作文开头写作课件

作文开头段写作练习目录背景介绍法场景描写法引用数据法大意总结法引用名研法文章结构引言段（引言铺垫+全文中心）主体段（段落主题+支持扩展）结论段（过度总结+引申建议）开头段落的写法一篇文章的开头可以在很大程度上决定阅卷老师对其的第一印象，同时也基本决定了得分。如果能有一个自然得体，引人注目的开头，肯定会为文章增色不少。当然在注重开头段落的同时也不要走入误区，堆砌经典句型，随意套用句型，效果适得其反。写好开头段落的常用方法有：背景介绍法，场景描写法，引用数据法等。

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofDisposalProducts.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow：

1.社会上一次性生活用品非常丰富

2.一次性生活用品给人们带来了方便，也造成了许多问题

3.解决的办法

方法1：背景介绍法背景介绍法=背景概述+背景详述(+全文中心)OnDisposalProducts

DisposalproductsaregainingincreasingpopularityinChina.

（Nowtheypracticallybecomepartofourlife:wehavedisposalchopsticks,disposalcups,disposalclothes,disposalcameras.）Indeedweareinathrowawaysociety.

背景概述背景详述全文中心Advertisementsappeareverywhereinmodernsociety.（背景概述）Whenyouwalkalongthestreets,youcanseelargebillboardswithprettygirlssmilingatyou.Whenyoureadnewspapers,youseehalfthepagescoveredwithads.WhenyouturnontheTV,youseecommercialadvertisementsagain.（背景详述）Whetheryoulikeitornot,advertisingpoursintoyourlife.Onadvertisement背景概述常用句型Withthedevelopmentofmodernsociety….Recentlythephenomenonof…hasarousedconsiderableconcern.Recentlytheissueof…hasbeenbroughtintofocus.Recentyearshavewitnessedasubstantialincreasein….Nowadaysoneofthepressingproblemsconfrontingoursocietyis….Thesedays….hasbecomeacommonoccurrenceinourdailylife.Thesedays…oftenhitstheheadlinesofnewspapers.PracticeItPaystoBeHonest1.当今社会存在许多不诚实现象2.诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实

Althoughhonestyisbelievedtobeavirtue,nowadaysdishonestyisstilladailyoccurrence:teachersplagiarizinginwritings;studentscheatinginexams;businessmensellingfakeproductstheythemselvesneveruse;governmentofficialspreachingdoctrinestheythemselvesneverbelievein.Indeed,wearesinkingintoanunbelievablesociety.方法2：场景描写法背景描写是一种最常用的开头方法，容易落入俗套。因此为了写出新意，可以尝试一开始就根据不同主题设计不同的相关场景，一边给读者身临其境的感受，这样才能首先给阅卷老师留下深刻的印象。ABoominAdultEducationEveryTuesdayandFridayeveningseesMissLi,myneighborandasecretaryinacompanyrushhomeafterahardday’swork,gulpdownhermealsandthenhurryouttocatchthebusforherEnglishclass.MissLi’scaseisnotunique,andnowmoreandmorecityadultsspendtheirleisuretimetryingtoimprovethemselvesatschoolorcollege.场景描写可以是一个小故事，一段小对话或独白

Healthandwealth“IfonlyIcouldbeamillionaire!”LasttimewhenIwentoutshoppingIoverheardacryutteredbyalittleboywhenfacedwiththousandsoftoysondisplay.Infact,nowadays,therearefewplaceswhereyoucannothearsuchwordsfrommouthsofpeopleofallages,

butiswealthsoimportantastooutweighhealth?场景描写法模式场景描写常用词语

case，story，sight，experience，likely，similarly，inthesameway，inthesamemanner场景描写常用句型Thecaseisnotunique.Thisisacommonsight.Therearefewplaceswhereyoucannotexpecttofindsuchstories.Like…inthestory,manypeoplehavethesameexperience.设计对话或者情景+过渡句+中心句Practice

CollegeStudentsJob-Hunting1.近几年出现了大学生就业难的现象2.产生这种现象的原因3.如何解决这一问题

CollegeStudentsJob-Hunting

“IfonlyIcouldbeofferedajob,evenwithlittlepay!”lasttimewhenIwasinajobmarketIoverheardacryutteredbyagraduate,who,obviously,hadbeenturneddownformanytimes.Actually,thesedaysitisknowntoallthatitisincreasinglydifficultforcollegegraduatestofindjobs,whatarethereasons?方法3：引用数据法Inrecentyears,oncampus,thephenomenonofcheatinginexamhasbecomerampant.Statisticsshowthatalmost80%studentsadmittedtheyusedtocheatonce.What’sthereasoncausethat?StudentUseofComputers

Averagenumberofhoursofastudentspendsonthecomputerperweek

Accordingtothebarchart,thereweregratechangesinthetimestudentsspendoncomputersinthepasttenyears.

