初中英语写作教学专题讲座

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Doyourstudentsenjoywriting?Doyouenjoygivingwritingassignments?Whatisdifficult?学生写作错误过多不重视或畏惧写作难批改你辛苦付出多学生改进不大书写的问题教学的整体设计和规划不够没有好的训练方法教学资源缺乏学生不听话乡愁中国台湾余光中小时侯乡愁是一枚小小的邮票我在这头母亲在那头长大后乡愁是一张窄窄的船票我在这头新娘在那头后来啊乡愁是一方矮矮的坟墓我在外头母亲在里头而现在乡愁是一湾浅浅的海峡我在这头大陆在那头文愁中国中学莘莘学子初一时作文之愁是一枚小小的邮票我在这头分数在那头初二时作文之愁是一张窄窄的船票我在这头例文在那头初三时啊作文之愁是一方矮矮的坟墓我在外头梦想在里头而中考时作文之愁是一湾深深的鸿沟我在这头改卷老师在那头愁Whyshouldweteach

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writewellwritebravelyWritingisonpaperThepenismightierthantheswordthinking,WRITINGallowslearnerstimetothinkIt’ssaferthanspeakingshowsprogressvalidassessmentintegratesotherskillsisa‘reallife’skillsuitsdifferentlearnerstyles英语写作是英语综合能力的具体运用是对学生进行全面考核的综合性测试能够真实地反映出学生当前的英语水平和能力123《普通初级中学英语课程标准(实验)》强调在进一步发展学生综合运用能力的基础上,着重提高学生用英语获取信息,处理信息,分析问题和解决问题的能力,特别是学生用英语思维和表达的能力。

七年级“写”的分级目标（三级目标）1、能正确使用常用的标点符号；2、能使用简单的图表和海报等形式传达信息；3、能参照范例写出或回复简单的问候卡和邀请卡；4、能用短语或句子描述系列图片，编写简单的故事。规范→准确八年级“写”的分级目标（四级目标）1、能正确使用标点符号；2、能用词组或简单句为自己创作的图片写出说明；3、能写出简短的文段，如简单的指令、规则；4、能在教师的帮助下或以小组讨论的方式起草和修改作文。规范→准确→流畅九年级“写”的分级目标（五级目标）1、能根据写作要求，收集、准备素材；2、能独立起草短文、短信等，并在教师指导下进行修改；3、能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系；4、能简单描述人物或事件；5、能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。规范→准确→流畅→得体Whatisagoodcomposition?6分14分考生作文21212分考生作文315分3分WRITINGspellinghandwritinggrammarpunctuationcreativityvocabularyWhatisthemostimportant?中考作文评分标准：第一档：（15---13分）完全符合题目要求，观点正确,要点齐全，立意高。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，结构合理，具有逻辑性。卷面书写干净，整洁，无涂抹，字迹大小适中，疏密合适，书写美观。标点，大小写正确。导致学生扣分的问题：Theyhavedicidedtotryagain.Sheleavedherhometownwhenshewasyoung.Thisbookspentmetenyuan.Isthereanythingyouhavedifficultwith？词汇掌握不牢Thereisasmallboylikesplayingfootball.Everythingaregoingverywell.Ithink

dosomesportsisveryimportantforus.语法错误Hebybiketoschool.

汉语思维方式写作Heencouragedmetolookforthewatchbyheart.Inmylifehavemanythingshappened.Todayisraining.审题不准MysummervacationSummervacationiscomingthenextmonth.IhopeIcanhaveagoodtime.Mymotherisbusyeveryday,shegetsupearlyanddoeshouseworkandthengoestowork.Intheeveningwhenshecomesback,shehastocookforme.Sheisreallytired.Ilovemymother,soIwillhelphertodosomehousethissummer.标点符号使用不当Shelikesdancing、skating、surfing、boatingandswimming.Hesaidhecouldplayvolleyball,basketball……"Ihaveadream,"saidMartin。Ihopeyoucansendittomeassoonaspossible.Iloveyouverymuchandhopeyoucanhelpme.

