大作文事例型文帮助主题 - 副本

帮助主题读写任务〔原文：共3段〕Youarewalkingdownthestreet.Awomansuddenlyscreams,"Help!Athief!Somebodygetshim!"andyouseeamanrunningawaywiththewoman’spurse.Wouldyourunafterthethiefandtrytocatchhim?Mostofuswillnothesitatetodowhateverwecantohelpourfamiliesandfriendswhenweareneeded,butisitagoodideatodoso?Question:这是一个具体例子吗？只是一个引入，summary中不需要写出来Therehappenedanaccidentlikethis.Anelderlymanwaswaitingforabusinlineforalongtime.Whenthebuscame,hewastooanxioustogetonthebussothathesteppedhisownfeetandfellontheground.Onseeingthis,a

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manranuptohimandwantedtohelphimgettohisfeet.Tohissurprise,theelderlymanrefusedtheman’shelp,andinsistedthatitwastheyoungmanwhopushed

himonpurpose.Intheend,themanwasforcedtogotocourtandwas

fined200yuan.Also,insomeothercases,onegoodturndoesnotalwaysdeserveanother.抓要点：判断：实际例子第一种抓要点方式：(when)(where)who,what,result第二种抓要点方式：起因，经过，结果Thereisalimittohowmuchwecandoandshouldhelp;blindtothatline,wemayhurtratherthanhelpothersinmanycases.Weighinguptheprosandcons,wesometimeshavetodealwithouremergenciesbeforebeingnicetostrangers.作者对事件的总结Keywords:

alimit/notblind/thinkcarefullyTheauthortellstwoexampleofhelpingstrangersblindly,andwanttopointoutthatnottonicetostrangersbeforeyoudowithyouremergencies.请大家打分0分Theauthortellstwoexamples(第一段不是例子)ofhelpingstrangersblindly,andwanttopointoutthatnottonicetostrangers(that后面要句子，但是这不是句子；而且，这不是作者的观点)beforeyoudowithyouremergencies.Summary:1)Thewriterholdsacasetotellusthatitmaybadforustohelpstrangersandweshouldbetempytohelpthestranger.巫佳文请大家打分0分Thewriterholdsacase〔要把事件写出来〕totellusthatitmaybad(这个表达是错的，而且不是作者的观点)forustohelpstrangersandweshouldbetempy(??)tohelpthestranger.〔summary中不要出现we,I〕Thepassagetellsusanexamplethatamanwhowantedtohelptheinjuredmanwasaccusedofhurtingtheothermanandwaspunished,whichwarns/warningusoftherisksofhelpingstrangers.请大家打分3分Thepassagetellsusanexamplethatamanwhowantedtohelptheinjuredmanwasaccusedofhurtingtheotherman(无结果),whichwarns/warningusoftherisksofhelpingstrangers.〔主从不分，主句讲最重要的信息，文章的主要观点〕在保证语法的正确上，用一句话进行连接Bygivingtheexamplethatamanhelpedanelderlyman(2个人物)whofellontheground,(起因)butwasmistakenastheonecausinghisfallingdown〔经过〕andwasfinallyfined(事件)〔结果〕,theauthorwarnspeopleoftherisksofhelpingstrangers(作者的总结).1.陈述帮助陌生人的乐趣和必要性关键词？乐趣和必要性也就是说必须在该段首句，表达着两个相关词！！！这种类型的题目其实可以翻译为：解释帮助陌生人的乐趣和必要性的原因It’shappybecause…It’snecessarybecause…手头范文有举小例子,likegivingdirectionstoalostboyorgivingourseatstoanelderlyladyonabus.其实不需要，解释好原因便可。关键就是开门见山！要老师一眼就能看到你有对点写！！！！2.以你或你身边的人的故事举例说明盲目帮助陌生人会带来危险。判断以下例子是否妥当：1.泛舟时，有人落水，勇敢救人，结果自己也差点遇难-7分写事例型文章，一定要参考所给短文中的例子，尤其例子的起因，经过，结果，要注意对其模仿。2.广州司机pengyu见到老人受伤，送其去医院，结果被人误会-10分以你或你身边的人的故事，只需将其中人名改为自己的熟人，但是一定要有myfriend,myuncle等说明关系的字眼3.有人向我借了两块钱，说要还，但是没有还。-3分因为这个例子强调做了某件事，一定是带来危险。所以必须要强调危险性事例型作文标准架构：记清楚！！！第一点：往往不需要详写，开门见山，首句表达关键词，进行一个原因的解释〔一个关键词一分〕第二点，首句表达关键词，首先判断自己身边还别人的例子？再认真思考这个例子说明的是什么？以说明的重点来构思例子！！！最后在例子后面添加一句对例子的升华和总结，这个是决定例子上下分的关键。3.第三点，开门见山，首句表达关键词结尾看实际情况：如果是简单要你号召，就直接倒装句，强调句结尾但是如果有要你提建议，写做法，分析原因，一定要分点写！！！至少两点！！！Byshowingtheexamplethatayoungmanhelpedanelderlymanintroublebutwasmistakentobethetroublemakerandwasfinallyfined,theauthorwarnsusoftherisksofhelpingstrangersandsuggestsasecondthoughtbeforereachingout.Asanoldsayinggoes,“Giverosestoothersandthelastingfragrancewillremaininyourhand.〞Intermsofindividual,whenrewardedwithasmileonthefacesofthosehelped,we’lldevelopasenseofhappiness,satisfactionandprideinwardly.Intermsofthesociety,itistheencouragementofmutualassistancethathelpstoconstituteacountrywithahighmoralstandard.Therefore,Ithinkitisfunandnecessarytohelpothers.(点题,点明关键词)〔过渡〕However,nowadaysprofessionalcheatstendtotakeadvantagesofkind,helpfulandwarm-heartedpeople,soifwehelpstrangersblindly,wewouldeasilyfallintothetrap.Forinstance,〔举例〕oncemygrandmagavesomemoneywithouthesitationtoa“beggar〞dressedinrags,wholayonthestreet,hopingtobepitied.Butthenextweek,hewasseentohavebigdinnersinarestaurant.Mygrandmafeltcheatedanddisappointedandfromthenon,shebecamelessenthusiasticinhelpingbeggars.(个人层面的后果)Ifmoreincidentslikethistakeplace,peoplewouldgraduallybecomeindifferentevenwhenseeingthoseinrealneed.