Thetimeincreaseddramaticallyfrom2hoursin1990to4in1995andthento18in2000.

(图表反映问题或现象+详细描叙图表）StudentUseofComputers不同的表达方式Thetimeincreaseddramaticallyfrom2hoursin1990to4in1995andthento18in2000.Thefigureincreasedtwicein1990andninetimesin2000comparedwiththatin1990.In1990,averagestudentsspentabout2hours;whilein1995thefiguredoubled;fiveyearslater,theyspentninetimesasmuchtimeasthatin1990.引用数据常用词语

上升

increase,rise,ascend,soar,climb,goup,grow…下降

decrease,fall,descend,godown,diminish,decline,drop,dwindle,shrink…程度副词

slightly,slowly,ataslowpace/rate,steadily,gradually(表示增加幅度不大)，

sharply,considerably,greatly,dramatically,steeply,substantially,surprisingly,alarmingly,rapidly,significantly,enormously,hugely,incredibly,byawidemargin…（表示增加幅度不大）引用数据常用句型1.Ascanbeseefromthetable(表格)/thebarchart(柱状图)/thepiechart(饼状图)/thelinegraph(曲线图),greatchangestookplaceinthepast…in…2.Accordingtothetable(s),thereweregreatchangesin…(图表反映的内容)inthepast…(时间)3…increased/decreasedfrom…(

数据1)in…(时间1)to…(数据2)in…(时间2)4.Therewasanincreased/decreasedfrom…(

数据1)in…(时间1)to…(数据2)in…(时间2).5.Bycomparisonwith…,…6.Thefigurehasnearlydoubled,comparedwiththatoflastyear.7.Itincreasedalmosttwoandahalftimes,comparedwith…8.Itaccountsfor…percentofthetotal.9.Thenumberwas…,aboutathirdofthetotalof…10.Accordingtothetable/chart,theincreasein…wasaccompaniedbyacorrespondingdeclineinthenumberof…PracticeEducationPays范文一

EducationPays

Asisshownabove,thebarchartclearlydemonstratestherelationshipbetweentheeducationlevelandearningin2010.Itisobviousthatwell-educatedpersonssuchasowningDoctoraldegreeandMaster'sdegreehaveahighsalarythanthosewhohaverelativelylowdegree.Isolatedasthefigureseemstobe,asamatteroffact,wecanobservethatthehigherlevelofeducationyoureceive,thehigherincomeyouget.

People’sopinionsaboutinvestmentineducationdifferfrompersontoperson.Somepeoplesaythatknowledgecouldnolongerchangedestiny.Tothem,itisnotonlyawasteofmoney,butalsoawasteoftime.Othersdeemthateducationisworthyofinvestment.Asformeitisnodoubtthateducationoffersfavorableworkingopportunityandhandsomeincome,whichenableustobuywhatwewant,pleasewhatwelove,andfulfillwhatwedream,andcorrespondinglyweareabletobuildanidealparadisewherelifecanbeenjoyedtotheuttermost.

Inconclusion,weshouldrealizesignificanceofeducation,whichplaysacrucialroleinpersonalgrowthofcareer.Inaddition,itisconvincedthateducationistheprospectofanation.范文二