语言表达不得体Playingsportscanchangestudents’healthandstudy.词汇贫乏Myschoolisinthewestofthecity.Youcaneasilyrememberthesewordsifyouusethemeveryday.Thepartyisagreatsuccess.Myschoolliesinthewestoftheschool./You’llhavenotrouble/difficultyrememberingthesewordsifyouusethemeveryday.Thepartyisagreatsuccess.书写不规范Howtoimproveourteaching?1.Handwritingactivities2.Sentencewritingactivities3.Paragraphwritingactivities中考阅卷感受：

1.阅卷时间短；

2.阅卷的速度快；

3.阅卷老师的心理：给分中庸

最吃亏学生群：中等左右学生如何打动和取悦阅卷老师？以卷面感人以内容动人卷面，体现了一种态度有一种态度叫“我出类拔萃”有一种态度叫“我一丝不苟”有一种态度叫“我努力做到最好”有一种态度叫“你看着办”还有一种态度叫“恶心不死你”1）书写的规格（1）应按照字母的笔顺和字母在三格中应占的位置书写。（2）每个字母都应稍向右倾斜，约为5°，斜度要一致。

（3）大写字母都应一样高，占上面两格，但不顶第一线。（4）小写字母a，c，e，m，n，o，r，s，u，v，w，x，z写在中间的一格里，上下抵线，但都不出格。（5）小写字母b，d，h，k，l的上端顶第一线，占上面两格。（6）小写字母i和j的点、f和t的上端都在第一格中间，f和t的第二笔紧贴在第二线下（7）小写字母fgjpqy的下端抵第四线

（8）小写字母a，d，h，i，k，l，m，n，t和u，它们的提笔是一个上挑的小圆钩，不能写成锐角（9）书写单词时，字母与字母之间的间隔要均匀、适当，不要凑得过紧，也不要离得太远

（10）书写句子时，单词之间必须有适当的距离，一般以空出一个小写字母a的宽度为宜（11）标点符号要写在一定的位置上汉语英语句号。.逗号，,省略号………顿号、无感叹号！!注意：英语中无顿号、

有效训练方法列举志愿者评委每排字数......

2.SentencewritingactivitiesIveryexcited.Hemustathome.IamlikeEnglish.IwaswenttoChengdulastweek写正确的句子Ishouldgohomeseemyparentsthisweekend.Thefinalexamiscoming,everyonehastoworkhard.Therearemanystudentsinourclassliveatschool.五种基本句型天天练扩句缩句

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threeafternoonsaweek.1.Thiswordprocessingprogramiscomplex.2.Thiswordprocessingprogramismorecomplex.

3.ThiswordprocessingprogramismorecomplexthantheoneIusedtwoyearsago.例句那个16岁大的男孩子没有关灯就出去了。第一步：找出句子主干男孩出去第二步：确定主干的相关词汇 那个16岁大的男孩子没有关灯就出去了。boy,goout第三步：翻译句子主干那个16岁大的男孩子没有关灯就出去了。Theboywentout.考虑：时态语态第四步：添加修饰成分The16-year-oldboywentout.The16-year-oldboywentoutwithoutturningoffthelights. 那个16岁大的男孩子没有关灯就出去了。__________________________Makingsentencesbygivenwords;Writingsentencesforthepictures;Reorderingthesentences;Completingsentences;

Correctingmistakesofthesentences;

...亮点选词robbedsuitsWhichisbetter?

周末我们会有很多作业要做.AWehaveendlesshomeworktodoattheweekend.BWehavealotofhomeworktodoattheweekend.他没听我课上讲的东西。AHeturnedadeafeartowhatIsaidintheclass.BHedidn’tlistentowhatIsaidintheclass.鼓励学生使用“高端”的词汇。=endless/oceansof

Playingtoomuchcomputerisbadforourstudy.

