高中英语读后续写09 脱险类火灾、洪水、迷路篇(思维导图+练习含答案)

读后续写09脱险类（火灾、洪水、迷路篇）（解析版）读后续写中会遇到火灾，水灾，森林迷路等内容的故事，如果涉及到对生命造成了一定的威胁的情节，我们就把这种类型的文章归为“脱险”型。在往年高考真题中，曾经就考过三次：拍摄北极熊遇险；父子骑马迷路；骑车游玩遇狼脱险。一、思维导图第一步:救人之前（惡劣环境+负面情绪）第二步：第二步：救人之中（努力+救人动作+如释重负）第三步：救人之后（感鼬升华）第一步：救人之前(恶劣环境+负面情绪)1、恶劣环境一到晚夏，池塘就会被绿色的起泡浮渣覆盖。有时候，池塘里冒出一阵强烈的难闻的味道。Inlatesummer,thepondwouldbecoveredbyagreenandbubblyscum(起泡的浮渣).Sometimesastrong,unpleasantsmellrosefromit.在池塘中间，冰面忽然露出了一条裂缝。Inthemiddleofthepond,theicegavewaywithasuddencrack.空气里弥漫着浓厚灼热的味道。Athickburningsmellfilledtheair.2、负面情绪：害怕Watchingtheshoreinthedistance,Ifeltpowerless(无力的)asifwewerebrokentinyboatsatthemercyofstrongwaves.Exhaustedandcold,thethoughtthatwemightdiehereflashedacrossmymind，whichmademequiverwithanuncontrollableterror/horror/fright(难以控制地发抖)（4）Lookingatthevastsea,Ifeltasenseoffearsurgingthroughmywholebody（在身体涌动）第二步：救人之中（努力+救人动作+如释重负）1、.挣扎努力（1）Tomlookedthoughtful1（若有所思）（2）“Weneedtothinkoutaway!"Imuttered（喃喃自语）,scratchingmyhead.（绞尽脑汁）（3）...,Weswamtoothandnail（全力以赴地）.救人有关的惊险场面描写（1）ThenextthingIknewIwashangingontotheedgeofaholeintheicebyarmsoutstretchedontheice.FrommyshouldersdownIhunginicywater.（2）Itriedtoclimboutofthehole,butwhenIgotakneeontheice,itbrokelikewindowglass（像玻璃一样破裂）.（浙江省十校联盟考试续写2020.10）（3）Asthecoatbecamecompletelywet,itdraggedmedown（把我拖下水）.Iwastiredofthestruggleandrestedwithmyarmsstretchedoutontheice.（浙江省十校联盟考试续写2020.10）实施救援的过程（1）“帮我把西蒙斯弄下车！”诺伍德对惊慌失措的朋友们大声喊道。（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）“HelpmegetSimmonsoutofthecar!”Norwoodyelledloudlytoherfriends,whowereleftinapanic.诺伍德和朋友们把西蒙斯从车里拉了出来，把他放在一个安全并且离车有点远的地方。（2）尽管紧张而焦虑，诺伍德努力让自己镇静下来，对西蒙斯进行了急救。（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）Nervousandanxious,NorwoodstruggledtocalmherselfdownandcarriedoutfirstaidtoSimmons.诺伍德和她的朋友们把西蒙斯放到平躺的位置，打开了她的呼吸道。（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）4、如释重负（1）Ensuingtheirsafety,Ifeltasurgeoftriumph.（感到一阵胜利的喜悦）（2）Hearingthenews,Icouldn'thelprestrainingmyexcitement.（情难自抑）（3）Itthrilledustohearthegoodnews（听到新消息很高兴）.（4）Onhearingthegoodnews,TomandIsighedingreatrelief（如释重负地叹了口气）,grinningmerrilyateachother.第三步：救人之后（感激+升华）1、感激（1）“IfIhadnotbeengivenfirstaid,Iwouldhavedead."SimmonssaidtoNorwoodgratefully.SimmonsshowedhergratitudetoNorwood,saying“Itwasyouwhocametomyaidandsavedmylife”如果我没有得到急救，我就会死了。西蒙斯感激地对诺伍德说。西蒙斯对诺伍德表示了感谢，她说：“是你来帮助我，救了我一命。”（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）（2）“ThankyouforenteringmyworldandIwillalwaysrememberwhatyouhavedoneforme.”SimmonswhisperedtoNorwood.“谢谢你进入我的世界，我会永远记住你为我所做的。”西蒙斯对诺伍德说。（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）2、升华句花点时间来学习急救和心肺复苏术。拯救了生命，而且很有效。Takesometimetolearntheknowledgeoffirstaid.Itsaveslives,anditworks.这个故事表明，良好的急救知识真的可以起作用。Thestoryshowsthatagoodknowledgeoffirstaidcanmakearealdifference.每个人都应该学点急救知识，因为在紧急情况下每一秒都很重要。