Fromthechartabove,wecandefinitelygetaconclusionthatthemoreyoulearned,thehigheryoursalarywouldbe.Thefiguresinthechartdeniedtheclaimthatknowledgeisuseless.Howeverquiteafewpeoplestillholdtheopinionthatahighereducationdoesnogoodtoabetterjobsincethattherearemanyuniversitystudentswhocannotgetanidealjob.WhatIwanttopointoutisthatthereismorethanonefactorthatcontributestothefailureoffindinganidealjobforthosewhogotahighereducation.Whilethosewhofailedtogetabettereducationwillhardlysucceedingettingagoodjobbecausetheydidn’tgettheknowledgesystematicallyandscientifically.Astheproverbgoeslikethis,Knowledgeispower.Educationpays,soonerorlater.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofLivingofftheCampus.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow：1.大学生校外租房有什么益处？2.大学生校外租房可能带来什么问题？3.我的观点与评价方法4：大意总结法

Thereisnoconsensusofopinionsamongpeopleastorentinghousesoutsidecampus.Itisheldthatrentinghousesoutsidecampusallowsstudentsmorefreedom;whileitisalsoheldthatthispracticewilldoharmtostudentsconcerned.Currently,therehasbeenaheateddiscussiononwhethercollegestudentsshouldbeallowedtoliveoutsidecampus.Asopposedtootherswhoholdthattoomuchfreedomwillspoilthestudents.aconsiderableproportionofstudentsclaimthattheyareoldenoughtobetheirownmaster.AdvantagesandDisadvantagesofLivingofftheCampus

此外，我们还可以把大意总结法和背景介绍法结合使用Nowadaysthephenomenonhasarousedconsiderableconcern——alargernumberofcollegestudentschoosetorenthousestoliveoutsidecampus.Astotheviewofthisphenomenonpeople’sideavaryfromonetoanother.Somepeopleheldthatrentinghousesoutsidecampusallowsstudentsmorefreedom;whileothersheldthatthispracticewilldoharmtostudentsconcerned.大意总结法句型总结法11.Thereisnoconsensusofopinionsamongpeopleastowhetherornotweshould……2.Therearesomecontroversiesastotheviewof……3.Whenitcomesto……,people’sideas/views/notions/opinionsvaryfrompersontoperson/fromonetoanother.4.Whenaskedabout……,adivergenceofopinionsarises.5.Nowadays/Recently/Thesedays/Currently,therehasbeenaheateddiscussionontheissueof……（以上句型近似于背景介绍，是从总体上介绍对一个问题有两种不同看法。)对于某个社会现象有不同的声音一些观点认为…,而另外一些人认为….总结法21、Peoplewhoareagainststh.holdthat……,others,however,contradict/arguethat2、Somehole……whileotherstakeitforgranted/firmlybelieve……3、Itisheldthat……,whileitisalsoheldthat……4、Asopposedtootherswhoholdthat……,aconsiderableproportionofpeopleclaimthat……Directions:pleasewriteashortessayonthetopicDevelopEconomyorProtecttheEnvironment？YoushouldwritefollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.有些人认为应首先发展经济；

2.另一些人则主张以保护环境为重；

3.谈谈自己的观点。DevelopEconomyorProtecttheEnvironment

Whenitcomestowhichismoresubstantialinconstructingsociety,economyorenvironment,somepeoplethinkthattheurgenttaskistodevelopeconomyonalargescale.First,theyholdthatmanypeople,especiallyinruralareas,arelivinginpovertyandcan’taffordthebasicschoolingfortheirchildrenwhooftenhavetodropoutofschool.Second,theybelievethatonlybyfurtherdevelopingoureconomycanwestrikeabalancebetweenthedevelopedeastandthedevelopingwest.Finally,itwillhelptheruralpoorgetridofpovertyandgainanoverallprosperity.

Ontheotherhand,therearemanypeoplewhoinsistthattheenvironmentalprotectionshouldbeatoppriority.Firstly,theyclaimthatwehaveonlyonemotherearth.Ifourecologicalenvironmentisheavilypollutedorruined,wecouldnotevensurviveontheplanet.Secondly,theybelievethatit’stherapiddevelopmentofeconomythatleadstomanyoftheseriousproblemswearefacingtoday,includingtheawfulpollutionoftourenvironment.Iftheproblemisleftunsolved,wemaysoonhavenowaterfittodrink,nocleanairtobreathe,letaloneadevelopedeconomy.

Inmyopinion,botheconomyandenvironmentalprotectionareoururgenttasksnow.Withouteconomicdevelopment,wewouldremainbackwardandbeconqueredbyothernations.Andwithoutenvironmentalprotection,wewouldloseourchanceofsurvival.Therefore,