雅思强化写作2010年改进版

IELTS

Writing

邬文佳1精选课件pptAfterCLASSSERVICEwuwenjia@雅思写作群：87155137暗号：班号公共邮箱：ieltswuwenjia@密码ieltsielts2精选课件ppt雅思考试作文部分组成时间安排题型字数分数3精选课件ppt关于时间安排1.Task1orTask2first？2.叫停就停3.答题纸&铅笔4精选课件ppt5精选课件ppt博物馆的教育意义和娱乐意义哪个更重要6精选课件ppt题型Task1图表作文1.柱状图Barchart☆☆☆☆☆7精选课件pptTask12.流程图FlowChart☆☆☆☆8精选课件pptTask1表格Table☆☆☆EarningsofpeoplewithdifferentlevelsofeducationYearBachelordegreeMasterdegreeDoctordegree19658590951975110115120198514015015019951451601659精选课件pptTask1线段图LineGraph(曲线图Curvegraph)☆☆10精选课件pptTask1饼图Piechart☆11精选课件ppt大作文题型讨论型事实分析型12精选课件ppt如今很多男性会通过健身来吸引女性的注意。有些人认为这是个消极的趋势。你同意还是不同意？

Newsmediaismoreinfluentialnowadays.Somepeoplethinkitisanegativedevelopment.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

一边倒两边倒13精选课件ppt09.01.17

Today,peopleinmanycountriescanliveandworkanywheretheychoose,becauseofimprovedcommunicationtechnologyandtransport.Dotheadvantagesoutweighitsdisadvantages?Doyouthinkitsbenefitsoutweighthedrawbacks?只能写两边倒的问法114精选课件ppt09.01.10

Somepeoplebelievethattherangeoftechnologyavailabletoindividualstodayisincreasingthegapbetweenthepoorpeopleandtherichpeople,whilesomeotherssaythishasanoppositeeffect.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.balance只能写两边倒的问法215精选课件ppt你要想婚姻幸福，找男人要找既顾家又上进，他妈妈还要好相处的。Inordertolearnalanguagewell,weshouldalsolearnaboutthecountryaswellastheculturesandlifestylesofthepeoplewhospeakthislanguage.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?

两边倒万能吗？16精选课件ppt如今醉酒驾车的现象日益普遍。为什么？这种现象对社会造成什么影响？采取什么措施才可以抑制这种现象？事实分析型17精选课件pptNewspapershavebecomeanenormousinfluenceonpeople’sideasandopinions.Whyisthisthecase?Isitadesirableorundesirablesituation?PRACTICE18精选课件ppt关于分数19精选课件ppt关于分数20精选课件pptTaskachievement小作文按图形种类完成内容大作文Position+SupportingIdeas+DevelopmentPosition+SupportingIdeasQ:芙蓉姐姐是可爱还是美丽？A:既不可爱也不美丽体重超标，眼睛睁不开，嘴巴咧到耳朵根。

PositionSupportingIdeas5分评分标准1

21精选课件pptSupportingIdeas之纠结的名言3“Thegreatestdangerinmoderntechnologyisnotthatmachinesbegintothinklikepeople,butthatpeoplewillbegintothinklikemachines.”AlbertEinstein1.ThegovernmentshouldpaymoreattentiontochildrenbecauseChairmanMaosaid,”Youthsarelikethesunbetween8to9o’clock.”2“Achildmiseducatedisachildlost。”—JohnFKennedy

22精选课件ppt评分标准2

CoherenceandCohesion

类别：并列连词Coordinatingconjunctions从属连词Subordinatingconjunctions5.5分-6分23精选课件pptYouareaprettygirlandIloveyou.Iloveyou,becauseyouareaprettygirl.Youareaprettygirl,thereforeIloveyou.YouaretheprettygirlthatIlove.Itistheprettygirlwhoislovedbyme.泡泡级中学级高中级大学级The

most

precious

possession

that

ever

comes

to

me

in

this

world

is

your

heart.24精选课件ppt评分标准3

Lexicalresource

Iherebydeclareasinceregratitudeforalltheeffortswhichyou，alongwitheveryoneelsehavebeenputtinginto.去掉程度副词去掉枝干句型和介词短语同意词汇替换givethankThank

you.DiversityAbundance6.5分25精选课件pptLexicalresourceTheairqualitycan’tbeimprovedifthenumberofprivatecarsisnotlimitedcan’tcannot26精选课件pptWith评分标准4

