大学英语四级作文课件

试卷构成听力理解35%对话和短文25%，复合式听写10%2.阅读理解35%仔细阅读25%，快速阅读10%3.完形填空10%4.写作和翻译20%写作15%，翻译5%总分710，425，550试卷构成听力理解35%总分710，425，550各部分的分值分布计算（百分制）听力理解长短对话和短文共25题，每题1分听写单词共8题，每题0.5分，听写句子共3题，

每题2分。2.阅读理解快速阅读共10题，每题1分仔细阅读

SectionA词汇阅读共10题，每题0.5分。

SectionB篇章阅读共10题，每题2分。3.完形填空共10题，每题0.5分4.写作15分

翻译共5题，没题1分各部分的分值分布计算（百分制）听力理解考试时间及流程9:00-11:20(考试时间125分钟，其余15分钟用于收发答题卡，听力试音9:00发答题卡1和答题卡2（答题卡1用于作文和快速阅读，答题卡2用于其他题型。9：10正式考试9：10—9：40写作（9：35发试题册）9：40—9：55快速阅读9：55—10：00收答题卡110：00—10：35ListeningComprehesion10：35—11：00ReadinginDepth11：00—11：15Cloze11：15—11：20Translation11：20收答题卡2，考试结束考试时间及流程9:00-11:20(考试时间125分钟，其大学英语四级考试作文评分原则和评分标准一、大学英语四级教学大纲对写作的要求

共1题，考试时间30分钟。要求考生写出不少于120词的短文，试卷上可能给出题目，或规定情景，或要求看图作文，或给出段首句要求续写；或给出关键词要求写成短文。

大学英语四级考试作文评分原则和评分标准一、大学英语四级教学大

要求能够正确表达思想，意义连贯，无重大语法错误。写作的内容包括日常生活和一般常识。短文写作部分的目的是测试学生运用英语书面表达思想的初步能力。

要求能够正确表达思想，意义连贯，二、评分原则

1.检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的教学要求，对作文的评判应以此要求为准则

2.作文题采用总体

(GlobalScoring)评分方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(RewardScores)，而不是按语言点的错误数量扣分。

3.从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。作文应表达题目所规定的内容。评分要考虑文章是否切题，是否清楚而合适地表达思想，语言错误是否造成理解障碍二、评分原则1.检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的2三、评分标准

1.本题满分为15分

2.阅卷标准共分五等：2分，5分，8分，11分及14分。三、评分标准1.本题满分为15分2.阅卷标准共分五等14分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。

14分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本上无11分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

Nowmoreandmoremuseumsarefreewithoutchargetothepublic.Doesthatmakeanysence?Freeadmissiontomusuemshelpsussavemoney,butitalsoencouragesustogotomuseumstolearnsomethingelseandgetmoreknowledge.Thiscontributestoimprovethelivinglevelofthepublic.Itcancertainlyletusknowmoreaboutourcountryandtheworld,whichhasagoodeffectonourdevelopment.11分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。8分—基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中一些是严重错误。

Thereisainterestingandinstractivepicturewhichgoeslikethis:Moreandmoremuseumsarefreeforpeople.Theywantmorepeoplegotomuseums.Butsomepeoplearguethatitmakesometroubleforfreeforpeople.Thereasonistheeconomyofthemuseumswouldbeworsethanbefore.Worstofall,itmaytakeamessformorepeoplecometothemuseums.8分—基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言5分——基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。大部分句子均有错误，切多数为严重错误。

Inordertoenrichthecultureofpeople,moreandmoremusuemswereprovidedfreeadmissions.Somebodythoughtitwouldtakesomeproblemslikethat.Thefirst,becauseoffreeadmissionsofMuseumswereattractedalargenumbersofpeoplewhointerestedinallaroundtheworld.Andthosewhotakepartineffectedthetrafficcrowedaroundthemuseums,eventhoughaffectedpeoplewholiveinnexttothemuseumlife…5分——基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。大部分句子均有错2分——条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎。

Nowdays,SocialappearedmoremorefreeAdmissionstomuseums.it’sinordertopeoplewastedmoney.Inadition,richinpeople’slifeandincreasemoreknowldeges2分——条理不清，思路紊乱，Nowdays,Soc0分-----白卷；作文与题目毫不相关；内容太少，无法评判；所写内容无法看清0分-----白卷；作文与题目毫不相关；内容太少，四.作文得分技巧：1、卷面整洁，书写清楚2、构思简单，少犯错误3、中心突出，层次分明4、固定经典，名言注目5、重在变化，宁简勿滥大学英语四级作文ppt课件五.写作模版1）开头万能公式：1．

