初中英语中考作文指导课件

初中英语中考作文指导初中英语中考作文指导初中英语中考作文指导Therearesomeproblemsinourstudiesanddailylife,wehavemanylessonsandhavelotsofhomeworktodoeveryday.Sowehavelittletimetodosports,Asaresult,quiteafewofusareinpoorhealth.What’smore,moreandmorestudentsareinterestedinplayingcomputergames.Theyspendtoomuchtimeonit.Andsomestudentslikeeatingjunkfood.Inmyopinion,studentsneedtokeepfitandstudywell.First,weshouldspendlesstimeplayingcomputergamesandhavemoresleep.Second,weshouldeathealthilyanddomoresports.

Therearesomeproblemsinourstudiesanddailylife,wehavemanylessonsandhavelotsofhomeworktodoeveryday.Sowehavelittletimetodosports,Asa

result,quiteafewofusareinpoorhealth.What’smore,

moreandmorestudentsareinterestedinplayingcomputergames.Theyspendtoomuchtimeonit.Andsomestudentslikeeatingjunkfood.

Inmyopinion,studentsneedtokeepfitandstudy

well.

First,weshouldspendlesstimeplayingcomputergamesandhavemoresleep.Second,weshouldeathealthilyanddomoresports.英语作文8个话题一、介绍人（自己、家庭、朋友、老师、个人变化、个人感受等）二、介绍地点（旅游等）三、校园生活（春游、校规、科目、学习困难等）四、课外生活（家庭生活、家务劳动、电影、个人爱好等）五、假期安排（计划、过去经历等）六、节假日活动（志愿者活动、过去经历）七、环境、健康（环保、疾病、食品健康等）八、个人观点建议（提建议、劝告等）

写话常见体裁

初中阶段的写作体裁主要包括记叙文、议论文和应用文。记叙文的训练包括记人、叙事、写景状物。教师要帮助学生分析不同类型文章的写作规律。记人(Mybestfriend)

文章可通过介绍人物的年龄、外貌、职业、爱好、学习工作等方面来展现人物鲜明的个性。(叙述的原则是从外到内）

叙事：

(Aninterestinglesson)

文章需要交代以下五个要素，Who、When、Where、What、How学生作文常见语法错误1）名词的单复数前后不统一

Examsarenecessarybecauseithelpsimproveourselvesinmanyways.

2）时态、语态、主谓不一致

Havingfamilyteachersareverycommonamongstudents.3）副词位置或选用不当

We

also

candosomethingforourparentstoshowourthanks.

4)表达随意,中国式英语比比皆是TherearealargenumberoftouristsvisitShanghaieveryyear.5）语言表达繁琐或生硬

I’lltrymybesttostudyhard.Iwanttogetgoodmarks.(建议用inorderto连接)

Tobuythingsonlinemakesourlifemoreconvenient.(用Shoppingonline)basicstructure(基本结构的安排)DearMr.Know，I’mpleasedtowritetoaskforsomehelp.IwanttotellyousomeproblemswemeetinEnglishstudy.First，someofusaren’tinterestedinEnglish.WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringthing.Andthenit’ssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.Solotsofusdon’thaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglishstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.What’smore,therearesomanynewwordswehaven’tmeetbeforeinthepassage.Idon’tknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecan’tunderstandthemainidea,letalone(更不用说)answerthequestionsaboutthem.Butthemostdifficultthingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.Canyouhelpus?HowcanweimproveourEnglish?Pleasegiveussomeusefuladvice.Thankyouverymuch.Writetomesoon.

Let’sgoforit!

Mary(thebeginning)(theending)thebody（正文）basicrules(写作考试规则)search（审）list（列）add(加:开头和结尾)connect(连)beautiful(美：谚语/例子)牛刀小试健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。审(search)travelstayathomevisitfriendsorparentswork

如何度假调查报告倡议假日休闲stayathomeworkvisitfriendsorparentstravel列(list)根据以下关键词及图表用

简单的句子列出文章的要点。

Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Enjoyyourvacation.列(list)Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.（thebeginning）Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.（theending）加(add)加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,

alotofpeopletravel.

And

somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.