Grammaticalrangeandaccuracy

theworldisdeveloping，thecomputer,aswellsometheothertechnologies,havegainpopular,greatgivenconvenientandefficient.muchpeopleAsaswellasother

hasgainedpopularity，

greatlygivingpeopleconsiderableconvenienceandefficiency.27精选课件pptBasicWritingPrinciple28精选课件pptBasicWritingPrinciple(Right)or(Wrong)Hehasthreesons,mostofthemaremiddleschoolstudents.

避免一个句子两个谓语29精选课件pptHehasthreesons.Mostofthemaremiddleschoolstudents.Howtocorrect?Hehasthreesons,andmostofthemaremiddleschoolstudents.Hehasthreesons,mostofwhomaremiddleschoolstudents.30精选课件pptBasicWritingPrinciple我们应该学习学习再学习。Weshouldstudy,studyandstudy.Theyoung

shouldlearnfromtheold,andtheoldshouldlearnfromtheyoung.年轻人应该向老人学习，老人应该也向年轻人学习。避免重复31精选课件pptHowtocorrect?我们应该学习学习再学习。Weshouldstudypersistently.Theoldshouldlearnfromtheyoungandviceversa.年轻人应该向老人学习，老人应该也向年轻人学习。32精选课件pptBasicWritingPrinciple在你身旁？Besideyou.Besideyourbody.Throughthewindow,Icanseemanystreetwalkers.Throughthewindow,Icanseemanypassers-by.透过窗子，我可以看见无数路人。避免中式翻译33精选课件pptWritingTraining1、在他上班的时候，他一般都吃食堂。2、她在公司很吃得开3、这样的粗话你怎么能吃得消？Healwayseatsinthediningroomwhenatwork.Sheispopularinthecompany.Howcanyoubearsuchbadwords？34精选课件ppt剑剑系列5P163Firstly,Iwilldiscussabouttworeasonsofargumentfortobeginwithuniversitiesshouldacceptequalnumbersofmaleandfemalestudentsineverysubjectbecauseitwillbebalanceofideawhilestudying.Ingeneral,thereusuallyaredifferentvisionwillhappen.Anotherreasonisitdisplaythathaveequalofsocietynotacceptineachside.Inaddition,nowadays,themostsocietiesbecometoacceptabilityofbothinanyway.4分35精选课件ppt剑剑系列6P88Also,onthetelevisionscreen,aproductmaylookgorgeousandgoodquality.Asaresultofit,peopleoftenbuygoodswithoutenoughconsideration.Consumersmaynotactuallyneeditbuttheybuygoodsimpulsivelysoonaftertheywatchtheadvertising.Furthermore,asmanycustomersbuyaparticularproductduetoitsadvertisingcampaign,theotherpeoplemaybeaffectedbythetrend,eveniftheproductisnotoftherealneedsofthesociety.7.5分36精选课件ppt37精选课件ppt雅思考核的本质是什么？

EssencesofIELTSWritingDiversityAbundance&38精选课件ppt160个动词就可以概括雅思写作中所有动词！V.adj.&adv..n.词的升级点线面之点词让信息表达更加具体丰富39精选课件ppt重点动词替换Weshouldsolvetheimportantproblem.Weshouldtheimportantproblem.

tackle

addresscombat40精选课件ppt重点形容词替换essentialvitalsignificantcrucialWeshouldsolvetheimportantproblem.Weshouldsolvetheproblem.41精选课件ppt重点名词词替换Theimportantproblemshouldbesolved.Theimportantissuephenomenonsituationshouldbesolved.Weshouldsolvetheimportantproblem42精选课件pptTheInternethaschangedourlife.Theinternethasalteredourlife.Theinternethasmodifiedourlife.Theinternethasrevolutionisedourlife.重点动词替换

43精选课件pptTheinternethasgreatlyrevolutionisedourlife.Theinternethasdramaticallyrevolutionisedourlife.Theinternethassignificantlyrevolutionisedourlife.重点副词替换

