雅思写作高分句子的要求公开课一等奖市优质课赛课获奖课件

雅思写作评分标准TR:TaskResponse回答问题CC:CoherenceandCohesion连贯性及一致性LR:LexicalResource词汇量GR:GrammaticalRangeandAccuracy语法范围及准确性雅思写作高分句子的要求句子：语篇的基本组成单位句子结构：简单句复杂句：并列句、复合句、并列复合句简单句：只包含一个主谓结构的句子。JaneandGeorgearegoodfriends.TheOlympicGamescanpromotefriendshipandboosttheeconomyofthehostcountry.Theroleofgovernmentsinenvironmentalmanagementisdifficultbutinescapable.简单句五种基本句型：无论多么复杂的英语句子都不能离开的五种基本句型。主语+谓语Iworkhard.主语+系动词+表语

Iamsmart.谓语主语+谓语+宾语Iloveyou.主语+谓语+宾语+宾语Myparentsgavemeagift.主语+谓语+宾语+补语Iconsiderhimahero.主语+谓语Crimes

fallsignificantly.犯罪大幅度下降。Recentfiguresofjuvenilecrimeareincreasing.最近青少年犯罪的数量在上升。Withoutguns,bothsuiciderateandhomicideratewillgodown.没有枪，自杀率和他杀率都会下降。主语+系动词

+表语Resistingacriminalwithagunis

thesafestthingtodo.用枪来反抗罪犯是最安全的做法。Thepenaltiesforcriminalsshouldbe

severe.对罪犯的惩罚应该严厉。主语+谓语

+宾语Mediaviolence

canaffect

children’shealth.媒体暴力影响小孩的健康。Gamblingandalcoholabuse

cause

crimesanddestruction.赌博和酗酒导致犯罪和毁灭。主语+谓语

+间接宾语+直接宾语Myparentsbought

meagift

onmybirthday.我的父母在我生日那天给我买了礼物。Communityservicesoffer

wrongdoers

anopportunitytocorrecttheirmisconduct.社区服务给做坏事的人一个改过自新的机会。主语+谓语

+宾语+补语Weconsider

greed

asourceofevils.我们认为贪婪是罪恶的源头。Parentsshouldencourage

theirkids

totakepartinmorerewardingactivities.父母应该鼓励孩子参加更多有益的活动。句子成分主语、谓语、宾语、表语、定语、状语、补语、同位语主语Mediaviolencecanaffectchildren’shealth.媒体暴力影响小孩的健康。Gamblingcausescrimesanddestruction.赌博导致犯罪和毁灭。Totelecommuteusuallymeansworkingathome.远程上班通常意味着在家工作。Weconsidergreedasourceofevils.我们认为贪婪是罪恶的源头。TwomillionwereturnedawaybyAmericanofficials.有200万人被美国官员拒绝入境。Thatanationshouldprotectitsculturalheritageisveryessential.国家保护文化遗产是至关重要的。Itisveryessentialthat

anationshouldprotectitsculturalheritage.ItisgenerallyacceptedthattheChinesecivilizationisoneoftheoldestintheworld.人们普遍认为中国文化是世界上最古老的文化之一。Whateffectstourismwillexertonlocalculturearewell-documented.旅游业对当地文化的影响是显而易见的。Howwecancarryforwardourtraditionalartshasbecomeahotissue.如何弘扬传统艺术成了个热门话题。Whatisneededinthiscountryisstrictercontrolofguns.这个国家所需要的是更严格地管理枪支。Whowillberesponsiblefortheseniorcitizenswillbediscussedtomorrow.谁对老年人负责这个问题明天将被讨论。谓语Crimes

