquestyle.2.Suddenlyfootballfelljustinfrontofmebutalmosthitme.3.（2018全国卷1）Duringmylastwinterholiday,Iwenttocountrysidewithmyfathertovisitmygrandparents.4.（2017全国卷3）Aroundmeinpicturearethethingstheywereveryimportantinmylifeatthattime.∧the∧thea∧aSummary七、冠词冠词

、

、

的错用或少用、多用。aanthe八、Payattentiontothesewords(常用词辨析和逻辑）here/therethis/thatever/nevereither/neitherneither/nonebeside/besidesmany/muchago/beforesome/anyboth/all九、Makeaconclusion动词时态和语态主谓一致勿忘记还要注意非谓语名词多考单复数连词并列和从属上下逻辑要清楚形容副词看词性

代词前后要一致介词搭配要记牢

还有冠词a/an/the

改完复查敲定稿Part4.实战演练Boysandgirls,OurclubaimstohelpingtheSenior2students