开头万能公式一：名人名言

A

proverb

says,

“

Youcannotburnthecandleatbothends.（鱼与熊掌不能兼得）”

---适用于已记住的名言

It

goes

without

saying

that（毋庸置疑，不言而喻）

wehavetomakeachoicebecausewecannothavethingsbothways.---适用于自编名言As

everyone

knows,

no

one

can

deny

that…五.写作模版1）开头万能公式：1．

开头万能公式一：名人2．

开头万能公式二：数字统计

要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。According

to

a

recent

survey,

about

78.9%

of

the

college

students

wanted

to

further

their

study

after

their

graduation.2．

开头万能公式二：数字统计要想更有说服力，就应该用实际下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造

HonestyAccording

to

a

recent

survey,

about

78%

of

thereasonsforleavethatthecollegestudentsaskedforarefeigned.Travel

by

BikeAccording

to

a

recent

survey,

about86%ofthepeoplepreferredtorideabicyclewhentheytakeashort-distancetrip.下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造HonestyYouthAccording

to

a

recent

survey,

about70%ofthesparetimeofstudentsarespendonentertainmentinacertainuniversityinthesouth.Five-day

Work

Week

Better

than

Six-day

Work?According

to

a

recent

survey,about98%ofpeopleagreedtoworkfivesdaysaweek.更多句型：A

recent

statistics

shows

that

…

YouthAccording

to

a

recent

su2)结尾万能公式：

1．

结尾万能公式一：作结论

Obviously,

we

can

draw

the

conclusion

that

good

manners

arise

from

politeness

and

respect

for

others.To

sum

up,

…In

conclusion,

…In

brief,…On

account

of

this,…

Thus,it

can

be

concluded

that…,Therefore,

we

can

find

that…2)结尾万能公式：1．

结尾万能公式一：作结论Obv2．

结尾万能公式二：建议

Obviously,

it

is

high

time

that

we

took

some

measures

to

solve

the

problem.Accordingly,

I

recommend

that

some

measures

be

taken.Consequently,

to

solve

the

problem,

some

measures

should

be

taken.2．

结尾万能公式二：建议Obviously,

it

is六.写作的“七项基本原则”一）

长短句原则

:在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短，且先长后短As

a

creature,

I

eat;

as

a

man,

I

read.

Although

one

action

is

to

meet

the

primary

need

of

my

body

and

the

other

is

to

satisfythe

intellectual

need

of

mind,

they

are

in

a

way

quite

similar.二）

主

题

句原则:要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头或者结尾，让人一目了然，比较保险。To

begin

with,

you

must

work

hard

at

your

lessons

and

be

fully

prepared

before

the

exam.

Without

sufficient

preparation,

you

can

hardly

expect

to

answer

all

the

questions

correctly.六.写作的“七项基本原则”一）

长短句原则:在文章第一三）

一

二

三原则

考官们看文章必然要通过关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。1）first,

second,

third,

last×

2）firstly,

secondly,

thirdly,

finally3）the

first,

the

second,

the

third,

the

last4）in

the

first

place,

in

the

second

place,

in

the

third

place,

lastly5）to

begin

with,

then,

furthermore,

finally6）to

start

with,

next,

in

addition,

finally7）first

and

foremost,

besides,

last

but

not

least√×

×

×

√√三）

一

二

三原则考官们看文章必然要通过关键性的“标签”四）

短语优先原则

1）用短语会使文章增加亮点2）关键时刻思维短路，凑字数I

cannot

bear

it.==I

cannot

put

up

with

it.

I

want

it.==I

am

looking

forward

to

it.