TheInternethaschangedourlife.44精选课件ppt词的魔力加分词组

一方面，为了改善生活水平，人类都要进攻潘多拉；另一方面，在信仰方面，无论多难，Na‘vi族都尽力反击。一方面；另一方面为了改善在。。。方面无论45精选课件ppt一方面；另一方面

Ontheonehand;Ontheotherhand

Ontheonehand,movinglargecompaniestothecountrysidemayreducethetaxrevenueofthecitygovernment.Ontheotherhand,thismeasurecaneffectivelyrelievethepressureonthecitytransportationsystem.46精选课件ppt为了。。。Today，manyelderlypeople

prefertoliveinthecountrysideforthesakeoftheirhealth.47精选课件ppt在。。。方面

Thesechildrenareoftenspoilt,notintermsofloveandattentionbecauseworkingparentsdonothavetimeforthis,butinmorematerialways.48精选课件ppt

无论

Theyareallowedtobuywhatevertheywant，regardlessoftheprice49精选课件ppt升级句子50精选课件ppt点线面之线句子主体段每段的第一句：topicsentence1.简单句：简单明确Employeesgetjobsatisfactioninanumberofways.Firstly,apersonneedstofeelthattheyaredoingvaluedandvaluablework,sopositivefeedbackfromsuperiorsisveryimportantintherespect.51精选课件ppt逻辑衔接

类别：并列句CompoundSentence复杂句ComplexSentence52精选课件pptOR: 因为ND: 和OR: 也不UT:

但是R:

或者ET:

但是O: 所以FSYOBNA并列连词

53精选课件ppt

左手倒影——遣词造句的上升1)Theyarepoor.Theyarehungry.2)Theysufferfrompoverty.Theystruggleagainststarvation.3)Theysufferfrompoverty,strugglingagainststarvation.54精选课件ppt

右手年华——思维方式的改变(1)Wedon’ttellothersallthesecrets.(2)Wedon’tletothersknowallthesecrets.

(3)Wehidesomesecretsfromothers.(4)Everyonehasprivacy.55精选课件ppt经典用句的锻造经典的用句其实就是地道的句式56精选课件ppt必杀技57精选课件ppt句子的魔力特殊句式（加分）

非谓语动词现在分词&过去分词

因为紫霞仙子想激将孙悟空，紫霞仙子嫁给了牛魔王。虽然牛魔王努力争取紫霞仙子，但紫霞仙子依旧爱着孙悟空。当牛魔王爱慕紫霞仙子时，紫霞仙子却爱着孙悟空。如果牛魔王继续爱慕紫霞仙子，他会死在铁扇公主的机关枪下。58精选课件ppt当主从句主语一致时一删二变三补因为紫霞仙子想激将孙悟空，紫霞仙子嫁给了牛魔王。SinceFairyZiXiatriedtogoadSunWukong，shemarriedNiuMowang.激将孙悟空，紫霞仙子嫁给牛魔王。TryingtogoadSunWukong，FairyZiXiamarriedNiuMowang.被孙悟空戏弄，紫霞仙子嫁给牛魔王。TeasedbySunWukong，FairyZiXiamarriedNiuMowang.59精选课件ppt当主从句主语不一致时一改二删三变WhenNiuMowangadmiredFairyZiXia,ZiXiastilllovedSunWukong.当牛魔王爱慕紫霞仙子时，紫霞仙子却爱着孙悟空。被牛魔王爱慕着的时候，紫霞仙子却爱着孙悟空。AdmiredbyNiuMowang,ZiXiastilllovedSunWukong.60精选课件pptPractice_______________(被这个男孩的爱深深打动了),shedecidedtomarryhim.Deeplymovedbytheboy’slove61精选课件ppt_______________(从一个年轻朋友的眼光来看),Einsteinwasasimple,modestandordinaryman.SeenfromtheeyesofayoungfriendPractice62精选课件ppt_______________(好久没有收到父母的来信了),hewasworriedaboutthem.NothavingheardfromhisparentsforalongtimePractice63精选课件ppt因为香烟对身体有害，所以香烟对人们的生活造成了消极影响。当人们向政府询问是否有传染病暴发时，政府有时会否认。Askedwhethersomekindofinfectiousdiseasebreaksout，thegovernmentwilldenyitsometimes.64精选课件ppt独立主格结构一删二改CaoCaoadmiringXiaoQiao,XiaoQiaostilllovedZhouYu.当曹操爱慕小乔时，小乔却爱着周瑜。WhenCaoCaoadmiredXiaoQiao,XiaoQiaostilllovedZhouYu.65精选课件ppt虽然香烟对人身体有害，但戒烟对大多数人就是那么难。Smokingbeingunhealthytoourbody，mostpeoplecouldnotgetridofit.Toughsmokingisunhealthytoourbody，mostpeoplecouldnotgetridofit.独立主格结构一删二改66精选课件ppt句子的魔力特殊句式