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lotsofhomeworktodoeveryday.=show/takegreatinterestin1.Ourparentsreallywishustoworkhard.Ourparentsreallywishustoputourheartintostudy.2.Theteenagerslikethecomputers.Theteenagersarefondofthecomputers.3.Whenhespoke,hegotmoreexcited.

Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhegot.4.WeshouldlearnEnglishgrammar.

It’simportanttolearnEnglishgrammar.句式多变化Wemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogetherearlyinthemorning.Earlyinthemorningwemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogether.Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying.肯定VS否定在Mary的帮助下，我取得了成功。WithMary’shelp,Isucceeded.IcouldneversucceedwithoutMary’shelp.Weneedtohelppeople.Thepeopleareintrouble.Weneedtohelpthepeoplewhoareintrouble.运用从句。运用从句Theearthgoesaroundthesun.Itisafactthattheearthgoesaroundthesun强调句；Wecanachieveourdreamsbyworkinghard.

Onlybyworkinghard,canweachieveourdreams.

加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法JoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”SojoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。3.Paragraphwritingactivities:

写前活动写中活动写后活动激发兴趣；激活相关信息；明确目的；搜集素材；熟悉相关语言。根据提示填空完成语句；仿写语句；口头说句；看图写话；听写；检查语句；观察、临摹字母书写…评讲；展示；小组交流；板报、墙报。SmokingWriteacompositiononthetopicof“Smoking”Tothinkfreelyandputdownallpossibleideasthatcometotheirminds.Brainstormingbadforhealthcauselungcancerexpensivebadfornon-smokerspollutetheaircausefiredangerouswastemoneysmokinginpublicplaceindoorsmokingsmokinginpublicplacesMappingtoselecttheusefulideas

toseehowtheseideascanbeputtogether

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1.badforhealthcauselungcancerbadfornon-smokers3.pollutetheairindoorsmokingsmokinginpublicplaces2.expensivewastemoney4.dangerouscausefire…Mapping-2

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followingmappinggiven10to15minutesdonotneedtocaretoomuchaboutspellingorgrammarOutliningWriteamoredetailedoutline.Anoutlineusuallyillustratesthemainorganizingstructureandthemostimportantpointsofessay.Themainideaofeachparagraphwithtopicsentencesandnotesforsupportingdetails.Anintroductionandaconclusion

Editing

Readthroughtheirwritingsandchecktheclarityofideasorthelogicaldevelopmentoftheirarguments.Studentscheckcarefullythegrammar,spellingandpunctuationoftheirwritings.

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3.Wecanfindanddownloadinformationthatweneed.5.Wecanplaygamesonit.4.Wecansendsomeemailstoourfriends.1.WiththeInternet，wecangetthelatestnews.2.TheInternetisfastandconvenient.

3.Wecanfindanddownloadinformationthatweneed.5.Wecanplaygamesonit.4.Wecansendsomeemailstoourfriends.WritethesesentencesintoaparagraphWiththeInternet，wecangetthelatestnews.TheInternetisfastandconvenient.Wecanfindanddownloadinformationthatweneed.Wecansendemailstofriends.Wecanplaygamesonit.WritethesesentencesintoaparagraphHowtochangeitintoawell-organizedparagraphThestructureofacomposition

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Reason3ConclusionWriteatopicsentence:WiththeInternet，wecangetthelatestnews.TheInternetisfastandconvenient.Wecanfindanddownloadinformationthatweneed.Wecansendemailstofriends.Wecanplaygamesonit.TheInternetplaysanimportantpartinourlife./TheInternetisveryusefulinourlife.Writeconclusion:WiththeInternet，wecangetthelatestnews.TheInternetisfastandconvenient.Wecanfindanddownloadinformationthatweneed.Wecansendemailstofriends.Wecanplaygamesonit.TheInternetplaysanimportantpartinourlife./TheInternetisveryusefulinourlife.Wecan’tlivewithouttheInternet.Howtomakeitbetter?WiththeInternet，wecangetthelatestnews.TheInternetisfastandconvenient.Wecanfindanddownloadinformationthatweneed.Wecansendemailstofriends.Wecanplaygamesonit.TheInternetplaysanimportantpartinourlife./TheInternetisveryusefulinourlife.Wecan’tlivewithouttheInternet.Howtomakeitbetter?NowadaystheInternetplaysanimportantpartinourlife.