〔升华到社会层面的弊端〕(过渡)Therefore，inordertolendaproperhandtothepeopleinneedandavoidbeingtakenadvantagebythosecheats,somesuggestionsshouldnotbeignored.Firstandforemost,forthestrangers,weshouldbecautiousincasewemayinvolveourselvesintotroublewhenhelpingthem.Ifnecessary,don’thesitatetoseekhelpfromthepolice.Furthermore,itisadvisabletoseeTVprogramslikePoliceReport,sowe’llacquaintourselveswiththevarioustricksandliessoastoavoidbeingtrapped.Tosumup,thoughsometimesriskexistsingivinghelptoothers,weshouldbestillreadytolendahelpinghandwiththeawarenessofprotectingourselves.Therefore,whenhelpingstrangers,lookbeforeyouleap〔三思而后行〕.结尾回应，总结单独成段NoOneDarestoHelpOnarecentSunday,IwasbuyinggroceriesinasupermarketwhenIheardthesoundofacaraccident.Itwasclosebutnotveryclose,soIcontinuedshopping.AsItookarightturnonMunadhamaStreet,Isawamanlyingonthegroundinasmallpoolofblood.Hewasn'tdead.Theideaofstoppingtohelportotakehimtoahospitalcrossedmymind,butIdidn'tdare.Carspassedwithoutstopping.Pedestriansandshopownerskeptdoingwhattheyweredoing,pretendingnothinghadhappened.Iwasstilllookingatthewoundedmanandblamingmyselffornotstoppingtohelp.Othershopperspeeredathimfromadistance,sorrowfulandsympathetic,butdidnothing.Iwentontoanothergrocerystore,stayingforaboutfiveminuteswhileshoppingfortomatoes,onionsandothervegetables.Duringthattime,themanmanagedtositupandwavetopassingcars.Noonestopped.Noonedidanything.Nooneliftedafinger.Thewoundeddiedaloneinthestreet.Theonlyreactioncamefromawomaninthegrocerystore.Inalowvoice,shesaid,“MyGod,blesshissoul.〞Anofferofaidcouldhavesavedtheman’slife.Summary：Words:1.DarePeopledarenothelpPeopledarednottohelp=peopledidn’tdaretohelp.2.Died3.撞车Thecarknockeddownanoldman.Hecrashedhiscar(intoawall).AcarcrashSentences:Thepassagetellsusastorythattheauthorwasshoppingwhenacaraccidenthappened.astorythat后的从句，必须是文章最核心的内容Theoldmanmighthavebeensavedifhehadbeenofferedhelp.(虚拟意味着观点和情感的表达！！Summary里慎用)Passage:Summary建议打草稿：一定要检查动词的准确性：说明文，议论文通常为一般现在时记叙文：通常用过去时！！！检查每个动词的时态！！！牢记模板：叙事summary：有启示：Bytellingusastorythat〔起因+结果〕，thespeaker/writer/authorpointsoutamoralthat(寓意)无启示：Afterbeinginjuredinacarcrash,(起因)amanwaslyingonthegroundwavingforhelp.〔经过〕Butbecauseofpeople’sindifferenceandinaction,thewoundeddiedaloneinthestreet.〔结果〕〔31〕不要太多，也不要太少！！！2．以约120个词就“Tohelpornottohelp〞为主题发表你的看法，并包括如下要点：〔1〕读完文章后的感受；感受就必须有形容词！！Iwasshocked,astonished〔2〕假设你当时就在事故现场，你是伸出援助之手还是袖手旁观？以你自己亲身经历或虚构的经历说明你的选择；1.“假设〞意味着什么？虚拟2.“当时〞意味着用什么时态？过去虚拟句型？IfIhadbeenthere,Iwouldhaveofferedmyhelp.倒装？HadIbeenthere,Iwouldhaveofferedmyhelp.3.你自己的亲身经历：例子的重点是什么？要说明什么？你的选择：伸出援助之手那么在例子里就要突出这点！重点描述你的心理活动和如何帮助！！我被大卡车撞到了，倒在血泊中，结果被救了。最保险：仿写，参加自己伸出援助之手的情节〔3〕你的看法如何AlendingHandMakesaBetterSelfandaBetterWorldAfterbeinginjuredinacarcrash,(起因)amanwaslyingonthegroundwavingforhelp.〔经过〕Butbecauseofpeople’sindifferenceandinaction,thewoundeddiedaloneinthestreet.〔结果〕〔31〕Iwasgreatlyshockedbythepeople’sindifferentreactiontothisaccident.Itisoutrageousfortheonlookerstowitnesssomeonedyingwithfoldedarms.Ifinactionlikethiscontinuedtohappen,wewouldallenduplivinginadeplorableandmiserableworldwherenoloveandmutualconcernexist.HadIhappenedtobepresentatthescene,Iwouldhavecometohishelpinsteadoflookingonwithacoldeye.〔对应题目要求：假设！〕Mypastexperiencewouldprovemyresolutiontolendahelpinghand.Theotherdaywhenawomanwasseenknockeddownbyapassingcarandoneofherlegswasbleeding.Justatthattime,withouthesitation,Icalledapasser-byforhelp.Isentthewomantoalocalclinicwiththepasser-byatonce.Atlastthewomanwassaved.〔突出主动营救及如何营救〕Sheexpressedhergreatgratitudetousforhavinghelpedher.SoImighthavesavedthedriver’slifehadIbeenthereandhelpedhimwithoutdelay.(回归例子)