Iffutureprogressofscienceistakenintoaccount，moreunforeseenuseswillsurelybefoundforcomputers.Futureprogressofsciencetakenintoaccount，moreunforeseenuseswillsurelybefoundforcomputers.如果把未来的科技进步考虑进去，电脑将被挖掘出更多的用处。67精选课件ppt必杀技68精选课件ppt句子的魔力特殊句式

状语提前:介词，副词他们买豪车住豪宅，过着奢侈的生活。Theyliveextravagantlifestyleswithhugehousesandcars.69精选课件ppt他们像电影明星一样，买豪车住豪宅，过着奢侈的生活。

Justlikemoviestars,theyliveextravagantlifestyleswithhugehousesandcars.

Theyarelikemoviestars，livingextravagantlifestyleswithhugehousesandcars.70精选课件pptItisinterestingthattheyliveextravagantlifestyleswithhugehousesandcars，

justlikemoviestars.

Interestingly,theyliveextravagantlifestyleswithhugehousesandcars，

justlikemoviestars.他们像电影明星一样，买豪车住豪宅，过着奢侈的生活。这是个有趣的现象。71精选课件ppt必杀技72精选课件ppt状语从句变倒装句一变二加我嫁给他我渴望嫁给他我可能会嫁给他.Imarryhim.Iameagertomarryhim.Imaymarryhim.DoImarryhim?AmIeagertomarryhim？MayImarryhim？Iwillmarryhim.WillImarry

him？我将会嫁给他73精选课件ppt只有他赚足够钱的时候，只有他是个帅哥时，只有他能买房时，只有他人品好时，我嫁给他我渴望嫁给他我可能会嫁给他.Onlywhenheearnsenoughmoney，Onlywhenhecouldaffordanapartment，Onlywhenheisahandsomeman，Onlywhenheiskind，我将会嫁个他74精选课件ppt只有当你完全忘却自我时，爱才会产生。状语从句变倒装句一变二加当你完全忘却自我时，爱才会产生。Whenthereistotalself-abandonment，lovecancomeintobeing.Onlywhenthereistotalself-abandonmentcanlovecomeintobeing75精选课件ppt这个问题能以这种方法而有效解决。Only+状语（从句）+助动词+主语一般疑问句语序

Onlyinthiswaycanthisissuebeeffectivelysolved.Thisissuecanbeeffectivelysolvedinthisway.76精选课件ppt直到近年来，人们才开始意识到保护野生动物的重要性。Onlyinrecentyearshavepeoplebeguntorealizetheimportanceofwildlifeconservation.OnlyIknowwheretheuniversityis.只有我才知道那所大学在哪、77精选课件ppt否定词+倒装自从我们确定关系后，男友很少关心我女友决不让我泡吧Sincewebecomeacouple,myboyfriendseldomcaresaboutme.mygirlfriendneveragreesmetoplaywithfriendsinbars.78精选课件pptsincewebecomeacouple.Seldomdoesmyboyfriendcareaboutme,Neverdoesmygirlfriendagreemetoplaywithfriendsinbars,一提二变79精选课件ppt我们以前从没在科技方面取得这么大的成就Wehavenevermadesogreatachievementinscienceandtechnologybefore.Neverhavewemadesogreatachievementinscienceandtechnologybefore.80精选课件pptNotonly。。。Butalso。。。

一提二变你不仅是伴随我一生的人而且你带我去我从未奢望过的地方。

Youarenotonlyashadow，butalsoyoutakemetoplaceswhichIhaveneverdreamedof.Notonlyareyouashadow，butalsoyoutakemetoplaceswhichIhaveneverdreamedof.81精选课件ppt太阳不仅给我们带来阳光，还给我们带来热量。Notonlydoesthesungiveuslight，butalsoitgivesusheat不仅是同学们，老师也反对这个计划Notonlythestudentsbutalsotheteacherwasagainsttheplan.Notonlytheteacherbutalsothestudentswereagainsttheplan.82精选课件ppt句子的魔力特殊句式

父母不仅需要花更多的时间在孩子身上，还需要更多的与他们进行交流。

Theparentsshouldnotonlyspendmoretimewiththeirchildren,butalsotrytocommunicatewiththeirchildrenmoreoften.