WiththeInternet，wecangetthelatestnews.Itisfastandconvenient.Wecanfindanddownloadinformationthatweneed.Wecansendemailstofriends.Wecanplaygamesonit.Wecan’tlivewithouttheInternet.Connectthesentenceswithlinkwordstointroducesupportingpoints:First(Firstly),…Second(Secondly),…Third(Thirdly),…Firstofall,…Also(Inaddition),…Finally,…However,…ConclusionwordsInmyopinion,…Inaword,…Inshort,…Generallyspeaking,…Addlinkwordsorphrasestomakethesupportingdetailsbetter-organized:

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andsentencepatternsAgoodcompositionof“givingopinion”titleSummary写作注意的几个问题：1.尽量使用简单句，要牢记“避繁就简”原则，不要出现单词拼写和语法错误。2.把握要点，避免遗漏，注意发挥适度既不要多写也不要少写。3.注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连贯，适当使用连词，如：and,so,or,but,What’smore;What’sworse,notonly…butalso,neither…nor等。4.字体一定要工整漂亮。Homework现在很多同学喜欢上网，但是老师对学生上网观点不一，请谈谈你对学生上网的观点。

TeachersOpinionReasonssomeagreemakefriends，begoodforstudyothersdisagreewastetime,loseoneselfingamesI……示例2词组短语法写不出好作文？不会写句子纯翻译，不注重语法不会用出彩的词组句型词组&短语Helikesplayingbasketball.打篮球playbasketball喜欢做什么事情likedoingsth.他请你建议带一些礼物advisesb.todosth.bringsomepresentsIadviseallofyoutobringsomepresents.为了使同学们与人交往时举止更加文雅，你校学生会正在举办以“Howtobehavewell?”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文。（以上背景无需描述）短文要求如下：1.学生应该守时，守信，不撒谎，不说脏话；2.礼貌待人，热心助人；3.遵守交通规则；不在公共场所喧哗，不乱扔垃圾；4.请你就此话题再补充一至两个个人看法。要求：1.不要逐词翻译。2.在文中不要提及真实的校名和姓名。3.词数60-80左右。短文首句已给出，不计入词数。参考词汇：dirtyobeypromiseBehavingwellisthesecretofgettingonwellwithothers._________________________________________________________beontimekeeppromiseslietosb.bepolitetoothersgivesb.ahandtrafficrulesmakenoiseStep1:找词组beontimelietosb.bepolitetoothersgivesb.ahandtrafficrulesmakenoiseStudentsshouldandDon’t

lietoothersorsaydirtywords.WeshouldPlease

andgivethemahandwhentheyneedit.Let’sobeyDon’t

Step2:写句子orthrowrubbishinpublic.keeppromises.Studentsshouldbeontimeandkeeppromises.Don’tlietoothersorsaydirtywords.Pleasebepolitetoothersandgivethemahandwhentheyneedit.Let’sobeytrafficrules.Don’tmakenoiseorthrowrubbishinpublic.First，……….Second，………Third，……..Iwillgiveyouthreesuggestions.Howto…….Howtobehavewell?Step3:加结构Studentsshouldbeontimeandkeeppromises.Don’tlietoothersorsaydirtywords.Pleasebepolitetoothersandgivethemahandwhentheyneedit.Let’sobeytrafficrules.Don’tmakenoiseorthrowrubbishinpublic.Howtobehavewell?Iwillgiveyouthreesuggestions.First，Second，Third，Behavingwellisthesecretofgettingonwellwithothers并列：and,also,notonly……butalso,neither…nor,Either….or,转折：but,however,ontheotherhand因果：becauseof，therefore，asaresult,重要性：firstofall,themostimportantis,总结：allinall,aboveall,afterall表自己观点：inmyopinion