Everyoneshouldlearnsomethingaboutfirstaid,foreverysecondwillcountinanemergency.了解基础的急救知识有助于你对紧急情况作出迅速的反应。Knowingbasicfirst-aidtechniqueswillhelpyourespondquicklytoemergencies.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Rebeccastretchedhertiredback.“That'sthelastseedling(种树苗)，Pa.Haveweplantedenough?"Pawalkedtotheendoftherowofcottonwoodseedlings.“No,"hesaid.“Wehavetoplanttreesallthewaytothatrockoverthere.We'llneedabouttwentymoreseedlings."“I'llgettheseedlings."offeredRebecca.Shelongedtocoolherfeetintheshallowriverrunningthroughthecottonfield.“You'dbetterletmego,MissPetticoats,"teasedhertwinbrother,William.“Therearedangersalloverthisprairie(牧场/草原)“Youmaybothgo,"saidPa.“Buthurryback.I'dliketofinishbeforesundown."Theywentacrosstheshallowrivertoasandbarwheresmallcottonwoodseedlingsgrew.Gently,theypulledtheseedlingsfromthesand.“There!That'stwenty,withafewtospare."saidRebecca.“OK,”saidWilliam.Heledthewaytotheriverbank,thenstopped.“Look!There'sthedugout（防空壕）welivedinwhenwemovedherelastyear."Hepointedtoaholeinthegrassyriverbank.“Comeon,let'sgoinside."“No,"Rebeccasaid,“Paiswaiting.Besides,it'shardtellingwhat'sinthere."“Thenyoustartback."saidWilliam,handingtheseedlingstoRebecca.I'llcatchup."Herantothedugoutandsteppedinside.Rebeccatiedtheseedlingsintoherlongapron（围裙）andbegantowalk.Suddenlyshefrozeinhertracks.Ahugeprairierattlesnake（响尾蛇）movedalongtheriverbank.Itstoppedrightinfrontofthedugoutandlaystill,coileduponthewarmsunnybank.“William!"Rebeccashouted.“Don'tcomeout!"“Huh?"Williamsfaceappearedatatinywindowbesidethedoorofthedugout.Rebeccapointedtowardtherattler.William'sfacepaledwhenhesawthesnakeblockingthedoorway.HeturneddesperateeyestowardRebecca,thenheglancedbehindhimself.Rebeccaknewwhathewasthinking:“Weretheremoresnakeswaitingintheshadowycornersofthedugout?"Rebecca'smindraced,tryingtothinkofawaytogetWilliamoutofthere.Anideapoppedintoherhead.Itwastheironlyhope.Itwasrisky,butitwastheonlyhope.“Don'tmove,"shesaidtoWilliaminasoftvoice.“WhenrsayNOW,yourunoutofthereasfastasyoucan."Rebeccaremovedtheskirt-likepetticoat（衬裙）frombeneathherdress,thendippeditintotheriver.Shesqueezedoutsomeofthewater,thenclimbedtothetopofthebank,directlyabovethedugout'sopening.1•所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2•续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好；Paragraph1:“Getreadytorun,William,"shesaid,keepinganeyeonthemotionlesssnake.Paragraph2:AreyouOK?heasked,breathingheavily.Rebeccanodded.【写作特训】（她渴望在浅水中凉快一下）runningthroughthecottonfield.（他们穿过那条浅河）toasandbarwheresmallcottonwoodseedlingsgrew.Suddenly（她在路上僵住了）.“Huh?”（威廉姆斯的脸出现在一扇小窗户前）besidethedoorofthedugout.（威廉脸色苍白）whenhesawthesnakeblockingthedoorway.（丽贝卡的大脑飞速转动），tryingtothinkofawaytogetWilliamoutofthere.（她突然想至U—个主意）.