剑桥PET写作解析

剑桥PET写作解析导语：备考PET,正常的步骤是先学习剑桥教程，然后再进入冲刺阶段。下面提供剑桥PET写作解析，欢送参考！Iwasstandingbesidesomeonefamous!IwassoexcitedthatduringafewsecondsIcouldn'tdoanything.Iwasstandingandlookingathim.HewasmoretallerandmorebeautifulthanheseemedonTV.Suddenlyheturnedhisheadandfixedme.Iwaspetrified！Hesmiledandsaidhello.IopenedmymouthbutIcouldn'tsaysomething.HeaskedmehowIliketheshow.FinallyIansweredhim.Isaiditwasgreat.IaddedthatIlovedhismusicandparticularhislastalbum.Iaskedhimtosignmeanautographtheheshookmyhandandwent.考官点评这封信写得很成功，语言挥洒自如，词汇丰富，例如：Suddenlyheturnedhishead…•.Iwaspetrified.尽管存在一些小错误。分数：5同学们，这道题是必须拿总分值的，因为这是PET写作中最容易得分的题型，要注意只几点：书信格式不可少;开头结尾客套话;紧扣3要点，一点一句话;时态要正确;拼写要准确;卷面要整洁。咱们同学平时容易出现这些错误：1.称呼后面的逗号忘记了;2.忘记答全了，少答一点;3.时态有错误;4.常用单词的拼写出错。这些要引以为戒!考前再赶紧写几篇，请老师批改，争取总分值啊Hi!Howareyou?Areyouallright?I'mfine.IsitveryhotinAustralianow?Nowmycountryisingthewinter.Itiscoldeveryday.IwenttoFragrantHilllastweek.Itwasverycold.ButIenjoyedtoclimbupthemountainAfter2months,IwillgotosnowmountainsbecauseIcanplay"Snowboard".WhenIwas17yearsoldIbeguntoplayit.Icanplayitverywell.IhaveneverbeeninAustraliabutIsawonTVaboutAustralia.IthinkAustraliaishotwholeyear!Isthistrue?PleasetellmeandIhaveneverplayedsurfingpleaseteachme.I'dliketoplaysurfing!IfyoucouldetoChina,IcanshowyouallaroundChina.NowChinaisdeveloping.Iwanttotakeyoutothemountainsbecauseitisverybeautifulthemountains.Theleafischangingfromgreentoredoryellow!CanyouimaginelikeNewEnglandarea?Thesame!AnywayIenjoytogoallofJapan.Haveagoodtime.Ihopeyouwillbehappy!Takecare!Bye!考官点评这封信内容详细，语气友好。作者语言能力较强，用词贴切。尽管有些错误，但不阻碍理解。分数：4解题要点：不忘涂卡7还是8;句式多变词汇丰富;时态正确信息连贯;问题全答加连词;写完检查卷面整洁。不少同学5月12日就要参加PET考试，张老师再留几篇作文给同学们进行考前热身，提供的样文是张载阳同学编写，张老师批改正的，供同学们参考。张载阳KET就在张老师班上，KET成绩优秀。他是个爱学习、会学习的优秀学生，课上认真听讲，课后除了完成课堂上布置的作业，另外还练习《学习、练练、考考》，并请我批改练习的作文。孩子的家长非常热心，对孩子的学习非常关心。家长说孩子遇到张老师是幸运的，张老师觉得遇到这么出色的孩子、这么有责任心的家长，张老师也是幸运的：让我们为了同一个目标一起加油!希望张载阳PET仍然能够考优秀!加油！！☆Apologize☆Explainwhyyoucannotgo☆SuggestsomethingyoucandotogetherthefollowingweekendDearTim，I'mverysorrythatIcan'tgototheconcertwithyouthisSaturday.Ihavetogoshoppingwithmyfamilythewholeday.ButnextSaturdayI'vegotenoughtime.Whataboutgoingtoseeamovie?Yours,David☆offerthemyourcongratulations☆askabouttheirbaby☆saywhatpresentyouaresendingthem.Dearfriends,Congratulations!You'vegotyourfirstbaby.What'sthenameofit?It,sboyorgirl?I'llsendyousometoysandclothesaspresentforthem.Thebestwishesfrom,DavidYoudecidedtosendthepostcardtoyourfriendChris,wholivesinAustralia.Inyourpostcard,youshould☆saysomethingabouttheartgallery☆explainyouhavechosentosendChristhispostcard☆askChrisabouttheweatherinAustralia.DearChris,Ivisitedanartgalleryandboughtthispostcard.Thegallerywasveryniceandthepictureandsculpturewasamazing!Iknowyoulikethingswhicharestrange,soIhavechosenthisone.Bytheway,what'stheweatherinAustralia?Isitfortable?Writesoon.YoursDavidForournextholiday,wewanttovisityourcountry.Isitbesttospendourtimeinacityorinthecountryside?Whichwouldyouremendandwhy?Dearfriend,I'mveryhappythatyoucane.Ithinkcountryisgoodforyou.Therearemountainsnearthecity.Youcanhavegoodscenerythere,andit'sveryhigh.Soyoucantrainyourbodywell.There'resomegamestoo.Wemustworkwithotherpeople,soyoucanmakemanynewfriends!Bytheway,there'realotoffarmsforthepublictovisit.Andyoucangotheretodosomefarmwork,suchasfeedinganimals,gettingmilkfromacow,pickingthefruits,workinginthefield Ifyouworkhard,maybetheownerofthefarmwillgiveyousomemoney!Doyouthinkit'sgood?Hopetoseeyousoon!Yours,DavidYourstorymustbeginwiththissentence:ThebuswaslatesoIdecidedtowalk.ThebuswaslatesoIdecidedtowalk.Imustarriveatmygrandmother'shouse5milesawayat10'clock.Todaywasherbirthday.Anditwas9.30now.SoIranonthepavement.IthoughtoftaxibutIcouldn'tfindanytaxiontheroad.Therewasn'tanysubwaynearbyatall!SoIhadtorunveryfast.Atthatmoment,IsawmyfriendTom.Hewaswalkingtowardshiscar!HowluckyIwas!ItoldhimwhatIwastryingtodoandaskedwhetherhecouldgivemealift.Andheagreed.HedrovesofastthatIarrivedthereat9.45beforethebirthdaypartybegan!亚0@30广天气Whether:是否-Iguesstherearemanytraditionalfestivalsinyourcountry.What'sthemostmeaningfulone?Whatdopeoplecelebratethisfestival?Writeandtellmeallaboutit!.Nowwritealetter,answeringyourfriend'squestions..Writeyourletterinabout100wordsonyouranswersheet.Dearfriend,I'mveryhappytoreceiveyourletter.You'reright,therearemanytraditionalfestivalsinmycountry.Andinmyopinion,theSpringFestivalisthemostmeaningfulone,becauseitisthefirstdayofthelunarNewYear.Andinthemorningofthatdaypeoplewillbuyfireworks,andstickpapercutonthewindow.They'llcleantheroom,andmakedumplings.Peoplewhoworkfarawayusuallytrytogethometohaveafamilyr