fallsignificantly.犯罪大幅度下降。Chinaarrested69,780juveniledelinquentsin2003.2003年中国逮捕了69780青少年罪犯。Withoutguns,thesuicideratewillgodown.没有枪，自杀率会下降。Recentfiguresofjuvenilecrimeareincreasing.最近青少年犯罪的数量在上升。ThegovernmentwasputtinggreateffortstodeveloptheITindustrywhenInternetbubblescollapsed.在互联网泡沫破裂时，政府正努力发展信息产业。Ifweareincapableoflookingafterourownplanet,whatgoodisittogoelsewhere?Wewillbeduplicatingourmistakes.如果我们不能照看自己的星球，去别的地方又有什么好处呢？我们将重复自己的错误。Pornographyhasdevelopedalongsidetechnology.色情业随着科技发展而不断蔓延。TV，radio，newspaperandmagazineshadservedasthemainstreammediabeforetheInternetwasinvented.在互联网发明之前，电视、广播、报纸、杂志是主流媒体。Thehumanracewillhaveimmigratedtoanotherplanetwhentheearthbecomesuninhabitable.在地球变得不适宜居住的时候，人类已经移民到另外的星球上去了。Thecomputerindustryhasbeengrowingrapidlyintheworldinthelastenyears.世界计算机产业在过去几十年发展迅速。Dickhadbeensmokingfortenyearsbeforehedecidedtogiveituplastyear.Dick去年决定戒烟之前，就已经抽了十年了。宾语（动词宾语）Mediaviolencecanaffectchildren’shealth.媒体暴力影响小孩的健康。Totelecommuteusuallymeansworkingathome.远程上班通常意味着在家工作。Mostweightlosersdecidetohaveavegetariandiet.许多减肥者决定吃素。Myparentsboughtmeagift

onmybirthday.我的父母在我生日那天给我买了礼物。Expertspredictthathalfoftheworld’slanguagewillbeextinctin100years.专家预测世界上一半语言100年后会消亡。ManyexpertsdoubtwhetherEnglishshouldbeusedastheonlyglobalofficiallanguage.许多专家怀疑英语是否应该作为全球唯一的官方用语。Idon’tknowwhatisneededinlearningEnglish.我不知道学习英语需要做什么。Wehaven’tdecidedwhowillberesponsiblefortheseniorcitizens.我们还没有决定由谁对老人负责。宾语（介词宾语）Thediseasespreadquicklyacross

thecountry.Youareneveraloseruntilyougiveup

trying.IamsorryforwhatIsaid.宾语（非谓语动词宾语）Taking

ajobforalongtimeisusuallyconsideredaproofofloyalty.长时间从事一份工作通常被认为是忠诚的表现。Educatorsadvisesending

childrentoschoolsinsteadofkeeping

themathome.教育家建议送孩子上学，而不是把他们留在家里。Itisridiculoustoforce

anemployeetoretireattheageof50.强迫员工50退休是荒唐的。Mostweightlosersdecidetohaveavegetariandiet.许多减肥者决定吃素。Facing

highcompetition,peoplemaysuffergreatpressure.面对高度竞争，人们可能承担巨大的压力。Suffering

greatpain,cancerpatientshavetotakesomedrugssometimes.因为忍受巨大的痛苦，癌症病人有时不得不服用毒品。表语Thatanationshouldprotectitsculturalheritageisveryessential.国家保护文化遗产是至关重要的。Theresultofthecompetitionisquitesatisfying.比赛结果很令人满意。Theguestswerequitesatisfiedwiththeparty.客人们对晚会非常满意。Heavyworkpressureisthemajorreasonforfamilybreakdownnowadays沉重的工作压力是家庭破裂的主要原因。Theaimofteleworkissavingcostsandreducingworkload.远程工作的目的是节省成本，减少工作量。Thebestwaytoescapeurbanpollutionistomovetoruralareas.逃避城市污染的最好办法是搬到乡下去．