（迅速地）,shedroppedtheheavygarmentontopoftherattlesnake.Ittookthemfiveminutesto（找至U呼吸，让自己冷静下来）.参考范文：Paragraph1:“Getreadytorun,William,"shesaid,keepinganeyeonthemotionlesssnake.Rebeccaopenedthedrippingpetticoat（wetthroughwithwater）asmuchasshecould.Herhandsshookassheleanedoverthebank.Withoneswiftmovement,shedroppedtheheavygarmentontopoftherattlesnake.“NOW!”sheshoutedtoWilliamasthesnakebegantomoveunderthepetticoat.Williamjumpedoverthecoveredsnakeandranfastbeforehestoppedandturnedaround.Rebeccawasrightbehindhim.Paragraph2:“AreyouOK?”heasked,breathingheavily.Rebeccanodded.Shewasgladtheymanagedtoescape.Ittookthemfiveminutestocatchtheirbreathandcalmthemselvesdown.Rebeccacheckedtomakesurethattheseedlingswerestillcomplete.ThenWilliamgaveRebeccaagratefulhug.“Thanks,sister.I'dhavedonethesameforyoubackthere."Rebeccasaidwithagrin.“Youcouldn'thave,foryoudon'twearpetticoats!”Laughing,theyracedbacktothewoods.【写作特训答案】Shelongedtocoolherfeetintheshallowriverrunningthroughthecottonfield.Theywentacrosstheshallowrivertoasandbarwheresmallcottonwoodseedlingsgrew.Suddenlyshefrozeinhertracks.“Huh?"Williamsfaceappearedatatinywindowbesidethedoorofthedugout.William'sfacepaledwhenhesawthesnakeblockingthedoorway.Rebecca'smindraced,tryingtothinkofawaytogetWilliamoutofthere.Anideapoppedintoherhead.Withoneswiftmovement,shedroppedtheheavygarmentontopoftherattlesnake.Ittookthemfiveminutestocatchtheirbreathandcalmthemselvesdown.Passage02…洞穴探险读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Withtheirwaylightedbyheadlamps,theywalkeddownanarrowpassagestuddedwithsharprocks.Theraincamedownsteadyandhard.JasonStoriehearditbutwasnotworriedashepreparedforadayofcavingwithfivefriendsinaremotespot80milesnorthwestofhishomeinDuncan,onCanada'sVancouverIsland.Itwas6a.m.onDecember5,2015.Asanewcomertothesport,Jasonhadgonecavingonlyfourtimes.Thiswouldbehistoughestoutingyet:acavecalledCascade.Itwasdangerousenoughthattheentrancewasblockedbyalockedmetaldoortokeepthecasualcaversout.Aboutamilelongand338feetdeep,Cascadewasfulloftumsandbarelypassabletightsqueezes.Jasonwasnewamongthegroup,withtheleastexperienceand,at43,olderbyadecadeormore.ItwashisfriendAndrewMunoz,33,whointroducedhimtothesport.UnlikeJason,Andrewwasanexpertcaver-aformercavingguide,actually.Theyhikedabitbeforecomingtothedoor,whichsatintheground一you'dmissitifyouweren'tlookingforit.Itwas10a.m.Withtheirwaylightedbyheadlamps,theywalkeddownanarrowpassagestuddedwithsharprocks.Thesilencewasbrokenbyadrip-drip-dripfromabove.Soonthedripturnedintoalightbutsteadyflow,andtheywerewadinginwateruptotheirankles,thentotheirshins.Twohourslater,theyapproachedoneofthefeaturesthatmadethecaveunique:anarrowpassagenotbigenoughtostandupinthatledintoashort,tightdownhill.Thishadaname:Bastard'sCrawl.Fourstreamsmethere,andindeed,thewaterwasflowingmorequickly.Thesoundofthewaterhadturnedintoaroar.WhentheyfinallynearedthetopoftheCrawl,therewerebarelyfourinchesofairleftbetweenthewaterandtheceiling.notenoughforthemtokeeptheirheadsuptobreathe.Theycametoterrifyingrealizationthattheywereindanger!