递进：besides,What’smoreStep4:加关系词Studentsshouldbeontimeandkeeppromises.Don’tlietoothersorsaydirtywords.Pleasebepolitetoothersandgivethemahandwhentheyneedit.Let’sobeytrafficrules.Don’tmakenoiseorthrowrubbishinpublic.Howtobehavewell?Iwillgiveyouthreesuggestions..First，Second

，Third，BehavingwellisthesecretofgettingonwellwithothersBut

What’smore,becauseofkeepingawayfromtrafficaccident.notonlybutalsoStudentsshouldnotonlybeontimebutalsokeeppromises.Don’tlietoothersorsaydirtywords.Pleasebepolitetoothersandgivethemahandwhentheyneedit.Let’sobeytrafficrules.Don’tmakenoiseorthrowrubbishinpublic.Howtobehavewell?Iwillgiveyouthreesuggestions..First，Second

，Third，BehavingwellisthesecretofgettingonwellwithothersButWhat’smore,becauseofkeepingawayfromtrafficaccident.Wewillnotmakefriendswithsomeoneifhemakesnoiseorthrowsrubbishinpublic.

Step5:加从句、谚语Behavingwellisthesecretofgettingonwellwithothers.Buthowtobehavewell?Iwillgiveyouthreesuggestions.First,studentsshouldnotonlybeontimebutalsokeeppromises.What’smore,Don’tlietoothersorsaydirtywords.Second

，pleasebepolitetoothersandgivethemahand

whentheyneedit.Third，Let’sobeytrafficrulesinordertokeepawayfromtrafficaccident.Besides,ifsomeonemakesnoiseorthrowsrubbishinpublic,wewillnotmakefriendswithhim.

Allinall,Ithinksmileisanotherkeytobehavewell,becausewherethereisasmile,thereisafriend.总结写作文步骤：1.找词组2.用词组写句子（没有语法错误）3.结构4.关系词5，利用名言或从句，使文章出彩。示例3视频批改Thesummerholidaycomes.Moreandmorekidsbecomeunhappybecausetheyhavetoomanyactivitiestodo.Thechildrendon’thaveanylessonstodayfourafternoonsaweek.Let’sallgotheretoplay.Thestudentsdon’thavemuchtimetoplaywiththeirfriends.Weallknowitisimportantforkidstolearnhowtorelax.Itisnotgoodforbothkidsandtheirparents.ManyAmericangirlstakepartinsports，dancingandsinginggroups.Youcangotoplaysoccer,playbasketball.WhenIgrowup，Iwilltrytomakethemlivemorehappily.helppoorchildrenliveabetterlife.Whatahardlifemyparentslive.（125词）Thesummerholidaycomes.Moreandmorekidsbecomeunhappybecausetheyhavetoomanyactivitiestodo.Thechildrendon’thaveanylessonstodayfourafternoonsaweek.Let’sallgotheretoplay.Thestudentsdon’thavemuchtimetoplaywiththeirfriends.Weallknowitisimportantforkidstolearnhowtorelax.Itisnotgoodforbothkidsandtheirparents.ManyAmericangirlstakepartinsports，dancingandsinginggroups.Youcangotoplaysoccer ,playbasketball.WhenIgrowup，Iwilltrytomakethemlivemorehappily.helppoorchildrenliveabetterlife.Whatahardlifemyparentslive.（125词）happymoreSotheymoredosports.Theytodosports.Theykeephealthy.healthstudy.studentsTheyortheyTheywillSportsgoodtheynow!Iscoming9分HowshouldteacherscorrectwritingCorrectallthemistakes?NO.对缺乏自信的孩子更需要激励Over-correction.Correctjustonetypeofmistakes.Howshouldteacherscorrectwriting2.Toagreeonalistofwrittensymbols统一批改符号，例如：

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tensespelling3.Towriteacommentattheendofapieceofwrittenwork4.Toensurethestudentsunderstandtheirproblemandtheredraftthe