Notonlyshouldtheparentsspendmoretimewiththeirchildren,butalsotheytrytocommunicatewiththeirchildrenmoreoften.83精选课件ppt必杀技84精选课件ppt同位语从句的“先行词”同位语从句belief,fact,idea,doubt,suggestion,evidence，truth，opinion,statement，question，recognition…85精选课件ppt1.靠占星术就可以排兵布阵。这个想法是完全错误的。同位语从句：找主干加内容Hearrangedplayersbyastrology.Theideaisquitewrong.Theidea_______________isquitewrong.靠占星术就可以排兵布阵的想法是完全错误的。86精选课件ppt同位语从句：找主干加内容2.谁将取代多梅内克。这个问题还不明确。Whowilltakehisplace?Thisquestionisstillnotclear.谁将取代多梅内克的这个问题还不明确。Thequestion_______________isstillnotclear.87精选课件ppt3.鲁尼要到哪去度假。这个问题还不明确。同位语从句：找主干加内容语序对鲁尼到哪去度假的这个问题还没明确。Whereishegoingtospendtheholiday？Thequestionisstillnotclear.Thequestion_______________isstillnotclear.88精选课件ppt同位语从句事实上，人们都认为保罗哥是神人而贝利是个乌鸦嘴。Asamatteroffact，thereismuchevidencethatPaul,theGerman

octopus,isthepsychic，whilePeleistheKingofWrongPredictions我们得出一个结论。。。人们日益认同。。。越来越多的人赞同。。89精选课件pptMoreandmorepeoplethink。。。越来越多的人认为广告是有效地信息交流工具。Thereismuchevidencethat。。。Thereisincreasingrecognitionthat。。。Thereisgrowingconsensusthat。。。Thereisapopularbeliefthat。。。Increasingnumberofpeopleassert。。。advertisingisaneffectivewayofinformationexchanges90精选课件ppt必杀技91精选课件ppt最了解你的人不是你的朋友，而是你的敌人Themostfamiliaroneofyouisnotyourfriendbutyourenemy.Itisnotyourfriendbutyourenemywhoisthemostfamiliaroneofyou.强调句92精选课件ppt强调句Itis（was）＋被强调的部分＋that（who）＋原句其它部分Tommetmeonthestreetthedaybeforeyesterday.强调TomItwasTomwhometmeonthestreetthedaybeforeyesterday.93精选课件ppt强调时间ItwasthedaybeforeyesterdaythatTommetmeonthestreet.强调地点ItwasonthestreetthatTommetmethedaybeforeyesterday.强调句94精选课件ppt因为每个不成功男人的背后都有两个女人，所以每个成功男人的背后只能有一个女人。Itissincebehindeveryunsuccessfulman,therearetwowomenthatbehindeverysuccessfulman,thereisonlyone.

Sincebehindeveryunsuccessfulman,therearetwowomen,behindeverysuccessfulman,thereisonlyone.

95精选课件pptInternethasbroughttremendouschangestoourlife.ItisInternetthathasbroughttremendouschangestoourlife网络给我们的生活带来巨大变化96精选课件ppt孩子因为看太多电视而忽视了学习。DuetospendingsomuchtimeonTVprograms，childrenneglecttheirstudyItisduetospendingsomuchtimeonTVprograms

thatchildrenneglecttheirstudy97精选课件ppt剑7Page173Itisonlythosewhoreachtheverytopoftheirprofessionwhocangetthesehugesalaries.Onlythosewhoreachtheverytopoftheirprofessioncangetthesehugesalaries.98精选课件ppt必杀技99精选课件ppt特殊句式虚拟语气If从句谓语形式主句谓语形式对现在情况的虚拟did/werewoulddoIf从句谓语形式主句谓语形式对过去情况的虚拟haddone/hadbeenwouldhavedone/been100精选课件pptPracticeItdidn’trainlastnight._______________(要是下了，地就会湿的).Ifithadrained,thegroundwouldhavebeenwet101精选课件pptIwouldhavemadeaspeech_______________(要不是有人把我的话打断了).ifIhadnotbeeninterruptedPractice102精选课件ppt_______________(如果我一直住在纽约),IwouldhaveknowntheU.S.wellnow.IfIhadbeenlivinginNewYorkPractice103精选课件ppt句子的魔力特殊句式