事实是很多动物被用于医学研究。Thefactisthatmanyanimalsareusedinmedicalresearch.这就是为什么广告被认为是垃圾的原因。ThisiswhyTVcommercialsareregardedasrubbish.Thesearticlesareforintensivereadingwhileotherarticlesareforextensivereading.这些文章是做精读的而其他文章是做泛读的。Mybookisonthedesk.Studentsareintheclassroom.Youdon’tlooklikefifty.Iwillbebacksoon.我马上就回来。Hewasabroadatthetime.他那会儿在国外。Thisisher!It’sme!Fourandtwoissix.定语Junkfoodimpairschildren’shealth.垃圾食品严重危害孩子们的健康。Anursinghouseshouldprovidebetterlivingconditionsandmoreprofessionalcare.敬老院应该提供更好的居住条件和更专业的照料。AlmostalltheChinesebelievethatoverseasstudyisagoodchancetoreceivehighqualityeducationandtoexperiencediversecultures.几乎所有中国人都认为出国留学是接受高质量教育和体验不同文化的好机会。Today’swhite-collarsfaceincreasing

pressure.现今的白领面对越来越大的压力。PracticeistheonlywaytoimproveyourspokenEnglish.练习是你提高口语的唯一方法Petraisingcanturnchildrenintocitizenswhohaveacaringmind.养宠物把孩子培养成具有同情心的人。Peopleundergreatworkstressfindlifefrustratinganddepressing.处于巨大工作压力下的人们觉得生活令人沮丧和压抑。PracticeistheonlywaytoimproveyourspokenEnglish.练习是你提高口语的唯一方法。Withtherapiddevelopmentofeconomy,thenumberofpeopleridingbicyclesisdecreasing.随着经济的快速发展，骑自行车的人数是越来越少。Moneyusedinspaceresearchcanbespentonthepeoplestrugglingunderthepovertyline.用于太空探险的钱可以用在那些在贫困线下挣扎的人们身上。Whatweshoulddonextistoavoideatingfoodrichinfatandcalorie.我们下一步应该做的就是避免吃富含脂肪和热量的事物。状语LastSundaywewenttotheseaside.上星期日我们到海滨去了。（时间状语）Whenhewasstillayoungman,hewasforcedtoleavehishomelandforpoliticalreasons.他在年轻的时候就由于政治原因而被迫离开他的祖国。Whilethefirefightersweretyingtocontrolthefire,helicoptersflewtotheburningbuilding.当消防人员正设法控制火势时，直升机飞向这座燃烧着的大楼。（地点状语）Wherehemademistakes,headmittedthesewillingly.无论在什么地方做错了事，他都乐于承认。Becauseofsuchaclimate,muchofdailylifehappensoutdoors.由于这样的气候，许多日常生活都在户外进行。（原因状语）Manyspecieshavebecomeextinctinthewildsozoosshouldbeestablishedtopreserveasmanyspeciesaspossible.许多物种已经在荒野中灭绝，所以应该建立动物园，保护尽可能多的物种。Let’sgooutforadrivenextSunday.星期天咱们开车出去兜风吧。（目的状语）Schoolsprovidefarmoreservicesinorderthatfreshmencanadjusttothenewcollegelifeassoonaspossible.学校提供更多的服务，目的是使新生尽快适应新的校园生活。补语（宾语补语、主语补语）Weconsidergreedasourceofevils.我们认为贪婪是罪恶的源头。Greedisconsideredasourceofevils.Parentsshouldencouragetheirkidstotakepartinmorerewardingactivities.父母应该鼓励孩子参加更多有益的活动。Kidsshouldbeencouragedtotakepartinmorerewardingactivities.Peopleundergreatworkstressfindlifefrustratinganddepressing.处于巨大工作压力下的人们觉得生活另人沮丧和压抑。Peoplearefoundfrustratedanddepressedwhentheyaretoldthetruthabouttheirdiseases.当病人知道自己的病情真相时，他们会沮丧和压抑。同位语Tom,adoctor,isaveryniceman.Tom,那个医生，是个非常好的人。Thefactthatanationshouldprotectitsculturalheritageisveryessential.国家保护文化遗产很重要。广告给我们提供很多有用的信息。Advertisementssupplyusalotofusefulinformation.简单句：人们变得越来越自私和贪婪。Peoplearebecomingincreasinglyselfishandgreedy.旅游者有机会体验一种完全不同的文化。Touristshavechancetoexperienceacompletely（entirely/totally）differentculture.8月和9月期间汽车价格波动。

fluctuateThepriceofcarsfluctuatesbetweenAugustandSeptember.电视观众的人数在晚上8点到10点之间急剧上升。

