广东省高考英语一轮短文改错、书面表达训练

PAGE4-广东省2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（7）附参考范文短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。Althoughallthestudentsseemveryhappilyatourschool,as 66_________farasweconcerned,thebuildingswouldbemorebeautiful 67_________iftheschoolcouldbedecorated.Westudentsthoughttheschool 68_________lookslikeadesertandtheconcretewallslikethegreyskyin 69_________arainyday.Wewouldbemuchhappierandareabletostudy 70_________betterifthewallsoftheschoolcouldbedecoratedwithposters, 71_________photosandpaintings,thatcouldcertainlybroadenourhorizons 72_________andenrichourlives.Originalartworkaretooexpensive,but 73_________unlesswebuyartposters,thecostwillbelow.Usingonlya 74_________littlemoney,itcanmakeourschoolanicerplace. 75_________般可以写的漂亮一点，即要用一些好的套语开始。比如：①AsisshownonChart2，only10%ofthetimeistakenupwithsportsactivities.（2004北京卷）可是很多考生总在开头处写的不尽如人意，总喜欢搞一些生造的句子或词语来开头，这是一大忌。有些开头可以以套语开始，或以俗语开始比较有力，这样就容易被老师看好。档位在开始时就已定得很高了。2.书面表达的结尾：⑦⑧结尾在书面表达的写作中占有很重要的地位，通常结尾都要算一个内容要求，所以，写好结尾且让阅卷老师有一个完整的印象是十分必要的。好的结尾可以是一段，由一句或几句话组成，能使全文增色。例如：①IfthereisanythingIcandoforyou，Iwouldbemorethangladtohelp.（2004全国卷I）②Itwouldmeanagreatdealtometolistentothetapeandlearnwhatiscoveredinthetalk.③What'smore，somestatuesoffamouspeoplewillbesetuptoencourageustoworkharder.Don'tyouthinkitawonderfulprogram？（2004福建卷）④Inshort，thestudentshavenotarrivedatanyagreementyet.（2004湖北卷）*********************************************************结束中间段落句1人tendtohaveafavorableattitudetoward2Usingbicyclecontributesgreatlytopeople’sphysicalfitnessaswellaseasingtrafficjams.使用自行车有助于人们的身体健康，并极大地缓解了交通阻塞。3Theharderyouwork,themoreprogressyoumake.你越努力，你越进步。4Manypeopleseemtooverlookthebasicfact:许多人似乎忽视了这个基本事实：5Listeningtomusicenablesustofeelrelaxed.听音乐能使我们放松。6Onnoaccountcanweignorethevalueofknowledge我们绝对不能忽视知识的价值。7Thereisnoonebutlongsto.人们都希望8Sopreciousistimethatwecan’taffordtowasteit.时间是如此珍贵，我们不能浪费它。结尾句Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthat,although——indeedbringusmanyobviousadvantages,itsdisadvantagesshouldn’tbeignoredandfaroutweighitsadvantages.通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论：尽管很多优点，但它的缺点不可忽视，且远大于它的优点。Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayreasonablyarriveattheconclusionthat____.综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论……Itisdifficulttosaywhether_____isgoodornotingeneralasitdependsverymuchonthesituationof______.However,fromapersonalpointofview,Ifind在总体上很难说……是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现…个人观点:Asforme,I’minfavoroftheopinionthat———forthefollowingreasons:

就我而言，我同意观点。AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreewiththelatteropiniontosomeextent.Ithinkthat____.Ifullyagreewiththestatementthat______because______.完全同意……这种观点（陈述），主要理由如下：But______and______havetheirownadvantages.Forexample,_____,while_____.Comparingthiswiththat,however,Ipreferto______.但是，……和……都有它们各自的优势（好处）。例如，……，而……。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于（喜欢）……号召：Inaword,thewholesocietyshouldpaycloseattentiontotheproblemof______.Onlyinthiswaycan______inthefuture.总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来……随着社会的发展，……。因此，迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自已的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。Withthedevelopmentofsociety,______.Soit"surgentandnecessaryto____.Ifeverymemberiswillingtocontributehimselftothesociety,itwillbebetterandbetter.严重影响社会秩序seriouslydisturbsocialorder促进经济和社会发展topromoteeconomic对健康有好处makeforgoodhealth对健康有危害ahazardtohealth破坏环境、污染环境poisoningtheenvironment环境保护protecttheenvironment浪费时间、浪费金钱、浪费精力awasteofmoney,timeandenergy促进学习facilitatinglearning影响学习influnceone'sstudy提高自身水平upgradeoneself反对disapproval赞成infavorof★形容词：1.贫穷的：poor=needy=impoverished=poverty-stricken2.富裕的：rich=wealthy=affluent=well-to-do=well-off3.优秀的：excellent=eminent=top=outstanding4.积极的，好的：good=conducive=beneficial=advantageous5.消极的，不良的：bad=detrimental=baneful=undesirable6.明显的：obvious=apparent=evident=manifest7.健康的:healthy=robust=sound=wholesome8.