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Daisy作品T雅思写作主体段论证3社会文化教育政府投资1社会文化2教育34雅思写作社会文化Some

people

think

museum

should

be

enjoyableplaces

to

attract

and

entertain

young

people.

Otherthink

the

purpose

of

museums

is

to

educate,

not

toentertain.

Discuss

both

views

and

give

yourownopinion.政府投资社会文化正：支持娱乐博物馆娱乐化激发年轻人的兴趣,加深印象增加对历史的理解主体段一反：教育意义博物馆教育化提供实物，追溯历史人们知道保护文物，有认同感个人：娱乐主体段二主体段三actaiocntionresrueltsulteffecfftect吸引年轻人，加深对展品意义理解娱乐更快速度传播知识社会文化A

娱乐R激发年轻人的兴趣（arouse/stimulate

interest

and

excitement）加深印象（leave

a

strong/

deep

impression）E

增加对历史的理解（gain

an

insight

intos

/

have

a

better

graspof

historicevent）A

博物馆教育化R

提供实物，追溯历史（connect

to

the

past）E人们知道保护文物，有认同感（asense

of

identity）A娱乐R吸引年轻人，加深对展品意义理解（

deepen

their

understanding

of

theimplications

of

those

exhibits）E更快速度传播知识（

pass

on

knowledge

at

a

faster

pace）Entertainment

is

supported

by

some

peoplebecause they

think

it

is

likely

to

arouse

interestand

excitement.社会文化正：支持娱乐增加对历史的理解主体段一actionresulteffect博物馆娱乐化激发年轻人的兴趣,加深印象Movies

and

interactive

games

can

presentinformation

about

historical

events

in

an

engagingway

and

leave

a

strong

impression.In

this

way,

these

games

provide

young

visitorswith

opportunities

to

gain

an

insight

into

thehistory.If

museums

give

priority

to

education,

the

tripcould e

dull

and

uninteresting

to

visitors.社会文化反：教育意义提供实物，追溯历史人们知道保护文物，有认同感主体段二actionresulteffectOn

the

other

hand,

some

people

argue

that

they

will

eknowledgeable

and

possible

more

conscious

of

theiridentity,

if

museums

lay

emphasis

on

education.博物馆教育化Many

museums

put

important

objects(

e.g.,

antiques)on

display,

so

visitors

can

connect

to

the

past.

Thesemuseums

also

provide

enormous

information

about

howour

distant

ancestors

lived

their

lives

and

what

theyachieved

in

architecture

and

technology.They

will

have

a

strong

sense

of

identity

andrealize

how

important

it

is

to

protect

theirobjectsof

importance.

However,

it

would

be

difficult

for

visitorsto

focus

on

the

value

of

these

objects,

if

museumspaidattention

to

entertainment.社会文化娱乐个人：娱乐更快速度传播知识主体段三actionresulteffectFrom

my

perspective,

entertainment

canmake

it

possible

for

museums

to

pass

onknowledge

at

a

faster

pace

becauseentertainment

is

likely

to

attract

youngervisitors,

and

they

spend

more

time

deepeningtheir

understanding

of

the

implications

of

those

exhibits.

This

is

particularly

important

forthose

people

who

intend

to

escape

pressuresof

modern

life,

and

entertainment

canmakemuseums

an

attractive

destination.吸引年轻人，加深对展品意义理解1社会文化2教育34雅思写作教育educationMore

and

more

students

choose

to

go

toanother

country

for

higher

education.

Do

youthinkthe

benefits

outweigh

theproblem?政府投资7777777actionresulteffectbenefit出国深造能同时更好地掌握一门语言；提升交流技能成为满足全球化发展的全能型人才主体段一benefit外国学习没有家长的陪伴,独立生活提高独立解决问题的能力problem主体段二主体段三容易受到不良行为的影响出国留学，缺乏父母管教对成长产生坏的影响教育educationA