TVviewersclimbsignificantlyThenumberofTVviewersclimbssignificantlybetween8pmand10pm.妇女暴力事件最近几十年急剧上升。

femaleviolencerise

dramatically/sharply/significantlyinrecentdecadesFemaleviolencehasrisendramaticallyinrecentdecades.随着经济的快速发展，环境也在不断地恶化。

worsen/deteriorateTheenvironmenthasbeenworsening/deterioratingalongwiththerapiddevelopmentofeconomy.克隆技术是违背自然和不道德的。

cloningunnaturalnotethicallycorrectCloningisunnaturalandnotethicallycorrect.网上一些信息是误导人的和带有欺骗性的。

ontheInternetmisguidingandcheatingSomeinformationontheInternetismisguidingandcheating.这个方案听起来相当令人信服和具有建设性。

projectconvincingandconstructiveThisprojectsoundsquiteconvincingandconstructive.逃避城市污染的最好办法就是搬到乡下去。

escapeurbanpollutionruralareasThebestwaytoescapeurbanpollutionistomovetoruralareas.许多稀有物种处于灭绝的边缘。

rarespeciesbeontheedgeofextinctionManyrarespeciesareontheedgeofextinction.巨大的工作压力是家庭破裂的主要原因。

heavyworkpressurefamilybreakdownthemajorreasonHeavyworkpressureisthemajorreasonoffamilybreakdown.不良的生活习惯有害健康。

improperlivinghabitsimpairImproperlivinghabitsimpairourhealth.打游戏机浪费父母的血汗钱。

computergameswaste/squanderhard-earnedmoney/cashPlayingcomputergamessquandersparents’hard-earnedmoney.旅游业无限制的发展破坏生态平衡。

unrestrictedbreaktheecologicalbalanceUnrestricteddevelopmentoftourismbreakstheecologicalbalance.跳槽给人们展示才艺的机会。

job-hoppingofferanopportunityshow/displayone’stalentsJob-hoppingofferspeopleanopportunitytoshowtheirtalents.该表格向我们展示了关于性别和爱好之间关系的调查结果。

tableshowasurveyon…

therelationshipbetweengenderandhobbiesThetableshowsustheresultsofasurveyontherelationshipbetweengenderandhobbies.紧张的生活令许多人生病。

thestressfullifeThestressfullifemakesmanypeoplesick.急剧上升的失业率使人沮丧和压抑。

thesoaringunemploymentratefrustrateddepressedThesoaringunemploymentratemakespeoplefrustratedanddepressed.英语中，人们称肥胖的人为沙发土豆。

namesb./sth.…couchpotatoInEnglish,peoplenamefatpeoplecouchpotatoes.我们认为摄像头的安装是对人隐私的侵犯。

theinstallationofcamerasconsider…(tobe)…/regard…as…aninfringementonpeople’sprivacyWeconsidertheinstallationofcameras（tobe）aninfringementonpeople’sprivacy.互联网使我们很容易接触到全世界最新的资讯。

theInternetenablesb.todohaveeasyaccesstothelatestinformationTheInternetenablesustohaveeasyaccesstothelatestinformationworldwide专家建议政府拆除市区里的旧房子来改善城市形象。