四）

短语优先原则1）用短语会使文章增加亮点2）关键时刻五）

多实少虚原则（词汇的运用和替换）正确使用的情况下使词义更生动丰富，少用常见词，口语化词汇（crazy,mad：insane）

走出房间，一般的词是：walk

out

of

the

room但是小偷走出房间应该说：slip

out

of

the

room姑娘走出房间应该说：sail

out

of

the

room小孩走出房间应该说：dance

out

of

the

room老人走出房间应该说：stagger

out

of

the

room走出房间，一般的词是：walk

out

of

the

rosmile(微笑)laugh(大笑)grin(露齿而笑)chuckle(暗笑)giggle(咯咯地笑)snicker(窃笑)guffaw(狂笑)roar(哄笑)chortle(欢笑)deride(讥笑)mock(嘲弄)jeer(讥笑)jest(取笑)smirk(得意地笑)smile(微笑)laugh1.(people,persons)individuals,characters,folks2.(good)positive,favorable,rosy，promising，perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,superior3.(bad)dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse,ill4.(some)asliceof,quietafew,several5.(inmyopinion)formypart,frommyownperspective

6.(helpful)beneficial,rewarding7.(very)exceedingly,extremely,intensely

8.(sb.beinterestedin)sthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb,take/suckin9.(anger)indignation,wrath,rage,fury10.(cause)giveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger1.(people,persons)individua六）

关系词选择原则：正确使用选择关系词，使文章逻辑性更强，联系更加紧密

1）并列（串联）可以在任何句子之间加andI

enjoy

music

and

he

is

fond

of

playing

guitar.如果是二者并列的，我们可以notonly…butalso…：Not

only

the

fur

coat

is

soft,

but

it

is

also

warm.其它的短语：besides,

furthermore,

likewise,

moreover六）

关系词选择原则：正确使用选择关系词，使文章1）并列（串2）转折The

car

was

quite

old,

yet

it

was

in

excellent

condition.The

coat

was

thin,

but

it

was

warm.更多的短语：

despite

that,

still,

however,

nevertheless,

in

spite

of,

despite,3）因果then,

therefore,

consequently,

accordingly,

hence,

as

a

result,for

this

reason,

so

that,2）转折The

car

was

quite

old,

y1.英语四级作文句型表示原因

1)Therearethreereasonsforthis.

2)Thereasonsforthisareasfollows.

3)Thereasonforthisisobvious.

4)Thereasonforthisisnotfartoseek.

5)Thereasonforthisisthat...

6)Wehavegoodreasontobelievethat...

2.英语四级作文句型表示好处

1)Ithasthefollowingadvantages.

2)Itdoesusalotofgood.

3)Itbenefitsusquitealot.

4)Itisbeneficialtous.

5)Itisofgreatbenefittous.

其他句型1.英语四级作文句型表示原因2.英语四级作文句型表3.英语四级作文句型表示坏处

1)Ithasmoredisadvantagesthanadvantages.

2)Itdoesusmuchharm.

3)Itisharmfultous.

4.英语四级作文句型表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能

1)Itisimportant(necessary，difficult，convenient,possible)forsb.todosth.

2)Wethinkitnecessarytodosth.

3)Itplaysanimportantroleinourlife.3.英语四级作文句型表示坏处5.表示措施1)Weshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasures.2)Weshouldtryourbesttoovercome(conquer)thedifficulties.3)Weshoulddoourutmostindoingsth.4)Weshouldsolvetheproblemsthatweareconfronted(faced)with.6.英语四级作文句型表示变化

1)Somechangeshavetakenplaceinthepastfiveyears.2)Agreatchangewillcertainlybeproducedintheworld’scommunications.3)Thecomputerhasbroughtaboutmanychangesineducation.5.表示措施7.英语四级作文句型表示事实、现状

1)Wecannotignorethefactthat...

2)Noonecandenythefactthat...

3)Thereisnodenyingthefactthat...

4)Thisisaphenomenonthatmanypeopleareinterestedin.

5)However，that’snotthecase.8.英语四级作文句型表示比较

1)ComparedwithA，B...

2)IprefertoreadratherthanwatchTV.

3)Thereisastrikingcontrastbetweenthem.7.英语四级作文句型表示事实、现状9.英语四级作文句型表示看法

1)Peoplehave(take，adopt，assume)differentattitudestowardssth.

2)Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem.

3)Peopletakedifferentviewsof(on)thequestion.

4)Somepeoplebelievethat...Othersarguethat...10.英语四级作文句型表示结论

1)Inshort，itcanbesaidthat...

2)Itmaybebrieflysummedupasfollows.

3)Fromwhathasbeenmentionedabove，wecancometotheconclusionthat...9.英语四级作文句型表示看法11.英语四级作文句型套语

1)It’swellknowntousthat...

2)Asisknowntous，...

3)Thisisatopicthatisbeingwidelytalkedabout.

4)Fromthegraph(table，chart)listedabove，itcanbeseenthat...