出国深造R1

能同时更好地掌握一门语言（acquire

a

foreign

language）R2

提升交流技能（improve

communication

skills）E

成为满足全球化发展的全能型人才（well-rounded

individuals）A

外国学习R

没有家长的陪伴（company

of

parents）,独立生活（self-reliant）E

提高独立解决问题的能力（problem-solving

abilities）A

出国留学，缺乏父母管教（away

from

parenting/

parental

control）R

容易受到不良行为的影响（behavioral

problems/indecent

behaviorE对成长产生坏的影响（

cast

a

long

shadow

over

the

future）教育educationbenefit出国深造能同时更好地掌握一门语言；丰富交流技能成为满足全球化发展的全能型人才教育educationaactcitoionnreresusultlteefffefectctOne

obvious

benefit

of

finishing

a

degree

overseasThey

are

able

to

improve

communication

skillsis

that

the

younger

generation

can

acquire

a

foreignlanguage.because

the

student

life

in

another

countryprovides

them

with

opportunities

to

exchangeideas

with

professors

and

classmates

fromdifferent

countries.They

are

thus

likely

to

e

well-roundedindividuals

who

have

a

bright

job

outlook.主体段一actionresulteffectbenefit外国学习没有家长的陪伴,独立生活提高独立解决问题的能力主体段二教育educationAnother

benefit

is

that

young

peoplecanacquire

basicskills,

if

they

pursue

qualifications

overseas.It

is

difficult

for

them

to

enjoy

the

company

ofparents,

so

they

have

to

give

importance

to

basiclifeskills

and

problem-solvingskills.They

are

expected

to

learn

how

to

rent

anapartment,

open

a

bank

account

and

buygrocery

items

themselves.These

skills

can

give

them

a

clearadvantagein

future.actionresulteffectproblem主体段三容易受到不良行为的影响出国留学，缺乏父母管教对成长产生坏的影响教育educationOn

the

other

hand,

studying

overseascanhave

a

damaging

effect

on

some

students’development.

They

do

everything

away

fromparental

control，when

they

attend

courses

inanother

country.They

may

not

be

able

todiscriminate

between

right

and

wrong,

and

thismeans

they

are

vulnerable

by

theinfluence

of

behavioral

problems

of

others.If

they

imitate

anti-social

behaviors,

theirdecision

may

cast

a

long

shadow

overthefuture.信息提练法反驳法平衡融合法结尾段写法总结本方中心思想及段落大意反驳对方观点指出其谬误再次提出本方观点融合对方观点的合理之处结尾一：提炼法Many

people

believe

that

women

make

better

parents

than

men

and

that

is

why

they

have

thegreater

role

inraising

children

inmost

societies.

Othersclaimthat

men

are

just

as

good

as

women

at

parenting.

Write

an

essay

expressing

your

point

of

view.Main

idea：妇女已经证明了他们是更好的家长But

women

have

proven

themselves

as

superior

parents

as

a

result

oftheir

conditioning,

their

less

aggressive

nature

and

their

generally

bettercommunication

skills.结尾一：提炼法结尾一：提炼法superior

parents-

better

suited

to

the

parenting

roleparenting-raising

childrenThus,

while

it

is

all

very

well

to

suggest

a

greater

role

for

men

in

raisingchildren,

let

us

not

forget

that

women

are

generally

better

suited

to

theparenting

role.结尾二：驳论法Topic:最近调查显示，世界上很多现存的语言都面临着灭亡的危险，一些人声称没有什么好担心的，这样一来国与国之间的交流障碍变少了，但我不同意这样的话，这是因为语言的多元化对人类的生存发展至关重要。批判辩驳：显然，这些认为语言少生活简单的观点过于短浅。Obviously,

the

opinion

that

life

will

be

simpler

with

fewer

languages

isfar

too

short-sighted.支持这种观点的人没有考虑到语言在文化多样性中的重要性。Supporters

of

this

view/

People

who

hold

this

view

have

not

taken

intoconsideration

the

importance

of

language

in

cultural

diversity.结尾二：驳论法结尾三：平衡法Computers

are

widely

used

in

education,

and

some

peoplethink

teacher

will

not

play

an

important

role

in

the

classroom,agree?With

the

present

wide

use

of

computers,

in

the

course

of

teaching,more

and

more

teachers

are

in

favour

of

using

computers

as

an

aid

inteaching

their

students

or

in

appropriating

the

latest

information

fromthe

internet.

However,

I

am

not

a

believer

in

the

argument

thatcomputers

may

in

the

futur