expertadvisesb.todosth.demolishinthedowntownareapromotethecityimageExpertsadvisethegovernmenttodemolishtheoldhousesinthedowntownareatopromotethecityimage.并列句：两个或以上独立分句并列连词或连接性副词各分句主谓完整各分句意思同等重要，互相独立主要连词：and，but，or，neither…nor，yet常用的连接副词：however，therefore，nevertheless，asaresult，instead，thus，incontrast，atthesametime，ontheotherhand，consequently，inaddition，furthermore把小孩送到寄宿学校是个好主意，但是对于许多家庭而言，它是个奢侈的梦想。boardingschoolaluxurySendingchildrentoaboardingschoolisagoodideabutitisaluxurytomanyfamilies.许多广告确实提供了有关产品的重要信息，然而，其中一些却是误导人的和带有欺骗性的广告。Manyadvertisementsdogiveimportantinformationaboutproducts；however，someofthemaremerelymisleadingandcheating.要保护野生动物，否则生态平衡会被打破。thewildlifetheecologicalbalanceThewildlifeshouldbeprotected;otherwise,theecologicalbalancewillbebroken.看电视是一种便宜的娱乐方式，此外，它还是学习英语的好途径。

cheap/inexpensiveformofentertainmentagoodwaytodosth.WatchingTVisaninexpensiveformofentertainment;additionally,itisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.广告在美国商业中起着重要的作用，而且它对国家的经济有着极大的影响。

play/performanimportant/significantroleinproducegreat/enormousinfluenceonAdvertisingperformsasignificantroleinAmericanbusiness;besides,itproducesenormousinfluenceonthenation’seconomy.旅游业对当地的经济有积极的影响。比方说，当地人可以靠把纪念品卖给游客赚钱。

produce/exertfavorableinfluenceon

thelocaleconomy

thelocals

souvenirsTourismexertsfavorableinfluenceonthelocaleconomy;forinstance,thelocalscanearnmoneybysellingsouvenirstothetourists.那家公司整天制造毒气，因此，附近的居民患癌症的比例急剧上升。

producepoisonousgas

dayandnight

theincidenceofcancer

residentsnearby

risesharplyThecompanyproducespoisonousgasdayandnight;consequently,theincidenceofcanceramongresidentsnearbyrisessharply.复合句：一个主句和一个或多个从句主句表达主要意思从句表达次要意思优点：主次分明、避免过多使用独立的简单句或并列句减少不必要的重复表达更加简练和完整采取有效的措施来结束日益恶化的空气污染势在必行。imperativeend/putanendto

Itisimperativetotakesomeactionstoendtheworseningairpollution.Itisimperativethat

someactionsshouldbetakentoputanendtotheworseningairpollution.谁对老年人负责这个问题明天将被讨论。

Whowillberesponsiblefortheseniorcitizenswillbediscussedtomorrow.我将要讲的内容非常重要。WhatIamgoingtosayisveryimportant.人们普遍认为太空探索能促进科学事业的发展。Itiscommonly/widely/generallybelieved/accepted/acknowledgedthat…spaceexplorationimprove/promote/boostItiscommonlybelievedthatspaceexplorationcanpromotethedevelopmentofscience.有些人认为旅游业的发展会对传统文化产生一些负面的影响。think/believe/holdexert/produce/bringabout…impact/influence/effectonSomepeopleholdthat

thedevelopmentoftourismexertssomeadverseimpactontraditionalculture.许多专家怀疑英语是否应该作为全球唯一的官方用语。

expert

doubt

theonlyglobalofficiallanguageManyexpertsdoubtwhetherEnglishshouldbeusedastheonlyglobalofficiallanguage.一个迫切的问题是许多稀有物种正处于灭绝的边缘。

apressingissue

rarespecies

beontheedgeofextinctionApressingissueisthatmanyrarespeciesareontheedgeofextinction.

