初三英语写作-省级公开课

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2021/5/91EyesCanSpeakWhentwopeoplearetalking,thelisteneroftenlooksatthespeakers,inorderto________________Whenamansays“Iloveyou”toawoman,hemaylookatthewoman’seyes,inorderto________________When…2021/5/92EyesCanSpeak人们常说眼睛会说话。在生活中，我们经常借助眼睛来表达情感。有时，当别人看我们时，我们会觉得不舒服。Peopleoftensaythateyescanspeak.Inourlife,weoftenexpressourfeelingswiththehelpofoureyes.Sometimes,wemayfeeluncomfortablewhensomeonelooksatus.2021/5/93EyesCanSpeakPeopleoftensaythateyescanspeak.Inourlife,weoftenexpressourfeelingswiththehelpofoureyes.Sometimes,wemayfeeluneasywhensomeonelooksatus.Whentwopeoplearetalking,thelisteneroftenlooksatthespeaker,inordertoshowthatheisinterestedinthespeaker’swords.Whenamansays“Iloveyou”toawoman,hemaylookatthewoman’seyes,inordertoshowthathisfeelingistrueanddeep.Ifwearelookedatbyastrangerformorethannecessary,wewilllookatourselvesupanddown,toseeifthereisanythingwrongwithus.2021/5/94EyesCanSpeakPeopleoftensaythateyescanspeak.Inourlife,weoftenexpressourfeelingswiththehelpofoureyes.sometimes,wemayfeeluneasywhensomeonelooksatus.Whentwopeoplearetalking,thelisteneroftenlooksatthespeaker,inordertoshowthatheisinterestedinthespeaker’swords.Whenamansays“Iloveyou”toawoman,hemaylookatthewoman’seyes,inordertoshowthathisfeelingistrueanddeep.Ifwearelookedatbyastrangerformorethannecessary,wewilllookatourselvesupanddown,toseeifthereisanythingwrongwithus.Forexample,Also,However,Doyouhavesuchkindofexperience?2021/5/95英语写作时常用的过渡语:

表并列：and,_____________________…表转折：but,_____________________…表因果关系：because,_____________________…表先后顺序：First,_____________________…表时间关系：when,_____________________…表列举说明：forexample,_____________________…发表观点：inmyopinion,_____________________…表总结陈词：ingeneral,_____________________…2021/5/96英语写作时常用的过渡语:

表并列：and,besides,inaddition,what’smore,…表转折：but,yet,however,onthecontrary,…表因果关系：because,so,therefore,asaresult…表先后顺序：First,Second,Third,Next,Then,Finally…表时间关系：when,while,after,before,then,…表列举说明：forexample,forinstance,suchas…发表观点：inmyopinion,tomyunderstanding,frommypointofview,…表总结陈词：ingeneral,inall,inaword,generallyspeaking…2021/5/97EyesCanSpeakPeopleoftensaythateyescanspeak.Inourlife,weoftenexpressourfeelingswiththehelpofoureyes.sometimes,wemayfeeluneasywhensomeonelooksatus.whentwopeoplearetalking,thelisteneroftenlooksatthespeaker,inordertoshowthatheisinterestedinthespeaker’swords.whenamansays“Iloveyou”toawoman,hemaylookatthewoman’seyes,inordertoshowthathisfeelingistrueanddeep.Ifwearelookedatbyastrangerformorethannecessary,wewilllookatourselvesupanddown,toseeifthereisanythingwrongwithus.Forexample,Also,However,Doyouhavesuchkindofexperience?

Generallyspeaking,eyecontactshouldbedoneaccordingtotherelationshipbetweentwopeopleandtheplacewherewestay.2021/5/98

文章结构1.Heading点题，概括性2.Body中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending小结，呼应主题2021/5/99EyesCanSpeakPeopleoftensaythateyescanspeak.Inourlife,weoftenexpressourfeelingswiththehelpofoureyes.sometimes,wemayfeeluneasywhensomeonelooksatus.whentwopeoplearetalking,thelisteneroftenlooksatthespeaker,inordertoshowthatheisinterestedinthespeaker’swords.whenamansays“Iloveyou”toawoman,hemaylookatthewoman’seyes,inordertoshowthathisfeelingistrueanddeep.Ifwearelookedatbyastrangerformorethannecessary,wewilllookatourselvesupanddown,toseeifthereisanythingwrongwithus.Forexample,Also,However,Doyouhavesuchkindofexperience?

Generallyspeaking,eyecontactshouldbedoneaccordingtotherelationshipbetweentwopeopleandtheplacewherewestay.

eyescanhelpusexpressourfeelings.2021/5/910Stepbystep1.审2.构3.列4.连5.美文体_____时态_____人称_____连字成句，连句成段在有把握的情况下，变换句型，灵活使用长短句和复合句，使文增色把握文章框架结构，必要时适当增加细节列出要点2021/5/911HaveaTry!2021/5/912

网络已成为我们生活的一部分。请你根据以下要点以“TheInternetinOurLife”为题，用英语写一篇短文.

1.好处：多彩、便捷的生活，如：交友、放松；（请再举一个例子）2.坏处：沉溺于网络，影响身体、学业3.你的观点

（考生自拟，至少一点）

注意：1．词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不