所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好；Paragraph1:Thewaterkeptrising,andtherewasnohopeofrescue.Paragraph2:Slowlybutsteadily,thegroupmadetheirwayforward.【写作特训】（他们的路被前照灯照亮了），theywalkeddownanarrowpassagestuddedwithsharprocks.（沉默被打破了）adrip-drip-dripfromabove.Fourstreamsmethere,andindeed,（水流得更快了）.（当他们最终接近Crawl的顶端时），therewerebarelyfourinchesofairleftbetweenthewaterandtheceiling.notenoughforthemtokeeptheirheadsuptobreathe.Thewaterkeptrising,and（没有营救的希望）.Theydozedoffandthen（猛然醒来）.Overthenext90minutes,（他们朝入口走去），attimesinchest-highwater.（杰森的情绪控制了他）andtearstrickleddownhischeeks.参考范文：Paragraph1:Thewaterkeptrising,andtherewasnohopeofrescue.Thehourspassed.JasonandAndrewdidn'tdaretomoveforfearofslipping.Theydozedoffandthenjerkedthemselvesawake.Everyonceinawhile,oneofthemturnedonhisheadlamptocheckthe-waterlevel.Anhourlater,thewaterlevelwentdownenoughthattheycouldtryanescape.Stifffromkeepinginonepositionfor12hours,theyslowlyunfoldedtheirbodies.Jasonscreamedinpain,buthewasdeterminednottoletitstophim.Paragraph2:Slowlybutsteadily,thegroupmadetheirwayforward.Still,eachtimeJasonmovedaleg,hecriedout.Overthenext90minutes,theymadetheirwaytowardtheentrance,attimesinchest-highwater.Now,inapassagethatwashighenoughforthemtowalkupright,Jasonsawsomethingflickerinthedistance.“Lights!Iseelights!"Jasonshoutedout.Forthefirsttimesinceenteringthecave,over20hoursearlier,Jason'semotionsgotthebestofhimandtearstrickleddownhischeeks.【写作特训答案】Withtheirwaylightedbyheadlamps,theywalkeddownanarrowpassagestuddedwithsharprocks.Thesilencewasbrokenbyadrip-drip-dripfromabove.Fourstreamsmethere,andindeed,thewaterwasflowingmorequickly.WhentheyfinallynearedthetopoftheCrawl,therewerebarelyfourinchesofairleftbetweenthewaterandtheceiling.notenoughforthemtokeeptheirheadsuptobreathe.Thewaterkeptrising,andtherewasnohopeofrescue.Theydozedoffandthenjerkedthemselvesawake.Overthenext90minutes,theymadetheirwaytowardtheentrance,attimesinchest-highwater.Jason'semotionsgotthebestofhimandtearstrickleddownhischeeks.综合演练读后续写模拟专练01读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I'mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp"andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!”shecried.“Help!"Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling（滴落）somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.注意：1•所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2•应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3•续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4•续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.