Inmyangle,justasanoldsayinggoes,“Giverosestoothersandthelastingfragrancewillremaininyourhand.〞Intermsofindividual,whenrewardedwithasmileonthefacesofthosehelped,we’lldevelopasenseofhappiness,satisfactionandprideinwardly.Intermsofthesociety,itistheencouragementofmutualassistancethathelpstoconstituteacountrywithahighmoralstandard.Therefore,don’thesitatetoreachoutyourlendinghand,whichhelpstomakeabetterselfandabetterworld.Byshowingtheexamplethatayoungmanhelpedanelderlymanintroublebutwasmistakentobethetroublemakerandwasfinallyfined,theauthorwarnsusoftherisksofhelpingstrangersandsuggestsasecondthoughtbeforereachingout.Asanoldsayinggoes,“Giverosestoothersandthelastingfragrancewillremaininyourhand.〞Intermsofindividual,whenrewardedwithasmileonthefacesofthosehelped,we’lldevelopasenseofhappiness,satisfactionandprideinwardly.Intermsofthesociety,itistheencouragementofmutualassistancethathelpstoconstituteacountrywithahighmoralstandard.Therefore,Ithinkitisnecessarytohelpothers.(点题)〔过渡〕However,nowadaysprofessionalcheatstendtotakeadvantagesofkind,helpfulandwarm-heartedpeople.Forinstance,〔举例〕oncemygrandmagavesomemoneywithouthesitationtoa“beggar〞dressedinrags,wholayonthestreet,hopingtobepitied.Butthenextweek,hewasseentohavebigdinnersinarestaurant.Mygrandmafeltcheatedanddisappointedandfromthenon,shebecamelessenthusiasticinhelpingbeggars.(个人层面的后果)Ifmoreincidentslikethistakeplace,peoplewouldgraduallybecomeindifferentevenwhenseeingthoseinrealneed.〔升华到社会层面的弊端〕(过渡)Therefore，inordertolendaproperhandtothepeopleinneedandavoidbeingtakenadvantagebythosecheats,somesuggestionsshouldnotbeignored.Firstandforemost,forthestrangers,weshouldbecautiousincasewemayinvolveourselvesintotroublewhenhelpingthem.Ifnecessary,don’thesitatetoseekhelpfromthepolice.Furthermore,itisadvisabletoseeTVprogramslikePoliceReport,sowe’llacquaintourselveswiththevarioustricksandliessoastoavoidbeingtrapped.