虚拟语气

如果将来没有关于名流的八卦新闻了，媒体也将失去娱乐性。Ifthereshouldbenogossipaboutcelebrities，themediawouldbelessentertaining.Shouldtherebenogossipaboutcelebrities，themediawouldbelessentertaining.一省二变104精选课件ppt平时训练写作水平的方法观察生活Loveisplayingeverygameasifitwerethelastone.105精选课件pptWhatislove?

Loveisworkingeverytaskasifitwerethemostimportant;loveiscaringfamiliesasifyouwouldneverseethemthenextday;loveislovingyourloverasiftheywouldleaveyounextmoment;loveistreatingfriendsasifyouwouldseparatetomorrow;loveiseverythingwedotrulyforthosewelove,everywhere,allthetime.平时训练写作水平的方法106精选课件pptStep1框架107精选课件ppt主体段

思考素材的方法a分类法Do

you

think

old

buildings

should

be

broken

down,

and

give

place

for

modern

buildings.

How

are

the

old

buildings

important

in

our

society?

该拆unsafespoilthecityscape

不该拆buildingswithhistoricalvaluespecialethnicarchitectureStep2108精选课件ppt博物馆是了解文化的最好途径吗？艺术，语言，历史IFYESIFNO下里巴人阳春白雪109精选课件ppt主体段

思考素材的方法B替代法

Somepeoplethinkmotorizedflightwasthegreatestinventioninthetwentiethcentury.Doyouagreeordisagree110精选课件pptSomepeoplethinkmotorizedflightwasthegreatestinventioninthetwentiethcentury.DoyouagreeordisagreeIf你使用一边倒。。。convenience

culturalexchangesdevelopment和汽车比和手机比和电脑比111精选课件pptSomepeoplethinkmotorizedflightwasthegreatestinventioninthetwentiethcentury.Doyouagreeordisagree有一些认为BradPitt是好莱坞最帅的男明星，你同意还是不同意承认他的帅举反例代替这位帅哥112精选课件pptIf你使用两边倒。。。Somepeoplethinkmotorizedflightwasthegreatestinventioninthetwentiethcentury.Doyouagreeordisagree承认飞机的价值internationalbusinessinternationalculturalcommunications举反例来代替飞机，不是最伟大的computerstelephonesautomobiles113精选课件pptSomepeoplethinkstricterpunishmentfordrivingoffendersistheonlyeffectivewayto

improvesafetyontheroad.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree惩罚交通肇事者是一种有效方式管理行人提高警察工作效率改善道路设施NOTTHEONLYWAY114精选课件ppt思考素材的方法EducationGlobalizationvs.CulturalDiversityHigh-tech&MassmediaGovernmentSocialproblemsEnvironment115精选课件ppt思考素材的方法C救命稻草EconomicPoliticalTechnologicalSocialEnvironmentalIndividualCulturalInternationalMental&PhysicalMoral&Legislative116精选课件pptPeopletodaycanperformtheeverydaytaskssuchasshopping,bankingorevenbusinesstransactions,withoutmeetingothersface-to-face.WhateffectswillthisphenomenonhaveonindividualsandsocietyasawholeIndividualsfun，work，money，convenience，Society

efficiency，crimes，employment117精选课件pptManypeopleareoptimisticaboutthe21stcenturyandseeitasanopportunitytomakepositivechangestotheworld.Towhatextentsoyouagreeordisagreewiththeiroptimism?Whatchangeswouldyouliketobemadeinthenewcentury?AdvantagesDisadvantagestechnology/economy/culture/individual(efficiency/prosperity/exchange/rights/money/fun)environment/society/legislative(pollution/crime/employment/population)118精选课件pptAsmostpeoplespendamajorpartoftheiradultlifeatwork,jobsatisfactionisanimportantelementofindividualwellbeing.Whatfactorscontributetojobsatisfaction?Howrealisticistheexpectationofjobsatisfactionofallworkers?影响员工工作满意度的因素Mental/legislative/environment/individual(efficiency/stress/rights/health/promotion/money)Moral/culture(responsibility/corporateculture/fun)119精选课件pptTherearesomeviolentcartooncharactersonTVwhichbringnegativeinfluencetochildren.Doyouagreeordisagree?WhattypesofTVprogrammesaresuitableforchildren?