Also

some

otherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.

However,

afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.连(connect)Writingskills（“写”的技巧）方法一:善用词汇

甚至善用高级词汇Whichisbetter?他们在海滩上听音乐。ATheylistenedtothemusiconthebeach.BTheyenjoyedthemusiconthebeach.Whichisbetter?

我希望你能帮助我。AIwishyoucanhelpme.BI’mlookingforwardtoyourhelp.Whichisbetter?他们很早就到了。ATheyarrivedearly.BTheyarrivedasearlyastheycould.Whichisbetter?最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。AHisdogwassavedatlast.Hewasverysurprised.BTohissurprise,hisdogwassavedatlast.AIthinklearningEnglishisinteresting.BIfinditreallyfuntolearnEnglish.

我认为学英语很有趣。

我们应该保护环境。AWeshouldprotecttheenvironment.BIt’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.方法二:活用多种句型Writingskills（“写”的技巧）

她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。ASheisveryyoung.Shecan’tcarrytheheavybox.BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.CSheissoyoungthatshecan’tcarrythe…DSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe…方法三:妙用关联词Writingskills（“写”的技巧）1.表示并列或递进:and,aswellas,both…and,what’smorenotonly…butalso,neither…nor2.表示选择:or,either…or3.表示转折:but,however,although\though,afterall,anyway4.表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,asaresult5.表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比:instead,not…but,while,inthesameway,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand7.表示解释:forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords,totellthetruth8.表示顺序:tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend9.表示强调:also,besides,especially,actually,infact10.表示结论:allinall,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,inshort关联词(connectionwords)Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,

alotofpeopletravel.

And

somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.

Also

some

otherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.

However,

afewpeoplework.

Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.连(connect)Let’stry_____________Iamtired,Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight.Hedidn’tgotomovies,hewenttotheconcert______.Welikedoingkindsofsports_____swimming,runningandhiking._____,hestoodup.Thenhegotout._____,hewentback.____________,hesmiled.Though\AlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinally\AtlastWeinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

However,

afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(beautify)Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.However,

afewpeoplehavetowork.

Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(beautify)Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.

Proverb（谚语）/saying加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。锻炼对学生有好处Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise…Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise.集中注意力于学习Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies.Asthesayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies...加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法JoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”SojoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。Enjoysomeproverbs1.Practicemakesperfect.2.Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.

4.DoastheRomansdo.

三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入乡随俗。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。失败是成功之母。5.Theearlybirdcatchestheworm.3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.6.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.

Enjoysomeproverbs

7.Itisnousecryingoverspiltmilk.

8.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.

9.AllroadsleadtoRome.10.Nevertoooldtolearn.

覆水难收。一天一个苹果，医生远离我。条条大路通罗马。活到老，学到老。方法四:妙用引文和例子

（多用于“thebody”）Writingskills（“写”的技巧）青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample,

wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags,stopusingnapkins,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.加例子加例子在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。Ioftenhelpmyparentsdohousework,suchas

washingdishes,foldingtheclothes,takingoutthetrashandsoon.结尾：提出倡议或号召Let’s…Doitnow!/Don’tdoitagain!Asstudents,weshouldstartfromourselves.

Don’twait.Joinusnow!Starttojoinusnow!Don’tputitoff!Becomeavolunteertoday!Howamazing!Ican’twait!Saveanimals!SaveOurselves!Saveourplanet!Don’thesitate(犹豫).Itwillbegreatfun!知己知彼，学范文

First，someofusaren’tinterestedinEnglish.

WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringthing.Andthenit’ssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.Solotsofusdon’thaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglishstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.What’smore,therearesomanynewwordswehaven’tmetbeforeinthepassage.Idon’tknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecan’tunderstandthemainidea,

letalone(更不用说)answerthequestions

aboutthem.Butthemostdifficultthingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.

Let’sgoforit!123465DearMary,Iheardyoudidn’tdowellinEnglish.Hereissomeadviceforyou.Yours…________________,IthinkreadingEnglisheverydayandlisteningtotheteachercarefullyinclassarethemostimportant._______,youcanjointheEnglishclubtopracticeEnglish.Youknow,“Practi