Tosumup,thoughsometimesriskexistsingivinghelptoothers,weshouldbestillreadytolendahelpinghand

withtheawarenessofprotectingourselves.Therefore,whenhelpingstrangers,lookbeforeyouleap.结尾回应，总结单独成段GivingisgettingSummary:1.又用第一人称“I〞做主语了2.结尾有没有点明寓意？要写：warmfeelinginsideme“Givingisgetting〞.(但是不要直接拿原文的句子，要改变一下)Togiveistoget/gettingisfromgiving.改词性或者改主被动〔2007年高考小作文〕

Theauthorsawapoormanlookingforsomethinginarubbishbinwhenhewantedtothrowsomeheavyfoodaway.(起因)Thenhegavethefoodtothemanwhowasgrateful,〔经过〕whichledtotheunderstandingthattogiveistoget.〔结果〕〔43words〕1)短文给你的启示2〕用你的经历来说明“givingisgetting〞Feelgratefultosb.forsth.！！！Feeleternalgratitudetosb.forsth.Thankful,thankfulness,thanks同上enlightenment1)短文给你的启示对点写！启示一定要在开头句点明！！！审题！！不要把背了的感受，评价，想法那一堆放在这段，题目要求什么就写什么！不要理所当然的就套范文，范文是资料，不是模板！！2〕用你的经历来说明“givingisgetting〞例子的问题：giving=helping?=mutualhelp?可以利用但不要套用例子，要根据题目要求来量身订造互助那篇文章所给的短文,Giving道德层次更高一点，所以—再次强调1.往公益道德角度来写！！捐血，地震捐款，帮老人家读书2.一定要注意结合所给短文来检验自己的例子！！Givingsth.Unwantedtoothersbutwasrewardedwiththankfulnessandsmile.---knowthemeaningof“givingisgetting〞提醒：1.大多数举例文章应该举的都是正面的例子，除非题目有很明显的要求：请用你一次失败的经历来说明。2.如果所给出的短文是寓言类型或者用别的事物来类比人类特征的，注意抽理出故事脉络：起因—经过---结果。应试特别提醒1.不能用涂改液!!!下次点名！2.用0.5的笔来考试！！！如果笔水很淡或笔有问题，不要拿来考试！！3.高分作文，篇幅也很重要，注意看在卷面所做的标记小作文，字可以大点，清晰点，不要连笔。最后剩两行。大作文，如果写完例子还有4-5行，留下两行来做总结段，然后就继续抖抖:虚拟，强调，倒装….4.答题卡裁剪好，用打洞机打洞放进作文本里Briefasthestoryis,itstillreveals/illustratestheprofoundandfar-reachingenlightenmentthat(点明启示)whenonegivesawaythingsorhelpgenerously,hewouldberewardedanunexpectedreturn,whichisspirituallycomfortingandbeyondmaterial.〔扩展givingisgetting〕Itisbytakingtheinitiativeingivingthatonecanreapthejoyandsatisfactionfromgetting.(同义换句型再说一次)Therefore,nevercouldweoverlookthecrucialimportanceofgivingaway.Thefollowingexamplewouldprovemypointclearlyandpersuasively.〔过渡+总起〕AfterthemercilessearthquakestruckWenchuan,ourschoolappealedtoustodonate.(背景)Whileshowingdeepsympathytothevictims,allmyclassmatesandIwereeagertoreachoutahelpinghand.〔起因〕Notborninawell-offfamily,Istillgaveallmyboardwageswithouthesitation,asaresultofwhich,Ihadtohavevegetablesonlyfortherestofthemonth.〔经过〕Surprisingly,3monthslater,aletterofthanksfromtheaffectedareaarrived,whichlitupmyfaceandfilledmyheartwithwarmthandjoy.〔结果〕Butformygivinginitially,Iwouldn’thaveharvestedthegratitudeandthejoyafterwards.〔抖1：虚拟〕Itwasmysmallactofgivingawaythathelpedthemoutoftheabyssofmiseryandearnedmyselfasenseofsatisfactionandaccomplishment.〔抖2：强调句〕〔outwardlyandinwardly〕Toputitinanutshell,examplesabovereemphasizethemeaningof“givingisgetting〞.〔重申题目文眼〕Giverosetoothersandthefragrancewillremaininyourhand.Helpmakesrealdifference

Withthedonationoftheouter-ears,thelifeoftheboybornwithoutearsbecameagreatsuccess.Butthesecretthathismotherwastheselflessdonatorwaskeptuntilhismother’sdeath.(summary)

Onreadingthestory,Iwasdeeplymovedbytheselflessmother,(承上启下)believingthatgreatlovefromamotheristhemostselflessandpowerfulemotionintheworld.Asaconsequence,amotherwithextraordinarylovecansacrificeanythingforherchildren,evenherlife,nottomentiondonatingherears.

However,selflesslovenotonlyexistsbetweenblood-relations,butcanalsobefoundinstrangers.Heregoesthevividexperienceofminetoprovethepoint.(承上启下)Oneday,solatedidIgetupthatImissedtheschoolbus.Anxiously,Istoodbytheroadsideandhadnoalternativebuttoaskothersforhelp.Seeingmywavinghands,acarstopped.Iaskedthedriverwhetherhewaswillingtooffermearidetoschool.Tomysurprise,heaskedmetogetonwithouthesitationandIarrivedatschoolintimefinally.Withouthistimelyhelp,Iwouldnothavearrivedatschoolintime.So,itisneedlesstosaythatitistheman’stimelyhelpthathasmadearealdifference.(对例子的总结)