5)Asaproverbsays，"Wherethereisawill，thereisaway.

11.英语四级作文句型套语七）

句式多变原则(简单句，并列句，复杂句）

独立主格The

weather

being

fine,

a

large

number

of

people

went

to

climb

the

Western

Hills.Africa

is

the

second

largest

continent,

its

size

being

about

three

times

that

of

China.定语从句主语从句宾语从句强调句，倒装句同位语被动句其他一些非谓语排比句，并列句，前提：句子正确的情况下可使用复合句或其他复杂句，否则还是以简单句为安全保险七）

句式多变原则(简单句，并列句，复杂句）独立主格Th文章主体段落遵循的两个方法：一、举实例To

take

…

as

an

example,

One

example

is…,

Another

example

is…,

for

example二、做比较相似的比较：in

comparison,

likewise,

similarly,

in

the

same

manner相反的比较：on

the

other

hand,

conversely,

whereas,

while,

instead,

nevertheless,

in

contrast,

on

the

contrary,

compared

with

…,

…文章主体段落遵循的两个方法：一、举实例To

take

…常见写作错误一、主语错误

1.主语缺失

Inourcountryfeelsveryfree.

Peoplefeelfreeinourcountry.

2.非名词主语

1)Richdoesn’tensureahappylife.

Beingrichdoesn’tmeanahappylife.Wealthdoesn’tensureahappylife.

2)Keeptwofull-timejobsissimplyimpossible.

Keepingtwofull-timejobsissimplyimpossible.

3.主谓错位

1)Readingbookscanacquireknowledge.

Peoplecanacquireknowledgefrombooks.

2)Nowpeople’slivescan’tleaveTV.

Nowpeoplecan’tdowithoutTV.

√常见写作错误√二、谓语错误

1.多重谓语

1)Inourmodernsociety,therearemanyexamplesaroundusshowthatmanypeoplearecheated.

Inourmodernsociety,manyexamplesaroundusshowthatmanypeoplearecheated.2)Povertymakesmanypeoplecan’tstudyabroad.

Povertymakesmanypeopleunabletostudyabroad.Povertymakesitimpossibleformanypeopletostudyabroad.Povertypreventsmanypeoplefromstudyingabroad.Manypeoplecan’tstudyabroadbecauseofpoverty.

二、谓语错误

1.多重谓语

1)Inourmode2.非动词谓语

1)Somepeoplefirmlyagree,butothersagainstit.

Somepeoplefirmlyagree,butothersareagainstit.

2)Itissaidthattheplaceworthstouring.

Itissaidthattheplaceisworthtouring.

2.非动词谓语

1)Somepeoplefirmly3.主谓不一致

1)IhavetovisittheteacherwhoteachmeCollegeEnglish.

IhavetovisittheteacherwhoteachesmeCollegeEnglish.

2)Iuseadiskbecauseitholdplentyofdata.

Iuseadiskbecauseitholdsplentyofdata.

3.主谓不一致

1)Ihavetovisitthe4.时态不一致Nowadays，doingexerciseswerebecomingverypopular.4.时态不一致5.误用词组

1)Theyinsistonpost-graduatestudyisveryimportantforthem.

Theyinsistthatpost-graduatestudyisveryimportantforthem.

Weshouldpayattentiononthecreativelearning.Weshouldpayattentiontothecreativelearning.5.误用词组

1)Theyinsistonpost-三、冠词错误

1)Inmyopinion,thefutureofbicycleisverypromising.

Inmyopinion,thefutureofthebicycleisverypromising.

2)Theysuggestthatweshouldchooseonlythegoodbookstoreadandnevertouchthebadones.

Theysuggestthatweshouldchooseonlygoodbookstoreadandnevertouchbadones.

三、冠词错误

1)Inmyopinion,thefu四、代词错误

1.偷梁换柱

Ifwecheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveyouandtheywillleaveyoualone.

Ifwecheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveusandtheywillleaveusalong.Ifyoucheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveyouandtheywillleaveyoualone.

四、代词错误

1.偷梁换柱

Ifwechea2.指代不明

2)Sometimesteachershavetoinformthestudentsoftheheavyburdentheyhavetobear.

Sometimesteachershavetoinformthestudentsoftheheavyburdenstudentshavetobear.

2.指代不明

2)Sometimesteacher

五、形容词、副词错误

Surprisingenough,hefacesthefailureverybravely.