事实是很多动物被用于医学研究。

medicalresearchThefactisthatmanyanimalsareusedinmedicalresearch.这就是为什么广告被认为是垃圾的原因。TVcommercialsThisiswhyTVcommercialsareregardedasrubbish.国家保护文化遗产这个事实很重要。protectculturalheritageThefactthatanationshouldprotectitsculturalheritageisveryessential.有证据显示，英语已经成为网络的主要语言。Thereisevidencethat…dominantlanguageonlineThereisevidencethat

Englishhasbeenthedominantlanguageonline.越来越多的人赞同广告是有效的信息交流工具这种说法。Thereisagrowingconsensusthat…effectiveinformationexchangesThereisgrowingconsensusthatadvertisingisaneffectivewayofinformationexchanges.人们日益认同…Thereisincreasingrecognitionthat…Thereisagrowingconsensusthat…人们通常认为…Thereisapopularbeliefthat…没有什么证据支持…Thereislittleevidencetosupporttheview

that…很有可能…Thereispossibilitythat…有证据显示…Thereisevidencethat…不想当将军的士兵不是好士兵。Asoldierwhodoesnotwanttobemarshalisnotagoodsoldier.要保护野生动物，否则生态平衡会被打破。thewildlifeecologicalbalanceTheecologicalbalancewillbebrokenunlessthewildlifeisprotected.有些家长支持送小孩去寄宿学校学习，因为它有助于培养独立性和人际交往能力。

beinfavorof

boardingschool

developindependenceandinterpersonalskillsSomeparentsareinfavorofsendingchildrentoaboardingschoolbecauseithelpschildrentodevelopindependenceandinterpersonalskills.并列复合句：一个并列句中的一个或更多的分句包含一个或更多从句。确实，奥运会能够增进友谊和促进主办国经济的发展，但这并非意味着奥运会是完美无缺的。Itistruethat…promote/boost/improveItistruethattheOlympicGamescanpromotefriendshipandboosttheeconomyofthehostcountry，butthisisnottosaythattheyarewithoutdisadvantages.实际上，有时如果一个人知道死刑在等着自己的时候，没有什么东西可以阻止他了，他会继续去杀更多的人。Infact,sometimeswhenapersonknowsthatthedeathpenaltyiswaitingforhim,nothingwillholdhimanymoreandhecouldgoontocommitmorehomicides.非谓语动词：不能作谓语的动词动名词V-ing不定式to+V现在分词V-ing过去分词V-ed不受主语人称和数的限制优点：使句子更简洁、更地道。英语语言的另外三个明显特点：插入语倒装强调句Smoking,itisbelieved,isresponsiblefor30percentofalldeathsfromcancer.Itisbelieved

thatsmokingisresponsiblefor…Seldomdoesheeatbreakfast.Heseldomeatsbreakfast.Worldscienceisdominatedtodaybyasmallnumberoflanguages,includingJapanese,GermanandFrench,butitisEnglishthatisprobablythemostpopulargloballanguageofscience.高中生毕业后是应该继续学习还是先实践？Achilddevelopsbestwhen，likeayoungplant，heisleftundisturbedinthesamesoil.Toomuchtravel，toomuchvarietyofimpressionsarenotgoodfortheyoungand

causethemastheygrowuptobecomeincapableofenduringfruitfulmonotony.Peopleareclearlymorecuriousaboutbadnewsthangood.人们对坏消息显然要比对好消息更加好奇。Theroleofgovernmentsinenvironmentalmanagementisdifficultbutinescapable.政府在环境方面发挥的作用虽然困难但却责无旁贷。主语+系动词+表语Paidworkisavaluableexperience,importantforlearningandtakingresponsibility.有偿劳动是一种有价值的体验，对学习和培养责任感都很重要。Streetsigns,supermarketgoodsandeventheirownnewspaperareallinEnglish.街上的标牌、超市里的货物、甚至他们自己的报纸都使用英语。Traditionalmethodsmayproveeconomicallyvaluableinthefuture.传统的方法也许可以在未来被证明有经济价值。Playmaylooklikeacarefreeandexuberantwaytopassthetimebeforethehardworkofadulthoodcomesalong.玩耍可能看起来是长大成人、辛勤工作之前一种无忧无虑、兴高采烈地打发时间。Theirfocusisongettingchildrenandmothersaccesstochildcareandinstitutionalizedearlychildhoodeducation.重点放在了使儿童和母亲们都有机会得到儿童看护，