Kindnessisakindofmoralexcellenceournationalwaysrespects.FromwhereIstand,beinghelpfulisbeingvirtuous,anditcandefinitelybenefitboththoseyouhelpandyourself.TrytohelpothersasmuchaspossibleandIclingtothebeliefthatyouwillgainhappinessduringtheprocessofyourhelpingothers!读写任务

2021年二模题互助才能共赢summary1.写细节：becausethewindcanblowthecornpollenfromhisneighbor’sfields.应对：提炼---becauseboththeircornwouldimprove.Blueribbon---wonthecompetition2.偷看了后面的参考范文：Afarmerwoninacorncompetitionbysharinghisgoodcornseedwithhisneighbors.3.讨厌的打不死的第一人称！和writter!!!Inthepassagethewriterusesthestoryoftheaward-winningfarmerwhoshareshisbestcornseedwithhisneighbourstoteachusthatweallcanbenefitwhenweco-operateandsharewitheachother.这是范文的summary,具体到这篇时态一般过去式或现在时都行，但是一般来说，要是例子的归纳提倡用过去时态参考框架：Bytelling/showingthestory/experiencethat〔起因+结果〕,theauthortold/warned/encouraged/informedusthat…框架式的归纳：Bygivingthestorythatanaward-winningfarmershareshisbestseedtohisneighborssoastoimprovehiscorn,theauthorpointsoutthefactthatcooperationbringsmutualinterests.逻辑显得更加的严谨！以约120词就“互助才能共赢〞的话题进行议论，内容包括：1.你对文中故事的看法和感受2.进一步说明“互助才能共赢〞的道理两点的意思就是：每一点都不能太短！！！要加一段总结段！！！1.你对文中故事的看法和感受看法=观点感受=心理形容词因为总共只有两点，要考虑整体比例问题：不用太长，也不要太短,5行左右Afterreadingthestory,Ifirmlysubscribetothefarmingandcooperationwithhisneighbors〔看法〕andIalsodeeplyadmirehiswisdom〔感受〕forcooperationmakesgreatersuccessforeveryone.〔简单说明原因〕Afterreadingtheinstructiveandeducationalstory,Iregisterprofoundrespectforthefarmer’swisdomofmutualaid.〔看法〕Itisthecooperationthatbringsthewin-winsituation.〔感受〕Leavingmeponderingdeeply,ithassowedtheseedofthesignificanceofcooperationinmyinnerheart.〔再强调〕Words:1.Registerprofoundrespect

