2022届高考英语书面表达专题指导与练习讲评（图画式作文）练习讲评三

2012届高考英语书面表达（图画式作文）练习讲评三请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应该包括以下内容：1.这幅漫画描述了什么？2.这幅漫画想要告诉我们什么？3.发表你个人的看法。注意：1.可参照图示作必要的发挥想象。2.词数150左右(开头句已给出)。3.作文中不得提及考生所在班级和本人姓名。参考词汇：温室greenhouse开头句：Asisvividlyshowninthefirstpicture,

第一步：描述漫画所反映的内容在刮风下雨，但是生长在温室里的花朵生长得很好。花朵离开了温室，花朵不能经历风雨，很弱。漫画描述了什么？

1.仔细审图，提炼要点2.描述图片，准确到位对漫画进行描述，内容要简明扼要，就图说图（为了表达上的连贯，有时还要增加一些要点），切忌拖泥带水；语言要准确到位，切忌闲言碎语。换句话说，我们就是要用最简洁的语言概括出漫画的主要内容。搜索表达的词组或句型描述漫画所要用到的词组windyandrainyoutsidetheflowerinthegreenhousegrowverywell

(be)exposedtotheoutsidebecomeweakercan’tstandagainst译点成句，多重表达Itiswindyandrainyoutside,andyettheflowerinthegreenhouseisgrowingwell.Itisraininghard,buttheflowerinthegreenhouseisatitsbest.Theflowerinthegreenhouseisstillingoodconditiondespite/inspiteoftheheavyrain.Whenexposedtotheoutside,theflowerappearsweakandcan’tstandagainstthebadweather.Whenexposedtotheoutside,theflowerappearsweakandfailstostandagainstthebadweather.Whenthereisnogreenhouse,theflowerbecomesweakeasilytheflowerappearsweakandfailstostandagainstthebadweatherduetolackofprotection.完成漫画的描述Asisvividlyshowninthefirstpicture,itiswindyandrainyoutside,andyettheflowerinthegreenhouseisgrowingwell.Intheseconddrawing,however,thingsarequitedifferent.Whenexposedtotheoutside,theflowerappearsweakandcan’tstandagainstthebadweather.第二步：漫画寓意的挖掘所谓漫画寓意的挖掘是指漫画想要告诉我们的是什么。漫画的寓意可谓仁者见仁，智者见智。但是无论怎样一定要结合我们所接触到的社会实际挖掘出漫画所反映出的社会现象和蕴含的哲理。围绕漫画，展开联想根据对漫画的理解，我们可以这样来挖掘：家长对孩子过度呵护，他们一旦离开保护将难以克服困难。孩子要离开家长的保护伞，去挑战困难。围绕家长和孩子去展开联想。现象：生活条提高了，大人……，小孩……大人：对孩子的溺爱；满足他们的一切要求；视他们为掌上明珠；

……孩子：想当然地认为父母总是会保护他们的；想不到一旦没有了保护，会怎么样？

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结果：孩子难以在现实社会中生存，像温室中的花朵那样容易被困难打败。搜索表达的词组或句型livingstandardsimprovespoilchildrengivethemwhatevertheywant/satisfyeveryneedofthemseethemasapplesoftheireyestake…forgrantedalwaysprotectthem/enjoytheshelterparentsprovideNeverthinkwhatwillhappenoncethereisnoprotection…havedifficultyexistingintherealworldbedestroyedbythetoughrealityaswhathappenstotheflower译点成句，多重表达Withlivingstandardsimproving,adultsspoiltheirchildrenandtrytheirbesttogivethemwhatevertheywant.Aslivingstandardsareimproving,adultstendtospoiltheirchildrenbysatisfyingeveryneedofthem.Parentsseechildrenastheapplesoftheireyes,offeringalltheycantoprotectthem.Childrentakeitforgrantedthattheirparentsarealwaysprotectingthem.Childrenquiteenjoytheshelterparentsprovideforthem.Childrenneverthinkofthefactthatwhatwillhappenoncethereisnoprotectionfromtheirparents.Asaresult,childrenhavedifficultyexistingintherealworld.They’llprobablybedestroyedbythetoughrealityaswhathappenstotheflower.完成漫画寓意的描述Whathasbeendescribedinthedrawingscarriesgreatimplicationsforourdailylife,esp.howtobettereducatechildren.Withlivingstandardsimproving,adultsspoiltheirchildrenbysatisfyingeveryneedofthem.Therefore,childrentakeitforgrantedthattheirparentsarealwaysprotectingthemandneverthinkofwhatwillhappenonceleavingthegreenhouse.Asaresult,childrenhavedifficultyexistingintherealworld.They’llprobablybedestroyedbythetoughrealityaswhathappenstotheflower.

第三步：对漫画中反映的问题作出评价及建议

围绕主题“温室花朵经不起风雨”作出评价及建议。对孩子教育的重要性；分别对家长和孩子提出建议……Frommypointofview,weshouldrealizetheimportanceofeducatingchildren.Asforparents,theyshouldnotletchildrengrowupinthegreenhouseallthetime.Ontheotherhand,childrenshouldn’tliveundertheumbrellaofparentsandexposethemselvestotheoutsidesurroundingstomakepreparationsfortheirfuture.参考答案Asisvividlyshowninthefirstpicture,itiswindyandrainyoutside,andyettheflowerinthegreenhouseisgrowingwell.Intheseconddrawing,however,thingsarequitedifferent.Whenexposedtotheoutside,theflowerappearsweakandcan’tstandagainstthebadweather.Whathasbeendescribedinthedrawingscarriesgreatimplicationsforourdailylife,esp.howtobettereducatechildren.Withlivingstandardsimproving,adultsspoiltheirchildrenbysatisfyingeveryneedofthem.Therefore,childrentakeitforgrantedthattheirparentsarealwaysprotectingthemandneverthinkofwhatwillhappenonceleavingthegreenhouse.Asaresult,childrenhavedifficultyexistingintherealworld.They’llprobablybedestroyedbythetoughrealityaswhathappenstotheflower.Frommypointofview,weshouldrealizetheimportanceofeducatingchildren.Asforparents,theyshouldnotletchildrengrowupinthegreenhouseallthetime.Ontheotherhand,childrenshouldn’tliveundertheumbrellaofparentsandexposethemselvestotheoutsidesurroundingstomakepreparationsfortheirfuture.同步练习【浙江省2012年高三调研英语测试卷】请根据下图写一篇120个左右词的短文。你的短文应包括下列要点：1.简要描写图画内容；2.说明图画含义；3.表达你的观点。

注意：1.短文的标题和开头已给出（不计词数）；2.参考词汇：spoil宠坏TooMuchCareSpoilsaChildAsisshowninthepictureabove,_____________________参考范文Asisshowninthepictureabove,thebloomingplantisbeingdestroyedbyover-watering.Oftenpeopledothingswithgoodi