翻译小练习：一片漆黑立刻笼罩了整个森林。简，精疲力竭，害怕，躺在一块石头旁边，想念她遥远的家人。所有美好的回忆涌上心头，她忍不住哭了起来：“如果不是我和汤姆吵架，走开，爬到高处，我就不会被困在这个可怕的地方，面对死亡的危险。”她因无休止的焦虑而后悔，然后眼睛里噙着晶莹的泪水。尽管她很虚弱，她还是挣扎着站起来，继续寻求帮助。令她非常高兴的是，一架直升飞机一次又一次地从头顶飞过。她又急又兴奋，把自己的黄色上衣挂在旗子上，不遗余力地大叫，以吸引别人的注意。幸运的是，她最终被发现并被带上了直升机。在那里，她看到了她的丈夫，一个男人盯着她，脸上带着宽慰的表情。10．她尽可能紧紧地抱住他，激动得说不出话来。11.此外，他们同意不再吵架，决定过上最充实的生活。参考答案：一片漆黑立刻笼罩了整个森林。Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.简，精疲力竭，害怕，躺在一块石头旁边，想念她遥远的家人。Jane,exhaustedandscared,laydownnearastone,missingherfamilyatadistance.所有美好的回忆涌上心头，她忍不住哭了起来：“如果不是我和汤姆吵架，走开，爬到高处，我就不会被困在这个可怕的地方，面对死亡的危险。”Allthefantasticmemorycrowdedinandshecouldn'thelpcrying,“Hadn'tIquarreledwithTom,walkedawayandclimbedtothehighplace,Iwouldn'tbetrappedinthisawfulplace,confrontedwiththedangerofdying.”她因无休止的焦虑而后悔，然后眼睛里噙着晶莹的泪水。Sheregrettedwithendlessanxiety,andthenbecameasleepwithshiningtearsinhereyes.尽管她很虚弱，她还是挣扎着站起来，继续寻求帮助。Weakasshewas,shestruggledtoherfeet,continuingsearchingforassistance.令她非常高兴的是，一架直升飞机一次又一次地从头顶飞过。Tohergreatjoy,ahelicopterwasflyingoverheadagainandagain.她又急又兴奋，把自己的黄色上衣挂在旗子上，不遗余力地大叫，以吸引别人的注意。Eagerandexcited,sheflaggedheryellowblouseandsparednoefforttoyellsoastoattractothers'attention.幸运的是，她最终被发现并被带上了直升机。Fortunately,shewaseventuallynoticedandbroughtintothehelicopter.在那里，她看到了她的丈夫，一个男人盯着她，脸上带着宽慰的表情。There,shesawherhusband,amanstaringather,wearinganexpressionofrelief.10．她尽可能紧紧地抱住他，激动得说不出话来。Astightlyaspossible,shehuggedhimandwastoothrilledtosayanything.11.此外，他们同意不再吵架，决定过上最充实的生活。Besides,theyagreednevertoquarrelagain,determiningtolivethelifetothefullest.参考范文：Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.Jane,exhaustedandscared,laydownnearastone,missingherfamilyatadistance.Allthefantasticmemorycrowdedinandshecouldn'thelpcrying,“Hadn'tIquarreledwithTom,walkedawayandclimbedtothehighplace,Iwouldn'tbetrappedinthisawfulplace,confrontedwiththedangerofdying.”Sheregrettedwithendlessanxiety,andthenbecameasleepwithshiningtearsinhereyes.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Weakasshewas,shestruggledtoherfeet,continuingsearchingforassistance.Tohergreatjoy,ahelicopterwasflyingoverheadagainandagain.Eagerandexcited,sheflaggedheryellowblouseandsparednoefforttoyellsoastoattractothers'attention.Fortunately,shewaseventuallynoticedandbroughtintothehelicopter.There,shesawherhusband,amanstaringather,wearinganexpressionofrelief.Astightlyaspossible,shehuggedhimandwastoothrilledtosayanything.Besides,theyagreednevertoquarrelagain,determiningtolivethelifetothefullest.读后续写模拟专练02读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Rebeccastretchedhertiredback.“That'sthelastseedling］种树苗）,Pa.Haveweplantedenough?"Pawalkedtotheendoftherowofcottonwoodseedlings.“No,"hesaid.“Wehavetoplanttreesallthewaytothatrockoverthere.We'llneedabouttwentymoreseedlings."