for不要随意换词2.strengthenthefriendship/co-operation/management/education/supervisionBut：strengthenthesignificanceof…？Emphasizethesignificance/moral/meaningof…3.message—马杀鸡问题---禁用！！建议：moral/enlightenment2.进一步说明“互助才能共赢〞的道理进一步说明：最好用例子+后面总结议论的模式！1〕故事的选拔问题：1.如果不限于自己的经历，最好举名人，公司，国际合作的例子2.不宜过于古老，近现代的比较好3.不宜过于故事化〔动物界合作的例子：蚂蚁，鳄鱼和某鸟的例子〕，或者不确定性，oneday,smithwentshoppingbuthewascaughtinafire….对策：加个官方的前提和背景介绍：AworldfamousincidenthappenedduringabigfireinAmerica.Thehero,Smith,oneday,wasonhiswaytothemall.….4.不能泛泛而谈：比方中国的经济，如果不改革开放，就不怎样。。。对策：必须具体化：想当年…后来和美国合作，中国大量出口货物帮助美国日益增长的物质需求，大量美元涌进中国帮助经济增长。2〕例子的表述1.一定要先简单构思，确定关键词，再下笔，要不然就会有侏儒体例子—头重脚轻，重点不突出！！老实守信：Makeapromise---howtokeeppromise--keeppromise高度自律：Acceptyourduty---howtobeself-disciplined--beself-disciplined互助才能共赢：Mutualhelp---cooperate---bothbenefited梳理出主干，背景神马的，一句最多两句就算了，不需要过渡交代合作之各自有多凄惨。记着好例子的7句法事例作文７句法第１句：过渡+总起第２句：背景〔可以有，也可以没有〕第３句：起因(矛盾)第４句：经过1第５句：经过2第６句：结果第７句：抖一抖〔升华+总结〕关键词多一句话进行突出，强调三大抖法,要抖得厉害，精彩，宝石闪闪！！1.虚拟语气写反面结果：Haditnotbeenformyself-discipline,Iwouldn’thavesucceededinlosingweight.2.强调句强调良好结果：Itwasjustbyvirtueofmyself-disciplinethatIwonmyfriend’srespectandtrust.itisnotmyleadershipbutmyself-disciplinethatenhancemyworthyimageandguaranteemyconfidencetoleadtheteam,thusmakingmearesponsibleperson.3.比喻：itisnoexaggerationtosaythatthisexperiencehassowedtheseedsofself-disciplineandresponsibilitiesinmyinnerheartandhasmadeitpossibleformetomakegreaterprogressinthecomingexam.何斌贤：crane,clam,fishmen日本地震、核辐射TaketherecenttragedyinJapanforexample.Theearthquakeandtsunamihavecausedgreatdamagetothatcountry.Mostseriousisthedamagetothenuclearpowerstationthathascausedradiationtoleakintotheatmosphere.Ifothercountrieshadactedselfishlyandhadn’thelpedtheJapanese,notonlywouldthelocalpeoplesuffer,buttheproblemsofradiationwouldspreadtoaffecttherestofus.(虚拟语气)Luckily,manyexpertsfromoutsideJapancametolendahelpinghand,whichwouldhopefullysolvetheproblem.ThiswillbeofbenefitnotonlytotheJapanesepeople,buttotherestoftheworldaswell.Afterreadingtheinstructiveandeducationalstory,Iregisterprofoundrespectforthefarmer’swisdomofmutualaid.Leavingmeponderingdeeply,ithassowedtheseedofthesignificanceofcooperationinmyinnerheart.Itisthecooperationthatbringsthewin-winsituation.Therefore,nevercouldweoverlookthevirtueofreachingahelpinghandforeachother.Thefollowingexamplewouldprovemypointclearlyandpersuasively.(过渡+总起)Asthecompetitioninthemobilephonemarketwasgettingfiercer,manycompanieswerefacedwiththedangerofclosingdown.〔背景一句话介绍)However,confrontedwiththecatastrophicstrike,Japan’sSonyandSweden’sEricssonfoundawayoutofthetrap,thatis,devotingeachother’sstrengthintheircooperation.〔经过〕Withtheirstrongteamworkspiritsandselflesscooperation,bothcompaniesreapedbountifuleconomicbenefitsratherthanbankruptcy.(结果)Itwastheirworkingtogetherthatcreatedamiracleandturnedtheirdimsituationintobrightprospect.Withouttheirhelpingeachotheroutinmisery,nevercouldtheyhavewonmutualinterests.〔抖啊抖，使劲抖〕何卓彦Toputitinanutshell,examplesabovereemphasizethemoralthatmutualassistancebringsmaximumbenefitsforbothsides.(点题)Let’sbearthesayinginmindthatcooperativewestand,selfishwefall.(只有两点，必须有结尾总结段，如果3点，倒还可以合并结尾段)李妍菁梁子扬议论文24分

Bygivethestorythatfarmershareshisbestseedtohiscompetitorsandneighborstoimprovehiscorn,theauthorpointsoutthefactthatcooperationbenefitseveryonewhileselfishnesshurtbothothersandourselves.