惊人的：surprising=amazing=extraordinary=miraculous9.美丽的：beautiful=attractive=gorgeous=eye-catching10.有活力的：energetic=dynamic=vigorous=animated11.流行的：popular=prevailing=prevalent=pervasive★动词：1.提高，加强：improve=enhance=promote=strengthen=optimize2减轻:ease=alleviate=relieve=lighten3.解决：solve=resolve=address=tackle=copewith=dealwith4.拆除：destroy=teardown=knockdown=eradicate5.培养:develop=cultivate=foster=nurture6.激发，鼓励：encourage=motivate=stimulate=spur7.认为：think=assert=hold=claim=argue8.完成：complete=fulfill=accomplish=achieve9.保留：keep=preserve=retain=hold10.有害于：destroy=impair=undermine=jeopardize★名词：1.影响：influence=impact2.危险：danger=perils=hazard3.污染：pollution=contamination4.人类：humanbeings=mankind=humanrace5.老人：oldpeople=theold=theelderly=theaged=seniorcitizens6.幸福：happiness=cheerfulness=well-being7.老师：teachers=instructors=educators=lecturers8.教育：education=schooling=familyparenting=upbringing9.青少年：youngpeople=youngsters=youths=adolescents10.优点：advantage=merits=superiority=virtue11.责任：responsibility=obligation=duty=liability12.能力：ability=capacity=power=skill13.职业：job=career=employment=profession14.娱乐：enjoyment=pastimes=recreation=entertainment15.孩子：children=offspring=descendant=kid★短语：1.充满了：befilledwith=beawashwith=beinundatewith=besaturatedwith2.努力：strugglefor=aspireafter=strivefor=sparenoeffortsfor3.从事：embarkon=takeup=setabout=goinfor4.在当代:incontemporarysociety=inpresent-daysociety=inthisdayandage5.大量的:ahostof=amultitudeof=avastnumberof=avastamountof****************************************************************结束高考英语书面表达指导英语书面表达经典句型必背1.英语作文中常用关联词:并列关系:and,aswellas,also...递进关系:besides,inaddition,moreover,what’smore...转折关系:but,yet,however,although,otherwise,or,inspiteof,despite,insteadof,intheend...时间顺序:while,when,soonafter,before,afterward,finally,first,then,next,assoonas...比较、对比:like,unlike,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand...总结:inaword,ingeneral,inshort,aboveall,afterall,generallyspeaking...进一步阐述:inotherwords,thatistosay,forexample,forinstance,suchas...因果关系:asaresult,so,thus,therefore...2.常用句式记事①Atfirsthedidn’thearanythingatall.②Butthenasuddenknockonthedoorwokehimup.③Followingthatcameaman’svoice,saying,“Comeout,orIwillbreakin!”④Severalminuteslater,heheardsomeoneleave.⑤Finallyhegotup,openedthedoorandlookedaround.写人①Sheisagirloftwelveyearsold.②Sheistallandslimwithbigeyesandcurlyhair.③Beingkindandhelpful,shealwaysenjoyshelpingothersout.④Inhersparetime,shespendsmuchtimelisteningtomusicandreadingnovels.⑤Shegetsonwellwithalmostanyoneandisalwayswelcomewherevershegoes.⑥Thereisaboycryingoutside.介绍某地①Liaoning②Itisrichinmanykindsofnaturalresources,suchascoalandpetrol.③Ithasapopulationof23million.④Itisterriblycoldinwinterandveryhotinsummerthere.⑤Thepeopletherearefriendlyandhardworkingandtheirhospitalitywillneverfailtogiveyouadeepimpression.⑥Ourschoolcovers2.5squaremiles.Itliesinthenorthofthecity.Theteachingbuildingstandsinthefrontoftheschool,onitsleftistheadministrativebuilding,andonitsrightisafootballfield.Afterwalkingacrossasmallbridgewecanseeourdining-hall.Fourstudents’dormitorybuildingsstandinlinewithalotoftreesaroundthemandariverrunningby.通知用语①Attention,please!/MayIhaveyourattention,please!②Thesportsmeettobeheldtomorrowiscanceledduetothebadweather.③AmeetingistobeheldinRoom203attwoo’clocktomorrowafternoon.④Pleasetakeapenandnotebookwithyouandbethereontime.⑤That’sall,thankyou!写信①DearTom,I’mverygladtoreceiveyourletter.②Iamfinebutverybusyrecently,learningEnglish.③Ihavebeenstrictlyfollowingtheadvicegivenbyyouinyourlastletterandhavemadesomeprogresssofar.④Pleaseremembermetoyourparents.⑤Yourstruly,LiMing.议论和高级句型①Inmyopinion,Iprefertravelingbytrainratherthanbyplane.②Foronething,atrainticketismuchcheaperthanaplaneticket.③Foranother,youcanenjoythebeautifulviewsoutsidethetrainwindow.④Aboveall,it’ssafertravelingonatrainthantravelinginaplane.⑤Inaword,IwillalwaystravelbytrainifI’mnotinagreathurry.6.Iholdtheviewthatweshouldwearschooluniformallday.7.Fromthispassagewecandrawaconclusionthatdrinkingalotisbadforourhealth.8.Fromthisdiag