“I'llgettheseedlings."offeredRebecca.Shelongedtocoolherfeetintheshallowriverrunningthroughthecottonfield.“You'dbetterletmego,MissPetticoats,"teasedhertwinbrother,William.“Therearedangersalloverthisprairie（牧场/草原）“Youmaybothgo,"saidPa.“Buthurryback.I'dliketofinishbeforesundown."Theywentacrosstheshallowrivertoasandbarwheresmallcottonwoodseedlingsgrew.Gently,theypulledtheseedlingsfromthesand.“There!That'stwenty,withafewtospare."saidRebecca.“OK,"saidWilliam.Heledthewaytotheriverbank,thenstopped.“Look!There'sthedugout（防空壕）welivedinwhenwemovedherelastyear."Hepointedtoaholeinthegrassyriverbank.“Comeon,let'sgoinside."“No,"Rebeccasaid,“Paiswaiting.Besides,it'shardtellingwhat'sinthere."“Thenyoustartback."saidWilliam,handingtheseedlingstoRebecca.I'llcatchup."Herantothedugoutandsteppedinside.Rebeccatiedtheseedlingsintoherlongapron（围裙）andbegantowalk.Suddenlyshefrozeinhertracks.Ahugeprairierattlesnake（响尾蛇）movedalongtheriverbank.Itstoppedrightinfrontofthedugoutandlaystill,coileduponthewarmsunnybank.“William!"Rebeccashouted.“Don'tcomeout!"“Huh?"Williamsfaceappearedatatinywindowbesidethedoorofthedugout.Rebeccapointedtowardtherattler.William'sfacepaledwhenhesawthesnakeblockingthedoorway.HeturneddesperateeyestowardRebecca,thenheglancedbehindhimself.Rebeccaknewwhathewasthinking:“Weretheremoresnakeswaitingintheshadowycornersofthedugout?"Rebecca'smindraced,tryingtothinkofawaytogetWilliamoutofthere.Anideapoppedintoherhead.Itwastheironlyhope.Itwasrisky,butitwastheonlyhope.“Don'tmove,"shesaidtoWilliaminasoftvoice.“WhenrsayNOW,yourunoutofthereasfastasyoucan."Rebeccaremovedtheskirt-likepetticoat（衬裙）frombeneathherdress,thendippeditintotheriver.Shesqueezedoutsomeofthewater,thenclimbedtothetopofthebank,directlyabovethedugout'sopening.注意：1•所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2•至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3•续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好;4•续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:“Getreadytorun,William,"shesaid,keepinganeyeonthemotionlesssnake.Paragraph2:AreyouOK?heasked,breathingheavily.Rebeccanodded.翻译小练习：丽贝卡尽可能地打开滴水的衬裙（被水打湿了）。她靠在岸边时双手颤抖。她一个快速的动作，把厚重的衣服扔到响尾蛇身上。4「现在！”当蛇开始在衬裙下移动时，她对威廉喊道。威廉跳过那条被盖住的蛇，跑得很快，然后停下来转过身来。丽贝卡就在他后面。她很高兴他们设法逃走了。他们花了五分钟才喘口气，使自己平静下来。丽贝卡检查了一下，以确保幼苗还是完整的。然后威廉感激地拥抱了丽贝卡。“谢谢，姐姐。我也会为你做同样的事。”丽贝卡笑着说。“你不可能，因为你不穿衬裙！”他们笑着跑回了树林。参考答案：丽贝卡尽可能地打开滴水的衬裙(被水打湿了)。Rebeccaopenedthedrippingpetticoat(wetthroughwithwater)asmuchasshecould.她靠在岸边时双手颤抖。Herhandsshookassheleanedoverthebank.她一个快速的动作，把厚重的衣服扔到响尾蛇身上。Withoneswiftmovement,shedroppedtheheavygarmentontopoftherattlesnake.“现在！”当蛇开始在衬裙下移动时，她对威廉喊道。“NOW“NOW!”sheshoutedtoWilliamasthesnakebegantomoveunderthepetticoat.威廉跳过那条被盖住的蛇，跑得很快，然后停下来转过身来。丽贝卡就在他后面。Williamjumpedoverthecoveredsnakeandranfastbeforehestoppedandturnedaround.Rebeccawasrightbehindhim.