Afterreadingthestory,IfirmlysubscribetothefarmingandcooperationwithhisneighborsandIalsodeeplyadmirehiswisdomforcooperationmakesgreatersuccessforeveryone.〔过渡〕There’snoreasonforustolockourselvesinanarrowcageortheivorytower.Foronething,notonlydoescooperationpromotesone’sstrength,butalsohelpsonetomakeuphisshortcoming.Andthusitwillleadtoafurtherleapinthefuture.Foranother,intheprocessofcooperation,peoplebuildupasustainableandmutualbeliefinthegroup.Withasuchabelief,andtheassistanceofothers,everyobstacleandobstructioncanbesweptupsmoothlywhiletheymaystopone’spacewhenthereisnocooperation.Tobespecific,onlythroughmutualandencouragementandcooperation,canJapaneseresidentsinthedisaster-struckareaovercometheunpleasantandsorrowfulexperience.〔过渡〕Thus,itnaturallyleadstoaconclusionthatonlywithcooperationcansuccessbeshared.Itisthespiritofcooperationthatabsolutelygivesmorepowerstoaflourishingfutureandsuccess.Twoyearsago,whenIwasanoverseastudent,Iworkedearlymorningsandlatenightstopayformyschoolfees.Oneday,Iwasseriouslyillwithaveryhighfever.Ihadstayedathomeforafewdays,andIhadrunoutoffood.BecauseIhadbeeninthistownjustforashorttime,Ialsohadnofriendsnearbywhocouldhelp.SoIwentouttogetsomefood.Iwouldhavegonetothesupermarket,butonthisoccasion,IwentintoasmallstorebecauseItwascloser.Ipickedupafewitems.WhenIhandedthemtotheshopkeeper,shesaid,“Youareunwell.〞“Yes,〞Inodded.ShepointedatthesalamiandbreadIwasbuyingandoffered,“Icanmakeyouasandwich,soyoudon’thavetodoityourself.〞so,shemadethesandwichandaskedmetowaitamoment.Shewentinthebackroomandreturnedwithabowlofsoup.“Itwillwarmyouup,〞shesaidwithagenuinesmile.Whatreallywarmedmeupwasnotthesoup,butherkindness.Itmademewanttobeaskindastheshopkeeperwhohadbeenkindtome.1.请你以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2.请你以约120个词以“善举的影响〞为话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：1〕上文使你回忆起曾经有谁的爱心举动使你感到温暖；2〕在感到温暖之余，你是否收到这个举动的影响，会把这份爱心传递下去？为什么？3〕进入大学校园后，你将如何继续传递爱心。篇章问题：1.没有翻译首句！！没有总起句，一上来就分点！句型“一would到底〞2.没有审好题，分不清轻重例子永远是最重的那段，就算放在第一点！！怎么样也必须和别的同长！！3.没有谋好篇2〕在感到温暖之余，你是否收到这个举动的影响，会把这份爱心传递下去？为什么？3〕进入大学校园后，你将如何继续传递爱心。这两点可以同长，最好分点分面啊KindnessMakesARealDifferenceBeingseriouslyill,theauthor,anoverseastudent,hadtobuyfoodaloneinashop,wheretheshopkeepervoluntarilymadeherasandwichandahotsoup,whichmovedtheauthorandinspiredhertobekind.Theshopkeeper’skindnessopenedmyboxofmemory,remindingmeofanotherperson–adisabledmaninwheelchairinmycommunity.Althoughlosinghisrightlegandhavingadifficultyinwalking,heactivelyinvolvedhimselfincharity.Whenourcommunityheldanactivityofdonating,thiswarm-heartedmancarriedaheavybagofclothesforthepoorchildrenandcontributedmuchofhissavings.Hiskindnesswasjustlikealamp,givingusalightincommunityandsetagoodmodel.〔例子后还是要抖啊，不要忘本〕起承转合精简,nottoolongnortooshort.〔11班川婷〕Impressedbyhisgenerosityandkindness,Iwillsurelypassitonwiththerealizationthatkindnessisthelanguagethatthedeafcanhearandthedumbcanspeak.Individually,itisindisputablethatvirtuousactscanpassonnotonlykindnessandvirtuebuthappinessandgratitude,makingeveryonelivingin