120精选课件pptoutlineTendtocopycertainbehaviorsMental–

Physical-MosteasilyaffectedgroupUnabletotellrightfromwrongImmatureandlackofsocialexperienceBeverymuchrestrictedintermsoftheirvisionMoral&Legislative-ViewviolenceasaneffectivewayofsettingconflictsBepotentialtriggersforjuveniledelinquency121精选课件ppt点线面之面段落篇章第1步段落的逻辑结构第2步套路多样性和技巧运用122精选课件ppt开头段之逻辑结构

Opening:3~4sentences(about50-60words)123精选课件pptThesocietywouldtakeabanonallformsofadvertisingbecauseitservesnousefulpurpose,andcanevenbedamaging.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?PRACTICE124精选课件pptIf我们按照基本模板句操作后Arecentstudyindicatesthatadvertisementsareplayingincreasinglyimportantrolesinourlives.2.Butinthemeantime,whetheralladvertisementsshouldbebannedhassparkedmuchdebate.3.Manypeopleassertthatadvertisementsareuselessandexertnegativeinfluenceonourlife.4.AsfarasIamconcerned，Iwouldliketoprobethistopicintotwopartstodiscuss.125精选课件ppt让开头段的套路更加自然126精选课件ppt1.放眼世界1）Inrecentyears,therehasbeenagrowingtrendthat…127精选课件pptSomepeoplethinkthatinmodernsociety,individualsaremoreindependentofeachother,whileothersthinkindividualsarebecomingmoredependentoneachother.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinions.Inrecentyears,therehasbeenagrowingtrendthatABpeoplerealisetheinterdependenceofindividualsandtheirclosetieswitheachotherinmodernsociety.A’peoplehaveachievedgreaterindependenceinmanyareasoflife.B’

However,itisalsosometimesarguedthat.128精选课件ppt2.引人入胜Theissueofwhether…isofgreatinteresttomanypeople.129精选课件pptTheissueofwhether

isofgreatinteresttomanyeducators.Tomywayofthinking,bothsidesoftheargumentcanbejustifiedtoacertainextent,andweneedtolookintotheissuemorethoroughlyandthoughtfullytounderstandthecontroversy.itisappropriateandeffectivetousecorporalpunishmentonyoungchildren讨论对孩子体罚的教育是否有效130精选课件ppt3.兼收并蓄Whereassomepeopleassertthat…othersdeclarethat…hold，insist，maintain,disagreeandcontendthatSomepeopleholdtheopinionthat…,whereasotherswhoarenotsoconvincedpresentthecounterargumentthat…131精选课件pptAsthenumberofcarsincreases,moremoneyhastobespentonroadsystems.Somepeoplethinkthegovernmentshouldpayforthis.Others,however,thinkthattheusershouldpayforthecost.Discussboth

viewsandgiveyourownopinion.

Somepeopleholdtheopinionthat

the

governmentshouldmakemoreinvestmentsinexpendingroadsystems,whereasotherswhoarenotsoconvincedpresentthecounterargumentthatitistheresponsibilityofthegrowingnumberofprivatecaruserstodealwiththehugecosts.

ABthe

governmentshouldmakemoreinvestmentsinexpendingroadsystemsitistheresponsibilityofthegrowingnumberofprivatecaruserstodealwiththehugecosts.