Surprisinglyenough,hefacesthefailureverybravely.

五、形容词、副词错误

Surprisingenough六、分词误用

1)Comparingwithothercountries,Chinapayslittleattentiontotheenergyproblem.

Comparedwithothercountries,Chinapayslittleattentiontotheenergyproblem.

2)Thosespiritswerejustlikeanindispensablepartofthewholepicturewhenviewingthroughmycamera.

Thosespiritswerejustlikeanindispensablepartofthewholepicturewhenviewedthroughmycamera.

六、分词误用

1)Comparingwithoth七、修饰语误置

SpokenEnglishisanimportantpartforlearningEnglishpeople.

SpokenEnglishisanimportantpartforpeoplelearningEnglish.

七、修饰语误置

SpokenEnglishisan八、垂悬修饰语

1)Havingcarriedouteconomicreformsinourcountry,people’slivingstandardhasbeengreatlyimproved.

Havingcarriedouteconomicreformsinourcountry,peoplehavegreatlyimprovedtheirlivingstandard.

2)Totellmyfriendthegoodnews,theletterwaspostedatonce.

Totellmyfriendthegoodnews,Ipostedtheletteratonce.

八、垂悬修饰语

1)Havingcarriedou十、搭配错误

1)Inthepastthepriceofmeatwassoexpensivethatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit.

Inthepastthepriceofmeatwassohighthatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit.

2)Crowdedtrafficinsomelargecitiesisabigproblemforcitydwellers.

Heavytrafficinsomelargecitiesisabigproblemforcitydwellers.

十、搭配错误

1)Inthepastthepric十一、破句

1)Nowadays,ifyouwanttofindajob.Thenyoumustpassthejobinterview.

Nowadays,ifyouwanttofindajob,youmustpassthejobinterview.

2)Firstyoushouldshowgoodmanners.Becausethefirstimpressionyouleaveonothersisimportant.

Firstyoushouldshowgoodmanners,becausethefirstimpressionyouleaveonothersisimportant

十一、破句

1)Nowadays,ifyouwan若从作文体裁划分，英文作文有议论文（ArgumentativeComposition）、记叙文（NarrativeComposition）、描写文（DescriptiveComposition）和说明文（ExpositiveComposition），等等。四级作文最常见的是前两种。若从作文体裁划分，英文作文有议论文（Argumentativ作文的种类

从考试的题型来看，则包括以下几种:

1、提纲式作文

用英文或中文给出提纲，要求按提纲写作，目前来说，这种提纲经常是以三段的形式给出，又称三段式作文，这是四级考试的主要形式。

2、图表式作文

包括表格式作文。这类作文要求考生用简洁、生动的语言把图中所提供的信息准确、完整地表达出来。这类作文在四级考试中只是偶然才会出现。

3、情景式作文

用中文或英文给出一个情景，让你自己去说明或评论。这类作文多见于六级考试之中。例:有些发明如电灯、火车、电机等，对人类极为重要。作文的种类从考试的题型来看，则包括以下几种:

1、提纲式作提纲式作文说明利弊题型这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测）

1．说明事物现状

2．事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）

3．你对现状（或前景）的看法提纲式作文1.现在越来越多的中国人开始庆祝西方的节日，如圣诞节，情人节等。

2.有人认为这有利于文化的交流，有人则担心这会导致传统文化的丧失

3.在我看来……1.现在越来越多的中国人开始庆祝西方的节日，如圣诞节，情人节Nowadays________________(现象）.Then,whetherweshould___________(遵循这种现象）hasbecomeaissueofdiscussion.SomepeoplepreferAbecauseithasasignificantroleinourdailylife.Generally,itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows.First________（Ａ的优点之一）.Besides____________（Ａ的优点之二）.Buteverycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Oneoftheimportantdisadvantagesisthat________（Ａ的第一个缺点）．Tomakemattersworse,____________（Ａ的第二个缺点）．

Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsoverweighthenegativeones.Therefore,Iwouldliketo________（我的看法）．（FromthecomparisonbetweenthesepositiveandnegativeeffectsofA,weshouldtakeitreasonablyanddoitaccordingtothecircumstanceswearein.Onlybythisway,________（对前景的预测）Nowadays________________(图表题型作文

要求考生从一个表格或者图片出发，按照要求写作，如：1996年6月六级作文、2002年6月四六级作文、2003年6月六级作文、2003年9