她很高兴他们设法逃走了。他们花了五分钟才喘口气，使自己平静下来。Shewasgladtheymanagedtoescape.Ittookthemfiveminutestocatchtheirbreathandcalmthemselvesdown.丽贝卡检查了一下，以确保幼苗还是完整的。Rebeccacheckedtomakesurethattheseedlingswerestillcomplete.然后威廉感激地拥抱了丽贝卡。“谢谢，姐姐。我也会为你做同样的事。”ThenWilliamgaveRebeccaagratefulhug.“Thanks,sister.I'dhavedonethesameforyoubackthere.”丽贝卡笑着说。“你不可能，因为你不穿衬裙！”他们笑着跑回了树林。Rebeccasaidwithagrin.“Youcouldn'thave,foryoudon'twearpetticoats！”Laughing,theyracedbacktothewoods.参考范文：Paragraph1:“Getreadytorun,William,"shesaid,keepinganeyeonthemotionlesssnake.Rebeccaopenedthedrippingpetticoat(wetthroughwithwater)asmuchasshecould.Herhandsshookassheleanedoverthebank.Withoneswiftmovement,shedroppedtheheavygarmentontopoftherattlesnake.“NOW！”sheshoutedtoWilliamasthesnakebegantomoveunderthepetticoat.Williamjumpedoverthecoveredsnakeandranfastbeforehestoppedandturnedaround.Rebeccawasrightbehindhim.Paragraph2:“AreyouOK？”heasked,breathingheavily.Rebeccanodded.Shewasgladtheymanagedtoescape.Ittookthemfiveminutestocatchtheirbreathandcalmthemselvesdown.Rebeccacheckedtomakesurethattheseedlingswerestillcomplete.ThenWilliamgaveRebeccaagratefulhug.“Thanks,sister.I'dhavedonethesameforyoubackthere.”Rebeccasaidwithagrin.“Youcouldn'thave,foryoudon'twearpetticoats！”Laughing,theyracedbacktothewoods.读后续写模拟专练03读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Ayoungmanwenttovisittheoldestandwisestmaninthevillageforsomeadviceonhowhecouldbecomerich.“TreasureisyourstobehadatthetopofYonderMountain,"advisedthewiseoldmanashepointedtoatallmountaininthedistance.“Youmusttravelonfoottothetopofthemountain.Thereyouwillfindrichesbeyondyourbelief.Onceyouleavethetopofthemountain,whateverremainswillbelostforever."Theyoungmancouldhardlywaituntilthemorningwhenhewastomeetwiththewiseoldmanforfinalinstructions.Whenhearrivedatthewiseoldman'shome,hesawalong,thickloglyingonthegroundinfrontofthehouse.“Youmustcarrythislogonyourjourneytothetopofthemountain,anditisanecessarypartofyourjourney.Youmusttakeitwithyoutothetopofthemountaintoclaimyourtreasure,"explainedthewiseoldman.Theyoungmanwasnotpleasedwiththissuddensurprise,butherespectedthewiseoldmanandasheliftedthelong,heavylogontohisshouldersandstruggleddowntheroadtowardsthemountain,herealizedthatthetripwouldnotbeaseasyashethought.Afterhewaswalkingforawhile,awoodsmancameuptohimandsaid,“Itlookslikethatlogisprettyheavy.Wouldyoulikemetocutsomeofitofftomakeitlighter?"Theyoungmanwasexhausted,sohesaid,“【supposethatalittlebitcutofftheendwouldn'thurt."Andthewoodsmancuttwoinchesofftheend.Awhilelatertheyoungmanmetafarmeronhiswaybackfromthefields.Andthefarmerhelpedhimcuttwoinchesofftheend.Atthebottomofthemountain,theyoungmanmetupwithatrapperwhohelpedhimcutfourmoreinchesoffthelog.注意：1•所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2•至少使用5