A’B’132精选课件ppt特：因素型Economicprogressisonewaytomeasurethesuccessofonecountry,whilesomepeoplethinkthereareotherfactors.Whatotherfactorsshouldbeconsidered?Withinthesefactors,doyouthinkanyoneismoreimportantthantheothers?133精选课件pptWhileeconomicdevelopmentisgenerallyconsideredtobeagaugeofacountry’ssuccess,therearecertainlyothermeasuringstandardsthatareequalityimportant.AsfarasIconcerned,educationalachievement,thereformofhealthcaresystemandthequalityoflifeofcitizensarethreeessentialfactorstobetakenintoaccountwhenmakinganyjudgmentonhowsuccessfulanationis.134精选课件pptIf无形胜有形Introducingthetopicandspecifictopic通过较大范围引入法135精选课件ppt主题A是某具体事物，先写其上位概念

Itislikelythatinthenearfutureintelligentrobotswilldoalltheworkthatneedstobedone,insteadofhumanbeings.Statethepossiblebenefitsanddrawbacksofthis.通过较大范围引出主题intelligentrobots它是什么的产物科技发展带给人类什么？136精选课件pptScientificdevelopmentshavebroughtusmanybenefits,amongwhich

theintelligentrobotmightbethemostremarkableone.Inthenearfuture,itmightsubstitutepeopletodoalmostallthework.137精选课件ppt主题A是a事件/现象/行为的多个后果之一Arecentsurveyshowsthatteenagersspend14hourswatchingtelevisionprogramseachweek,butonly6hourswiththeirfamilymembers.Somepeopleclaimthatthishasanunfavorableinfluenceontherelationshipbetweenthemandtheirfamilymembers.Doyouagreeordisagree?通过较大范围引出主题长期看电视的后果？影响家庭成员间的关系是其中之一的后果138精选课件pptArecentsurveyindicatesyoungpeopleintheirteensspendthevastmajorityoftheirsparetimewatchingTV.Thisphenomenonmightbringafewnegativeeffects,amongwhichtheunfavorableinfluenceonthefamilyrelationshipcouldbeoneofthemostremarkable.Inparticular/particularly/especially/notably139精选课件ppt主题A是a问题/现象/的多个解决方案之一

Itisimportantforchildrentolearnwhatisrightandwhatiswrongatanearlyage.Punishmentisnecessarytohelpthemlearnthedistinction.What’syouropinion?通过较大范围引出主题教育孩子的方法多不多？惩罚只是一种方法140精选课件pptChildrenshouldbeinstilledwhatisrightandwhatiswrongatanearlyage.Therearequiteafewwaystoachievethisend,amongwhich

punishmentisaverypopularmeans.141精选课件ppt主体段扩展技巧

举例法

递进法

引用法对比法

因果法

细化法142精选课件ppt讨论公共图书馆是否应该提供高科技媒体递进法只要是为了更好的教育就可以应用高科技媒体Itisjustifiedforpubliclibrariesto…3，软件传递教育内容比传统书籍更有效2.视频教学可以让人愉悦的吸收信息，给予灵感1.包含大量数字信息，提供更实用的方式传递信息，占据小的位置。143精选课件pptInrecentyears,moreandmorewomenhavegoneouttowork.Somepeoplemaintainthatitistheresponsibilityofourgovernmenttoprovidefacilitiesandadequatestaff,freeofcharge,forthechildrenoftheseworkingmothers.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?因果法144精选课件ppt主题句理由一：Thefirstreasonisthat。。。

因果法很多岗位找不到合适的人选支持句1：Dueto长期存在性别歧视女性在劳动市场的不利探寻主题句的原因或结果支持句2145精选课件pptBe(directly)linkedto…Be(closely)connectedwith…Be(strongly)relatedtoBe(largely)associatedwith..,Be(unquestionably)tiedto…Bedirectlylinkedtothegenderdiscriminationforsuchalonghistory146精选课件pptTherefore,Thus,Asaresult,Consequently,…Asanaturalconsequence,…因果法

谈groupstudy的好处集体学习是有效的学习方法1）因为更多新的想法得到深入的讨论，发现更多有创意的方法2）提高学习效率，激发学习兴趣147精选课件ppt因果法1)Thisismainlybecausemorenewideascanbegeneratedthroughin-depthdiscussions,andmorecreativesolutionscanbefoundthroughteamworkandcooperation2)Therefore,comparedwithindividualstudy,studentsthroughgroupstudyarelikelytoenhancetheirlearningefficiencyandfostertheirinterestinthepursuitofknowledge.148精选课件ppt1WatchingTVtoomuchtendstohaveanunfavorableinfluenceonthefamilyrelationship